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Have you been reading my notes?That's 2 Trigger worthy events in a row for chapter endings.
Why do I have the feeling the final thing that causes Taylor to Trigger is one of these events boiling over bad enough to kill Peter?
Everyone is a sympathetic character to someoneYou do a really good job of portraying members of E88 as sympathetic characters. I feel like I could hang out with some of these guys.
Words of wisdom, here, folks. Can I sig that?
Sure.
Interesting. It seem that Peter was lying, or at least stretching the truth, when he said that people who were friends of the Empire but not members wouldn't be targets. You'd think that revelation would shake Taylor's trust in him, but she was an outcast for so long and is now in too deep to back out safely."Few years ago, one of Peter's cousins had a girlfriend outside the Empire. They were silly in love. ABB got wind, kidnapped her. Kept her. Tortured her. Worse. Every week they sent him a packet of photos and a finger joint or some other part of her, freshly severed."
What Bronson forgot to tell her was that Peter's cousin was in his twenties and the girl wasn't a Friend of the Empire. He wanted to keep her separate from all that. Unfortunately, he failed.Interesting. It seem that Peter was lying, or at least stretching the truth, when he said that people who were friends of the Empire but not members wouldn't be targets. You'd think that revelation would shake Taylor's trust trust in him, but she was an outcast for so long and is now in too deep to back out.
What, you haven't picked up on Peter's tell?I'm just waiting for Peter to try and leverage his boyfriend status with Taylor to try and get some Empire people into the Dockworkers. Given that he apparently has a 'tell' that Danny picked up on, and how vehement Danny is about keeping the Dockworker's as neutral as possible in regards to gangs, it will be glorious!
That's what I meant by stretching the truth. Peter's cousin's girlfriend may not have been a Friend of the Empire, but being friendly with a member of the Empire caused her to become a target.What Bronson forgot to tell her was that Peter's cousin was in his twenties and the girl wasn't a Friend of the Empire. He wanted to keep her separate from all that. Unfortunately, he failed.
You mean I was supposed to? >.>
Peter figured that making it obvious that the Empire was watching out for Taylor would be enough of a deterrent.That's what I meant by stretching the truth. Peter's cousin's girlfriend may not have been a Friend of the Empire, but being friendly with a member of the Empire caused her to become a target.
It fairly accurately captures what I was like (though more extreme) as a teenager being told that my parents disapproved of my girlfriend.The writing style felt a little too emotional for even me. I'm referring to the whole drama aspect. I'm taking about the fact that Taylor can't pick up a phone without having a hard time, the whole "okay I'll tell you the truth", etc. So many little things that made this felt so emotional.
Besides that however, I thought the story is progressing quite nicely. Was a bit shocked at the whole let's move thing. I think I got a few ideas where this could go. Which I guess leaves you room to work with when you want to write another chapter.
Can't wait to read more.
ABB kills Danny, Taylor goes full Empire, maybe with a trigger thrown in?Danny is completely and utterly in the right here and is doing everything within his ability to protect Taylor.
He's doomed.
Figured it out. It's because Ack has built up our anticipation for it, and then left us blue-balled, so many times that the final release will be... explosive.Well... Taylor's Trigger is finally in sight!
Wait... Why am I considering that a good thing?
I mean, not associating with the Empire in her freshman year wasn't exactly helping her either. And they did manage to put a stop to Emma's harassment campaign and become her support system. It's no wonder that she doesn't want to blame them for the ABB attacks.With that in mind, it does not stop me from wanting to slap Taylor to try and make her realize that associating with the Empire, in any form, is what caused all of this to happen. Her, 'not being racist', means jack shit when everyone you spend time with is racist.
Just great... He's gonna leave us blue-balled again...You are all gonna hate me. With the burning passion of a thousand suns.
And I glory in it
Mwahahaha.
That is all.
Taylor's gonna trigger.Just great... He's gonna leave us blue-balled again...
Taylor IS going to Trigger in this... right? Or are you gonna throw a curve-ball and have Danny as the one that Triggers; because frankly, it looks like the buildup might be leading there. He already seems on the verge of a breakdown...