So this is a rather interesting choice. The story has actually been semi dead for a while thanks...
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From context, I think you mean kooks."Ah, you don't know the half of it stranger," said one of the Guards, "I swear, this place attracts cooks like shit attracts flies. We even had a wizard staying at the Bannered Mare who kept making Mammoths fly with his backfiring spells while claiming they worked perfectly. Dumbass got himself killed when he got too close to a Giant who smacked him halfway across the Hold."
Is it? It doesnt look it.
I did, I'll fix that.From context, I think you mean kooks.
As much as I generally dislike anime influence creeping into other stories, this was fun to read. Just, please try to curb the Dense Protagonist Syndrome. Now though, I'm wondering if Mimi attacked the watchtower just for taking her hat and staff or if there was a more canonical motivation.
Yes, yes, no. I am mildly surprised that you didnt get Sols identity considering I literally just used a shortened version of her Dragon name for her general use name. Plus, why would Paarthurnax be a thief? Shes the leader of what amounts to a monastery, obviously shes going to be a Miko!So, assuming:
Kara is Odahviing
Mimi is Mirmulnir
Sol is Paarthurnax?
Your current chapter order, in the threadmarks, is 1,2,4,5,3
Fair, I meant in a more general sense as opposed to your story in particular.Considering I STARTED with 'Anime girls in Skyrim', I don't think the influence could be called 'creeping in'
Yeah, not my best moment.Yes, yes, no. I am mildly surprised that you didnt get Sols identity
Right, thanks, fixed. Or it should be at least.
Yes, yes, no. I am mildly surprised that you didnt get Sols identity considering I literally just used a shortened version of her Dragon name for her general use name.
Yup.