Mackenzie Prestage
John Bostock
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Thanks for the chapter
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"Anyone home?" I raised my voice and listened to the small echo it created.
"This is your Deliveroo order, you ordered some tampons?" I shouted.
"We still don't know why dungeon floods happen, only that they're pretty rare. I guess whatever triggered it this time must be on one of the three floors. It's the first time a dungeon flood has happened under floor seven. Now that was a true shitshow." Reon muttered with a head shake.
Jack noticed adventurers who looked new limping out with terrified expressions. They spotted cuts all over them and were immediately attended to by healers.
Meanwhile…
-{Zephyrion}-I wonder if Orario has a burger place? I idly thought as I cut through another goblin. They were starting to come in higher numbers now.
A burger sounds real good right now…
Fixed now. I rly need to get familiar with the mechanics here.
I think it was already mentioned that you wouldn't find it on QQ anytime soon. Here's the link to the ff:My friend, when can we expect to see the next chapter of your angel fic?
I think it was already mentioned that you wouldn't find it on QQ anytime soon. Here's the link to the ff:
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14232134/1/The-Seraphic-System
I was Zephyrion Gremory, the youngest child of the Gremory family. I have two older sisters Sirena Lucifer, who is one of the four Satens and the eldest, along with Rias Gremory who was a few years older than me.
The fact that in my other life, I knew that most of these people were from a fictional world. Excluding the fact my elder sister was a gender-bent version of Sirzech Lucifer it was pretty much the same.
I was starting to wonder if I was even in the world of dxd anymore
Seeking comfort she had naturally gone to Sona, her beloved little sister, only to be shoved away. As sona had been with some other pureblood heiress and didn't wish to be embarrassed by her.
Staring into the sapphire blue eyes of hestia I had to admit one thing. The anime did not do her justice. With silky raven locks framing her cute heart-shaped face, her skin appeared to be flawless, the beautiful smile she wore didn't help either.
A Goddesswas working at some fucking food stall?! I vaguely remembered her working somewhere but a food stall?!
Demonic Energy Manipulation
The ability to manipulate the chaotic energy of demonic beings otherwise known as demonic energy.
Imagination Magic
The ability to create magic via imagination, cost is dependent on magic conjured.
Power of destruction (Mutated) [SEALED]
All-Speak
The ability to communicate with any being regardless of language. User can communicate via any language.
Then there was the skill of All-speak. While it may not seem impressive, the ability to communicate through any language was definitely useful and unheard of.
"I guess as my teammate on call of duty would say, I'm built different." I replied teasingly. Technically I was built differently since I'm a devil which saved my life for sure today.
So he met Hestia, they spent the night at her church, then the next day she takes him to a bookstore to give him the Falna? Why?Now here I stood in front of a simple-looking bookstore. Which was where Hestia had insisted on giving me her blessing. Apparently, she had a hobby for reading and this was her favourite bookstore.
I'm liking this story set up. A lot of little editing/formatting errors, but the plot has my interest. I'm looking forward to seeing just how you'll have the MC progress in his power. How will his fights go? Who all will he meet and befriend? ...Will the cute, kuudere, red headed werewolf be added to the harem?!
I'm also slightly amused at the thought of DxD Serafall meeting Danmachi Hestia. Zephy apparently has a thing for short stacks with twintails.
So he met Hestia, they spent the night at her church, then the next day she takes him to a bookstore to give him the Falna? Why?
...Why wouldn't she just do that at the church the first night? Maybe if she did this at the bookstore FIRST before going to the church this would work, but doing so after a night together? In a public venue rather than the privacy of their home? Especially when it is noted that the Falna is a rather private thing... The order of events just doesn't make sense...
To start I must say that I like the story, although I have some doubts, the power scales of hsdxd are much higher than those of danmachi (without counting the gods clearly) and considering everything, a middle class being of hsdxd should be at least on par with a level 2, 3 or even 4 in terms of abilities, so are you balancing the universes and making the characters weaker/stronger (depending on where you look at it)? because I really felt that the mc was too weak to have that classification, we know that he didn't train much but with what he has shown so far I wouldn't give him any classification beyond low-high classWhoever he was she would have him, and his potential would be brought to reality.