• The site has now migrated to Xenforo 2. If you see any issues with the forum operation, please post them in the feedback thread.
  • Due to issues with external spam filters, QQ is currently unable to send any mail to Microsoft E-mail addresses. This includes any account at live.com, hotmail.com or msn.com. Signing up to the forum with one of these addresses will result in your verification E-mail never arriving. For best results, please use a different E-mail provider for your QQ address.
  • For prospective new members, a word of warning: don't use common names like Dennis, Simon, or Kenny if you decide to create an account. Spammers have used them all before you and gotten those names flagged in the anti-spam databases. Your account registration will be rejected because of it.
  • Since it has happened MULTIPLE times now, I want to be very clear about this. You do not get to abandon an account and create a new one. You do not get to pass an account to someone else and create a new one. If you do so anyway, you will be banned for creating sockpuppets.
  • Due to the actions of particularly persistent spammers and trolls, we will be banning disposable email addresses from today onward.
  • The rules regarding NSFW links have been updated. See here for details.
Created at
Index progress
Hiatus
Watchers
19
Recent readers
0

Subtlety? Complexity?

Complex choices, tough planning, and even deep foresight?

Not here...

shaderic

An ordinary cat?
Joined
Mar 27, 2013
Messages
2,520
Likes received
10,459
Subtlety? Complexity?

Complex choices, tough planning, and even deep foresight?

Not here, and not today.

Welcome to Violent Yankee quest, a silly thing where I expect shonen brawling, drawn out fistfights, and the occasional cross-counter.

Because sometimes, you just want to hit something until it stops moving.

__________________________________________________________________________

You are a punk.

No getting around it.

Sure, you could say that kids made fun of your hair when you were little, that you're just misunderstood, that you're just more independent than your peers and more prone to questioning authority. That you're a good kid, just no one ever gave you a chance.

But it doesn't matter.

You like fighting.

You're not sure when you first discovered that the feeling of your fist meeting someone's face was absolutely fucking amazing, and you don't care. You're not one to get wrapped up in the past. You've just never stopped.

You're not so much of a hypocrite to call others out when they counter with their own blows either. In fact, that just makes it more exciting. The violent dance of passion you had when you first met some one that wasn't afraid, was willing to hit back just as hard as you were, even if they were holding back tears-

That you remember.

Such sweet struggle, how could you forget?

[ ] Even if the curls were stupid and her laugh really annoying, Luvia fought with everything. Including a suplex.
[ ] The knives were a surprise, you doubted that a 'Maid-In-Training' like Sakuya was supposed to have those.
[ ] That ferocity? That joy? How could you ever forget that look in Diona's eyes? You met a comrade that day.

Still, life goes on.

More than just much you like fighting, you found out about something else.

Beyond just fighting, there was the respect. To be frank, it was usually just outright fear. But like a certain asshole said, it's easier to be feared than loved. And man, were a lot of people afraid of you. You're hardly huge, but you've nailed looking scary anyway. A single glance of your eyes, and you can send a bunch of punks that'd dare think themselves reeling.

That's a fun feeling.

Not nearly as great as throwing down, but better than the rush you'd get if you fought a bunch of weaklings like that. If a person's so fare beneath you that they can't even offer a proper fight, then what's even the point?

Anyway, to put it in the briefest way possible.... You're a punk.

And today...

[ ] Is a work day. Time to go be a legbreaker.
[ ] There's a university thing. You suppose you'd better put some effort in.
[ ] Is fucking Orientation day. You could always skip, but it's always a good idea to make sure the fear of you is still there.
 
Reserved for Reasons

NAME: "Silver."
AGE: "Old enough."

APPEARANCE: "You're askin' me to describe myself? Sheesh. Well, I suppose I'm a pretty much a beanpole when it comes to body-type. Tall, not much meat. That sort of deal. Remarkable features boil down to two things. Eyes and hair. Blood red and iron-grey, respectively. I guess it's pretty long too, which is I get called Silver."

SKILLS: "I'm pretty well versed in the venerable skill of kicking ass and taking names."

ATTITUDE: "What kind of questionnaire is this? I'm an irreverent asshole that takes pleasure in violence. Draw your own fucking conclusion."

GOALS: "Good fights, good money, and... Yeah, just those."
 
Last edited:
[X] The knives were a surprise, you doubted that a 'Maid-In-Training' like Sakuya was supposed to have those.
[X] Is fucking Orientation day. You could always skip, but it's always a good idea to make sure the fear of you is still there.
 
You were younger then.

Inexperienced.

And you could make more excuses, but the simple fact remains that Luviagelita Edelfelt took all you could throw out and then some. And in the end, when you were both bruised and bloodied, and barely able to stand up, she was the one who got you with a suplex.

It was the first time you'd lost too.

You think a normal person would've been pissed. Embarassed at their weakness. Would've spouted something about cheating. You just laughed. You laughed so hard, your aching ribs practically felt like they were crushing your chest. You gave your all, and so did she. Luvia just happened to be a little bit better. All you could do was lay back with a smile, and think about how you could get stronger so that next time she'd be the one laid out.

You'd said as much to her, while she'd tried to fix up one of her hair drills.

She'd just sort of stared for a moment.

You don't think either of you really had a friend before that point. But having fought against one another, having thrown everything at each other, you somehow reached an understanding. You're not going to pretend that fists can carry words or intent or any of that stupid shit you see in comics. But there is something to having a completely honest match with someone. It's like playing a game. A dangerous one, where loosing can mean bruises and blood along with broken bones, but if you play with someone, wouldn't you say you got closer to them?

And then she bust a gut with that annoying 'Ho ho ho' of hers like the pair of you hadn't just spent the last ten minutes beating the tar out of one another.

"Defeat an Edelfelt? One such as yourself? What grand ambitions you must have!" And almost immediately, you'd shot back something that shut her up.

"I ain't interested in fighting an Edelfelt. I wanna beat you." And somehow, that line sent her sputtering red. You laughed even harder, and then she joined in again.

Still with that weird laugh of hers.

But eh.

You've done enough reminiscing, and it looks like your train's about to arrive.

The Neo-Tokyo Metropolitan University is one of the more hi-tech places to go to school. Which logically means that a punk like you gets all kind of weird stares as you first step off the train. You return a few, sending the little mice scurrying, but don't bother to give chase. You've actually got a class to get to.

And isn't that weird?

You never really thought of yourself as having a future that didn't involve large amounts of gratuitous violence. A yakuza leg-breaker, MMA fighter, or maybe even a pro-wrestler. But somebody shaping up to be halfway respectable? You'd have laughed a few years ago. But today, here and now, you're steadily working toward a degree on a scholarship.

Admittedly one the Edelfelts sponsor, something that you and Luvia nearly came to blows over.

But it turned that you actually were the only to legit qualify, by virtue of both having a decent enough brain and an arm strong enough to back it up. You're not sure that it's technically legal to host an underground fighting tournament/exam for a scholarship, but apparently the school rolled with it. The Edelfelt's think that a strong body houses a strong mind, and you more or less meet that criteria.

It still feels an awful lot like fucking charity, and it's only the fact that this has apparently been a thing for decades(?!) that gets you to accept it.

Still, you managed to swallow your pride and in a few years might even be someone respectable.

So, with what passes for a smile on your face, a look that terrifies several passerby, you head to class.

...

A half an hour later, you grit your teeth and forcefully keep yourself focused. You won't fucking lose to this. You refuse to let boredom put you to sleep at the first barricade!

...

Somehow, you manage to get through all of today's lectures without passing out from boredom. The material's so basic, it might as well be a review, and most of it's boring as hell. None of the teachers were very interesting either, like zombie going through the motions.

Your knuckles itch.

The sun's starting to set now. You could go for a little 'Stress Relief', but maybe some booze would help calm your nerves too. Alternatively, you could hit up Luvia for a brawl or somethin'.

[ ] Find some Trouble.
[ ] Acquire Booze. Drink Booze. Possibly acquire more.
[ ] Luvia has a ring in her house. You stopped questioning these things awhile back.
[ ] Maybe somethin' else? (write in)
 
[x] Even if the curls were stupid and her laugh really annoying, Luvia fought with everything. Including a suplex.
[x] There's a university thing. You suppose you'd better put some effort in.
 
[x] Even if the curls were stupid and her laugh really annoying, Luvia fought with everything. Including a suplex.
[x] There's a university thing. You suppose you'd better put some effort in.

[X] Find some Trouble.
 
[X] Luvia has a ring in her house. You stopped questioning these things awhile back.
 
I believe that the first vote has already closed as a consequence of the posting of the first story post based on said vote.

[X] Luvia has a ring in her house. You stopped questioning these things awhile back.
 
[X] Luvia has a ring in her house. You stopped questioning these things awhile back.
 
Water is wet.

The sun hurts to look at directly.

And the Edelfelt family is stupid rich.

These are just a few basic truths of the world that you don't even bother questioning.

A normal family might rent an apartment or buy a condo or somethin'. For an Edelfelt, that's not just lowbrow, it's not even dripping with personal style and elegance, and is so lacking in ostentatious frippery that they could practically curdle milk with hard they'd scowl at it.

No.

The Edelfelts have family mansions. More specifically, they have about dozen scattered around the world, most at least a hundred years old. The estate Luvia lives in, was apparently first constructed shortly after the arrival of a certain american admiral, accompanied by several large ships. Since then, it's apparently been expanded a few times, was quietly abandoned in the thirties, claimed by a crazy guy in 1942, violently reclaimed in 1946, renovated some more, and morphed into the most stereotypical western looking mansion ever to exist in Tokyo. It looks more like a movie set or a theme park in some ways, rather than a place where people would actually live.

Brick walls, wrought iron gates, wide green lawns. Marble floors, grand staircases, and gigantic chandeliers.

The works.

But, more important than any of that, is that they have a wrestling ring.

Sure, there's also a big gym, all sorts of weights, and basically any other fitness related apparatus you could think of. But nothing, nothing compares to bein' able to throw down. And this is a pretty good spot to have a fight with Luvia. There's showers, people willing to apply first aid without askin' uncomfortable questions or demanding all your money, and even occasionally food.

A few of the maids give you polite nods as you pass through the halls. Mostly older ones who've worked here awhile. Ones who don't know you very well tend avoid you, and ones who haven't seen you at all... Heh. They either tend to turn tail and run, or try to take you out. Sometimes the easy way with words, and sometimes the hard way with a blackjack.

Honestly, you prefer the hard way.

It means they had the guts to try and take you down. Not that it ever works, but you generally get a minute or two of entertainment out of it, which is better than the seething annoyance that makes you grind your teeth when they try and talk down to you.

You're a punk.

That doesn't mean you're dumb.

A fresh face stares at you with wide eyes as stride by, body quivering in paralyzed fear while her head pivots to keep you always in sight. That's a reaction you haven't seen in a while. You throw her a grin over your shoulders, making sure to show plenty of teeth, before you pass around the next corner. Before you've taken two steps past it, there's this absolutely adorable little squeaking sound, followed by a thump. You don't bother turning around to check on her.

Someone green as that has to have someone looking after her, and they'll find her collapsed into a puddle soon enough.

The rest of your trip to the gym is pretty boring.

You return a few nods from the staff, and that's about it.

When you arrive at your destination, Luvia's in her usual place. Being about as subtle as a brick to the head, your own entrance has her head whipping around and the usual smirk in place. A bit more plastic than usual though.

"Bad first day?" The first blow, with word and fist.

"If you tell me that you did not struggle to stay awake during those egregious 'lessons' they laid out across the entire campus, I will call you a liar, Silver." And instantly parried on both accounts.

You start off light, the fight slow enough that you can chat and not worry that there won't be enough breath left over for words. But it picks up. You mix up you usual jabs with a few heavier ones, and Luvia's elbows remind you that they are still really hard. The pace accelerates, and words disappear.

At this stage, it's less about conscious technique then it is about refined instincts. Reflexes that you've carved into your bodies, stimuli triggering trained responses, while your eyes burn, struggling to keep up with the flow of battle. Low grunts mix with the meaty sounds of flesh hitting flesh, while you force your body to keep going.

And then it hits you.

Luvia... is holding back.

Not that she's weaker than she was in the past. Judging by the soreness that's already very deep in your knuckles, this is about the 'usual' for your bouts. But somehow, she's not as winded as she should be. Not as sweaty or as tired looking.

[ ] Drag it out.
[ ] ALL OUT ATTACK.
[ ] Disengage. Call her on it.
[ ] Disengage. Make up an excuse.
 
Fourth Punch
You don't have a lot of personal possessions.

Your clothes tend to be threadbare, practical, and cheap.

The computer you do your coursework on is dwarfed in processing power by Luvia's phone.

Your apartment is small and almost empty. Food, a toothbrush, a couple of other mementos. Most of your life could fit into a tiny box.

But one thing you do have, is pride. A lot of it. It's that pride that led to more fights, more pain, more bruises, cuts, and broken bones than you can remember. It's that pride that demanded whenever you lost that, even if you were a good sport about it, you came back for a rematch. That demanded your all in everything you did.

It's that pride that managed to get you into university.

And now, it's that pride that drives your fists.

Luvia isn't fighting you with everything. Her breathing is too steady, her body too calm, her eyes too measured. She's too in control of herself and her body. You haven't pushed her to the edge, if you've been challenging her at all.

You should do something about that.

In a normal fight, your will just guides your reactions. Each blow is too fast to waste time thinking about, so your body does it for you. Your brain just spots details and works out where to hit, leaving the 'how' to your arms.

Your eyes have already started to sting from the sweat.

No weaknesses, too fast, too stable.

So you abandon defense for offense, shifting your stance further back and lower, telegraphing loud and clear that you're going to deck her in the face with a punch that can lift her clean off her feet.

Against Luvia, this is normally a recipe for disaster. She's a practitioner of a certain grappling style that could waltz right through this move and use it to throw you into a wall. But that's OK.

Your fist sails forward, her arms snake around it, hips already twisting for the launch. And you pull her into it, over balancing the throw and kicking off the ground, turning it into a whirling twist that manages to rip her off her feet and into the corner. The ropes tangle her hands up just enough for you to start whaling on her.

Hard and heavy hits, straight to the gut.

The kind of blows that would have a normal person spitting up blood and where you'd normally be able to feel ribs start to creak. The kind you and Luvia have only exchanged a few times before.

A few seconds later, you pause, breath hitching in your throat as the oxygen you brain so desperately needs gets caught in a stupid gasp. Your hands ache with a very familiar warm and wet feeling that tells you there's probably something red dripping out of your knuckles. Like you've been punching an iron wall. Luvia's leotard is covered in bloody stains, but there's not even a tear in the material. Her exposed skin is pale, healthy, and unbruised. There's not even a hair out of place on her head.

All that red's just from your hands.

And if she wasn't sure you noticed something up before, Luvia's certainly aware now. And judging by the way she's biting her lip, she's actually hesitating in telling you for some reason.

[ ] Fuck it, you don't care. She wants to have secrets, fine. Not like this is the first thing she's kept from you.
[ ] ... We're friends Luvia, right? This... fuck you're bad at the touchy-feely shit. The point is, is she... you don't fucking know, OK or something?
[ ] ... That's actually an awful lot of blood. Maybe you should think about cleaning that up before somebody gets the wrong idea.
[ ] What the actual fuck, Luvia? It's like you're made of god-damn titanium, the shit is going on?
 
[X] ... We're friends Luvia, right? This... fuck you're bad at the touchy-feely shit. The point is, is she... you don't fucking know, OK or something?
 
Fifth Punch
Absolutely drenched with sweat, your shirt feels heavy and sticky. Wiping your forehead with your arm gives you a glance at your bloody knuckles, which sets a pragmatic part of your mind partitioning out bandages and disinfectant for later. Even your hair feels stupidly heavy and makes you consider not for the first time just cutting it all off.

Luvia on the other hand, barely looks winded.

A light sheen on her brow, but there's not even a hair out of place. The most you've managed to do is stain her leotard with your own blood.

Years ago, you would've cussed her out. Maybe just kept wailing on her, targeting her head directly. Even if her skin is suddenly like iron, her weight hasn't changed. Giving her a concussion by jostling her brain in her skull is still something entirely possible through blunt trauma.

But Luvia's a friend, and you've acquired some tact from hanging out with all this time.

"What the actual fuck, Luvia? It's like you're made of god-damn titanium, the shit is going on?" Not a lot though. Just enough to hide the fact that you're pissed off by how much she held back and replace the rage in the question with some genuine curiosity. And here she flinches. On another person, it'd be a freakishly tiny wince. But you know her. You've fought her.

And you're right next to her.

It's impossible to miss.

You grit your teeth and step back, giving her some room to catch her breath. Not because she actually needs to, but some space when you're feeling pressured is always nice, and you just did throw a lot at her. It takes a minute for her to find the words, which must feel like an eternity to Luvia. Years of quick wits and a quicker tongue have meant that she's always had quick response on hand, or been able to find one in the seconds bought by a mocking laugh. In fact, this is the longest you've ever caught her flatfooted on anything.

You can understand, and that's why you're being patient.

Doesn't change the fact that you want some answers.

Thankfully, she finds her words before your fuse starts burning again. Gathers herself to open her mouth-

"Memory Eraser Strike!"
drip
A piece of plastic clonks against the side of your head.

For a second you don't know what to say. Then you look down at the wriggling... thing on the floor. It somehow makes a moaning sound. From where, you don't know. It looks like a toy. Except toys don't move like they're alive. Or struggle to pick themselves up off the ground.

"... Silver, I now have the privilege of introducing you to Kaleido-Sapphire, an... artifact I have been entrusted with." Luvia begins her explanation as the toy continues moaning. "She is supposed to be a secret, and thus reacted far too zealously in an attempt to conceal evidence of her own existence. Isn't that right, Sapphire?" Luvia's voice drips with cultured charm, sweet as honey and cool enough that butter wouldn't melt in her mouth.

"Eh-eh?! Miss Luvia, why are you-erk!" Before the little thing can finish whatever it's saying, the drill head has the little toy scooped up and clutched between her fingers. That are now squeezing tightly on the thing, bending the struggling little wings on the sides.

"Sapphire, this is Silver. A dear friend of mine. They may look like a dangerous thug, but let me reassure you that appearances are quite deceiving. Like myself, this person is another attendee of the University. In addition, there's also the fact that unlike a great deal of our peers, Silver practices more combative arts. As you've no doubt noticed." Her fingers curled around the tiny thing a little bit more, drawing out a rather strained gasp as it tried it's level best to not be turned into a pile of scrap in her hands. "I do believe you also owe them an apology for attempting to meddle."

"Sorry! Sorry!" It immediately squeaks out.

[ ] Just shrug. See where this goes.
[ ] ... Luvia, your rock is talking.
[ ] Huh. So, I guess this makes you a magical girl or some shit?
[ ] Sorry for what, ya damn rock?
[ ] ... That's still an awful lot of blood...
 
Last edited:
[X] Huh. So, I guess this makes you a magical girl or some shit?
 
[X] Huh. So, I guess this makes you a magical girl or some shit?
 
Bandwagon.

[X] Huh. So, I guess this makes you a magical girl or some shit?
 
[X] Huh. So, I guess this makes you a magical girl or some shit?
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Back
Top