Neh-Toth-Amon
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The idea is somewhat interesting. Though a presence of any logic in the world escapes me.Day 3
There wasn't a cloud in the deep blue sky only the harsh sun bearing down on me.
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Writing is okay, but feels too drawn out. Possibly would benefit from shortening.
Also, considering strength training - he most probably has quite enough heavy stones around. Or could just fill a bucket or sack with earth. Factory -made weights are not that important, even though they are pretty.