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Ack: This bit is kinda awkward. Too blatant a case of As You Know, Bob. Maybe Jack just says 'We're down to 7 thanks to Cherish' and then work the identities of the two dead ones into Cherish's response?We're down to seven members, thanks to Cherish murdering both Hatchet Face and Mannequin for a place in our ranks after we'd already lost Winter.
The court doesn't do this sort of evidence analysis. It's just not their job. The court only looks at the evidence submitted by the two parties. If Brandish wanted to have a reputable forensic firm verify the evidence, she could then submit their report, or have one of them take the stand to testify that the recording is genuine."The counsel for the plaintiff will kindly sit down." Without even looking at her, the judge kept his attention on the other lawyer. "Mr. Richardson, that audio evidence was analysed the moment I became aware of it. It is the considered opinion of my sound experts that it could only have been faked with the explicit cooperation of each of the people whose voices appear on it. Kindly do not attempt to denigrate my intelligence in this way. Now, did you have anything else you would like to add?"
I'll look over the courtroom stuff.Ack: This bit is kinda awkward. Too blatant a case of As You Know, Bob. Maybe Jack just says 'We're down to 7 thanks to Cherish' and then work the identities of the two dead ones into Cherish's response?
The court doesn't do this sort of evidence analysis. It's just not their job. The court only looks at the evidence submitted by the two parties. If Brandish wanted to have a reputable forensic firm verify the evidence, she could then submit their report, or have one of them take the stand to testify that the recording is genuine.
May I suggest, in the future, that you have someone with actual legal experience check over your courtroom- and lawyer-related scenes before you post them? I know there are a number of people on SB who are, in fact, professional lawyers; I'm sure you could find someone willing to give your stuff a once-over.
As for the fight... I honestly found it rather unsatisfying. Having her pull new powers out like that just felt like a deus ex machina.
My complaint isn't about the length - though I'll admit that one possible solution would have to make the arc longer so as to give Taylor more time to develop the abilities she needs to win, to make the victory fell more earned. But the battle as given would have worked fine if all the relevant abilities had been properly established or foreshadowed. I'd have no objection to her developing ice powers to defeat Burnscar if she had previously demonstrated that she could develop whole new powers (not just 'get bigger and stronger') in response to need. I'd have no objection to her no-selling Cherish by letting the beast take over if we'd had previous interactions with Regent foreshadowing that she could do that.Besides, how many people - including Ack, if I'm not mistaken - complain that the inevitable S9 arc is always one of the most tiresome of any Worm fic? If Jack and his crew of psychos get unceremoniously Wyvern'd in this case, so much the better. It lets the narrative (and readers) move on to villains and conflicts and story-telling opportunities we actually care about. Besides, the less screen-time wasted on those wannabes, the less we feed their narcissism and fun-sucking antics.
Ok I did not notice that and that's rather funny does she have luck as a power or was she really that lucky here. Thanks for pointing that out.Crawler got tossed into the van, accidentally killing William Manton.
Sure it would. Two words: Excessive Force. Especially if this is a State with a "Duty to Retreat". Such duties are doubled in a K-12 school if you are a student as you lose your "right" to self-defense when in a school. If threatened a student is supposed to run away and tell a teacher and under NO circumstances hit back. Let the Authorities (usually teachers or hall monitors) handle it.He's willing to break the rules when it benefits him, yes, but he's not the type to casually disregard them. Like, if Miss Militia's alert had come from somewhere else, I could see him pretending he'd never received it so he could instead continue on and arrest Taylor instead of responding. Or if, after receiving the message and realising the fight was probably started by Shadow Stalker, he might willfully ignore that conclusion in order to have an excuse to arrest Taylor - though you'd have to explain why he thought press-ganging her was still viable at that point; he's not stupid, and 'I thought she started it' might excuse an arrest but it wouldn't justify a forced recruitment.
When people find out about Crawler's fate, I wouldn't be surprised if somebody sends Wyvern the biggest bottle of ketchup on the market.Meddle not in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and taste great with ketchup.
Someone? C'mon, we all KNOW it's gonna be either Clockblocker or Assault... Probably both.When people find out about Crawler's fate, I wouldn't be surprised if somebody sends Wyvern the biggest bottle of ketchup on the market.
I'm pretty the current case is a civil suit and any criminal case is still in the works. I think this is just for damages and to force a judgment against them for their conduct which in turn is factored into the coming criminal case for jail time and proof of guilt.So, about court procedure...
First, I assume that the proceeding against Emma is a criminal case. In a criminal case, there is no plaintiff, but rather a prosecutor. The offense is not against the victims, but against the state.
Normally you'd be right but given how many powerful fingers are in this pie and all of them not only want this done with pronto but are on one side it being given the fast track and placed at the top of the local courts work load over any and every other case is a given. When the whole system is pushing this out the door as fast as it can thing get done that normally take months or years with red tape and the usual slow grind.Suspension of disbelief broken. No way a court decision takes less then a few weeks, regardless of how clear the outcome is.
I've done a little bit of a rewrite to smooth things out a little and make it slightly less blatant.I'm pretty the current case is a civil suit and any criminal case is still in the works. I think this is just for damages and to force a judgment against them for their conduct which in turn is factored into the coming criminal case for jail time and proof of guilt.
Normally you'd be right but given how many powerful fingers are in this pie and all of them not only want this done with pronto but are on one side it being given the fast track and placed at the top of the local courts work load over any and every other case is a given. When the whole system is pushing this out the door as fast as it can thing get done that normally take months or years with red tape and the usual slow grind.
I think Coil might be choosing the 'run the fuck away; far, far away' option. The Nazis are probably going to be stupid about it, though, and going against Kaiser's orders, as well.Don't worry, Coil and E88, you'll both get a turn with the fiery death machine cooking you alive! At the same time, if I have anything to say about it.
This scene reminds me of this:Wyvern
PRT Building ENE
Director Emily Piggot
The Next Morning
"... court in the morning."
Emily hit Pause on the remote, so as to allow everyone present—Protectorate and Wards alike—to fully appreciate the gravity of the scene before them.
The screen in the conference room displayed two separate views of the summit of Captain's Hill. The angles were slightly different, and one was a little clearer than the other, but what each of them showed was unmistakeable. A draconic figure, red and gold markings identical to those in every photo ever taken of her, loomed over the parking area on top of the hill in a way that should have been frankly impossible at that range.
Providing even more evidence as to the scale involved, a tiny bright-coloured human form hovered next to the gargantuan muzzle. Everyone present knew who it was: Lady Photon. She appeared so tiny next to the immense creature that she would be able to stand on its lower eyelid and peer directly into its pupil.
Emily pressed the Play button again. Both images started rolling. Lady Photon clearly said something to Wyvern, because the immense reptilian eyeball rolled toward her. There was a chuckle in reply, clearly audible over the speakers, even from halfway across the city. "Maybe."
This time, Emily hit Stop, and the screens blanked.
"As we all know," she said, her voice carrying clearly to everyone in the room, "that happened last night."
"Oh, we know," Assault agreed readily enough. "So does everyone in Brockton Bay. There's a whole thread on PHO devoted to appeasing our new draconic overlord. Overlady. Whatever."
Did you HAVE to post this here four days before it has been a full month since last post?
I was trying to track it down since the chapter was posted, but only found it last night. I was using the wrong search terms. I should have looked at the dates better.Did you HAVE to post this here four days before it has been a full month since last post?
Please respect the spirit of Rule 7.
Well, so far that's about three or four suggestions for Wyvern to have a go at Ellisburg, and two for Eagleton.I'm surprised Emily Piggot doesn't suggest Taylor give another demonstration of her full-sized form's capabilities to Nilbog in Ellisburg. Maybe the disintegration bream to the Machine Army at Eagletown.
Of course, I wonder if her dad will let her challenge the Endbringers.
It could be amusing it The Simurgh takes a look at Wyvern and decides to head back to orbit, since I think Canberra is next on the list.
Don't worry Vicky... When Taylor takes out Nilbog you'll see Piggot not only smile, but fully on hug Taylor and give her a twirl in joy. You might even see a tear of joy in her eye!She grinned. "It's not for the plaques. It's for making Director Piggot smile on camera. I'm pretty sure she's forgotten how."
The timescale keeps getting shorter."He'll get the information for us. We'll know by Monday morning at the latest."
Welcome to bureaucracy. I sincerely doubt you'll enjoy your stay.The timescale keeps getting shorter.
He promised he'll look it up on Monday Morning.
Piggot passed on 'it'll be done by Monday Morning'
Reminds me entirely too much of unrealistic time frames in project planning...
She's dealt with him before.The timescale keeps getting shorter.
He promised he'll look it up on Monday Morning.
Piggot passed on 'it'll be done by Monday Morning'
Reminds me entirely too much of unrealistic time frames in project planning...
I've had that happen. I get a call or the boss comes in less than 30 minutes before quitting time on Friday and asks about doing something. I ask if it can wait until Monday because it's almost time to go home and I should finish what I'm doing or it will take longer than quitting time and that would mean overtime. I usually ask if overtime is authorized and the answer is always "no".The timescale keeps getting shorter.
He promised he'll look it up on Monday Morning.
Piggot passed on 'it'll be done by Monday Morning'
Reminds me entirely too much of unrealistic time frames in project planning...
Oh, the irony of her saying this.Mrs Dallon paused for a beat after saying my name, probably to make sure she had my attention. "We are never under any obligation to use our powers at someone else's whim. They are like any other aspect of our body: entirely ours to use or not use, as we see fit. The Director can't force you to do this. I can't force you to do this.
Presumably the PRT either will or already has consulted with the same Thinkers and precogs who told them that the they couldn't do it themselves and confirm that Wyvern can.While I wouldn't want to doubt the destructo breath weapon.
Nilbog is not a target you want to take any chances with.
He very well might have failsafes that are buried so far underground that removing would start triggering earthquakes and volcanoes.
And if you miss a single one, goodbye life on earth.
The Thinkers have noted that something (possibly a disease) will be released if there's a normal assault, or even a remote bombardment.Oh, the irony of her saying this.
Presumably the PRT either will or already has consulted with the same Thinkers and precogs who told them that the they couldn't do it themselves and confirm that Wyvern can.