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That's the real problem with your writing: your protagonists have power, but they never have the intelligence, pride, ruthlessness, or sheer self-respect to use it in a way that feels real. They're not admirable. They're not compelling. They're just embarrassing.
Who the fuck is going to tell a dragonrider what to do? And yet somehow this useless moron still acts like a submissive little doormat waiting for other people to screw him over.
And this Jon idiot? He doesn't even think like someone with a functioning brain. A dragon changes everything. Once he has a grown dragon, what the fuck is any council, election, or political faction realistically going to do to stop him? Nothing. Absolutely nothing.
It's unbearable. I can count on one hand the number of times I've been this pissed off at a protagonist, and yours absolutely earned it.
exhausting. You clearly have talent — which honestly makes it even more insulting. Because instead of using that talent to write powerful, memorable protagonists, you waste it on weak, floppy, servile nonentities who have all the power in the world and still act like frightened little bitches begging for permission to exist.
I'm supposed to believe I'm reading Westeros, Harry Potter, or some other brutal setting, but instead it feels like fucking suburban America dressed up in fantasy clothes. It's fake. It's cowardly. It completely destroys immersion.































That's what makes your work so
And your worldbuilding makes it even worse, because none of it feels honest. Every setting you touch gets turned into this watered-down, sanitized, politically correct parody of itself, where everyone magically has modern values, equal rights, and soft moral standards no matter how little sense that makes. It's completely disingenuous.
It's pathetic. Your protagonists don't feel noble, wise, or morally superior — they feel castrated. They feel like they were built in a lab to offend absolutely nobody, even if it means stripping them of all dignity, backbone, and self-respect.
Reading your stories is fucking infuriating

because they're all the exact same predictable garbage. It's always: 'Oh wow, I have overwhelming power, but instead of acting like an actual man with pride, will, or conviction, I'll just kneel, whine, compromise, and think in the safest, most politically correct way possible.'
I don't even usually use words like that, but your characters are so pathetically gutless that they make the most stereotypical beta-male Japanese protagonists look like hardened warlords by comparison.
"Fuck this shit, author. Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with you? I've read your fanfics, and every single one of your protagonists is the same spineless, neutered, ball-less coward wearing a different skin.
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TuriMaelstrom
Just wanted to leave this on the Profile, but I appreciate and have to thank you for the MahoAko story! It really inspired me to do a MahoAko story of my own, and I can't wait to delve into that sort of story.
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Happy to help! I'll certainly be lurking around in wait for when you post the fruits of that inspiration too. Maybe if my muse cooperates, I'll even cook up an omake or two for it. XD
Nitramy
You can enter a fandom and engage with the fandom.

BUUUUUUT the moment you want to change the fandom because you find something problematic in it, there's the door.
Hi, I noticed your online and reading a submission- I accidentally posted in the SFW creative writing instead of NSFW, and was wondering if that can be deleted and reposted at the review stage or if mods could move it?
SamuelAtomizer
I've just used QQ on mobile for the first time. It's not that different, but at the same, way different experience. Also, an author I read from, types every one of his chapters this way. How!? This is awful (compared to conventional keyboard)!
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