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Can you please update The Celestial Copy? It's one of the best Kakashi SI i've ever read
Hey AJT! Big fan, if a silent one, and I was rereading the revised Single Father snippets. As I was rereading, I noticed that snippet 4 and 5 of the revised are actually the same chapter. Not sure if you want to fix something months old at this point, but thought I'd point it out regardless. Thanks for your work, and hope you have a good day!
It feels like once every couple of months I have to mass ignore ai slop threads to get to actual people writing stories and the paranoid part of me is wondering how many people don't bother to tag they're using it that slip through the cracks.
One of the fun stories I have from highschool took place in my first year, when my then recently met deskmate, who would become my best friend later on, was drawing on my arm without a care in the world untill the teacher sneaked up on him and said in a perfectly calm and loud voice "Mr.****** could you stop drawing male genitalia on your classmate's arm?" no more drawings were preformed during english.
There's this "substitute" type; rich girl/guy's crush dumps them because they're poor/ugly/in trouble at the time, and then goes overseas for like 5 years, rich girl/guy then gets hot/rich/powerful, finds MC, who looks like crush, starts dating them as a "substitute", and then real deal comes back, causing MC to be dumped, but then rich girl/guy eventually regrets...

isn't this FGO Kiyohime???
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Anyway, the short stories here really played with this trope to bits, like every variation there is, and I'm sure there's plenty of microdramas that borrow from those plots too, I mean, holy shit, they're so soap opera
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FGO's version of Kiyohime was a stalker from the start, to be fair
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But if you think about it, Emiya is just knockoff Dante with swords for guns, less cool, and too much tanning spray
lmao gacha player got so mad that when he went to danmachi he became khorne incarnate
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and then he became all the world's evil lmao from sheer gacha resentment
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I guess it kind of makes sense for the player-insert MC to be somewhat upset, like, for example, if you spent all your resources ranking up your affection with Jeanne, but then Sieg shows up, and suddenly you've gotten NTR'd out of nowhere, you know
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lmao Jeanne lying to the player-insert that she "doesn't remember the previous times she was summoned" and then immediately running to Sieg's bedroom after telling player-insert this lmao cheating like a real life person lmao
A story needs stake, stakes make people feel the tension, the necessity to do something other than eating popcorns (cringe) and aura farming for multiple chapters.
Hit the mc at the point where they have no other choice but to act, if the mc is too strong, hit them with their family, their friends, their sole weakness, anything at all.
Or you could focus on another weaker but interesting character.
Finding a Biigoh who has a happily ever after is like pulling a five-star servant in FGO with friend point gacha.
Wonder if we can just slam dunk someone into an E.G.O that gives em animal ears/appendages and have Dante pet em for science :V
I found a very interesting simultaneous isekai, there's just five of the MC split selves, and each one of them is in one edition of Dungeons & Dragons...
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Differenbt editions? But are they in the same 'world setting'?
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Yeah kinda, like one is evicting through the temple of elemental evil, another is in strife with strahd, another is drifting with drizzt, another is tormented by time of troubles, and the last is playing baldur's gate 3
Haven't seen you update your Tanya avatar in a while. Have you settled on your current one or have you just not found one better/more appropriate?
as it turns out, a small choice makes a big difference

That one story about fujimaru ritsuka getting ntrd and betrayed or whatever, and then abandoning chaldea, going onto to live a better life... is so awkward, and kind of cringe
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Sounds like one of those Regret stories.... XD
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it starts off pretty strong but I think the author got too immersed into "hate for the gacha girls who betrayed him by choosing another despite their history" so he ended the story with garroting kinoko nasu lmao
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Lmao author made MC into a Beast... and yeah, you're right, it does have a hint of the regret stories stuff, but not as much as the first story where the author made fujimaru get repeated NTR'd by fucking astolfo and kogil of all people

this second one actually makes more sense, you know, MC was under affect of Alaya who screwed him with negative charisma
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