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On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

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I know how she will unlock her Zone. Shirogane will get signed up for a sprint as a change of pace. She will attempt to front-run but end up stuck behind Sakura Bakushin O who is too Bakushin to be debuffed. Then she will learn that Bakushin is a commited Jucheist. Refusing to lose to a Commie, Shirogane will unlock her Zone and pass Bakushin for the win.


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sxcAXamuyR4
 
For me, I am not going to lie, I love what you're doing with Shiro and I want to see where you're going with it. I hope that it's not that she will do nothing—it's a story, so I don't think it will be that way. But at the end, even if we make her okay, I do want to see that race where someone pushes her that far. That place where Tanya Degurechaff comes out—and no one ever wants to see that again..... we know she is a war pony... but that? to all of Tracen academy knows.... shes the smol pony.
 
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The Castle of Jutland said:
"Behold, a Pink Uma, and the name given to her was Happiness, and Hope followed with her."

Thus spoke Shiro upon telling others of her impression of Haru Urara
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Life and Death just in the background being happy that their respective champions are getting along so well.
 
The Castle of Jutland said:
"Behold, a Pink Uma, and the name given to her was Happiness, and Hope followed with her."

Thus spoke Shiro upon telling others of her impression of Haru Urara
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FluffyVoid said:
Life and Death just in the background being happy that their respective champions are getting along so well.
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I like to imagine the 3 Goddess are stopping Being X from ruining this moment.


They do it like this.

View: https://youtu.be/DMI1dHGOPJo?si=QoUl0f2hQUXzv9ZC
 
The Castle of Jutland said:
"Behold, a Pink Uma, and the name given to her was Happiness, and Hope followed with her."
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FluffyVoid said:
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If Shiro is Death of the Four Uma then I can see a few others that'd fit the rest.

>Famine: Oguri Cap

>War: *Looks at the Gold Clan (Especially the "Terrorist of the Race Track" Stego)*

>Conquest: Very difficult to pick between Opera O (Extremely consistent record that pissed off gamblers), Tachyon (Shows up, blows competition out of the water, leaves), & Rice Shower (Breaker of winning streaks).

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Pestilence: Evil Nature
 
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I've been reading this fanfic back on AO3, but can someone make an omake of other isekai protagonist being an uma?

Shadow Chaser: A completely ordinary(?) uma who wears an eyeglasses(a fake one), her racing outfit screams shadowy eminence and she doesn't need her eyeglasses. Nearby police station has reports of mysterious vigilante activities.

Nine's Own Goal: An uma musume who is well known to have a very unemotive poker face despite being emotive in other ways. Her hobby outside of racing and studying is playing MMORPG with her online friends.

Pleiades: An untalented but very determined uma, who is fated to fall off the railing after multiple low placing losses, but is saved by her friend, unlike her horse counterpart who died from that fall. Said fate can be avoided. (Reaching the Bad Ending will cause the trainer to wake up in the past in the same day they first meets Pleiades. )

Green Clover: A lazy uma who doesn't like to train, but her main strength lies in her very high WIT stat.

Camelot: A determined uma whose goal is to win Arima Kinen, it's just that she and her trainer has to deal with the trio of idiotic umas and their bitch of a trainer. Had a pet racoon and a bird for some reason.

Shirogane Orzel: "Why do they feel familiar? "
 
KenjiApex said:
I've been reading this fanfic back on AO3, but can someone make an omake of other isekai protagonist being an uma?

Shadow Chaser: A completely ordinary(?) uma who wears an eyeglasses(a fake one), her racing outfit screams shadowy eminence and she doesn't need her eyeglasses. Nearby police station has reports of mysterious vigilante activities.

Nine's Own Goal: An uma musume who is well known to have a very unemotive poker face despite being emotive in other ways. Her hobby outside of racing and studying is playing MMORPG with her online friends.

Pleiades: An untalented but very determined uma, who is fated to fall off the railing after multiple low placing losses, but is saved by her friend, unlike her horse counterpart who died from that fall. Said fate can be avoided. (Reaching the Bad Ending will cause the trainer to wake up in the past in the same day they first meets Pleiades. )

Green Clover: A lazy uma who doesn't like to train, but her main strength lies in her very high WIT stat.

Camelot: A determined uma whose goal is to win Arima Kinen, it's just that she and her trainer has to deal with the trio of idiotic umas and their bitch of a trainer. Had a pet racoon and a bird for some reason.

Shirogane Orzel: "Why do they feel familiar? "
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Just to make sure I understand:

Shadow Chaser: Cid Kagenou.

Nine's Own Goal: Ainz.

Pleiades: Natsuki Subaru.

Green Clover: …Kazuma?

Camelot: I'm drawing a blank unless this is supposed to be Kazuma?

Edit, just realized Camelot is probably Naofumi, so Green Clover would be Kazuma.
 
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ReadingBetweenLines said:
Thanks for the Chapter!

Well, who is this cute airhead? She certainly has chemistry with Shiro.

I wonder, does Shiro miss the feeling of flying? I know her speed isn't good enough, but how would she recreate that feeling?
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EX Skill: Silver Wings (Pegasus)
Condition: Reach the crest of an incline maintaining a top speed or higher, (via down hill)
Catapult Shiro high over the track, jumping ahead a considerable distance.

(I don't know how EXs work, I haven't played Pretty Derby)

Also, omaigotto, is da baby! I'm pretty sure Haru would be like, the only Uma that wouldn't have their mood tanked by an Orzeł support card.
 
JKD_666 said:
What do you mean "random"? It's obviously Guts!
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Shirogane Guts SSR being a very high risk high reward card for most Uma but a straight up best-in-slot auto-include for specifically Haru Urara because she gets all of the benefits and bonus stats with none of the downsides is a fantastic mental image. I just image the first reaction of someone setting up a Haru Urara run after maxing that card, seeing "Trainee Link" and going "what the actual fuck does that mean". And then they find out what it means.
 
Bbob said:
I know next to nothing about this universe however this is so well written that I'm genuinely enjoying it.
Honestly I'm waiting on baited breath for the first actual race where she's wearing the Polish cavalry uniform, and gets aggravated enough that her memories of being a Prussian officer come to the forefront and begins roaring in German, freaking everyone out. May the Murder Pony never die.
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From what I've seen in other fics, they only get to use their victory outfits in G1s. So that will be quite a while.



We saw early on that it was known in universe about umamusume being reincarnated horses, but is that something that Shirogane ever learned?
 
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Chrisleech said:
We saw early on that it was known in universe about umamusume being reincarnated horses, but is that something that Shirogane ever learned?
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Might have been that Shirogane was working hard and was too busy. Or it could be that it is a fact that is well known but not widespread to a point.
 
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Might have been that Shirogane was working hard and was too busy. Or it could be that it is a fact that is well known but not widespread to a point.
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I think Shirogano's grandfather thought about it and how it could affect her. Or it was just Shirogano's father, but I'm like 99% sure we have confirmation that it is known that umas have memories from past lives.

To what extent is probably not known and what the umas remember most likely depends on the uma in question. Some like Stay Gold seem to remember quite a lot, while others only have residual vibes and infinitely more irritating Deja vu.

Edit: I honestly don't think Shirogano knows about the reincarnation stuff being mandatory for umas, and if/when she is informed of it, she might just inform her family that her last life was bad and leave it at that.

No need to dwell unnecessarily on the past, after all Shirogano seems quite content to let The Manager and The Soldier rest.

Sidenote but whenever I'm writing something in English and the word begins with "un" I've begun to have a real struggling not to substitute that with "uma".
 
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