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    [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    The exposition was pretty well handled. You did misspell "Warrant Offizier". You could tighten up the dialogue a little, though you do have fairly decent voice differentiation between characters. And thanks. I thought it might have been good if a bit cliche to enhance both Cinder and Pyrrha's...
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    Threadmarks: A Tale of Two Sisters

    A Tale of Two Sisters - - - The dressing room mirror was fogged with steam and the scent of cheap powder. Athena Nikos—barely twenty, still carrying the soft swell of pregnancy beneath the tight corset of her costume—stared at her reflection as if it belonged to someone else. The girl in the...
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    [RWBY] The Great Temporal Step-Sibling War!
    Threadmarks: Cinder, Iridescent, and Zaroff Spy

    The curry stand sat under a string of faded lanterns near the edge of the commercial district, the kind of place that stayed open late because people needed something warm and cheap after long shifts. Steam rose from the big pots in thick, fragrant clouds—cumin, chili, coriander, and the...
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    Threadmarks: The Arc Farm: Taste Testing

    The Arc family farmhouse table in Radian was heavy with the rich, hearty spread of a proper summer lunch—fresh bread still warm from the oven, thick stews, and platters of garden vegetables that Lilac had helped harvest that morning. Team RWBY and JNPR sat scattered among Nick, Isabel, Lilac...
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    Write me more! This is great!
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    Threadmarks: Flashback: Fafnir Trains Weiss

    The Schnee mansion's private training hall echoed with the sharp ring of steel on steel. Weiss—barely fourteen, hair in a tight braid, Myrtenaster still feeling oversized in her grip—lunged forward with a textbook-perfect thrust. Fafnir parried it effortlessly with Knarra's flat, the...
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    [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

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    [RWBY] RWBY Shorts
    Threadmarks: Jaune Arc, Single Father 55

    Yang pushed open the door to the JNPR common room with Mia perched on her hip, the little girl chattering nonstop. "—and then Hawk said the blue crayon was the bestest for drawing explosions, but I told him red is way cooler, and then we played Starlight Rangers and I got to be the pink one and...
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    Threadmarks: Jaune Arc, Single Father 54

    Blake waited outside the daycare with her arms crossed, trying not to look as nervous as she felt. When the doors opened and Mia came running out, the little cat Faunus girl's ears were perked and her smile was bright. "Auntie Blake!" Mia squealed, throwing herself into Blake's arms. Blake...
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    [RWBY] RWBY Shorts
    Threadmarks: Jaune's Arc, Single Father 53

    The early morning light was soft and golden over Beacon's grounds. Most students were still asleep, but Pyrrha Nikos had slipped out quietly with Mia in tow, the little girl still yawning in her arms. "I thought we could have some time just for us before everyone else wakes up," Pyrrha said...
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    Threadmarks: Dragonslayer: Borrowed Heart

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    [RWBY] The Great Temporal Step-Sibling War!
    Threadmarks: Yang and Ruby at Dinner, Blake's Date Part 1

    Dinner had been chaos. The long table in the guest dining room of Beacon had been packed with future kids, current students, parents, and enough overlapping conversations to make anyone's head spin. Yang had smiled through most of it—there was something warm and right about the noise, the...
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    The Turtles (American Revolution AU)

    I need to rename it goddamnit.
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    The Turtles (American Revolution AU)
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    I wrote up a short story where David Bushnell had two years and a little extra help and inspiration for building his Turtle Submarine... And the mission against the British fleet in New York Harbor on September 6th, 1776 goes dramatically different. Please check it out on my Patreon. I will...
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    Threadmarks: The Arc Clan: The Crimson Demons

    The combined teams of RWBY, JNPR, and the ever-chaotic KDAM trudged along a dusty Mistral road toward a tiny village nestled in the mountains. The air smelled of pine, though Jaune felt that the scent of shenanigans was also in there somewhere. Ruby bounced ahead like a hyperactive pinball...
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