Shit, man. I've just discovered more of your writing, and it's so damn good.
I hope to all that's great that you don't stop writing, but it's ultimately your choice, I guess.
Thanks for all the fish.
I hope to all that's great that you don't stop writing, but it's ultimately your choice, I guess.
Thanks for all the fish.
For what it's worth - and I know I'm not supposed to say it - I never saw the first version of the chapter, and didn't see anything wrong with the second version of the chapter.

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