Questionable Questing

It was kind of hard balancing a rocky relationship and having that show through without crossing over into the two being mean to each other, while at the same time making the two passionate enough to have sex.

The ending about Lucy saying they are all dead and Robin doesn't have to grieve alone is great, I like how you pushed a strong emotional finish

Do you like Lucy So far? she's only been here for two chapters and yet I have to make it believable that Robin and her have this deep and torrid history together, so I'm wondering if its working?

I like how Robin can't tell what Lucy' mood i and has to infer it

I enjoy traits like her pushing to be asked a question, her spiteful backtalk but also her humor and need to know why she wasn't enough for Robin. Multiple reactions and emotions make for a interesting story

Thinking we need some personality work on Son and Sister and Mom.
As for your update, I liked how Lucy pushed Robin both to hurt her with quips and make her feel better with nicer things said

In general I enjoy how you employ emotional twists

My thinking with Lucy is she can be a little mean without meaning too. She's too honest if you know what I mean.

God damn it I've been coughing so hard. I went to work today like I wanted, but being out in the cold and the rain made my fever a lot worse. I might have to stay home tomorrow again.

Sorry i'm complaining about it, the coughing's giving me a headache and making it hard for me to focus.

I noticed how smart but in the end direct with her cleverness around the bush Lucy was and you need to see doctor? Taking meds?

The big issue is that the weathers horrible right now and if your the maintenance guy you have to go out and fix things in that weather. it just really sucks since I'm a few days away from working her for thirty days and being able to take paid sick leave. I'm sure if I sleep in bed for a few days I'll be fine, but a few days unpaid is a decent chunk of money from my paycheck.

But yeah that was my two main traits for Lucy, clever but blunt. She grew up in a family that forced her to hide her feelings so now she wants her own family to never do that.

I like her contrasting traits mixing together. What's next for update after this?

Back to the school where Robin will review the first week, look at the various issues that have shown up. I'll give the readers the option to keep Mineta or kick him out for example. Or have a talk with Aizawa about his little test he did the first day and how that's more harmful than good. Stuff like that.

But also a few hints at the changes she's already made. Midnight stops mid conversation with Robin to suck her off, she's that horny. Izuku having a bit of a panic attack that if he doesn't use his powers he'll fail, but he if he does use them he'll fail anyway because he's hurting himself and the teachers will punish him for doing that. Some dilemmas and future paths to nudge into place.

I like, showing the influence of players and hopefully they get rid of Minate

I don't really feel too strongly about Minate. I think you could do some interesting things with him, but at the same time why give him a ton of screen time when there's a ton of characters with much more interesting idea's going for them?

That's one of my biggest issues with MHA, too many character's and too many idea's for any of them to shine sometimes. but back to Minate with how controversial of a character he is, I think the best compromise is to let the audience decide.

Want to talk therapist or Immigrant family? And just, he's so boring