Questionable Questing

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Things he kept hidden and under wraps and over time forgot why he was subtle about it

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As I'm doing fanfic I should be faithful to the characters for viewrship outside of creative fire, Becca's mom is a french teacher. Medival times for this world literature nerd?

Andy333

French teacher? Could have a scene where the kid wants to play the knight and save the princess for a play the class was doing, but ended up getting chosen to be the villain instead because he acted it so well. A hint of what's to come with it ending with the kid freaking out about being bad and the teacher reassuring him that's it okay.

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I won't do french exactly as I am doing alt world that ain't earth but french like sure or something else with a mix of french and other things. I like that idea. Storywise, I don't see the good side winning. I think of the mask, Taffy becoming the sweet sugary calm zone but otherwise working with the evil schemes and acts of his other self

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There's no easy moral solution to the werewolf like problem of him being a Dark Soul

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Aren't they basically the same? The dark side just being the part of him with less restraint? Wouldn't a good ending to that just being him accepting of that and being at peace with every part of him.

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Their two different people but also the same person. Different tastes in things and what they like, Taffy liking sweets for one and Red barbque and spicy food, making aura infused semen loaded meals to change the bodies of his girls

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And he can't be at peace without accepting he's going to do fucked up shit for fun and power, which fits my theme of corruption as a kink is messed up.

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But plot now, cult, how the relationship of Taffy our normal personality and Red the Dark Soul side develops and the arguments Red uses to make Taffy accept his bullshit

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What are their personalities?

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Red is controlling, manipulative, sarcastic and combative. He's very goal oriented and thinks highly of himself and what he wants, However, he's actually quite bad at talking normally to people and relies on force to get what he wants. Painfully socially shy with his feelings, he's much more of a physical action type.

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Taffy goes with the flow but is responsive, asks questions, figures out what people like and knows how to laugh. He doesn't think he is that amazing but keeps his mind on his friends and family, likes making sweets for them and spending time with others. He's not so good at bold moves, but is actually more of a social butterfly than Red. These are very first draft personalteis

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I like that. Nice contrast with the outwardly confident and charismatic, hiding some thing awkward and shy. Kind of plays into how having no filter for you words is a double edged sword. What about Taffy?

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I'd also rec the game itself. Setting isn't anything to write home about but that Jekyl and Hyde dynamic is fun. For the love of god do not try the NTR route version. It is fucking poison to the soul

Andy333

What happens with the NTR route? Lol

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No filter is a good one. And yeah. I've been thinking including with me and Jackal's stuff that doms should have way more issues. Someone who wants to control and own a person like that? They are not in control of themselves

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Childhood friend and mom drink cum milkshakes and piss bottles and MC can't do anything to stop it or them being seduced by a big black kid. It is really bad, but NTR at its finest I guess. The cum milkshakes and piss bottles I'd be fine with having the MC do to his girls himself, but the emotional tone of what I saw was diseased.

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Taffy the MC of this au fic is really based on what Red thought his mom would like and further influences from his friends, he blends well, the Dark Soul part of him works on rape power logic and is a social wrecking ball

Andy333

Seeking to control another person is usually because they want to learn how to control themselves or at the very least have a canvas to put on some of their more violent and sadistic urges. And yeesh, piss bottles? Never been a fan of that or scat.

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As a friend of mine discussed it, Red has trouble with relationships that aren't master and pet. Which is why Taffy was born, to do this shit