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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
An avatar vessel for Trigon with lesser powers
Andy333
Andy333
I didn't think of that. That works really well, its also symbolic of the girls fully rejecting their past to be with Omniman. Maybe I could have a faction from Starfire's planet that wants to kill Blackfire as revenge since she betrayed her home world and almost cost them the war, be there as well. Maybe include an uncle or a brother for it to be genuinely personal for Blackfire.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Threats that will push Nolan to the limits and show Mark what a peak apex Viltrumite is like. Making him want to further embrace the Viltrumite power and mindset to further enhance his strength to protect his family and earth
Andy333
Andy333
I'm getting some sleep. Have a busy day tomorrow. But I'll definitely start writing some more next week. I plan on getting the next chapter of My therapist out and maybe finally get the first chapter of Invincible out too.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Awesome sauce. The plot is coming together and the world is nice. Talk bat family chi powers next. Makes them fit more in a justice league focused world as real supers
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What I'm seeing is Power Girl grows to enjoy being wrestled and beaten by Mark and Mark likes her brawling with him. They become a a teamed duo and push each other's training.
For Mark and Omiman, you can have keyptonian designs influence their outfits. Ancient keyptonian runes from when Viltrum was the war planet of the Krypton empire
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Read away and how day? I've learned greese fires create amazing barbaque
Andy333
Andy333
Jesus what happened? I hope to god, nobody tried pouring water on it because grease is an oil and it'll float the to the surface and still burn. If you want to put it out you either have to cut oxygen, cut the heat, or cut the fuel. The three triangles of combustion, in trade school we had to do a whole presentation on it when we were studying gas furnaces.
Andy333
Andy333
Oh and check out this CYOA I found. Resident evil is a woefully underutilized setting.

Umbrella Lab Experiments

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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Squirt bottle of water used by heroic coworker on the bottom of smoker. And read me update. No one was burned and we had a laugh.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Looking at CYOA and this has me think of Mark with his plot to use the Bimbo tech on earth to turn it into a breeding pen for the Viltrumites
Andy333
Andy333
I'm glad no one got hurt. And yeah I'm taking a look through it right now and getting plenty of ideas.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Scientest girl. Debbie or someone else. And what ideas?
Andy333
Andy333
Plenty of the heroines either dabble in some sort of specific science or field, stuff like Wonder Woman acting as a diplomat and spy, Power Girl is the leader of a tech company, Barbara not only is the foremost hacker in the world her programming skills are only second to Tim. Lots of fun stuff to explore.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
By the way, Power Girl as in not super girl? And Power Girl as first girlfriend becoming head of the breeding training and transformation of humanity. And you read Jackal and me's update?
Andy333
Andy333
But with the enhancements, the regnerators from resident evil and the T-1000 from terminator 2 is giving me some idea's. Basically the idea that all Viltrums have this inner skeleton or carbon matrix structure inside them that their body is attached too and went they break their bones and rip muscles it gives structure and is what allows them to stand up and keep fighting even after breaking every bone in their body.
Andy333
Andy333
Power Girl, otherwise known as Karren Star, is the clone of Kara Kent, who herself is called Super Girl.
Andy333
Andy333
Power Girl was manufactured to be a weapon by Cadmus in Canon, until she broke her programming and joined the Justice League. I have a different plan for her here, since Omniman being a lot more openly critical about the justice league's role and more willing to work with the government along with Ceil's influence and Lex's lack of involvement means Cadmus isn't the same.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like and with Kara, TK force blasts? Lean into Krytonians are solar magic to contrast with herculean Uber strength of genetically tortured Viltrumites
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