Questionable Questing

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How do I make this larger than life figure feel small and a little vulnerable around Miss Robin thus expertly pulling on her's and by extension the reader's heart strings, while also showing off how powerful and charismatic he is?

What I'm thinking is that All Might turns toward Miss Robin for advice for how to approach the students with him quietly admitting he's a little nervous, and just the image of All might, muscles bulging out of his suit, hunched over and admitted he has stage fright is super adorable. But now I need to make him seem strong.

Two different situations. One where he is buffed and the other he isn't.
Or reverse expectations. Skinny injured All Might is intimidating while Buffed is anxious over teaching the students and Midorya's health

Ninja me and have him while frail and coughing blood go hard-core speech mode about the rising villains and his promise to crush any who dare harm the students

I don't know if I'm ready to have the reveal of the extent of his injuries towards Robin, but I do really like your idea.

Not full extent but the change in format at least

Although the knowledge that All Might is too weak to effectively fight All for one could be a good turning point for Robin as she starts desperately searching around for more power and allies she could use to stack her odds when All for one and All Might have their eventually final showdown. Could act as a good corrupting moment for her as she starts loosing her morals and codes in response to the threat.

Neat. Further complicated this response with the idea she wants the students to survive the clash

Robin at this point doesn't really understand just how much danger her students are in. She's still under the assumption that Izuku's the only one getting targeted, and as long as she does her job it won't be physical and that while All for one is making moves he still want's to stay hidden to the general public.

Once she starts to figure it out and sees her new life is at risk, hard choices appear.

The funny thing is that while yes she will be apocalyptically angry at him trying to hurt her precious student's she's also going to blow a fuse at how unprofessional the whole thing is.

Shigaraki's obvious lack of emotional stability and training, yet being given control over the mission and their super weapon. The army of goons being split apart, which plays to the students strength's. If your focused on spectacle over killing, the lack of live streams or other heroes to fight is a big down side. As well as targeting kids in general because that's an easy way for the heroes to stop holding back.

She's mad as a mentor and possible girlfriend wife to her students and mad as a professional assassin.

Want to talk Mark super strength?

Sure. What are you thinking?

What makes super strength boring vs what makes it epic. One hit blows that kill someone or win a fight aren't fun. Snapping bone, bleeding and ripped wounds, vicious brawling. That is cool. Mark winning by overwhelming ferocity and committed strikes and smashing his elbow into someone's throat while dive bombing them from the sky as he holds them

Super strength is enhanced by the visceral being empathized in the damage of the physical force being used. Viltrumites winning via herculean feats of might combined

I really like the visual of Mark punching over and over again, each time building momentum so while the first hit only bruises the person the last one is crunching straight through the skull. or Batman fighting Omniman and being clearly superior in style and get quite a few hits in, but then Omniman lands a punch and dents Batman's armor. It doesn't kill him, but it shows how outclassed he is.

In that same fight I also like the idea of Omniman grabbing Batman's cape, but unbeknownst to him the cape has a special rope system to disengage it if it get's caught on something. Show that while yes Omniman can kick Batman's ass that doesn't mean he isn't a tricky opponent.

Batman here to be a Juatice League member I see many high tech gadgets, power armor, and tricky Chi powers