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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I'd give him unique powers with the Miss Dallion thing of being a symboite suit master. Do a Vader idea thing from a while back where his bonded clothing, the soruce of his power is a dark alt personality of him?
Andy333
Andy333
I was thinking the suits brought out and intensified emotions and feelings and with Hari he has a lot of repressed emotions and lust he refuses to acknowledge that his suit forces him too.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like. Go on. Was in tub
Andy333
Andy333
Basically the whole family has some heavy lust for each other, even in the small snippet everyone picked up on that, that's partially caused by the experiments by Ragyo. Not just on Hari, but Satsuki and Ryuko had some stuff implanted in them they barely fought off when they killed their mother.
Andy333
Andy333
That combined with how almost codependent they are, Satsuki in particular basically ghosted most of her old friends after the trauma of everything that had happened with her only eventually reaching out to her past lover and sister Ryuko after discovering Hari and deciding to raise him, which means the three of them have a mess of a relationship as they really only have each other.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Interesting. So you want the suits to be the source of powers. What do you think of the suit being like a shadow self to Hari? Loving his moms but also wanting to corrupt and own them and thinking it is good for the family?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Past lover. WHAT
Andy333
Andy333
Lol. Yep, Satsuki and Ryuko dated for a little while before the big reveal they where sisters. Which is also another reason Satsuki ghosted her friends. She felt just like her mother in taking advantage of her younger sister and blamed herself for it, thinking she broken and abusive who could only love herself. Which is also her big character arc with Hari.
Andy333
Andy333
Since Ragyo only love her daughter since she saw them as an extension of herself, and is what Satsuki fears more than anything. that her love for Hari and Ryuko is entirely self centered.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I love that. The idea that Satsuki fears her desires are narciasicm inherited and amplified
Andy333
Andy333
Yep, again the only reason she reached out to her sister again was because of Hari and her fear that if she raised him alone he would end up as broken as her. With Sasuki almost begging her sister to take him away from her. Which Ryuko refused and is why she refers to herself as his Aunt despite practically raising him and being a second mom with her sister.
Andy333
Andy333
Ryuko knows that if she calls herself mom, she gives Satsuki the excuse to leave. Since now Hari doesn't need anymore, and not just for Hari's sake but Ryuko also knows being a good parent has really helped her sister process some of the trauma.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like how you'd have Sasuki so self hating she would try to convince her sister to take her son away and her sister says no and ignores her sister's stupid emotional self destruction. Sweet. And Ryuko likes her family life and doesn't want to destroy it
Andy333
Andy333
Now obviously its been over a decades since all that happened and Satsuki is doing a lot better, but after so much time has passed she still hasn't fully reconnected with her friends and her insecurities are starting to creep up as Hari's about to start high school. Especially since Ryuko is really pushing her to do it, since their forty birthday and the cut off range for being a magical girl is approaching.
Andy333
Andy333
Since the alien clothes have a very strict rule about staying with a partner for too long since at a certain point they get permanently bonded together, and their fear is that could eventually lead to immortal Magical girl rulers over earth. Which is also conveniently one of the reason Ragyo went full mad scientest. She was trying to find a way to keep her magical girl status forever.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
So our Mister Dallion here would usher in a age of permantly bonded bimbo paradise
Andy333
Andy333
Something like that. I also like playing with the idea of Ragyo making a ton of clones of her daughters, and having Hari make an entire huge harem purely of his family. But all that's towards the end game. I just wanted the basic character arcs first.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ah. Invincible first and so Hari. I think Mister Dallion is the perfect transfusion here for character.
Andy333
Andy333
Yep. Always glad to reuse and remake idea's into something better. Anyway night. Going to get some sleep. Sorry about the girl. Even if you did dodge a bullet it still probably sucks.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Fuck it. Hopefully I keep matching and from there I get better at this and find a girl worth my time
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