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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
He only wants his two milfs
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Hari needs some edge.
Andy333
Andy333
Basically it's a little hint that he's possessive and underneath the smiling face is someone who's holding back a lot of anger. Oh and his construct, keep in mind magical girls get more as they get stronger, but his "starter" and main one is a all white suit with a rainbow colored tie as kind of a hint and homage about his connection to Ragyo
Andy333
Andy333
As for edge we get some more hint of it as after talking with his mom he goes to visit his childhood friend/secret girlfriend. His other childhood friend that's not Marin. I'm thinking he has three total secret girlfriends, which not only does it get the readers wonder how the hell he has so many girls chasing after him, more hints to his secret past, but it also shows how selfish he can be with relationships.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
He's currently loosing the cool protag contest to Mark and Robin but this selfish angle has progress. A manipulative always playing games to win mindset. And the mindset behind that. As I said before. Less spy. More monster overlord
Andy333
Andy333
With hari specifically using lines he used with Marin the night before on his second girlfriend who's also younger than him and a little shy around him. In a refurse of Marin, being reluctant to go any further but Hari's pushing forward anyway. As well as a weird note that Hari refuses to have sex with anyone, instead keeping it to a light petting.
Andy333
Andy333
Since spoilers, his symbiote is implanted when he impregnates someone and right now it's not strong or developed enough yet to do that.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Have Hari be aware he's a bastard but it's all light fun and other excuses
Andy333
Andy333
That's kind of what I'm thinking actually. Throughout the whole date he's thinking about Marin and how little he actually cares he's cheating on her, and how that made him feel weird since he knew he should care about it but for some reason he couldn't.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
He cares about them but can't stop wanting all of them. Same with wanting to monopolize his moms.
Is he starting to have dreams of killing the villains who attack his moms?
Andy333
Andy333
That's actually a really good idea. I was at first considering making him aggressively ignore the casual craziness of Magical Girl life as kind of a mental block he had to slowly uncover when he finds out his true origin, but I really like that too.
Andy333
Andy333
In the future I plan on Ryuko and Satsuki getting caught by a Class A monster and getting pretty hurt and that'll be the trigger for Hari to discover his powers with it also acting as a bit of a inciting incident for the whole family and the two mom's quickly figure out there's something off with his powers.
Andy333
Andy333
And the two start quietly investigating those old labs in the background and trying to figure out what was done to Hari, and also start having flashbacks to their mom and what went down twenty years ago. With this creating a tension in Hari's relationship with them for the first time and is what really pushes him to start chasing them romantically because he's scared they'll leave.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
If your going to do normalcy. Make it a mask over a interesting monster who over the years has been becoming aware he's odd. From manipulation to violence. It's just been the multiple girlfriends but lately he wants to kill his mothers villains and have them be more open to him.

Interesting is your goal
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Big bad wolf Hari. Lean into the monster being the nice funny guy. A Magic girl enhancer and enslaver
Andy333
Andy333
Nice, now he has something interesting going on. The nice guy is a mask to cover up what's underneath. Night, thank you for the help. Good luck finding a girl.
Andy333
Andy333
I know it sucks getting ghosted, but it'll work out eventually.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I'm not even that deep into muscle building and I'm getting steady matches over time. Talk Jason tomorrow unless Hari really got you.

Big bad wolf hidden in plain sight is imagery for him
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Hellhound?
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Bob is bob
Heyo. Talk Jason if your interested or talk Hari of that's on your mind. Hear what you want for Hari's chatacter and I'll give my thoughts on what I like personally as additions
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