Questionable Questing

Sure. And Bastards glory, I don't think you mentioned that was the name for the sequel. It works pretty well.

Thank you I came up with it. So Hurik is going to fight a beast in the first part of the new Quest. A starting mission. He's at a inn on his way to Moat Calin and Jackal has the local people call on him as his lord to deal with it. Ygrite will be covered in blood by the end of it.

Gore-drenched for barbaric sexy and a inkeeper's daughter will be seduced by Hurik at the victory feast. And I want the players to feel the thrill of conquest as a lord. Its a fantasy story. The sexy is going to arise from fantasy acts like fighting monsters and bandits or razor sharp diplomacy showing off their charisma. Hurik's heroics are what gets him pussy. Let the readers feel that power as a fantasy character

They'll leave the girl corrupted either by Valryian sorcery or Old God Witchcraft as a gift to her inkeeper father and a way for Hurik to be honorable. Hurik is striving to be a good man with his twisted sense of sexual morality he got from his mom and so he's not just going to fuck the inkeeper's daughter without giving something in return.

I was going to give some advice on how to make the action better, since boring acting can really ruin good sex scenes if one comes after the other, but I don't think you need it. Just remember that shounen style super attacks or spells need to be used as trump cards or traps, since using them a lot really sucks away the readers engagement.

And remember the best fight scene always has the main character get this shit kicked out of them. Seeing a character struggle to lift something, or scream and grunt with effort is always so much cooler than seeing superman effortlessly lift a bunch of weights no matter how heavy. it ties in with how the best fights, bleed action and emotion together.

My goal is to get the readers incredibly horny through the violent savagery of Ygrite. I love the idea of a Red Sonja where a beautiful women is made more intensely gorgeous by how fucking wild a fighter she is. Blood stains everywhere

This scene shows this concept off perfectly and it's from the Raid, which is one of the best action movies of all time.

See the guy running away from the machete users, and only fighting when cornered. Literal peak storytelling there. Humanizes the Main character, makes the villains more threatening while also showing off their smarts by showing how they corner him, and done in only a few seconds. Have a scene like that with Ygritte. Have her get hurt and have to roll in mud.

Didn't see full video but the acting and cammera angles are insane. I love this. So much frantic steel hard sword sharp action dominates the combat

Very, very good movie. I would suggest Old Boy too but you've probably already heard it. Again some of the best fight choreography ever. John Wick has nothing on this.

And on the opposite end of the spectrum, Elite Squad from brazil which is about some of the specialized anti drug military/police unit that fight the cartels, has some of the bloodiest gun play I've ever seen in a movie. Also has a very good story and characters, deserves a ton of praise for that, but again the gun play is perfection. People get chunks taken off of them. It's awesome.

John Wick style gunplay?

And the Night Comes For Us is a horror director doing a kung fu gangester action thriller where a guy is trying to get a little girl away from the Triad out to kill her and so many people die to protect this girl. Its a grim tragedy

No, it's very gritty and very realistic actually. But it's not overly, like in a lot of sniper or war movies. It's realistic enough you feel like you're there and you could actually imagine yourself in it, but it has enough stylized action to be fun too.

Interesting. With a Bastard's Glory I want players to feel all the glory of a lord in the smut. I enjoy the extreme and the dominating and the slutty. None of that generic porn shit

Sorry I couldn't find one with an English Subtitle, but this scene is a perfect demonstration.

The music and gunshot sound design is brutal

Anyway, sleepy time. My aunt's going on a trip tomorrow to see some friends in Texas, so I'm going to be house sitting for the dogs until Sunday. I'll probably get some writing done since I'll be stuck at home with them.

See I told you. The Heat and Collateral as well as Elite Squad, are the only movies I can think of where gunshots are actually as loud as they are in real life.