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Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Crista20, Apr 4, 2022.

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  1. Threadmarks: 1- Kara Zor-El
    Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Nothing...
     
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  2. ioriangel

    ioriangel Mysterious Angel of Incalculable Mayhem

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    Watched, hope it's not a rehash of the mcu.
     
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  3. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    If you knew what is in my mind you wouldn't say that.
     
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    Venyr4434 Versed in the lewd.

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    Hmmm. Interesting. Watched.

    Also
    Ability
     
  5. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Please quote more things if you correct me, a single word will not help me find the error. But thanks, I appreciate your help.
     
  6. KenKara

    KenKara Getting sticky.

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    i mostly skipped it because it was like 80-90%similar from the one i read on Ff or webnovel i dont remember, and it was a year ago
    but watched
     
  7. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Oh yes the start is quite similar but the details will change everything as the chapters pass
     
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    ioriangel Mysterious Angel of Incalculable Mayhem

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    Oh this is a rewrite? Can you post a link to the original please?
     
  9. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    NO! I left that thing behind and it will STAY Dead
     
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    ioriangel Mysterious Angel of Incalculable Mayhem

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    Interesting, so you're making a crossover?
     
  11. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Some elements from Dc but not a crossover.
     
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  12. La Pucelle Altre

    La Pucelle Altre Getting sticky.

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    I'm sorry. since when is captain marvel freaking 2.3 Meters? That is absurdly tall....

    Also, while I like a good power fantasy, you have given the protagonist so many advantages and powers that anything in the MCU cannot defeat her.

    What was it? we have the Kryptonian power set which is already really good on its own, an evolutionary ability I'm guessing was inspired by Doomsday, Canon Knowledge on DC and Marvel, and now timestopping? I'm guessing you are giving them the ability to time travel by association with that as well....

    Only a smart user of infinity stones has a reasonable chance against her. And they would need multiple at that. Can't use the Kryptonian Weaknesses because of the evolution ability. Magic might still do the trick but she could probably adapt to that as well...I'm not trying being cruel here, but unless you bring in stronger enemies from the comics or the Celestials, I see no stakes in this story.
     
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    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Not my Mcu, anyway, her power level is at the moment on planetary, her versatility, martial arts, battle Iq and intelligence though are on another level.
    No,no,no her Senses are extremely high, to her it looks like time is stopped, she's at the moment 96 times faster than light, her reflexes are... Enormous.
    Oh, I guarantee you, if your problem is her not having enemies on ber level you have nothing to worry about, and about the kryptonite, to answer your problem with it and her ability I'd have to give a spoiler, so, sorry can't do that, I'll still explain everything in this arc though so don't worry too much you're gonna love the lore.
     
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    BrokenHope Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    I'm just wondering who do you plan to be on her level?

    I think this needs to be explained in greater-detail..

    I could always just blindly trust you but my concern and curiosity are already getting the better of me..

    Are all her enemies going to be entirely comprised of OC's?
    Are all the MCU characters just going to become 'Krillin' side characters, who just clap and cheer her on?

    Are we talking about the Cinematic universe, or the damn comics? Because you saying "Oh she'll have enemies" ain't really answering the actual question at the moment.

    I get the feeling that Bucky might start flicking away planets.. All for the sake of you being able to give her reasonable enemies.. That is my primary concern.
     
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    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Relax, not too many oc enemies (I have to make a history between the big things after all) the power levels will obviously be adjusted, I personally can't accept the hulk being that weak.

    And no, no side characters, and I already gave you a hint of an enemy much stronger than the current Kara.
     
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    Jaeden Cross Making the rounds.

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    Should we... Should we expect Hulk and Thor to start ragdolling entire planets? Light-speed movement for all?

    Goddammit what about Thanos?

    I'm also going to ask a generic DBZ question that I honestly don't need, nor deserve an answer to: How do fights work here? I imagine Fury would throw a temper-tantrum every other day, bc of the sheer scale of destruction that'd occur from a beefed up Avengers (And their enemies)

    Kryptonians are basically operating on DBZ and Speed-Force Physics, but somehow they make even less sense. I like it.

    Also does she have something like the Speed-Force? But for her weight? If she does, call the ability "Fatphobia"
    I halfway expect her to just no-clip through the entire Earth at this point.

    She weighs 27 Million Tons? It's like having an entire Ocean in your back pocket.

    Got forbid she enters any buildings..

    Got forbid she ever so slightly puts her weight on another person.

    If she trips the results would be cataclysmic. I'd love to be there
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    Story seems super interesting so far (I've never even heard of Mocha Kryptonians) Especially 3 meter tall ones. Why the hell is Captain Marvel 7 feet?
    This has some of the craziest implications I've seen in a while. I might have to go do some research to know what to expect..
    By Research I mean look through some toxic power-scaling threads :p
     
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  17. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Kara is... Old, she had a very long time of battle experience, she's not insensible, she can drag the fight elsewhere.

    And about the logic of her speed, let's just say the bioelectric aura Kryptonians have is very, very useful
    Her muscles are VERY dense even for a Kryptonian being as tall as a human female with THIS much strength would only be possible with magic.
     
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    Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    I felt like it would be better if I gave all of you an Idea of what Kara looks like in my fic so here: (The art was done by Matilda Fiship on DeviantArt)
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    Body Type (Kryptonians are... Big)
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    ioriangel Mysterious Angel of Incalculable Mayhem

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    Wow, okay that's different. Please continue you got me interested! Are the skrull bad in this fic?
     
  20. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Who knows?
     
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    ioriangel Mysterious Angel of Incalculable Mayhem

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    Okay, we got to that point in the movie, what's next? Fighting the knee?
     
  22. Crista20

    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    Fights, inventions, and the exploration of powers.
     
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    Crista20 Is it getting hot in here?

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    I just realized a very important thing, I didn't put this thread on the Nsfw Writing section, ILL HAVE TO CREATE ANOTHER GUYS I'M SORRY FOR BEING A DUMBASS
     
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