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i mostly skipped it because it was like 80-90%similar from the one i read on Ff or webnovel i dont remember, and it was a year ago
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Crista20 said:
She has an oval shaped head, blue eyes, blond hair, white skin, a strong body, 2,3 meters tall, only sixty centimeters smaller than her, she has wide lips, and a confused yet serious expression on her face, it took less than a second before she realized the woman is a soldier.
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I'm sorry. since when is captain marvel freaking 2.3 Meters? That is absurdly tall....

Also, while I like a good power fantasy, you have given the protagonist so many advantages and powers that anything in the MCU cannot defeat her.

What was it? we have the Kryptonian power set which is already really good on its own, an evolutionary ability I'm guessing was inspired by Doomsday, Canon Knowledge on DC and Marvel, and now timestopping? I'm guessing you are giving them the ability to time travel by association with that as well....

Only a smart user of infinity stones has a reasonable chance against her. And they would need multiple at that. Can't use the Kryptonian Weaknesses because of the evolution ability. Magic might still do the trick but she could probably adapt to that as well...I'm not trying being cruel here, but unless you bring in stronger enemies from the comics or the Celestials, I see no stakes in this story.
 
La Pucelle Altre said:
Also, while I like a good power fantasy, you have given the protagonist so many advantages and powers that anything in the MCU cannot defeat her.
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Not my Mcu, anyway, her power level is at the moment on planetary, her versatility, martial arts, battle Iq and intelligence though are on another level.
La Pucelle Altre said:
What was it? we have the Kryptonian power set which is already really good on its own, an evolutionary ability I'm guessing was inspired by Doomsday, Canon Knowledge on DC and Marvel, and now timestopping? I'm guessing you are giving them the ability to time travel by association with that as well....
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No,no,no her Senses are extremely high, to her it looks like time is stopped, she's at the moment 96 times faster than light, her reflexes are... Enormous.
La Pucelle Altre said:
Only a smart user of infinity stones has a reasonable chance against her. And they would need multiple at that. Can't use the Kryptonian Weaknesses because of the evolution ability. Magic might still do the trick but she could probably adapt to that as well...I'm not trying being cruel here, but unless you bring in stronger enemies from the comics or the Celestials, I see no stakes in this story.
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Oh, I guarantee you, if your problem is her not having enemies on ber level you have nothing to worry about, and about the kryptonite, to answer your problem with it and her ability I'd have to give a spoiler, so, sorry can't do that, I'll still explain everything in this arc though so don't worry too much you're gonna love the lore.
 
Crista20 said:
Oh, I guarantee you, if your problem is her not having enemies on ber level you have nothing to worry about, and about the kryptonite, to answer your problem with it and her ability I'd have to give a spoiler, so, sorry can't do that, I'll still explain everything in this arc though so don't worry too much you're gonna love the lore.
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I'm just wondering who do you plan to be on her level?

I think this needs to be explained in greater-detail..

I could always just blindly trust you but my concern and curiosity are already getting the better of me..

Are all her enemies going to be entirely comprised of OC's?
Are all the MCU characters just going to become 'Krillin' side characters, who just clap and cheer her on?

Are we talking about the Cinematic universe, or the damn comics? Because you saying "Oh she'll have enemies" ain't really answering the actual question at the moment.

I get the feeling that Bucky might start flicking away planets.. All for the sake of you being able to give her reasonable enemies.. That is my primary concern.
 
BrokenHope said:
I'm just wondering who do you plan to be on her level?

I think this needs to be explained in greater-detail..

I could always just blindly trust you but my concern and curiosity are already getting the better of me..

Are all her enemies going to be entirely comprised of OC's?
Are all the MCU characters just going to become 'Krillin' side characters, who just clap and cheer her on?

Are we talking about the Cinematic universe, or the damn comics? Because you saying "Oh she'll have enemies" ain't really answering the actual question at the moment.

I get the feeling that Bucky might start flicking away planets.. All for the sake of you being able to give her reasonable enemies.. That is my primary concern.
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Relax, not too many oc enemies (I have to make a history between the big things after all) the power levels will obviously be adjusted, I personally can't accept the hulk being that weak.

And no, no side characters, and I already gave you a hint of an enemy much stronger than the current Kara.
 
Crista20 said:
the power levels will obviously be adjusted,
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Should we... Should we expect Hulk and Thor to start ragdolling entire planets? Light-speed movement for all?

Goddammit what about Thanos?

I'm also going to ask a generic DBZ question that I honestly don't need, nor deserve an answer to: How do fights work here? I imagine Fury would throw a temper-tantrum every other day, bc of the sheer scale of destruction that'd occur from a beefed up Avengers (And their enemies)

Kryptonians are basically operating on DBZ and Speed-Force Physics, but somehow they make even less sense. I like it.

Also does she have something like the Speed-Force? But for her weight? If she does, call the ability "Fatphobia"
I halfway expect her to just no-clip through the entire Earth at this point.

She weighs 27 Million Tons? It's like having an entire Ocean in your back pocket.

Got forbid she enters any buildings..

Got forbid she ever so slightly puts her weight on another person.

If she trips the results would be cataclysmic. I'd love to be there
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Story seems super interesting so far (I've never even heard of Mocha Kryptonians) Especially 3 meter tall ones. Why the hell is Captain Marvel 7 feet?
This has some of the craziest implications I've seen in a while. I might have to go do some research to know what to expect..
By Research I mean look through some toxic power-scaling threads :p
 
Jaeden Cross said:
I'm also going to ask a generic DBZ question that I honestly don't need, nor deserve an answer to: How do fights work here? I imagine Fury would throw a temper-tantrum every other day, bc of the sheer scale of destruction that'd occur from a beefed up Avengers (And their enemies)

Kryptonians are basically operating on DBZ and Speed-Force
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Kara is... Old, she had a very long time of battle experience, she's not insensible, she can drag the fight elsewhere.

And about the logic of her speed, let's just say the bioelectric aura Kryptonians have is very, very useful
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Story seems super interesting so far (I've never even heard of Mocha Kryptonians) Especially 3 meter tall ones. Why the hell is Captain Marvel 7 feet?
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Her muscles are VERY dense even for a Kryptonian being as tall as a human female with THIS much strength would only be possible with magic.
 
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    • Wow, okay that's different. Please continue you got me interested! Are the skrull bad in this fic?
     
    Okay, we got to that point in the movie, what's next? Fighting the knee?
     
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