When I woke up today, the last thing I expected was to be thrown fifty years into the past...
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Thanks for bringing that to my attention. That's fixed now!Chapter 5 is a repeat of chapter 4, going to need to change it.
It'll be a single pairing fic. I don't like harems and will never write them.Great story! He could use the room of requirement to get loose change or train in duelling as well. What is the pairing going to look like in the future? No pairing, one girl, harem, etc?
No worries! I do it all the time. If a story's slow-paced, I disappear for a month or so and then come back and read everything in one go. Though, I will say that binging doesn't really yield much in terms of retention so I've tried to cut back on it but you do you. I'm happy you've enjoyed it! ^^I think I'm going to drop the story here. While has been somewhat interesting, it's been kinda slow going for the most part. But I'll probably come back if the story picks up or there are more chapters, cheerio!
not only that but there are likely to be jewels and other expensive things as well. Remember that hog warts has a bunch of wealthy in the castle. There are bejeweled stuff in quite a few placesI'm enjoying the story, pace wise it seems mostly fine.
The two things I'd have liked to see are him passing off the horcrux from the ROR to Dumbledore before Christmas (if only to protect the DADA teacher) and the MC trying to make money. It seems like he missed an opportunity to do some low level looting of the ROR to make money quickly. He wouldn't necessarily be able to spot all the enchantments but I'd have expected him to ask a prof for a good reference book on runes/identifying charms then see if he could salvage an old dimensional suitcase and start hunting in the ROR. There have to be a ton of things that he could pawn/sell to other students, give to Sadie, or use himself (lost textbooks, items). If folks hadn't lost a small hill of pocket change as well I'd also be shocked.
I'd expect him to be able to get 20+ galleons worth of loot in a semester. With inflation £10 in the mid seventies is like £70 today and an extra £1400 would be huge for his sister (in addition to her not having to pay to support him during the year). Some magic items could also do great things to help her comfort or expenses. He'd have to do some work when folk asked him where he got stuff but if he was smart he could pick stuff that didn't draw too much scrutiny.
TLDR: Story emphasized how much financial struggle MCs family was under and how much he wanted to help but he hasn't been as proactive about addressing this as I would have expected.
Otherwise great story, pretty SOL as he adjusts (again) to a new social framework. AU elements seem interesting and like they'll lead to more canon divergence. Hope you've got more in the tank AshestoDusts