Wouldn't work they don't have any testers for it that fit the demographic of spacewhale.
Other sections mention that Endbringers have mass comparable to a galaxy.
Are you calling the Simurgh fat?
I think you're missing a word or two at the end.
Run-on sentence, fixable by replacing the first comma with either a period or a semicolon.
I think the closer perspective will help combat the "Endbringer fights are boring" problem some people have been having. Just being closer to the action will hopefully make things more personal and dynamic, instead of just basically being Taylor, Amelia, and Lisa watching the fight on TV.
Wildbow says a lot of things. At the same time he also doesn't.
Personally I'd go for semicolon. A period just makes it looks strange.
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He doesn't what?
Fucking Masters.
One too many, actually. The comment about Venice was originally part of the same sentence. I thought it clunky.
Here's hoping.
Her senses aren't any better than human against Endbringers. Also, it's past midnight in the middle of a hurricane grade downpour when all the lights are off... how effective would YOUR vision be?
Me? I'd be useless. Good thing I'm not there. Basically the same conditions as in canon, where they were apparently able to see his features very clearly. I figure the canon battle, even during the day, was probably nearly pitch black from the storm too. And I don't think you need powers to tell the difference, especially in melee.
reminds me of that quote from hpmor
but at same time you forgot they have and can.Doesn't Vicky glow in combat mode, or is that hidden under her armor?
That is a WOG I specifically ignore. Wildbow should feel dumb for posting it IMO.
For a matter of seconds if they're lucky.
True. Irrelevant. But true.
Our sun *is* a star. So no. Just. No. This is gradeschool stuff, dude.
That's not how their power works.
Not enough. Besides, her breaker state sacrifices a lot of her senses. She figured she didn't need them since they don't work on Endbringers to begin with.
Actually, he's absolutely right. If you could constantly introduce high density atoms into a sun, you can easily destabilize it. Not enough to destroy it, but enough to make life on earth pretty much fucked.
The rebellion got lucky twice for trying the same trick in star wars.
and the force(of comedic schadenfreude)is strong with Shaman.
The science isn't as important as the literary principle. If your antagonist is so bullshit that its defeat requries deus ex machina - canon examples: the fact that every Endbringer kill was Scion's, Jack's plot armor, the authorities' absurd levels of corruption and incompetence, Contessa's existence (arguably) - you need to rethink your antagonist. (Or your outline.)
Yeah. I mean, Leviathan doesn't emit gravity like he's got the mass of a galaxy, he doesn't have the inertia you'd expect, he could accomplish everything he did without a galaxy of matter, etc etc etc.
I wouldn't describe her as an antagonist, exactly. It's more accurate to say that Cauldron's PR department is terrible. (Seriously. Worm would be very different if Cauldron hired Glenn Chambers.)
Since an argument could be made that there are stars bigger or more powerful than our own sun, I'm more annoyed at the 'more bigger' remark. Which is also gradeschool level stuff.
*Ignores spirit of request*