Kalstorm22
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Great chapter!
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I'm glad! I was worried it was going to come across as awkward cringe instead of funny!
It was hilarious in a really messed up way, which means it was great. It was also a bit dark and messed up since it shows just how screwed up his family relationship used, and to some level still is.I'm glad! I was worried it was going to come across as awkward cringe instead of funny!
"She didn't think I'd need it." So many layers and none of them good.
I'm not usually one for the misery conga and lately it seems that we're only ever going down and things only get worse, but it's still weirdly compelling. I think that means you're doing an awesome job as a writer.
Thank you both for the kind words!I've been reading this for the last 24 hours and each minute spent was entirely worth it, thank you author.
Glad you like the story!Oh. I didn't realize you were on QQ. I know you from AO3. One of the only PJO fics I have bookmarked. The other is Broken Bow. Well, lets follow this thread then.
Yeah Percy is in so much denial that it's both sad and a little hilarious.Good thing he decided to eat the leviathan thing in the dream lands. That's where his water powers are coming from right? Plus the divinity boost should be enough to really make this complaint heard.
Nico and Percy seem to just get each other which makes sense given that they are both torn between Eldritch nature and human nature. Percy seems to be a bit better at acting human compared to Nico though. It is still pretty obvious they are both pretty much baby Eldritch Abominations though.Young eldritch godling runs through mind fuck hotel, management have the worst customer service moment of their lives. More news at 11!
It's his Hunger thing that he got from his grandpa.
Wow thank you for the kind words! A lot of research went into and is still going into this work. I'm glad it paid off! And yeah, I really couldn't see a good way to avoid the starting info dumps and did the best I could with that :/ Percy's ADHD has really been coming in clutch in handing out information lol. Thank you so much for giving my story a try even though it's not what you usually enjoyShujin wow, woooow.
Okay so this is probably the best and most elegantly melded crossover I have seen in a very very long time. You've obviously taken great care in writing this up picking the best fits for how the universes should fit together and overlap.
I will be honest I am a humanity fuck yeah dude cause I believe in my bones that we as a species are going to make it. So I will openly admit to being biased against Gods in any setting were they don't get their shit kicked in by humanity eventually. I am biased enough that Active gods in settings usually make me roll my eyes and skip through a story to see if it deals with them in a manner I prefer and drop it if it does not. I am basically racist against Gods.
But this story you've crafted and I've had the absolute pleasure to binge for the past 2 days completely made me ignore my great distaste for the PJ setting.
I love the growth you've had the 3 questors obtain through the journey. Percy learning his mother is fallible and experience the whole my parents are not what I think they are, Luke learning not everything is at seems with his whole situation and Artemis learning humility and self reflection through Greek irony.
My only complaint that's got better as the story progressed was how heavy exposition is at times but it's a consequence of having to explain things why the way they are but you inject it masterfully by having Percy teach us the things his mother taught him and having it run as his thoughts or him teaching others. It makes perfect sense with the Storys internal logic.
I will be saving this to my favorites list.
Again this is such an amazingly well written story. Keep up the fantastic work.
and kill everyone inside. except for your buddies. maybe
It's really popular on Spacebattles, it's available on multiple platforms this is just the one that gets the least attention.
when shujin makes a book that goes in the nsfw section theres almost certainly gonna be a rush of back-readers who come over to see book 1.It's really popular on Spacebattles, it's available on multiple platforms this is just the one that gets the least attention.
Thank you!
I have no illusions that another chapter of E.L.F the Worm/WH40k cross wouldn't get a lot more attention than UoS, but I don't mind. I chat a lot and like writing this and it is doin' alright on SB, so that's all I need to be happy with itIt's really popular on Spacebattles, it's available on multiple platforms this is just the one that gets the least attention.