NuclearBirb
A mysterious birb.
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Well... this gives me quite a few ideas. Both about Nico and Percy, I'm thinking from what we know that Percy was 'Adopted' by Fate, and in the case of Bianca she needed to 'technically' die due to her adoption by Persephone."You - " My mind went blank. "You adopted her," I said slowly. Persephone's dad was Tartarus, an Elder God. I would bet money that she was like Hypnos, an Elder God as well. They adopt? That happens? "And for that she had to - "
"There is only so much her gifts from my husband will do for her in the Underworld," the Priestess of the Endless Abyss said easily as she cradled Nico on her hip with his head against her shoulder like she was just taking him to bed. "The human condition is a hindrance."
I'm preety sure it's implied that Bianca literally died and became a disembodied soul.Well... this gives me quite a few ideas. Both about Nico and Percy, I'm thinking from what we know that Percy was 'Adopted' by Fate, and in the case of Bianca she needed to 'technically' die due to her adoption by Persephone.
Nico on the other hand, was probably meant to be Hades and Persephone's son, however, Hades' deal had Nyx somehow retroactively become the Mother and I'm guessing that Fate did something similar, potentially through the various prophecies that OG!Percy was involved in.
She "Technically" Died but more her Mortality/Mortal Body, which she's currently rebuilding her body from the stuff Gods/Elder Gods are made of.I'm preety sure it's implied that Bianca literally died and became a disembodied soul.
Again, Humanity/Mortality."Well done, Perseus," Persephone mused and a shiver went down my spine hearing my name when she turned back to me. "It will take her, hmm, perhaps a few months to reconstitute from perishing so suddenly - "
What!
"You killed her!?" Nico burst out.
"Technically," the goddess said. Nico jumped to his feet, but he only made it two steps before suddenly falling into a dead faint right into her arms. "You are definitely your mother's child."
I found my voice. "You killed her? You said - "
"Exactly what I meant," Persephone said coolly. "Oh, don't give me that, I adopted her, silly boy."
"There is only so much her gifts from my husband will do for her in the Underworld," the Priestess of the Endless Abyss said easily as she cradled Nico on her hip with his head against her shoulder like she was just taking him to bed. "The human condition is a hindrance."
Artemis scoffed tightly. "You would say that."
"Because it is true," Persephone said just as tightly. "The same way Nyx will have to put in a bit more work into this one to make sure he doesn't drive himself mad - well," she corrected herself, looking down at Nico's sleeping face dubiously. "She might not have to, but to be on the safe side - the safe…"
She trailed off with dawning horror on her face.
"The safe - I'm turning into my mother!"
Yes, but I feel like this is going to be a "came back wrong" kind of thing. Artemis seems horrified at the prospect of letting go of her humanityShe "Technically" Died but more her Mortality/Mortal Body, which she's currently rebuilding her body from the stuff Gods/Elder Gods are made of.
Again, Humanity/Mortality.
Horrified is an exaggeration, Artemis doesn't even seem to be shocked that Persephone did it. She "Scoffed" at Persephone's opinion on the human condition.Yes, but I feel like this is going to be a "came back wrong" kind of thing. Artemis seems horrified at the prospect of letting go of her humanity
"Wrong" is such a subjective thing when it comes to beings like Persephone.Yes, but I feel like this is going to be a "came back wrong" kind of thing. Artemis seems horrified at the prospect of letting go of her humanity
"Athena saw the abyss for what it was. I was - was stupid and ignorant until I found myself standing at the edge. I do not want to know if Kore just…slipped or if she did not fall so much as just…" Artemis looked up at the dark Night Sky and the boiling thunderclouds of Ouranos' prison. "Our last real conversation was just - " She fought with her words. "I was disappointingly human," Artemis said. "I said things I regret." She huffed. "A lot of things I regret, because I was scared."
She was quoting Persephone there, as she is talking about when they last spoke.Artemis' opinions tend to vacillate? Here she thinks retaining one's humanity (or perhaps human morality/behavior) is a positive thing, while other times, well, remember when she was telling the story of the three sisters:
Well here's a snippet of Percy's messed up childhood. I get the feeling events like this weren't uncommon given that Percy has gotten used to the "What did we learn?" phrase, which is so messed up. Also Percy was surprised he got a week off of training after something as traumatic as that so, so even the standard training is rough.'What did we learn?' Mom had asked me.
A couple hours later, she was walking me through cutting up strawberries without murdering myself to the sound of Robert Jordan's Eye of the World on cassette tape like nothing had happened. Dad had taken off work and was just so relieved I was finally awake. I remember his awkward hovering, trying to talk to me around and through his wife to make sure I was okay. Mom gave me the week off from training even when I insisted I was fine and guided my dreams for another week after that.
Welp yeah Hypnos is a good dad who's concerned for his kid.The Greek Personification of Sleep had stared at me for a second, pulsed in disbelief and then had nearly exploded in rage. His anger was rough. Grating. Like it was actually peeling parts of my Sleeping soul away. The lights of the mortal souls he was holding flickered with terrible nightmares. A lot of them tore right out of their rest, that lizard hindbrain blaring the alarms and waving red flags that staying asleep was death.
Percy starting to understand maybe his childhood wasn't okay, but he's still in massive denial. Fate is pretty okay with Percy being exposed to danger even for an Eldritch entity parent who loves him.It wasn't until Hypnos flipped his shit when I told him where Clovis was that I started to accept (just a little) that maybe there was something a bit off with how Mom was raising me.
I just couldn't put my finger on what it was.
Hypnos grabbed me in a massive hug. I felt like my face was being crushed into a pillow made of koosh balls. I grabbed him back with my wings and squeezed until he wiggled in amusement, but there was an undercurrent of concern.
Looks like Percy's diet has changed his Dream form and made him bigger, which has implications galore.Reassured, Hypnos nudged me questioningly. His grasping presence lightly tugged on the spines and barbs curling off my form. I was a lot bigger than I was used to, finally able to look him in the eyes without needing him to lift me. I also felt like someone had turned me into their origami paper folding project when I wasn't looking, layering me into myself with burning green eyes filling in the spaces in between.
Welp shit there's no going back for Luke now is there? I mean there already wasn't but now his eyes are open and he can See. Also looks like the classic phrase is here."I failed to get you." I opened my mouth to reassure him that it wasn't his fault, but Luke pressed on. "I failed. I walked in, I forgot, I stabbed myself in the eye - "
I completely forgot what I had been about to say. "You did what?"
"You know," he said slowly. "You could still see the moon from those hotel balconies." I stared at him, not sure what question he was answering. If any. "I was staring at it when I realized something was wrong," he mused idly. "I couldn't even remember when or where I'd heard it, but I still remembered what you said. When you made that summoning circle, remember?"
"Yeah," I said quietly. With Piper. I had drawn the ritual circle Mom had taught me on the ground so we could Call on the Night relatively safely. Apate answered instead. You know the rest. Luke had said then that the circle hurt his eyes.
"Grant me clarity," Luke murmured. "Grant me vision."
He looked up. He had one of those rictus grins on. The kind that made you uncomfortable and vaguely sick just looking at it. His shattered eye stared out at the world with a dozen irises and six pupils blown wide open.
I could see myself reflected in each and every one.
"Grant me eyes," he whispered.
Percy is very scary and now has free access to his hunger. Everyone with even a drop of sense should be very afraid."Feel free to tell my mother I'm not allowed to be in Greece." I smiled nastily as my belly button quivered. "I dare you."
It takes a real big sister to be the best dad."Speaking of, got any opinion on your dad getting the throne again?" I wasn't exactly sure what I was going to do about the Zeus problem, but I was one hundred percent sure that I was kicking him off the throne the first chance I got.
Herakles looked at me like I sprouted another head. "My father is already on the throne."
"Duh," I said. "I mean your other divine dad."
Percy just made Herakles's day with this."My other - " Herakles stopped himself and then beamed. "Kid." He waved me to lean in closer. "I will give you my shield if you call Athena that to her face."
Smart man knowing when something is above what he's "paid" to do. Also dude deserves a laugh."And above my pay grade," Herakles conceded with a nod and a low whistle. "Also, Artemis?"
The rabbit raised a wet paw weakly. "Brother."
The god of Heroes stared for a moment.
Then he threw back his head and laughed.
Herakles is such a bro."I've been there, kid." He finished his signature for Camp Half-Blood with a flourish and handed me back my pen and the notebook. "And don't call me 'lord,' I'll get a rash."
He sees that Percy and Fate look at pantheons as suggestions then."That works - " The god of Bravery abruptly turned back towards me. "Wait just a damn minute. How the hell are you a Celt?"
Greek and Roman versions are pretty similar and in tune with each other. Probably since the Roman Name is all natural instead of grafted.I turned back to my food, shooting Herc a quick prayer about Jason Grace. The god startled in his seat, reflective eyes swinging over to me, before he rolled them skywards, pinching the bridge of his nose. You could almost hear him cursing Jupiter out inside his head.
Welp looks like even the expert on heroes has no clue WTF Percy's deal is, which is par for the corse.The god's eyes lit up again. "So you're actually a demigod."
"Yup," I popped the 'p.' "What'd you think I was?"
"Dunno." Herc passed me a vanilla milkshake. "You register as a mortal hero, but you sting." He tilted his head. "What the hell have they been feeding you?"
I'm so happy he tried to make amends with Zoe. Sure it crashed and burned but he tired."I think I am being quite reasonable," Herc said loudly over her whining. "I remember a completely undeserved arrow to the ass - " He raised his voice over her protests. "When I was trying to apologize to a certain someone and return her sword - "
"She could have still had it, but you threw it away!" The rabbit finally managed to stick her head out from under the fabric and bit out. "Tossed it over the horizon!"
Welp shit.Artemis bobbed her little head. "It is in her realm," she murmured. "But the key we seek belongs to your step-father."
My brain stalled. My step-father.
Chronos.
Time.
Yeah Elder Gods don't go down easy and even if they're "dead" they're never truly gone.I didn't understand what the problem was. "Selene's dead," I said. "So it can't be that bad?"
Hercules' smiled sadly. "So we hope."
Rhea hadn't been too sure if Selene had actually bitten it or not. Luke had been staring at the moon in the Lotus Hotel. Something made him stab himself in the eye.
'What is death?' The Sun Voice had asked me in Houston. 'But the sleep of the gods?'
Percy's senses are weird, previously it's mentioned that foreign magic stuff felt cold but to Percy it was warm. I think this is a similar case."Why is - " Luke swallowed thickly. "The wind is weird here."
"I think I know what you're feeling." Herc glanced over. The light of Rhea's torch twisted into Luke's backpack strap glanced off his eyes in all directions. Then he looked down at the rabbit who was still staring over the water, like we weren't here. "But it's not the wind."
I didn't feel anything.
I felt a strange kind of numb, like I was feeling too many feelings and just couldn't sort any of them out to actually tell what was going on. The other shoe had finally dropped. I couldn't help thinking about the what ifs, like if I had just left Artemis to Nemesis right from the beginning instead of trying to go against my mother. I didn't have it in me to feel bad about wondering. I was still going to try. We'd come this far after all and we didn't really have the time to try anything else. Maybe I should have panicked.
Yeah Percy gets how insane what he's doing is and still decides to do it anyway.I didn't feel that, though. It was more like a detached: 'Welp.'
Hercules is a pretty clever fellow, and damn good at rules lawyering. Makes sense since he kinda had to when he was a relatively squishy demigod."You know," Hercules spoke up. "You can take on more than one Quest at a time. I know that from personal experience." He crossed his arms, scratching at the scar on his chin when we looked at him. "And the interference clauses for a Quest are counted separately."
That was a bit familiar. I know Artemis had said that instances of interference in a Quest were counted for each god separately. I wasn't sure how that was important right now, but by the sudden, sharp look in Luke's eyes, he had some idea.
"An errand for the Mormones is unrelated to our search for the Bolt," he said casually.
" - gerous for you especially," Herc was telling Luke with a frown. "Exposing Blood to too much, too fast is never a good idea. I would join you - " His jaw clenched. His neck muscles stood out sharply as a collar of gold light briefly flashed around his throat. "But I'm a bit stuck," he drawled acidly. "Call it house arrest."
What a great dude, he doesn't want to be involved with this mess but he wants kids involved even less and he would help but he isn't free."Hell, of course I don't want to," her brother spat back. "But I want leaving them to this crap even less." He shook his head and tugged at his basketball jersey. "Look, if you can call in any big favors, any Debts, if you can get anyone who would laugh about following you into Tartarós, now is the time."
I'm happy Percy gave Luke this bit of peace of mind, dude really needs it."I told Hypnos," I mumbled, shuffling my feet a bit. "He went to get Clovis and Annabeth and the others…"
Luke's face had tensed, then softened. The pupils in his shattered eye narrowed. He let out a long sigh. "Good," he murmured. "That's good."
"Sorry."
Dreamlands is very scary and Percy is very scary in there.She patted me on the shoulder as she stood up, absently sweeping sand off her pants. "I have been told the Dreamlands are filled with horrors that could kill gods, similar to what lies beyond the Edge in the lands beyond us. Is that true?"
The best cat has arrived to save the day, everything is a little less horrible.The statuesque figures of more warped creatures, moon deities, rose up from the waters and disappeared into the hazy clouds, surrounding the island like guards watching a prison. The tunnel of Dante's Gate was pristine and smoothly carved as if it had been built just yesterday, leading into darkness towards the city. And waiting beside it, curled up on a patch of grass was an orange tabby cat with a crook in his tail. I couldn't breathe. I felt like if I did, I would break into a million pieces. That couldn't be my pet cat. He couldn't be here.
"Sam?" I whispered.
The cat's ears twitched.
Hypnos said he would help me. He knew about the key we were looking for.
Sam would laugh at following me into Tartarós.
He followed me to the moon.
I am really seeing some good chemistry and symbolism with luke and artemis hereI opened them in a field of pale flowers, a sky dotted with strange stars and dominated by a massive, full moon. Diana looked down at us as her giant form loomed, the bloody teeth of her flayed chest cavity fluttering open and then closed. Her exposed spine of pitted and warped vertebrae bent as she leaned closer. The mask of her left side turned towards the moon. There was another creature far down the beach. Long spindly gnarled legs planted in the ground like stilts, but it was holding a bulbous, sickly gray body with long mandibles and gossamer thin feelers drifting beneath it. The twisting eyestalks swiveled in my direction. Its presence washed over me.
Familiar.
Corey had gotten its attention once.
I inclined my head. "Tsukuyomi."
The attention slipped away.
Khione was luminescent, as if she was lit from within. Physically flawless save for a bored hole that went straight through the middle of her sternum, exposing a gnarled, wooden knot that thumped like a heart and creeping vines burrowing under her skin. Luke stared up at the moon, eyes shining.
what's fucked up about it? he has a mother who helps him learn from his mistakes and keeps him from any terrible consequences when he screws upPercy will realize his fucked up childhood one day. Not today, maybe not even some day soo.
But one day.
Honestly, it's hard for me to put into words what's wrong with his childhood. I mean, yes, obviously the whole 'putting him in danger' thing would not be great for a human child, but Percy is not human and neither is his mother. A human mom letting her small child put their hand on a hot stove would be a bad mom as the kid could do serious damage to themselves, even if the kid won't really internalize 'don't do that' until they eventually do burn themselves. But if the Morrigan lets Percy put his hand on a hot stove because she knows he will pull back his hand immediately with superficial burns that will heal in seconds and she won't have to waste time telling him not to, is it the same thing?Damn I love this work. It is absolutely astounding at every turn. Percy will realize his fucked up childhood one day. Not today, maybe not even some day soo.
But one day.
And so, our intrepid heroes (plus one Rabbit and an Ice Queen) trek onward into the dark! Will they succeed in this mad quest? Can things possibly get crazier!? Find out next time in An Undertow of Sand!
I mentally checked out during ToA. When was this?what's fucked up about it? he has a mother who helps him learn from his mistakes and keeps him from any terrible consequences when he screws up
speaking of which, this book is excellent. beyond great. at least thirty orders of magnitude better than the final book of trials of apollo(kid in a wheelchair fighting and winning against undead 8-foot-tall superhumans in cqc, miss me with that shit)
Thank you!I am outstanded, by how incredibly good this is. I have no words, I just love it
True when thinking of Percy's early childhood I'm guilty of forgetting he was a lot less human back then, or perhaps it would be more accurate to say Percy was a lot more monstrous and divine in his mindset when he was younger. Fate isn't human either, she love her son but she doesn't really know how to raise him, which to be fair Percy is pretty unique in how he straddles the lines between mortality, monstrosity and divinity. It feels like Fate's primary concern is to direct Percy's growth in the way she wants it to go. But she does genuinely love and care for Percy as more than a tool to gain her freedom, but at the same time she's till shaping him for the role she wants him to play.Honestly, it's hard for me to put into words what's wrong with his childhood. I mean, yes, obviously the whole 'putting him in danger' thing would not be great for a human child, but Percy is not human and neither is his mother. A human mom letting her small child put their hand on a hot stove would be a bad mom as the kid could do serious damage to themselves, even if the kid won't really internalize 'don't do that' until they eventually do burn themselves. But if the Morrigan lets Percy put his hand on a hot stove because she knows he will pull back his hand immediately with superficial burns that will heal in seconds and she won't have to waste time telling him not to, is it the same thing?
She definitely made mistakes, such as when she left, and is not even remotely close to a beacon of morality, but she had plans for getting him through this safely and was prepared to let him blow the whole thing off and taught him a lot...so for me personally, there is the whole 'this is not okay' feel to the entire thing, but at the same time, she's still miles better than the canon god parents? And if canon can unironically portray Poseidon as a good god parent despite the whole 'kid in danger' thing while doing so much less for Percy, doesn't that make her a good parent too?
Yeah, think it's a dissonance thing. Percy in the story acts and feels like a normal 12 year old with a decent morality most of the time, but his childhood was definitely tailored more towards raising a godling of Nyarly. And it turns out, he's neither.True when thinking of Percy's early childhood I'm guilty of forgetting he was a lot less human back then, or perhaps it would be more accurate to say Percy was a lot more monstrous and divine in his mindset when he was younger. Fate isn't human either, she love her son but she doesn't really know how to raise him, which to be fair Percy is pretty unique in how he straddles the lines between mortality, monstrosity and divinity. It feels like Fate's primary concern is to direct Percy's growth in the way she wants it to go. But she does genuinely love and care for Percy as more than a tool to gain her freedom, but at the same time she's till shaping him for the role she wants him to play.
Khione gave me a small, sad smile, already dissolving into a flurry of sleet and snow. At first, I was scared she was going to take me with her anyway, but then...she let me go. In a heartbeat, just her voice on a cold wind was left. Trying to be disdainful, but instead was brittle and painfully sad. "Heroes."
O.O Thank you for reading! If there is anything I can do to help (besides update, I'm working on it!), let me know!That was a cool moment ngl.
I won the fucking lottery discovering this story
you got any links? I haven't found one that managed to get me hooked as yoursThanks for the compliment! Although I'm sure there are other just as good stories out there, it's finding them that's the issue.
Really depends on what about this story you like exactly? Answer changes dramatically based on whether its the vastly different plot from canon, the Cthulhu Mythos-esque stuff or something else.you got any links? I haven't found one that managed to get me hooked as yours
And if canon can unironically portray Poseidon as a good god parent despite the whole 'kid in danger' thing while doing so much less for Percy, doesn't that make her a good parent too?
This is movie canon. In the books no such laws exist (and if they did Luke's motivation would make no sense).
Not only Luke's motivation, but the whole finale of TLO gets chopped off at the knees if the gods all have valid reasons to ignore their kids and everyone just forgot to bring it up when Percy was talking to them about it. And don't forget Hades and Nico during the canon timeline, where the issue was Hades figuring out how to not suck as a dad and Nico's traumas. Nico got turned into a flower by Persephone for reasons that had nothing to do with the latter not being allowed in the Underworld.This is movie canon. In the books no such laws exist (and if they did Luke's motivation would make no sense).
Indeed, we know they don't exist beacause Mr. D (in canon) raised Castor and Pollux. And Poseidon offered to Sally to raise Percy in Atlantis. And Hermes raises Luke for a while. And Zeus also raises Thalia and Jason for a while.