edale
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You know, when I wrote the omake, I originally wanted it to be the Brigade that confronted Marchioness, but I knew I couldn't handle the interactions properly, so I went with Armsmaster instead (I find it easier to write him, he's so straight forward and mostly one-dimensional, heh).
As it developed, I saw that it was a good call doing that, scene just works better with him, but I still lamented that I couldn't work the Brigade in.
You did it masterfully; I didn't even think about the kids training with the Protectorate as an avenue to introduce them.
And the cutting remark for Brandish... I get the feeling either Brandish's therapy has gotten a LOT further than I thought, or another poor undeserving table will suffer her wrath. (Sarah: "That table didn't deserve it either Carol...")
And as for Glor...Mega Girl. Canon powers seem there, but there's no evidence of the emotional aura, hmmm...
As it developed, I saw that it was a good call doing that, scene just works better with him, but I still lamented that I couldn't work the Brigade in.
You did it masterfully; I didn't even think about the kids training with the Protectorate as an avenue to introduce them.
And the cutting remark for Brandish... I get the feeling either Brandish's therapy has gotten a LOT further than I thought, or another poor undeserving table will suffer her wrath. (Sarah: "That table didn't deserve it either Carol...")
And as for Glor...Mega Girl. Canon powers seem there, but there's no evidence of the emotional aura, hmmm...