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Battletech: The Ghost Who Walks (Battletech Isekai)

At a guess the Davions are trying to find a way to tie the genuine supersoldier from humanities golden age they managed to find to the Suns/ The House. They've been digging to try and find a way to do this while pushing the cute noble who he's friendly with to try and tie him down.

Now it looks like he might have potential family in the exodus, which we know means jack because the Clans are a loons fever dream of eugenics and families aren't a thing with them, but now they're worried the Dragoons are going to say hey your related to the Shepard family back home wanna go and hang with them back on their planet and he 's gonna leave with all his lostech caches and fancy training programmes.

That is my read anyway. Not 100% and I didn't really find it that clear but I think that's what is going on.
 
Honestly, I'm a little confused, what does Kharkov have to do with it? Is the colonel's father dead or not? How does it come down to a Triptize?
My bad, it may have been a mistake to add the brief snippet of the Fed Suns space to the end of the most recent section.

In part the Davions known Shepherd is asking questions about a Warship, but it is not the warship that was known to have run the blockade loaded HAF senior officers.
 
Serious question should I remove the snippet in Davion space from the end of the last segment?

I'll put it over in extras as Meanwhile on New Avalon 3020 if people think it detracts from the segment
 
My bad, it may have been a mistake to add the brief snippet of the Fed Suns space to the end of the most recent section.

In part the Davions known Shepherd is asking questions about a Warship, but it is not the warship that was known to have run the blockade loaded HAF senior officers.
So he misunderstood Shepard's question about the Triptize? And they think he's looking for information about his father? Although in fact, he is investigating the possible existence of the lost Camerons.
 
Serious question should I remove the snippet in Davion space from the end of the last segment?

I'll put it over in extras as Meanwhile on New Avalon 3020 if people think it detracts from the segment
I don't even know if it's possible if you're going to expand this fragment significantly.
 
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Chequers was a tall building with a face of red brick surrounded by walled gardens the ensured the privacy of the property. The country estates of New Avalon followed largely the same lines. They had been laid down and immortalized by traditions in the early years of humanity reaching distant stars from Earth. The capital of the Federated Suns was teeming with celebratory masses congratulating members of the armed forces for the defense of Robinson.


New Avalon's high society, the high society of the Crucis March and the Federated Suns had welcomed her to the capital. With accolades from the campaign on Robinson's fighting, and the thorough beating handed to the combine, Alexandria had some breathing room, but the Prince's Champion had summoned her and so she'd come immediately. War Hero from the Crucis March or not.


Truthfully she wasn't even surprised by the summons. While Davion channels were talking about the shocking proclamation from the petty pirate king it didn't directly effect the war against the Draconis Combine at least not yet. Yes, the Free Worlds league had been embarrassed publicly, but the public at large was ignorant just how damning the pronouncement might be to the Combine. So the summons probably had been forthcoming. This country house, it wasn't lost to here, had belonged to House Davion for four hundred years, though it had been substantially refurbished it was named for some even older home of significance that had once been on Terra.


She had been lead deep inside the sprawling home to a secure room. DMI personnel in a variety of costume patrolled and secured the interior and exterior of the property, but the smoking room she'd entered had only one other occupant. Yvonne Davion the champion of the fire prince. The duchess sat with a holographic projection up her brows knit as she regarded the system that lay before her.


Only a fool wouldn't have known what solar system it was... even nearly a millenium after humanity had left the solar system was it still recognizable.



Sol.



The Solar System that had birthed mankind, the cradle.


The holographic image, still, suddenly resumed.


"Ah good," Lights flashed, warships spewing destructive fire at one another, nukes exploding. The long forgotten memories of the time before the succession wars. She didn't understand, "This is a command McKenna, a variation of the battleship." Yvonne stated gesturing, almost like one of her instructors at Sakhara had, to the warship under fire... and the ordering was wrong. The positions of the ships were wrong... these were star league ships but they moving away from Earth, moving towards the jump points.



This wasn't Kerensky's liberation of sol this, "This is -"



"The unfolding of the massacre on Terra, when Amaris seized power." Yvonne Davion confirmed her hands moved to a control slate and twisted the vantage point of hte image. The battled scarred ship's name read SLS Enterprise, "Only six of these were built, one survived Kerensky's flagship, the other ships apart of the1st and 2nd fleet were destroyed," She stated as the footage unpaused and fire rained. Enterprise endured for now. "This ship, and its battle group were shielding another. The Black Lion class," The footage altered,"Tripitz." She declared.


Yvonne Davion stood and adjust the holographic system. The solar system vanished so quickly into the night that it might have been dust on the wind. It was replaced by brighter images. Familiar images. The work file for Shepherd.


Alexandria felt her eyes turn to the image of a then teenage major with an admiral beside him, "The Colonel's mother was Killed in Action when Amaris seized Terra," Yvonne remarked still standing, and then moving to a decanter with a heavy sigh as she uncorked it and poured a whisky neat, "at first I considered whether or not she might have been aboard... but I reviewed Admiral Clancy's report from the Black Watch. Those records state with confidence Admiral Krennick died during the atomic strikes that came on the 27th of December. So I moved on from there," She took a pull from a tumbler, and indicated files from taken from Dieron, "Colonel Shepherd's father as we can ascertain from the ISF records was aboard THS Allegiance and was Killed in Action when she was destroyed as a result of House Kurita forewarning Amaris of the battlegroup's approach during the Liberation Campaign. I had considered that any survivors, any warship might be a desperate hope but MIIO and DMI have both collected chatter that does not support that theory."


A part of her understood. She understood the logical basis of where the Prince's Champion had begun looking. "Chatter, ma'am?" She pressed.


"The Colonel stated that the Triptiz ran the republican blockade of Sol, which our evidence confirms. SLS Kharkov survived as well, but Shepherd doesn't seem to have made much of it despite the litany of senior Terran officers aboard her. Kharkov carried very senior officials aboard her, admirals among them." She reiterated.



"What became of it?"



"It," SLS Kharkov, "departed with Kerensky's exodus." Yvonne Davion explained, "The Tripitz has a much more interesting fate, it reappeared in the official records when it was scuttled into the gravity of a gas giant by the mysterious Vandenburg White Wings, which seems to have drawn Shepherd's attention and pushed him to reach out to his contacts at IE."


"Another relation perhaps?"


"Doubtful," Yvonne replied lifting her glass again, "Not impossible of course, and so far as we know from Shepherd's service history he was already in the periphery or en route at the time of the coup. He was certainly not on Terra to escape aboard Tripitz which was another theory put forward. What makes the Triptiz interesting is that the Colussus class DropShip docked was sheltered by space assets under command and control from the ground that Clancy's records refer to as the SDS. It immediately burned for Tirpitz, not Kharkov."


It was another mystery, and didn't they already have plenty of those. She felt the immediate need to reiterate the question, "With all due respect Lady Yvonne, what is the significance of this chatter... given the attack on Kalidasa, and Jaime Wolf taking the majority of the dragoons presumably back in the periphery what does this battle mean in the present?"


Yvonne sighed and shook her head, "I don't know, but both DMI and MIIO have intercepts of discussion both from IE, from Northwinders speaking to the Wolfs Dragoons while on Northwind about matters that included references to Triptiz. Unfortunately we don't have the full context of those conversations."


The Highlanders had been eager to discuss survivors that had left with Kerensky, to the point that it was a prevailing concern that they might have told the Dragoons too much. "The Dragoons were reported to have been informed that Amaris was provided information by the Draconis Combine."


"Not only via the HPG recording, but also through the ISF archive. We considered curating the documents, but ultimately we did include the protests and arguments from the Keeper of House Honor that those actions were a mistake, and that they attempted to warn the SLDF of the leaks." The general consensus remained that that had hardly been anything other than self interest, self preservation on the Combine opposition's behalf. "Wolf has copies, which we must assume he is taking to the other descendants of Kerensky's exodus. What MIIO, and DMI do not have are concrete reactions to a living Hegemony Gunslinger. Recordings, and intercepts from the dragoons have isolated words we don't have references or the full scope of, but Amaris, Amaris pretender I should say seemed to have started some kind of bidding within the dragoons. Bloodname, a title of nobility we believe, was mentioned as a possible reward for killing a pretender to Amaris's title, political ideology though for whatever reason Kerensky herself seems more interested in hunting down Kelly, but that doesn't seem to be the same for her company at large."


"Which is what the precentor New Avalon wanted Shepherd to do if he could find him."


"Precisely."
 
I agree, everything is much clearer in this version. I am glad that you skillfully show such an outside point of view! I wanted to know if you plan to post to other sites. Because, in my opinion, your story is one of the highest quality I've read!
 
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Kerensky herself seems more interested in hunting down Kelly, but that doesn't seem to be the same for her company at large."


"Which is what the precentor New Avalon wanted Shepherd to do if he could find him."
Comstar actually has a way to spin this. Though who knows if someone will be fast and smart enough to rewrite that narrative. Something like, ROM got wind of nefarious activity and were investigating, often by agents posing as arms dealers (of course they had to put up some hardware to get traction with pirate scum). Once they realized it was neo-Rim Worlds nutjobs they tried to bushwhack with their own green security troops, but the whole operation went sideways due to a leak. So they hired some professionals to wipe the pirates out and see if they could turn up the leak. When the pirate got word they went for broke and declared the second empire.

Though Comstar waking up a final contingency of the old regium might make for a better propaganda movie.
 
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Davion Interlude: Meanwhile on New Avalon

My thoughts on this chapter. It is for certain it is clearer than the last chapter. Inverse lore, unfortunately while it clearer. I don't know the lore well enough to make heads or tails of it. Can you explain other than cousin to hanse first prince of the fedsun house. what Yvonne role is in the fedsun collective. Why are they investigating this lore? It is three hundred years old.
 
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My thoughts on this chapter. It is for certain it is clearer than the last chapter. Inverse lore, unfortunately while it clearer. I don't know the lore well enough to make heads or tails of it. Can you explain other than cousin to hanse first prince of the fedsun house. what Yvonne role is in the fedsun collective. Why are they investigating this lore? It is three hundred years old.
At this point in time I don't know if Prime Minister is really the nearest IRL equivalent, but Yvonne besides ruling a planet in her own right is the Prince's Champion in addition to being the Field Marshal heading DMI (the department of military intelligence). She is functionally Hanse's eyes and ears in the foreign intelligence sphere for the AFFS side of the Fed Suns, which means gathering planning executing foreign policy directives for the first prince and wields the authority of the First Prince of the Federated Suns in Hanse's absence.


As for why, the Star League was the mythic golden age of humanity for the Inner Sphere when technology was shiny and bright where the Terran Hegemonyand the SLDF preserved order between the other states of the inner sphere while also pushing the boundaries of human technology (in contrast to the succession wars where technology is considered by and large to have declined precipitously since 2765)
 
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It was just before noon and he had been planning for the upcoming after lunch briefing of the MAF personnel at large... he had not expected to have one of Seghal's senior company commanders show up. The woman was local nobility of some stripe and had likely been short listed for a battalion command slot as the LV expanded. She had questions about how they were doing things. "The principle reason for the Crocketts," Gene found himself explaining, "Is that it was designed as a training 'mech."The answer was in response to questions of why they were using them instead of the Marauder II or its variants. The truth was the transit from the Inner Sphere, to the Periphery, and the roundabout journey through the Aurigan Reach across the rimward periphery to the Magistracy had meant that the unit had trained as much as he might have liked.


Crocketts were not a standard fixture in the battle line of the unit, where as Marauder II Assault BattleMechs were. That was probably why the question had been asked. There were different tactical solutions to problems. It was why he had originally hoped to build up along a slightly lighter faster model for the unit... but that had been formulated from lessons of Elidere, and Dieron against the Combine who had a greater prevalence of light BattleMechs. A hussar regiment would have been still heavy enough to turn the combine flank, but potentially capable with its hovercraft to pin them in place.


Except that this was the periphery and he was as far as possible from the Combine facing an enemy with a predisposition in weight that more akin to his own. Some of the more embarrassing defeats delivered to the Magistracy and the near periphery had been by companies worth of Orions, and Black Knights defaced with obscene symbols of Amaris's Rim World Republic and his imperial delusions of grandeur.


That footage was concerning... but only because they were seeing an increasing number of all energy boats which itself could have been selection effects. "The Crocketts will provide them some experience with auto cannons." He stated to the MAF officer, "If Raventhir thinks its in the interest of our training mission to practice on the Marauder II series we can adjust for that directive, but the Crockett was specifically developed as a training 'mech. The pilots who we are largely working with for the most part have little to no experience driving heavier machines. The modifications to the Chargers, or for that matter even the Merlin pilots need the experience in particular, but functionally the entire regiment," He paused... they could do with whatever extra hours they could manage to cram in, Such that it was, "Needs time in battlemechs not just the simulator pods." This was not, Gene underscored the same as the last contract where they were in a place where the simulators were really their only good option in terms of time usage "If Raventhir is at all serious about this being a new foundation for the MAF then their training needs to start on as strong a foundation as we can, and that means the crocketts should be suitable learning aids." Those pilots didn't need to learn bad habits.


After the officer had been shown out, MacINtyre scowled, "She could have directed that complaint to me."


"Try not to take it personally," Gene replied. "We're operating in a friendly country, but there is just as good of a chance that this kind of thing would happen in Davion space as here." The old highlander grumbled all the same... and Gene didn't disagree but also he had to nip it in the bud. This was their first major contract since leaving the Inner Sphere, and it would have implications towards how things went on. "We're going to be in the news a lot," He informed the larger man, "Local news, and ComStar's interstellar broadcasts Dante already places us at a higher risk of foreign intelligence challenges due to Dieron, but now with Kalidasa having happened we can expect that the Capellans and the FWL are going to be looking at us."


"We're the largest mercenary army in the periphery, it comes with the territory."


Allowing for that being the case in normal situations, "We're not in a normal situation. The Dragoons left for wherever up North Kerensky settled. 3rd ​RCT, and the BSI," Blue Star Irregulars, "Are in Davion Space...I'm not going to lie I'm concerned what McCarron and the Highlander force in the Capellans are going to do." And he didn't even know where to start in terms of what the Free Worlds League might have available. "And our size," Was misleading... and was probably going to raise more questions than less, "Is accounted for by the Azami, and that means we are responsible as a unit for a large volume of dependents." Everything came with trade offs, and their manpower did give them a lot of advantages. "I understand that both you, and Hammer are eager to get back to Davion space start recruiting drives," And Hammer realistically was going to do what hiring he could out in the periphery but the current crisis here meant slim pickings for him. "And I think the Magistracy knows as much."


"You don't plan to send us ahead?"


He shook his head, "No, given the situation, and the likelihood Kalidasa makes the situation so much worse I need the full force of the unit, we're going to lose enough manpower with the units leaving for Alamut, and the troops deployed in the near periphery with the merchants, but that is another thing if the RimWorld objective is a new empire they're going to need to disrupt or subvert local governments that means keeping trade from operating."


"Speaking of trade, Majesty Metals is interested in some face time."


The short briefing continued before both men moved out of the operations center of the Overlord class DropShip which was the Battalion Headquarters for Claymore. The DropShip was surrounded by Bandit, and Badger vehicles protected further by kilted troopers from the Scotts Cuirassier. BattleMech presence were a lance of Thugs assault Mechs, given the time of day most likely from the 2nd ​Cadet Company pulling QRF in the even someone attacked, unlikely as that was, during the meeting or during the one they were now moving to.


Across the starport was another operations center, this one for Hammer and more importantly the coordination point for both their space based assets, and the artillery park. Hammer's mechanized infantry contingent centered on the men who had been with Hammer when Gene had hired him after the last Luxen contract were on perimeter security. They were in turn backed up by a company of Azami Phoenix Hawks proudly painted in an arid brown SLDF desert warfare camo... officially speaking they were now apart of the 12th ​Light Horse Regiment originally apart of XIV Corp, 14th​Army SLDF whose colors had been placed near their dropships. Their sibling regiment had taken the colors of the 139th​Light Horse Regiment, VIII Corp, who had likewise been destroyed during the Campaign to liberate the Hegemony from Amaris.


The ostensible reason for those units was that two centuries earlier the forbearers of certain Azami officers had been pilots in those regiments that had been apart of the SLDF's DCMR nearest to Terra. Those ancestors, who had been Mech Warrior officers, had been some of the last to be able to claim the title Haji because of course Amaris had destroyed Mecca. Though not enshrined in law, conveyed on their descendants special status within the Azami community. 'Blood of Martyrs' as Hammer liked to quip.


That actually created another potential problem for Gene. The Highlanders, their elders, had already been preparing MacINtyre to raise troops to form an eventual new Regiment of Highlanders. The Azami adopting the colors of dead SLDF regular units or just being there even would likely push the Rasalhague political backers behind Soren Holmgren, CO Bardiche, to agitate for a similar expansion since they knew there caches to provide metal for that kind of force. It also wouldn't have surprised him if House Davion liked the idea of a full blown rebellion against the Combine exploding in the Rasalhague Military District to keep the Coordinator off balance... and in theory whatever Soren's backers back home wanted it wouldn't come into play any time soon, but he was aware that was a potential matter.


The force deployment here was relevant for the almost hundred twenty MAF MechWarriors plus other personal in the Luxen Starport facility that served as a centralized briefing facility. "Lets begin with our problem," He belted to the assembled as he strode forward. A mental command through his ever present neuro helmet circlet triggered a map of the Magistracy of Canopus. "in SLDF doctrine we would address this by escalating the level violence against Black Jack. We can't do that this isn't like those campaigns. To the best of our knowledge Black Jack has no support within the Magistracy and is fleet based operating, his last known basing was in the Tortuga dominion."


There was a zoom out, and a pan of the map to show the distance... and the truth was Black Jack had to have a base nearer. Raventhir's other mercenary commander, Volkov, crossed her arms over her jacket but she was listening.


"I've already informed," He had almost used the word warned, but caught himself at the last minute, "Lady Raventhir there is a sizable chance that Black Jack will make a push on either Canopus or Farandir since they hit Royal Foxx," That was just due diligence on his part to present to her the options... the last thing he wanted to do was to be caught flatfoot if the capital of the country they were in came under assault and well some idea came to try and relieve a siege as such. He'd also gone so far as to push those concerns down the ladder to his battalion commanders this morning, whether or not Volkov had read her copy yet... well that he didn't know. "This information is to be understood by the entire command."


Chatter immediately began, as he had expected it would... but he let it continue as the Magistracy soldiers the mech warriors he was expected to train got it out of their system. He decided he wasn't going to mention, at least not today, that given they were supposedly at least dealing with pirates that they shouldn't expect a strict chain of command... though probably already knew it, but the implication from loose associations the way pirates tended to operate meant that if command and control was lax they could be seeing attacks that might have nothing to do with Black Jack, and Kelly's, vendetta against ComStar. Gene suspected from what they had understood after dropping on Fjaldr, and Axylus that smaller pirate gangs were being contracted with carrot and stick to support that vendetta in exchange for loot opportunities, and kept in line by threat of force.


Gene tapped the physical controls as much so that the motion caught the attention of those paying attention as anything else. The Magistracy did not have a lot of HPG stations, and from what he understood ComStar's outlying stations in the independent rimward periphery space had been hit already... for whatever reason Black Jack was dancing over the borders with increasing regularity now.


"This to me looks like Black Jack is going, or wishes to give the impression of moving into the Free Worlds League or Capellan Space." The interruption came from another of Seghal's contemporaries." That she had allowed for the possibility that it was obfuscation was a good sign... it meant she wasn't completely wedded to the notion one way or the other.


"Its possible, though it raises the question of where Black Jack wants to hit most." The 2nd​Battle of Luxen had involved one of Black Jack's lieutenants but not really one too high up in the chain, enough of a shot caller to wield all SLDF metal, but not one with anything truly special, and the bounty while nice had been a gratis not anything like what the Precentor New Avalon had offered for work out here.
 

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