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welp, this is not how I expected this day to go I should probably start with an intro my name or...
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so I finally figured I'd stop being a dirty lurker and I wanted to write this story because I couldn't get this story out of my head so word of warning unless somebody offers to beta or something I'm really bad about puntion and stuff but I'm using a spell checker but it could miss something also I may butcher Characters sorry

welp, this is not how I expected this day to go I should probably start with an intro my name or my old name I suppose is Matthew Aaron west weird name I know any way I am a transhumanist I belive in self-improvement wether that be through tech or just good old fashioned hard work the day I was dimensionally translocated I was a 7'2 bemoth of a man with an iq of 186 but now i coundnt be any farther from the truth I have a differnt name now and a vastly different body my new name is zion or scion considering who you ask thankfully my mind is mostly unchanged well other than how fast I think and most likely my emotions aswell how I look well i'am now 10792000000000000000 miles long bigger than size of the fucking GALAXY i'am also a fucking transdimensional thing spacewhalee entity i'am a fucking entity in fucking WORM something immediately stops and I realize I was panicking huh neat also alarming anyway yes I am zion oh and I forgot to mention every cell in my body is a shard there also the size of the moon I can see? more than on reality at the same time I'm currently sitting in a universe whose laws of physics never allowed it to form well anything other than energy which I guess is what I eat welp I am the closet this and a couple of other universes have to a god might as well enjoy myself first thing first I look for earth bet it the closet verse to me and I start making a body quickly check the date 2011 huh year before Taytay triggers speaking of which I lock down queen admin and get back to making my body since its a year before canon I make my body 15 make it 6'6 might be a little tall but whatever I like being tall and for my plan, I need to make it handsome so it gets a square jaw messy hair and of course I make it buff not that it matters considering it could crack the planet in half even if I make it a gangly fucker and when I finish the result is this
in my old life, I was bi so I can say without a doubt I would fuck me anyway now to the bits my new cock because why not is 9 inches if it proves to be a problem I'll shrink it but I know this is humanly possible next the powers it was then I would facepalm if I could​

LOCATION: somewhere over the Atlantic

the golden man stops and facepalms so hard he causes a sonic boom and then flew off to get that kitten out of the tree in Taiwan

i am an idiot I give my new body ALL the powers it might as well be omnipotent it also has access to all shards currently active as well and now the fun I pause briefly to consider why I'm doing this and come to the conclusion easily its the only reason a creature of my power does well anything
BECAUSE
I

CAN.
 
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What the fuck. Does punctuation not exist where you come from? My brain completely stoped transmitting information after the first 10 words.
 
Capital letters.

Periods at the end of sentences.

Paragraphing.

Use them.

i'am really bad about puntion and stuff but i'am using a spell checker but it could miss some thing also i may butcher charters sorry
Considering you have five spelling errors in the section you tell us you're using a spell checker ... I'd suggest actually paying attention to said spell checker. It helps.
 
Pic links are broken.

so I finally figured I'd stop being a dirty lurker and I wanted to write this story because I couldn't get this story out of my head so word of warning unless somebody offers to beta or something I'm really bad about punctuation and stuff but i'am using a spell checker but it could miss some thing also I may butcher charters sorry

Welp, this is not how I expected this day to go. I should probably start with an intro. My name, or my old name I suppose, is Matthew Aaron West. Weird name I know. Anyway, I'm a transhumanist. I believe in self improvement, whether that be through tech or just good old fashioned hard work. The day I was dimensionally transplanted, I was a 7'2 behemoth of a man with an IQ of 186 but now now I couldn't be any farther from the truth I have a different name now and a vastly different body my new name is Zion or Scion considering who you ask thankfully my mind is mostly unchanged well other than how fast I think and most likely my emotions as well how I look well i'am now 10792000000000000000 miles long bigger then size of the fucking GALAXY I'm also a fucking transdimensional thing spacewhale entity. I'm a fucking entity in fucking WORM something immediately stops, and I realize I was panicking huh neat also alarming anyway yes i'am Zion oh and I forgot to mention every cell in my body is a shard there also the size of the moon I can also see? more than on reality at the same time i'am currently sitting in a universe who's laws of physics never allowed it to form well anything other than energy which I guess is what I eat welp i'am the closet this and a couple other universes have to a god might as well enjoy myself first thing first I look for earth bet it the closet verse to me and I start making a body quickly check the date 2011 huh year before TayTay triggers speaking of which I lock down queen admin and get back to making my body since its a year before canon I make my body 15 make it 6'6 might be a little tall but whatever I like being tall and for my plan I need to make it handsome so it gets a square jaw messy hair and of course I make it buff not that it matters considering it could crack the planet in half even if I make it a gangly fucker and when I finish the end result is this
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Iin my old life I was bIIso I can say without a doubt I would fuck me anyway now to the bits my new cock because why not is 9 inches if it proves to be a problem i'll shrink it but I know this is humanly possible next the powers it was then I would facepalm if I could.​

LOCATION: somewhere over the Atlantic

the golden man stops and facepalms so hard he causes a sonic boom and then flew off to get that kitten out of the tree in Taiwan

I am an idiot I give my new body ALL the powers it might as well be omnipotent it also has access to all shards currently active as well and now now the fun I pause briefly to consider why I'm doing this and come to the conclusion easily its the only reason a creature of my power does well anything
BECAUSE
I

CAN.
Some corrections to punctuation, grammar, and syntax...positive I missed stuff. Will give it another look through later, but this is it for now. Stopped marking it due to time constraints (the bold and underline are areas I corrected, but not all of my corrections are so marked).
 
Pic links are broken.


Some corrections to punctuation, grammar, and syntax...positive I missed stuff. Will give it another look through later, but this is it for now. Stopped marking it due to time constraints (the bold and underline are areas I corrected, but not all of my corrections are so marked).
thank you apearntly the spell check i used was awful and i'll try and fix the pic
 
My first though upon reading this was 'this person's making fun of My Immortal,' which is a laudable goal all of should attempt to reach at least once in our lives.
 
alright just downloaded Grammarly and put it through that so hopefully its better
 
My first though upon reading this was 'this person's making fun of My Immortal,' which is a laudable goal all of should attempt to reach at least once in our lives.
I must admit some part of it is making a bit of fun the other part is I'm bad at English also Grammarly is awesome
 
Pic links are broken.


Some corrections to punctuation, grammar, and syntax...positive I missed stuff. Will give it another look through later, but this is it for now. Stopped marking it due to time constraints (the bold and underline are areas I corrected, but not all of my corrections are so marked).
thank you again appreciate it looked it through it Grammarly and with your suggestions and good God my spelling is horrific
 
i figured out the link the pics not originally what I wanted but whatever
 
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alright I cant figure to how to fix pic

Just upload to imgur as a hidden image and link to it. That's what I've been doing.

I'd also recommend editing your posts rather than making new ones. There's a button for it at the bottom of each reply.

I'm fairly sure the mods frown upon doubleposting, and 4 posts in less than 15 minutes with no other replies between them might end up problematic.
 

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