Can a Mook become the main character? (Disgaea/Negima)

[Xicree]

Nuuuu~~~!!! Not a 'verse I know nothing about!

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Go read the manga. Starts off as harem nonsense, ends up as badass shonen nonsense. Is a good one.

 

[BFldyq]

Nuuuu~~~!!! Not a 'verse I know nothing about!

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Seconding Xicree, but make sure its the original manga. The spin-offs vary in quality greatly, but tend to be "meh".

Exactly how I feel about RWBY. Never seen it, but I've heard it looks good.

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Here's the four trailers for it:

And here's a ScrewAttack Death Battle video featuring Yang:

Spoiler: Warning, Spoilers

And yes, that is the same voice actor.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

I'll probably be closing the votes soon, like in 7 hours.

Make sure you voted for what you wanted.

That is all. ORG MOBILE!

-jumps on the back of the giant kitten-

LET'S GO!!!!!!



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[Tavarokk]

Given the current votes, will the tie between names default to Maetheris? Would be rather awkward to end up with Jane, given that it was meant solely for gunslinger.

 

[Selias]

Too bad DBZ has no chance of winning. That would mix pretty well with Disgaea.

 

[Czlyydwr Llrngwl]

I'm still hoping for Marshmallow to make a surprise comeback in the home stretch... so many jokes to make...

Maybe it could be Maetheris's nickname?

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Given the current votes, will the tie between names default to Maetheris? Would be rather awkward to end up with Jane, given that it was meant solely for gunslinger.

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Yeah, I'll probably do that.

 

[Tavarokk]

I'm still hoping for Marshmallow to make a surprise comeback in the home stretch... so many jokes to make...

Maybe it could be Maetheris's nickname?

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I'm not sure I see the appeal. Neither as a name nor as a nickname. What's so amusing about marshmallows?

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Incidentally Ilost track of the time to call the vote since this forum doesn't operate in the same timezone I do or something. >.>

I'm probably just going to create the character page now sine it doesn't seem like there's going to be anymore votes.

Now, I wonder whether I should start you guys out on Mars or Mahora. Hmmm. Might roll a die. ^.^

I'm not sure I see the appeal. Neither as a name nor as a nickname. What's so amusing about marshmallows?

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A succubus's giant breast and suffocating people with them hence the name "Marshmallow Hell"


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And now I feel like an idiot because my timezone was set to the wrong setting. >.>

It's only been like 3 hours since I started the time so 4 hours left technically.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Going to close the vote right now.

Probably will have you decide where you ended up next chapter by a vote.

Mahora would mean you will get the most interaction with the main cast... well, the ones that I remember anyway. You would also have the option of changing your body to fit in as a middleschooler... but sadly, your breast probably will not shrink. Sorry, it's the curse of being a succubus.

Magical world would give you more grinding chance, meet new people that are OCs I create and will likely get summoned during the... Kyoto? arc by that one girl in order to stall the team. Which then you, could decide whether to stay there or go back to the magic world and then next meet the main cast when they are on the run from the law and stuff.

Mahora would likely be a slice of life school girl story for awhile if you choose to stay there. Also filled with a lot of humorous situations and the chance to be a vampires lackey if you want!

Magical world would be like an adventure fantasy story where you pretty much do what you want and you may or may not meet Jack Rakon or other main characters that were in the magical world arc. Like if you do something stupid and end up being hunted by the evil glasses counterpart and the law.

I forgot the guys name... sigh.

Ah, fuck it. I'll put it up to vote now while I work on the character page and watch RBWY.

The Negima story is following the manga btw. Couldn't stand the anime versions of it.

Anyway both choices have pros and cons. Also, stats are not going to be the end all and be all unless you are at a ridiculously high level. I have to keep things interesting after all.

[]Mahora
[]Magical world

Also a question.

Succubus learn up tot he giga level of fire spell, and healing spells right? Do they start with charm?

I only know the first two versions of the succubus but your character will be based on all of them. With evilies.

Sorry this isn't a story chapter and I already have a new vote going, but I felt like getting this out of the way.

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Btw, this vote will last until 3:00PM tomorrow.

 

[Selias]

[X]Mahora

Well, if we're stuck with Negima, might as well hang out with the people that we know, right?

 

[Gear-2557]

[X]Mahora

 

[Tavarokk]

[X]Mahora

The point of picking succubus was to screw with the cast, so this, naturally.

As for skills, I'm not familiar with Disgaea, but it seems prudent to me for succubi to get charm before any other magic skills.

 

[wayne82444]

[X]Mahora

While the magic world may be fun we will get there eventually. In the mean time though messing with the class sounds fun. Can I suggest our mook take over as the sex ed teacher for laughs?

 

[Czlyydwr Llrngwl]

[X]Mahora

For all the reasons previously stated, as well as the possibility of recognizing the giant demon summoned during the Kyoto arc, and possibly calling a second one to fight him since it's quite similar to the summoned character for one of the higher-level Fire spells, if she put in some effort to learn it or was reincarnated from a Red Mage at some point, or something similar.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Looks like Mahora won, though there's still like 3 hours left to the vote.

That makes it both easier and harder for me.

Easier in the sense I don't need to come up with many OCs.

Harder because I'm going to need to refresh myself on the characters and what they act like.

So I'll probably be reading through the manga again off and on.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Nearly done with the next chapter.

Going to scrap a couple of things like stats all together probably since I don't feel like keeping track of it. Sorta like I've been doing with my Nekomata SI.

You would still gain the skills and get stronger every fight though. Just less showing it with numbers... sigh. I probably could keep track of it with numbers if I need though.

Trying not to destroy either setting when combining them is annoying. >.>

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Winning votes:

Name: Maetheris
Class: Succubus
World: Negima
Location: Mahora

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"Ugh." I eloquently said as I woke up from my unexpected nap. I pushed myself up from the ground, shaking off the dirt and dust that clung to me as I did, and with a grand flourish, I jumped out of the me size hole that my kissing the ground at terminal velocity created.

I never before have been so grateful at being immune to fall damage than I was right now, as this would have been a short story otherwise. Tee-hee~

Once I was out of the hole I decided to take stock of my situation and inspect what I soo painfully became when I was thrown here by forces unknown; A.K.A, Stupid hole in reality. For good measure I flicked off the sky once more and when I did I saw my hand. My small, feminine hand. Intrigued, I brought both of my hands to my line of sight. They were feminine that's for sure, feminine and familiar, what with the long nails that I knew from personal experience could rend flesh from bone very easily; They were painted a lovely shade of pink~.

"Hmm." I hummed as I inspected the rest of my body. "Skimpy outfit that shows an generous amount of cleavage." I looked down. "Check, even came with black, thigh-high high-heel boots and a cute little tie." I played with said tie for a bit before continuing where I left off. "Badass wings with a spade tail and horns on top of my head?" I made them twitch and let out a small ow as my finger poked the sharp point of my horns. It bled a little so I put the finger in my mouth and sucked on it.

"Chwck." I muttered and released my finger from my lips with a pop. "Long, luscious pink hair?" I twirled around and stopped, letting my hair flow with the wind. "Check. Last but not least, a generous sized bust?" I cupped them with my hands and then let out a small moan as I grouped them.

"Check." I said as I abruptly let go of my boobs causing them to jiggle a little. I moved one hand by my chin and adopted a thinking pose. "Sooo, by process of elimination it is safe to assume that I am a succubus. How dandy."

Indeed it was, you wouldn't have found a more perfect specimen of succubus than me. Though I haven't been one in awhile, Nekomata and mages being more popular choices by the overlords that summoned me. But I started out as a succubus; even got to torment Laharl a few times by hugging him. Ah, that was a fun afternoon.

But that's enough reminiscing. I thought with a sigh. I found myself missing the adorable reactions he always had when I buried his face in-between my boobs. I need to find out where the hell I am... plus I need to see if the local wildlife is dangerous, I rather not die right now until I'm sure my soul would return to the void.

With that, I started walking away from the me shaped hole intent on finding answers.

It would seem that I was in a forest of some kind and not one in the Netherworld. A plant would have tried to eat me by now if I was. So that was another point towards this not being a regular summoning. Well, that was kinda obvious in the first place because if it was, I would have already met the overlord that used such a fucked up summoning method on me and castrated the bastard.

But the forest was thick, I nearly got my wings snagged on a couple of branches a few times. Glad I didn't, because that would have been painfully annoying. Still, as I walked I saw a whole lot of nothing.

No demons, no wildlife, no man eating plants, no lakes of lava, no nothing.

What a boring world I was summoned into. I thought and yawned; stretching my arm behind my head as I made my way towards what I hoped to be a civilization at least. I didn't really have any direction at the moment. Just wondering aimlessly hoping to find something interesting at least.

I honestly didn't have to wait long though. It seemed the locals came to investigate my horrible crash landing, or they could sense my presence. Either way, a young girl appeared from the foliage, a young girl whose presence felt like a samurai-ko. She had long black hair and was wearing what appeared to be a school girl uniform with knee-high white socks. She was also holding onto a sheaved nodachi that made me further think of her as a samurai-ko.

I kinda wished she was, at least that would be something familiar and would point me towards being close to a Netherworld at least. Samurai-ko are also entertaining, all the ones that I met were closet perverts that become like putty in your hands when you caress them just so. But sadly the girl before me was human, or maybe half demon. It was kinda hard to tell, especially since she didn't have the pointy ears that were a tell tale sign of a demon.

There was a slight blush adoring her cheeks as she looked back at me. Which made me wonder if she was like a Samurai-ko in that regard as well~.

I'll have to find that out later. I thought as I noticed there was someone else here as well. A sniper took position on a tree not to far from here. So a "samurai-ko" and a "gunslinger" appeared to be my welcoming committee. It would be tough since I'm weaker than I normally am right now, but I think I could beat them if it came to that. I smiled at her, causing her to blink. Beating them senseless and grinding them under my heel would also be the more "proper" introduction of a demon to another demon, and likely to get any question I ask answered reliably. Or I could just introduce myself and ask them to take me to their overlord and figure out where to go from there.

Decisions, decisions.

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[]Fight them: It's only proper after all.
-[]Overwhelming offensive: Use an overwhelming assault to crush them.
-[]Conservative offensive: Use skills sparsely and rely on good old fashion fisty cups.
-[]defensive: Be on the defensive to get a feel for what they could do and how much force is needed to take them out.
[]Straighten up your back, stick your chest out, and haughtily state. "Take me to your Overlord."
[]Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
[]Write-in

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Spoiler: A.N

Rather short, but meh. Your first encounter is Setsuna the closet lesbian and Mana the totally not older than a middle school gunner.

I'll be getting to the character sheet soon, but the skills and magic you currently have for sure is.

Fire, wind, ice, star, heal, sleep, charm.

And your beginning monster skills, so body change I believe and hip attack.

You guys also are pretty decent at martial arts from your time as a Nekomata, just not as great since your not a Nekomata.

Also, as for "lewdness rating"or whatever. The only thing I'm planning on is writing stuff that would be found in common ecchi manga and anime. So boob groping, slight moaning, things like that.

Anyway, here are some pictures if you couldn't quite picture what you look like.

Spoiler: Succubus

 

[Lazurman]

[X]Straighten up your back, stick your chest out, and haughtily state. "Take me to your Overlord."

 

[wayne82444]

[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance.

Talking to them sounds more fun than fighting them, and since Maetheris thinks they are human it makes more sense than treating them like she would another demon. Of the two talking options this one seems like it can be used to tempt Setsuna as well, which gives it a bonus. That said the ask where we are option would likely reduce hostility some.

Edit: I like Tavarokk's write in, changing to that.

 

[Tavarokk]

[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance.

We're not exactly in a hurry to act, might as well prompt them to speak and see what we can infer from their words first.

Ecchi limiter is a bit of a disappointment, though.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

-shrugs-

I'll probably make a NSFW omake thread or end up moving this the NSFW thread eventually anyway. Only said planned though for the ecchi stuff.

To be honest, I don't think I'm good at writing lewds in the first place, so I don't plan on writing any.

 

[Tavarokk]

-shrugs-

I'll probably make a NSFW omake thread or end up moving this the NSFW thread eventually anyway. Only said planned though for the ecchi stuff.

To be honest, I don't think I'm good at writing lewds in the first place, so I don't plan on writing any.

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Ah, that's better.

Moving to NSFW seems preferable. I don't mind if you largely omit lewds, narrating them away with a line or a few instead of actual scenes, rather, I want freedom of action. Blanket content limiters cause irritation as a knee-jerk reaction given the amount of times protagonists in anime and manga get last second interrupt or spontaneous idiot ball as a way to break the scene for no other reason but because its logical continuation would go over the limit.

 

[Selias]

[X]Straighten up your back, stick your chest out, and haughtily state. "Take me to your Overlord."

 

[Czlyydwr Llrngwl]

Trying not to destroy either setting when combining them is annoying. >.>

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Ah, t'was ever the case with crossovers, especially when only one contains characters who can destroy planets with trivial ease - One of Mao's attacks explicitly drops the moon onto the targeted enemy, while the third Sword skill shows cutting it in half, and Laharl blows up Veldime at Lv1000 if you use the Dark Assembly bill to summon him for a fight in the first chapter of Disgaea 2 whether you win or lose, because he's in a bad mood. The ones that are part of attack animations obviously don't produce the lasting effects that would logically follow because it's just a video game attack animation, but until our protagonist discovers she can open her Status screen I'm going to work on the assumption that her current world operates on laws a little closer to reality than the Krichevskoy-Zenon standard. Maybe it's more like Mao's netherworld, where everything is related to schooling? Looking ahead of the current IC knowledge just a bit, she does seem to have landed in a ridiculously oversized school complex, so it might be a working hypothesis when she learns that fact.

For the actual vote,
[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance.

I like Wayne's reasoning on this, and we can always say something like "So that's how it is? Very well, (bouncy bounce boiyoing) Take me to your Overlord!" after introductions have been made.

Talking to them sounds more fun than fighting them, and since Maetheris thinks they are human it makes more sense than treating them like she would another demon. Of the two talking options this one seems like it can be used to tempt Setsuna as well, which gives it a bonus. That said the ask where we are option would likely reduce hostility some.

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[Gear-2557]

[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Ah, t'was ever the case with crossovers, especially when only one contains characters who can destroy planets with trivial ease

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Tell me about it, hell one of the succubus's skills destroyed a fucking world when used. I think it was twin attribute. I've been watching youtube for skill exhibitions so I get all the skills that a succubus could learn.


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I have a theory that all attack skills take place in a pocket dimension created by the netherworld when a demon feels like blowing up the planet.

It works, unless it's a cutscene instead like where Laharl destroys the planet anyway in Disgaea 2.

But that probably wouldn't help much here. You guys are kinda cut off from the netherworld at this point in time xD.

 

[OverReactionGuy]

Forgot I need to count them manually as I don't have a vote counter for the site. So here is the current vote count.

[X]Straighten up your back, stick your chest out, and haughtily state. "Take me to your Overlord."-2

[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance.- 4

 

[BFldyq]

[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance

 

[Zeromaru2]

[X] Say hello and introduce yourself while inquiring on where you are.
-[X] Flirt with the blushing girl, both for fun and to glean information while she's off balance.