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SOMETHING TERRIBLE HAS HAPPENED!

Gohan's soul was destroyed at the end of the Saiyan saga...

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SOMETHING TERRIBLE HAS HAPPENED!

Gohan's soul was destroyed at the end of the Saiyan saga, creating a new timeline.

The Great Zeno was supposed to destroy this anomaly, but he found it more entertaining to reincarnate another soul into Gohan's body.

The problem is that this new soul comes from a reality where powers like Ki don't exist, but to help him with this, the Great Zeno gave this mortal a Gamer System to manage his powers.

Now the "New Gohan" must assume the responsibilities of the original and do it differently to entertain the Great Zeno, or else... he will destroy everything.
 
01) New Soul
Greetings everyone and welcome to my fic Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer.

As the name makes clear, this fic is a period drama, set in Victorian England in 1875.

Not!

Jokes aside, our protagonist was reincarnated in Gohan's body shortly after the Saiyan saga.

If you are an old Dragon Ball fan like me and dreamed of Gohan taking the lead as in the original plans of the great and late Akira Toriyama.

This fic is for you.


"Dialogues"
'Thoughts'

A ripple of consciousness swept over his body as he blinked open his eyes, a bleached whiteness greeting him. No scent of sweat-soaked earth, no familiar pulse of life. Just an expansive nothingness, a blank canvas devoid of brushstrokes. His heart pounded in his chest, echoing in the hollow space.

Before him, an alien entity stood out against the void.

His tiny form swathed in vibrant hues, a stark contrast to the emptiness surrounding them. The sight of the deity stirred a faint recognition within him, a hazy mirage wavering at the edge of his memory.

"Lord Zeno?"

"Hi," Zeno's voice resounded in the empty expanse, a faint smile dancing on his lips.

"This is impossible, you are not real, you are a fictional character."

The god looked at him without expressing any emotion, but uttered a simple word.

"Silence."

The commando had no anger or hatred towards him, but a chill ran down his spine, as if he were being warned of the danger that the being in front of him represented.

"You're probably wondering why you're here," Zeno continued, his voice an echo against the silent backdrop.

He nodded, a tight knot forming in his stomach.

"An incident created a new timeline, Gohan's soul was... accidentally destroyed during his fight with Nappa and Vegeta," Zeno confessed, a hint of regret tinting his words.

Hi's eyes widened at the revelation.

"But how, he still had so much to do. Gohan is vital to Dragon Ball in all sagas up to -."

"Silence."

Once again the command silence with the primal fear of a predator facing its prey

"And so, you'll be taking on his role."

"His role?" He questioned, curiosity piercing through his shock.

Zeno nodded.

"You will serve as the new Gohan." He said, as if those words hadn't impacted him. "But don't worry, I created something to help you."

Zeno snaps his fingers as a strange blue holographic window appears in front of me.

[Gamer System Installed]

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 3.500
KP: 10.000
PL: 1.500

MIGHT:
700
AGILITY: 2.300
SPIRIT: 2.000
MENTAL: 1.000

Points: 100
[STATUS]

"This looks like the status of a gamer fic."

"Mortals from your reality do not have access to ki and other forms of energy like the world you will reincarnate in, so create a system that you are familiar with to help you acclimatize and to keep an eye on you."

He swallows hard at the declaration of the small but infinitely powerful being.

"Will you keep an eye on me?"

"Yes." Zeno said smiling. "My original plan was to destroy this variant timeline, but I decided to use you to see what happens. Watching you will be fun, but if you die or it becomes boring to watch you... I'll destroy everything." He finishes speaking by raising his little arms into the air.

Confused and distressed, he tries to ask for more information, but his vision starts to darken and he becomes unconscious.

[DBI:GG]

Gohan's eyelids fluttered open to the soft murmur of voices, a stark contrast to the deafening silence he'd faced moments ago. He found himself cradled in Chi-Chi's arms, her eyes brimming with relief and love. His body felt strangely light, devoid of the aches that should have been there, considering the battle he had just been through.

"What?" he whispered, his voice carrying an unfamiliar timbre.

Chi-Chi gasped, tears streaming down her cheeks as she clutched him tighter.

"Oh, Gohan! You're alright!"

Around them gathered his friends and family exchanged looks of disbelief.

"You were hurt pretty bad," Krillin piped up from the side. "But it seems like you're better than me"

Gohan touched his head, expecting to find wounds or bandages, but there was nothing. His skin was smooth, unmarred. He could feel their collective gaze upon him, mixtures of astonishment and unspoken questions at his miraculous recovery.

'Was this Zeno's work?' Gohan thought in silence. 'Does he or this system of his leave me completely healed when I wake up?'

As they traveled to the hospital where Goku and Krillin would be treated for their own injuries, Gohan remained silent in the aircraft's cabin. The hum of its engines was a distant drone as he tried to piece together the reality that he was no longer in his world. The very idea that he was now living in the body of his favorite character seemed like a fever dream.

He glanced out of the window, watching the landscape zoom past. He was here, yet part of him still grappled with disbelief. The sensation of flying in this advanced machine should have thrilled him, instead, it only deepened the surrealism of his situation.

They reached the hospital quickly. Goku and Krillin were whisked away by a team of medics while Chi-Chi stayed by Goku's side every step of the way. Gohan followed along mechanically as they navigated through sterile corridors and past concerned nurses.

He knew he should feel something, but all he could focus on was the odd detachment gnawing at him. Inside this familiar world yet so alien to his own experience, Gohan grappled with the reality that life as he knew it had been irreversibly altered.

In the stark white of the hospital room, voices buzzed around Gohan like bees circling a hive. Everyone was animated, gesturing wildly as they spoke of plans to journey to Namekusei. Yet, Gohan's mind wandered, ensnared in its own quandary.

Bulma was unfolding maps and charts onto a nearby table, her finger tracing potential routes through the cosmos.

"Even if we modify one of my father's spaceships, we still wouldn't be able to make the trip in less than a thousand years," she explained with an authority that made her the de facto leader of this impromptu meeting.

Goku, propped up in his hospital bed with bandages criss-crossing his torso, nodded along with Bulma's words.

"We need to find those Dragon Balls," he said with determination shining through his eyes despite his injuries.

But Gohan's attention strayed from their planning. He was there among them, physically present but mentally adrift.

Gohan's focus shifted from the animated group to the window where something had caught his attention. A weird figure, clad in flowing oriental garb and a large white turban, hovered outside the glass in a flying carpet. Its expression was impossible to read, but there was a faint glimmer of amusement in its eyes.

"Who is it?" Gohan muttered, rising from his seat.

Gohan stepped towards the window, his heart pounding with a mix of anticipation and dread. As he approached, the figure turned to face him, its movements graceful and deliberate. Gohan's eyes widened in recognition.

"Mr. Popo?" he breathed out.

The enigmatic attendant to Earth's Guardian hovered serenely outside the window, his inscrutable expression holding a hint of amusement.

"Yes, young Gohan," Popo replied, his voice as smooth as running water. "I have come to offer assistance."

Gohan's eyebrows knitted together in confusion.

"Assistance? With what?"

"With your journey to Namekusei," Popo answered simply. "I know of a spaceship that can take you there."

The revelation stunned Gohan. He had forgotten that Mr. Popo was going to take them to the ship that Kami used to get to Earth.

"I think we should take Mr. Popo up on his offer." Said Goku from the bed.

"We're all hurt, and it'll be faster if some of us go with Popo to get the spaceship." Added Kuririn

A satisfied gleam entered Popo's eyes.

"Who will come with me to the spaceship?" Asked Popo.

"Well, that easy, Bulma." Said Kuririn.

"What?Why me?"

"The others are injured and you are the only one who can find out if we can use the ship or not."

Bulma sighed, her shoulders slumping in resignation.

"Great. I get to sit in a spaceship with that weird guy."

Goku chuckled softly.

"At least we're one step closer to getting the Dragon Balls," he said, trying to remain optimistic.

Despite the lingering unease, Gohan couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement mingled with trepidation. The journey to Namekusei was about to begin, one of the most incredible and iconic arcs in Dragon Ball.

But his good mood takes a cold shower when he remembers the difficulties he will face in the future. Although he was strong enough to face some of Freeza's soldiers, his elite forces and the Galactic Emperor himself were far from his reach.

Overcome with dread of the future, Gohan decides to do what Dragon Ball characters do when they face a great challenge.

'I need to train.'

Perceiving the opportunity before his eyes, Gohan decided to go with them to.

"I'll go with you to, Mr. Popo," Gohan declared, his voice resolute.

Bulma blinked in surprise.

"You will?"

"Yes," Gohan nodded. "I'm not as injured as the others, and I can help protect you on the journey."

Bulma smiled, a genuine expression of gratitude crossing her face.

"Thank you, Gohan." She said hugging him. "It's so good to know that I can count on one of you."

However, Gohan kept his true intentions hidden, he planned to use this journey for another purpose.

As soon as Bulma and Gohan got on the carpet, they disappeared.

[DBI:GG]

"You surprised me with your training idea, young Gohan." Mr. Popo said, guiding Gohan through the corridors of the celestial platform.

After investigating the ship that brought Kami-sama to planet Earth, Gohan did not stay with Bulma in the hospital but was taken to the Celeste platform, where until Piccolo's death at the hands of Vegeta, Earth's Kami resided.

After a few more minutes walking, Gohan stood in the doorway of the Time Chamber, his heart pounding with anticipation. Mr. Popo hovered beside him, his expression inscrutable as always.

"This is the Time Chamber," Popo explained. "Time flows differently within its walls. One day outside is equivalent to one year within."

Gohan nodded, his mind racing. Two years of training could make a world of difference. He could become strong enough to face even the mightiest of Frieza soldiers.

"I am ready," he said, his voice determined.

Popo nodded and opened the door, revealing a vast, empty chamber. Gohan stepped inside, and Popo followed, closing the door behind them.

The Time Chamber was a strange and wonderful place. It was filled with an ethereal glow, and the air was heavy with the scent of ozone. Gohan could feel the energy of the place coursing through his body, invigorating him.

"You will train here for two years," Popo said. "When you are finished, leave the room immediately, or you will be trapped in here forever."

Gohan nodded, his eyes gleaming with excitement. He couldn't wait to begin.

With a finger pointing to the ground, Popo creates 3 pairs of clothes similar to the Gi that Goku wears, but without symbols related to any master.

Gohan looked at the three pairs of clothes with a mixture of curiosity and trepidation.

"These are weighted clothing," Popo explained. "They will help you to increase your strength and endurance. The first pair weighs 50 kilos, the second 100 kilos, and the third 500 kilos. But be warned, the gravity in this room is 10 times greater than on Earth."

Gohan nodded, his eyes gleaming with excitement. He couldn't wait to try on the weights.

He picked up the first pair of clothes and slipped them on. The weight was immediately apparent, but he forced himself to stand up straight. He took a few steps forward, and the increased gravity made his legs feel like lead.

But Gohan was determined to push himself. He gritted his teeth and continued to walk.

"Now if you'll excuse me, I need to help Miss Bulma with the ship and teach her the Kami language."

Even as Popo leaves the room, Gohan is having difficulty adapting to the weight of the clothes.

Gohan struggled to move in the weighted clothing. Each step felt like he was wading through waist-deep mud. The 50 kilos that the clothes weighed on Earth felt like half a ton in the Time Chamber's gravity.
He took a few more steps, his muscles screaming in protest. He could feel the sweat dripping down his forehead.

But he refused to give up. He had come to the Time Chamber to train, and he wasn't going to let a little discomfort stop him.

He gritted his teeth and continued to push himself. He walked for half an hour, until his legs felt like they were going to give out. But he kept going, one step at a time.

Finally, he collapsed on the ground, exhausted. He lay there for a few minutes, catching his breath.

[+5 MIGHT ]

The window catches Gohan by surprise, but not as much as the voice that sounds in his head, startling him. It was the voice of Zeno, the king of all universes.

"Well done, Gohan," Zeno said. "You have used your knowledge of the future to your advantage. This is the most interesting turn of events."

Gohan's mind raced. He had never expected to hear from Zeno, let alone be praised by him.
"Thank you, Lord Zeno," Gohan said, his voice trembling slightly.

"You are most welcome," Zeno said. "I must say, I am quite intrigued by your plan. It is a clever way to avoid the boredom of a predictable story."

Gohan's heart skipped a beat.

"Boredom?" he asked.

"Yes, boredom," Zeno said. "If the story becomes too predictable, I may lose interest and destroy everything."

Gohan's eyes widened in horror. He had never considered that Zeno could be so capricious.

"I will do my best to keep the story interesting," Gohan said.

"I am sure you will," Zeno said. "Now, go and train. I look forward to seeing what you accomplish."

The voice faded away, leaving Gohan alone in the Time Chamber. He stood there for a moment, trying to process what had just happened.

He had been given a chance to change the future, and he was determined to make the most of it. He would train harder than ever before, and he would do everything in his power to keep Zeno entertained.

The fate of the universe depended on it.

"It looks like this Gohan will become the protagonist of Dragon Ball as Akira Toriyama had originally planned." He couldn't stop himself from smiling. "It's a shame that I don't have anyone to train with me, in Dragon Ball one of the best ways to train is by fighting."

[TRAINING MODE]

"What?"

[ Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1.200
Saibamen = PL 1.200
Nappa = PL 4.000
Vegeta = PL 18.000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180.000
[ Choose your opponent]

"WHAT?"

Overwhelmed by the amount of things that have happened to him in less than a day, Gohan decides to first learn how to best use the system Zeno gave him.

"This way I will make better use of my training."

[+1 MENTAL]

"And I think the system agrees with me…"

Gohan spent a few minutes reading the status window, looking at each element that opened windows with explanations and speaking commands out loud trying to find more features.

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 3.500
KP: 10.000
PL: 1.501,5

MIGHT:
705
AGILITY: 2.300
SPIRIT: 2.000
MENTAL: 1.001

Points: 100
[STATUS]

Name, Race and Level are very simple to understand. HP is Hit Points as expected, KP is Ki Points, PL is Power Levels. MIGHT encompasses strength and physical resistance. AGILITY is for dexterity, movement and reaction. SPIRIT resist mental attacks and ki reserve. MENTAL memory and quick thinking.

One of the new windows that Gohan discovered was.

[SKILLS]

  • General Skills:

Acrobatics Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Athletics Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]
Perception Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]


  • Combat Skills:

Close Combat Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]


  • Knowledge Skills:

Medicine Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]


  • Social Skills:

Deception Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]
Intimidation Lv. 1/100 [
Novice]
[SKILLS]

"I think the Skills are at a minimum because I started this life with few memories." Said Gohan, finally noticing the holes in his memory. "I remember almost nothing about myself or the people I lived with."

[SPECIAL ABILITIES]​


  • Passive:



  • Active:



  • Transformations:

Oozaru Lv. 1/100 [Novice] = X 10 Power Level, at this level, the gamer loses control when assuming the Oozaru form

[SPECIAL ABILITIES]

"Nothing?" Questioned Gohan in surprise. "B-but what about Masenko? Or a simple ki blast? I should at least know how to fly by now."

Gohan wasn't desperate only because he had at least 2 years to train.

[PERKS]
  • Hidden Potential: A great power lies dormant within you
  • Human Adaptability: Greater capacity for learning new techniques and strategizing in combat.
  • Zenkai Boost: Become significantly stronger after recovering from near-death experiences.
[PERKS]

"Cool, I have the best of both worlds from my racial heritage." Commented Gohan, getting up. "I may not know how to train my Ki, but I will try to physically train the most powerful being of all."

Determined, Gohan began his training of 100 sit ups, pushups, and squats followed by a 10-km run.


Did you enjoy the first chapter of Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer?

I know it's all a bit rushed right now, but the trip to Namekusei is coming up and Gohan will start interacting more with the other characters.

I will publish new chapters every month of this story.

Questions, criticisms, suggestions, compliments, or commissions? You can find me on my X (Old Twitter) @renanp1m or on my Linktree: linktr.ee/RenanPMoraes

Until next time, you beautiful ones.
 
Namekusei?? Do you mean planet namek.
Who is Kuririn?? As I don't know who this character is. As I know there's a character called krillin.

You cannot just remain in the time chamber for 2 days which equals 2 years in The Time chamber. As you can only stay in there for one day at a time which equals one year. It also might be wise save one of the 2 days he can spend in the time chamber for cell.
 
I'm interested in the story, I think zenno fading into the background until later would be good.


Gohan currently doesn't have his ki technique's, I'm hoping he recreates the rokushiki from one piece, maybe try to reverse engineering techniques from baking the grappler, kenichi the mightiest disciple and maybe Naruto. Plus he might look dumb but stacking the weighted clothes could help. Then Isolated limb techniques with all the weighted clothes on that limb plus the hyperbolic time chambers enhanced gravity.

Will a Powerball be generated when fighting uzaru Vegeta (automatically transforming Gohan until he gets a high enough level of Mastery?)
 
Gotta get meditation and image training then cloning with the goal of ikari.
 
I'm interested in the story, I think zenno fading into the background until later would be good.


Gohan currently doesn't have his ki technique's, I'm hoping he recreates the rokushiki from one piece, maybe try to reverse engineering techniques from baking the grappler, kenichi the mightiest disciple and maybe Naruto. Plus he might look dumb but stacking the weighted clothes could help. Then Isolated limb techniques with all the weighted clothes on that limb plus the hyperbolic time chambers enhanced gravity.

Will a Powerball be generated when fighting uzaru Vegeta (automatically transforming Gohan until he gets a high enough level of Mastery?)
rokushiki??? Like what techniques specifically?? As most of them are useless in dragon Ball. Or are rip offs of techniques that already existed in the dragon Ball series. As soru is just a rip off of the after image technique. Geppo and taekkai are useless because they can fly already and it's pretty easy to do and bulletproof at a power level of 10. Shigan is also a useless technique because a high enough power level and you can do it fairly easily pretty sure Frieza did something like this to one of his subordinates. And what's the point of rankayu when you have Ki blasts??? The problem with Naruto techniques is most of them are either ripoffs of actual dragon Ball techniques or their elemental. As the Shadow clone techniques is just a rip off of the multi-form which has existed in the dragon Ball series since the 1980s. Might guys 8 Gates is just a rip off of kaio-ken and when he uses all eight Gates they even glow the same fucking color as kaio-ken. As the hair is the same red and everything. The problem with elemental techniques is they take a lot of skill and charge time in the dragon Ball universe and most characters don't bother with them because it's just much easier and quicker to just to throw a ki blast. So that pretty much eliminates 90% of all techniques from Naruto being useful in any way. And as far as baki the grappler or kenichi the mightiest disciple is there a series are completely focused on learning real material arts and there's no one there to teach the main character any of that stuff. As that stuff requires a master to teach.
 
Mostly the paper art to improve gohans ability to dodge, the point is currently he doesn't have access to kioken or flight and will need to use ki. The other techniques could allow Gohan to bootstrap his way to those techniques.
 
Mostly the paper art to improve gohans ability to dodge, the point is currently he doesn't have access to kioken or flight and will need to use ki. The other techniques could allow Gohan to bootstrap his way to those techniques.
Flying is really easy though in dragon Ball and it's one of the techniques that gets step by step explanation in the series. As basically all one has to do is push the energy out underneath them to fly. So using geppo to bootstrap into flying is retarded. And kaioken is kind of explained but he could simply ask Goku to tell him about the more intricate details of kaioken. As the technique in theory can't be that complicated as Goku managed to learn it and he's not particularly bright. Not to say that there isn't a degree of difficulty to it as there's probably a talent curve to picking it up.
 
Goku is an idiot savant for combat arts including ki, but for the next 2 years Gohan is going to be training alone. I'm not so much saying geppo for flight, but shigan as that type of training sucks but can be done alone. The paper art he can train against Saibamen until moving up to raditz and nappa when he is physically strong enough to survive mistakes. After the training he can ask Goku on how he does it but that will take some time to figure out. Plus side of he does a full heal after 8 hours of sleep plus the zenkai boost he can train like crazy.
 
02) ZENKAI BOOST
Bom dia pessoas,

Renan here, and before starting the chapter I would like to address some questions that several people asked.

1 -
In this story will the protagonist have a Harem?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: I hadn't thought of a romantic partner for the protagonist when I started writing this story, I saw some people suggesting Bulma from the future...
Comment which romantic pairing you would like for the protagonist. I promise to take everyone into consideration.

2 -
Will you consider Dragon Ball's expanded universe? Things like movies, OVAs, Games or Super Dragon Ball Heroes?
Short answer: I haven't decided yet.
Long Answer: My main guide for writing this story is the manga. Films from the Z saga, Fillers, etc.
I haven't decided whether to add them or not.

3 -
Will we see Zeno again?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: Zeno was just a tool to start the story and encourage the protagonist not to try to maintain the original Canon.

#From here on it is only for the English version of the story.#

4 -
Why do you get character and location names wrong so much?
Short answer: No I don't.
Long Answer: I'm Brazilian, so the names you're finding strange are the Brazilian version of the classic dubbing here.
I'm not going to get into the merits of discussing which is better, worse or whether we should all watch the original Japanese version without subtitles.
If you can help me as a Beta reader to replace the names from the BR dub with those from ENGLISH, send me a message, I will be eternally grateful.

5 -
English is not your first language?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: As I mentioned previously, I am Brazilian and English is not my first language.
That's why there are some phrases that may not make sense in English. Like the example below:
Pt-Br: "Segue reto toda vida."
Eng: "Stay straight all your life."
Real Meaning: When we want to give someone a direction, instead of telling them to go straight for a long time or until they pass through X number of squares, we prefer to tell the driver to go straight all their lives.
Well, how far does this path go? Nobody knows!

If I can get a Beta Reader for the English version maybe I can post the story twice a month.




His muscles burn, sweat pours down Gohan's face as he finishes the last few meters of the run. Your heart pounds in your chest, air rushes in and out of your lungs in heavy breaths. The determination in his eyes doesn't waver, he remembers why he's trying so hard.

Finally, Gohan finishes the race, panting and exhausted. He stops for a moment, hands resting on his knees, trying to normalize his breathing. The feeling of accomplishment washes over you, even if you know it's just the beginning of your training journey.

[+300 MIGHTY]
[+49 AGILITY]
[+47 Athletics Levels]

"That was harder than I thought." Gohan said, breathing tiredly on the floor. "Although this body is stronger than a normal human, I am carrying half a ton. which is awesome."

With a mental command, he opens the status window, contemplating his growth.

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 5,100
KP: 10,000
PL: 1,592.5
MIGHT: 1,020
AGILITY: 2,349
SPIRIT: 2,000
MENTAL: 1,001
Points: 100
[STATUS]

Gohan smiles proudly as he contemplates his progress.

"More than 300 in Power and almost 50 more in Agility. And it seems that the PL is the sum of the four attributes divided by four."

Gohan quickly removes the heavy clothing, now that his body has started to cool down after training his muscles are starting to hurt.

"Damn." He complains as he stands up, staggering and tired. "If only there was a way to speed up my recovery." The boy complains, thinking.

Gohan thought about other stories with gamer systems similar to his, trying to find a way to recover faster.

The first idea that came to his mind was potions and spells, but he didn't have access to any items or a store to buy them. The second idea was to sleep, but optimizing his training time and sleeping all the time would be a waste.
Meditation was the last thing he thought about.

The young man sits on the floor and with his mind focused, Gohan sits on the floor and begins to meditate.

With his eyes closed, he began to breathe deeply, trying to clear his mind and just focus on breathing. The feeling of peace and calm spread throughout his body as he gradually felt his energy returning.

Seconds turned into minutes, minutes turned into hours, but Gohan wasn't distracted. He continued to meditate, feeling that little by little, his strength was returning.

After the long time, he opened his eyes and felt a huge difference. In addition to the energy that had returned, the muscle pain was gone. He was ready to continue with the training.

[+67 SPIRIT]

[NEW ACTIVE SPECIAL ABILITY]

[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
Meditate Lv. 87/100 [Inept] = Extra Regen 8.7% of stamina per minute, Extra Regen 0.87% of KP and HP per minute.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]

"Thank you, meditation." Gohan muttered, smiling. "I needed this."

He stood up, satisfied with his recovery and the gain of Spirit. Turning to the clock at the entrance, Gohan realized that three hours had passed.

"Damn, less than an hour until I sleep… I better use training mode, since I'm going to sleep and heal any damage."

"Now… let's earn XP." Gohan says to himself proudly, ready to continue training.

[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000

[Choose your opponent]

"I think it's better to go with Raditz or Saibamen…" Said the young man, choosing his first opponent. "I think I'll go with the mutant cabbage."

[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]

"Ish…" Gohan mutters, staring at the floating phrase. "Someone is going to get sued by Capcom."

Without understanding exactly what is happening, Gohan is surprised by frantic and peculiar music that echoes from all directions.

"Did I get fucked?"

The music was strangely familiar, it sounded like a military march, combining elements of electronic music and orchestra.

"I remembered, this is invader zim's opening."

Gohan was sure that the situation couldn't get any weirder until a powerful announcer's voice was present.

[Get ready for explosive action!
From the darkest depths of space,
it is small,
it is green,
and it just needs soil and water to annihilate its enemies!
Give it up for the SAI-BA-MEN!]

In front of Gohan, what appeared to be particles of Pixel, one of Dragon Ball's classic monsters, materialized.

"EEEEEEK!" Yelled the strange alien creature.

The music began to fade until it disappeared completely, Gohan's heart pounded in his chest as he stared at the Saibamen. Even though his power level was higher, he couldn't get rid of his nervousness. He had never fought a real opponent in this life or the next.

[READY?]

[FIGHT!]

"GYIAAAAAH!" The monster screeched, charging at Gohan.

Instinctively, Gohan raised his arms to receive the attack, which was defended with a sharp thump.

[- 25 HP]

It hurt less than Gohan expected, he had no idea of his capabilities, as the newly incarnated was still getting used to his new body.

The Saibamen, realizing the strength of their opponent, took their distance and continued to attack, launching an acid beam towards Gohan.

Distressed, Gohan reacted by jumping back, but it was too late.

[- 525 HP]

"Shit!" Gohan cursed.

He hadn't been fast enough, drops of acid splashed and hit his left foot.

"Gi Gi Gi Gi." The strange creature laughed, launching another acid ray.

Even with his leg hurting, Gohan forced himself to jump to the side, this time the distance was greater, and he managed to avoid the Acid completely.

'At long range he will be difficult without any Ki attacks.' Thought the young man.

"Come here and face me like a man-. Or whatever the fuck mutant thingy you are." Gohan exclaims trying to insult the creature.

To his surprise, Saibamen got angry with the comment and lunged at the young man.

[- 75 HP]

This time Gohan quickly defended himself using only one arm and returned a punch to the creature's face.

[300 DMG]

"SUCK THAT MANGO!" exclaimed Gohan celebrating his first hit.

The Saibamen recovered quickly, realizing that the young man was distracted, and attacked him with his claw closed like a fist.

[- 100 HP]

"Urgh." The boy groaned in pain after receiving the first blow to the stomach.

The green mutant didn't stop with just one blow, he took advantage of the open guard and continued to attack with punches and kicks hitting his opponent's face and torso.

[- 95 HP]

[- 75 HP]

[- 100 HP]

"Change! Change! Change! Change!" Shouted the green alien.

[- 65 HP]

[- 127 HP]

[- 87 HP]


Even though he was beaten, Gohan stood his ground receiving the attacks, refusing to fall.

'I won't lose to this mutant cabbage.' Swore Gohan mentally

Determined to win, the young man grabbed the monster's arms.

"Igi?" He questioned the creature without understanding what was happening.

"You won't win!" Shouted Gohan, as Saibamen struggled trying to free himself.

Holding the Saibamen, Gohan tries to gather the ki within him.

"GYIAAAAAH!" The monster shouted, kicking the young man to release him.

[- 35 HP]

[- 55 HP]

[- 62 HP]

Ignoring the pain, Gohan notices a strange sensation, as if energy begins to accumulate in his chest, then his body begins to vibrate slightly and a white aura completely covers him.

"GIIIIIIIIII!" The Saibamen shouts angrily, this time biting Gohan's left hand.

Still focused, Gohan tries to force the energy in his chest to circulate throughout his body.

Saibamen, realizing the flow of Ki, give up attacking and try everything to free themselves, such as jumping, flying and throwing their bodies back. But nothing proves effective against the young man's iron grip.

The energy intensifies within him, until he feels ready to open his eyes.

"DIE DEMON!" Gohan shouts, headbutting the creature.

[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]

[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]

[1,200 DMG]

"ARGH!"

The monster shakes receiving the impact. Gohan lets go of the arms of the small creature who staggers back.

Taking advantage of the saberen being stunned, Gohan gathered his Ki again, this time focusing on his right arm. Without understanding why the process was faster than the previous attack, Gohan takes a step forward, aiming for the enemy's head.

"RECEIVE!" The Saiyan shouts, hitting his target squarely.

The wet impact sound is followed by a strange crack, but Gohan puts more force into the blow without noticing the peculiar noise coming from the Saibamen's skull.

"IAR-." The creature tried to scream in pain, but the impact of the fist cut off its exclamation.

[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]

[800 DMG]

Continuing the movement of the blow Gohan throws the small monster away, but before his opponent's body touches the ground he disappears in a cloud of pixels.

[K.O.]

"What?" He questions in surprise.

[YOU WIN!]

"I don't believe."

[TRAINING MODE OFF]

[+750 XP]
[+325 MIGHT]
[+198 AGILITY]
[+92 SPIRIT]
[+20 MENTAL]
[+25 Acrobatics Levels]
[+35 Athletics Levels]
[+24 Perception Levels]
[+75 Close Combat]
[+15 Intimidation]

[NEW ITEM]
COPPER ATTRIBUTE BEAN (+20%)
COPPER SKILL BEAN (+10)
COPPER SPECIAL ABILITIES (+10)

[NEW ITEM]

Gohan was surprised by the gains from the fight.

"Jesus Cristo… look at how many points I got." Says Gohan, happy with the result of the fight. "I even won items, it can't get any better."

[NEW KI SKILL]

[KI STRIKE]

With his jaw dropped, the young man couldn't contain his smile.

"I need to fight again."

[This feature is available once per day.]

"Damn it! It's no wonder that people in the original series prefer to enter here in pairs."

After his slight disappointment, Gohan's attention turned to the items he just received.

"Attribute beans are for improving one attribute, Strength, Agility, Spirituality and Mental. Then the others must be to improve my proficiency in what is described." theorized Gohan out loud.

But I'll save them now, I'll use them when I'm on my way to Namek.

[+1 MENTAL]

"I love it when the system agrees with me, but I will sleep now, I'm all screwed up from being beaten and burned with acid today."

[DBI:GG]

[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS IN A REGULAR BED]

[YOU'RE FULLY HEALED]

Gohan wakes up slightly surprised to have recovered from all the injuries and pain from training the day before, but he soon remembers that it was due to the gamer powers that Zeno gave him.

"I was kind of expecting that, but it's still something-." Before Gohan could finish speaking, something touched his leg, taking him by surprise. "HAAAA!"

Scared, Gohan looked around looking for who was playing a trick on him, but he was alone.

"What-." Once again he is interrupted when something touches his arm this time. "I got."

Holding something long and furry, the young man finally realizes what was bothering him.

"A tail?" He questioned the young man in disbelief at the situation. "Do I have a tail?"

After a few minutes 'playing' with his new member, the young man decided to return to his training.

"I will leave the tail wrapped around my waist like other Saiyans don't. And now, let's see my progress."

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.750/1.000]
HP: 6,725
KP: 10,795
PL: 1,768.25
MIGHT: 1,345
AGILITY: 2,547
SPIRIT: 2,159
MENTAL: 1,022
Points: 100
[STATUS]

"My power level rose by 175.75 points in one day… it's not little, but I expected more."

Not wanting to spend too much time complaining, Gohan proceeded to evaluate his skill gains.

[SKILLS]
-General Skills:
Acrobatics Lv. 26/100 [
Inept ]
Athletics Lv. 83/100 [
Inept ]
Perception Lv. 25/100 [
Inept ]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]

-Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 76/100 [
Inept ]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]

-Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]

-Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Intimidation Lv. 16/100 [
Inept ]
[SKILLS]

"My close combat has gone up a lot. Was that why my nervousness disappeared in the middle of the fight? Am I learning as I fight?" Gohan murmurs, examining his progress. "Will anything happen if I achieve 100% in any skill?"

[KI SKILLS]
-General Ki Techniques:

-Offensive Ki Techniques:
Ki Strike Lv. 22/100 [
Inept ]
Cost:
250 KP Effect: Adds 22% of your MIGHT on physical attack .

-Defensive Ki Techniques:
[KI SKILLS]

Gohan couldn't keep the smile off his face as he examined the first Ki ability he learned to use during combat.

"That must be for my human perk, Human Adaptability."

[PERKS]
-Hidden Potential: A great power lies dormant within you
-Human Adaptability: Greater capacity for learning new techniques and strategizing in combat.
-Zenkai Boost: Become significantly stronger after recovering from near-death experiences.
[PERKS]

"I need to take advantage of this, who knows, maybe I can teach myself to fly like Gohan did for Videl at the beginning of the Majin Buu saga."

Gohan lies on the ground, trying to recall how the original taught Videl how to use Ki.

'It's about controlling one's own Ki.' The voice of the original character echoed in his mind. 'You have to stay calm and breathe deeply…'

He closed his eyes and began to breathe deeply, focusing on feeling the energy within him.

'And little by little you will release the power that is within you.'

With the last sentence, he raised his hands as if he were holding a small ball in front of his torso.

Gohan felt warm, vivid Ki energy floating within him, as if it were traveling through the channels of his body until it reached his hands. He opened his eyes and saw a sphere of warm, translucent energy in the middle of his hands, illuminating the room with a faint glow. The feeling was incredible, as if I was touching pure energy.

He began to manipulate the Ki sphere between his hands as if it were an air balloon, making it move according to his wishes. He smiled, excited about the progress he had made.

"I think I can learn to fly now." Gohan comments, manipulating the Ki sphere. "Can I make it bigger?"

Focusing more energy into his hands, the Ki sphere expanded and its color became more solid.

"Interesting…" He says, pointing the sphere forward. "Can you shoot-."

At the same time, the sphere flew like an energy projectile.

In a few meters, the energy sphere falls to the ground without leaving a mark or making any noise.

"Ok…"

[NEW KI SKILL]

[KI BLAST]

"Didn't expect that one."

[+12 SPIRIT]

"And this confirms that I train Spirit using Ki."

[KI SKILL]
Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [ Novice ]
Cost:
500 KP Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 0.1% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
[KI SKILL]

"Weak and expensive, but I bet it will be powerful in the future." Said the young man taking a deep breath. "But for now, let's focus on flying."

Focusing again on his flight training, Gohan takes a deep breath, bringing his Ki to zero once again.

The energy circulated through his body again, and he slowly felt his body lifting off the ground, as if he were being pushed by an invisible force.

Even sitting down, Gohan felt free when his body was lifted off the ground.

[NEW KI SKILL]

[FLIGHT]

"UUUUUH!" exclaimed Gohan, opening his eyes. "This is amazing!" Celebrated the young man floating twenty centimeters off the ground.

The freedom of being in the air was incomparable, he felt like a bird flying freely in the sky without the pressure of the ground below. He walked around the temple getting used to the power until an idea appeared in his mind.

"How high can I go?"

Gohan began to fly upwards in a straight line, excited by the feeling of freedom and power beneath his body. The wind buzzed in his ears and the sensation of speed exhilarated him.

However, his enthusiasm was abruptly cut short when he felt his ki deplete.

"Hmm?" Questioned the young man who had been stuck in the air.

Quickly Gohan looked down, seeing the entrance as a small dot in the distance.

"I got fucked…"

His body began to free fall.

Panic took over him as he realized he was rapidly losing altitude. His heart beat wildly in his chest, and the fear of imminent death paralyzed him. The landscape below loomed dangerously close.

"I can't die, at least not like this. It will be the most pathetic death in Dragon Ball history."

Gohan closed his eyes, trying to avoid the fate that seemed inevitable.

But then, in a flash of desperation and determination, Gohan managed to access his power again, stopping 2 meters above the ground with his face facing the ground.

"Phew." Celebrated the young man.

Gohan's Ki had recovered enough to activate his power of flight once again, however the little Ki he had recovered did not last long.

"FUCK!"

[+5 SPIRIT]

Resulting in the young warrior falling face first onto the ground.

"Okay… there's no point in just having the power, I have to know how to use it."

[KI SKILLS]
Flight Lv. 15/100 [ Inept ]
Cost:
50 KP/Minute Effect: Fly at speed 7.5% of your running speed .
[KI SKILLS]

"50 KP per minute is a good amount, it's no wonder Goku used the cloud to move around for so long." Gohan comments, analyzing his flight power. "But without KP there's no point in me staring at this table, let's get the weight clothes on and train."

[DBI:GG]

After working out, running and meditating to regain his strength, Gohan stares at his gains before activating training mode once again.

[+118 MIGHTY]
[+35 AGILITY]
[+15 SPIRIT]
[+17 Athletics Levels]
[ Athletics Reached Adep Rank ]
[+13 Meditate Levels]
[Meditate Reached Adep Rank]

"Rank Up?" Curious, Gohan opened the windows to see the changes.

[SKILLS]
General Skills:
Acrobatics Lv. 26/100 [
Inept ]
Athletics Lv. 1/100 [
Adep ]
Perception Lv. 25/100 [
Inept ]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]

Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 76/100 [
Inept ]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]

Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]

Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [
Inept ]
Intimidation Lv. 16/100 [
Inept ]
[SKILLS]

[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]​
Meditate Lv. 1/100 [ Adep ] = Extra Regen 10% of stamina per minute, Extra Regen 1% of KP and HP per minute.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]

"Meditate had a clear change, but what did I gain from the Athletics Rank Up?" Questions Gohan without noticing the changes. "I think it's better to focus on what gives me a return"

[TRAINING MODE ON]

[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200 [V]
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]

"Raditz has the same power level as a Saibamen, so it shouldn't be difficult to defeat him now that I'm stronger."

[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]

An aggressive guitar riff started playing followed by drums.

"What song is that?" The young man complains. "It's too fast for me to understand with my English telecourse."

Although the song was familiar, the speed at which the vocalist sang made it impossible for him to recognize it until a specific phrase was sung.

[Payback's a bitch motherfucker]

"Slayer?"

Before receiving the answer, the announcer's voice was present.

[Tonight, a true Saiyan warrior steps into the ring.
He's here to conquer, not compete.
Give it up for the ruthless,
the relentless…
RADITZ!]

"Finally, a chance to get revenge on Kakarot's spawn." Loudly shouted the figure of Raditz.

Raditz lifted his chin proudly, his cold, calculating eyes staring at Gohan with disdain. His stance is imposing, his muscles tense beneath his fighting armor. A smug smile adorned his lips, revealing his unwavering confidence. His piercing gaze conveyed the clear message of a veteran warrior ready to fight to the death.

Gohan felt a chill down his spine, a strange fear and trepidation took over him. His heart sped up and his breathing became heavy. Carefully observing the smiling warrior in front of him.

"I'm stronger than before, why is he scaring me more than Saibaman?"

To the young warrior's surprise, the saiyan in front of him smiled.

"You understand me?"

"Of course I understand you, you bastard son of a low-class warrior."

Caught by surprise, Gohan was stunned by the being's response.

[READY?]

"Wait-."

[FIGHT!]

Without waiting, Raditz charged at Gohan, kicking the boy away.

[- 515 HP]

Falling away, Gohan felt anger bubble up inside him as he stood up. Raditz's cold eyes analyzed Gohan with contempt as he teased him.

"You really are pathetic. A weak and useless hybrid, without the courage of pure-blood Saiyans."

Gohan clenched his fists, ignoring the venomous words echoing in his mind. With a ferocious roar, he charged at Raditz, delivering quick and precise blows.

Raditz laughed loudly, dodging the attacks with ease.

"It's pathetic to see how you try to pass yourself off as a warrior, when in reality you're just a mere brat." Says Raditz, punching his nephew in the face.

[- 511 HP]

Gohan tried to defend himself from Raditz's sequence of blows, but something was different, Gohan was hesitating more than in the fight against Saibamen.

[- 175 HP]

[- 189 HP]

[- 215 HP]

Each Saiyan's punch took advantage of the young man's hesitation, leaving Gohan on the defensive trying to stay on his feet.

Raditz, with a cocky smile on his face, spoke as he easily dodged a desperate kick from Gohan.

"You're stronger than before and more determined to win, boy. But you lack the fury and bloodlust I felt when you destroyed my ship."

Gohan stopped, amazed at the level of consciousness of the being in front of him.

"The original Gohan may have been a crybaby, but when cornered he was capable of fighting with the will to kill."

Every punch, every kick from Raditz seemed to drain the strength of the young hybrid, who still tried to resist as best he could.

"You can't even defend yourself. You are weak, a real waste of Saiyan blood." sneered Raditz.

[- 327 HP]

Raditz knocks Gohan to the ground, laughing at his incompetence.

"You're so deplorable it's hilarious." Mocks the veteran warrior. "Even though you have a powerful body with extraordinary gifts and a system with infinite potential, you are still just a pathetic worm."

"How do you know?" Questions the young man, once again surprised by the level of consciousness of the being in front of him.

Instead of answering the question, Raditz smiled evilly as he raised his hand to perform his ultimate technique.

"Saturday Crush!"

Gohan tries to get up, but his legs give out, in a desperate attempt he tries to throw his body to the side, but it's too late.

[- 3,000 HP]

Raditz's beam hit Gohan squarely, knocking the young man down once again with an explosion of pain that spread throughout his body. The ground felt hot beneath him and the pain seemed to spread in bursts through his back and legs. Gohan screamed in vain, trying to ease the agony that flooded him.

The colors began to fade around him, and Gohan's vision began to blur. He could hear Raditz's arrogant laugh, but the voice seemed distorted and resembled more of an echo than the voice of a living being.

Gohan's vision darkened even more, and the pain began to intensify. He could feel the blood rushing through his veins, and the sensation that he was falling apart from the inside out.

"No... I can't... Let me..." Murmured Gohan, fainting due to the intensity of the pain and the lack of oxygen.

[YOU'RE OUT OF HP]

[YOU BLACKED OUT]

[DBI:GG]

The was still high on the horizon, even though it had been two days for Gohan, for his parents it had only been a few minutes since he left to train.

Chi-Chi was sitting next to Goku's bed, her eyes fixed on her husband's face. He was hurt, but his smile still radiated an infectious energy.

Goku, with his body bandaged and his eyes half-closed, tried to cheer Chi-Chi up. She looked worried, and her hands were shaking slightly. Gohan had disobeyed Chi-Chi's order and left to train.

When he left, she was furious, but now the anger had given way to sadness and apprehension.

"Chichi." Goku said in a soft voice. "Gohan is a good boy. He has a strong heart and is determined to become stronger to help bring back the people who died defending the land. You should be proud of him."

Chichi sighed tiredly.

"I know, Goku. But he's so young and he's already facing so many dangers out there. And you… you're also stuck here in this bed… I don't know how to deal with all this."

Goku made a significant effort, but managed to free his hand and place it on Chi-Chi's shoulder.

"We face challenges to protect those we love. Gohan will learn a lot from these experiences. And you, taking care of me here in the hospital, is also a form of protection. You're amazing, you know that?"

Chi-Chi looked at Goku fondly.

"I just want him to be safe, Goku. Our family is the most important thing to me."

Goku smiled.

"And we're going to be okay, Chichi." Replied the smiling warrior.

The two remained silent for a moment, sharing the love and concern they felt for each other and their family.
[DBI:GG]

[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]

[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]

Gohan opened his eyes slowly, blinking against the bright light that hit him. His head throbbed like it was being hammered.

He tried to move, but a wave of pain shot through his body, pinning him to the ground.

"Damn it." Complained the young man. "I was beaten like a buggy dog in winter."

Getting used to the pain Gohan gets up and repairs the other windows in the system.

[+200 XP]
[+75 MIGHT]
[+28 AGILITY]
[+12 SPIRIT]
[+21 Acrobatics Levels]
[+4 Athletics Levels]
[+15 Perception Levels]
[+ 24 Close Combat]
[Close Combat Reached Adep Rank]

The gains were much smaller with the loss of Gohan, the XP was not enough for him to finally level up and now that Athletics was in Adept, his growth slowed precipitously.

"In addition to a few gains, I'm all broken and bruised." Complains Gohan irritated. "I wanted at least one good news today."

After venting his frustration, Gohan notices a window that he had unintentionally ignored.

[ZENKAI BOOST(20%)]

"Huh?" Questions Gohan, still groggy from the pain. "Status!" Shouted the curious young man.

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.950/1.000]
HP: 9,225
KP: 13,230
PL: 2,214
MIGHT: 1,845
AGILITY: 3,132
SPIRIT: 2,646
MENTAL: 1,233

Points: 100
[STATUS]

"JESUS BLOOD HAS POWER!" The surprised young man shouts. "I went over two thousand with Power Boost alone?"

With such growth, the young man thought about going into training mode and summoning Nappa or even Vegeta, but as soon as the table appeared he stopped to think.

"The growth of Zenkai is to multiply the stats I have, not add them… so I better try to gain as much as possible before going to face Nappa and Vegeta."

[+ 5 MENTAL]

"Looks like someone agrees with me." Comment Gohan smiling. "Now enough nonsense and let's increase my training weight."



Boa noite pessoas,

Just to reiterate the request, if you are interested in being a Beta reader, leave a message. And don't forget to comment on which romantic pairing you would prefer for the protagonist.

And if you want to talk to me you can find me on X (Twitter), search for renanp1m.

I'm looking for more opinions about this system. I need help with the damage part, for now I'm thinking about abandoning showing damage and just describing the physical pain and results of blows like bleeding, broken bones and other things.

COMMENTS:

-WarMachine78(Webnovel):

Impressive looking forward to more of Gamer Gohan Si Adventures in DBZ verse world.
Super Bolic Time Chamber aka Hyperbolic Time Chamber.
Guessing we're going to see an unexpected Super Saiyan Gohan on Namek planet? Continue on Cheers!
-Renan:
Thank you for the compliment, but unfortunately I won't answer your question because I don't want to give spoilers.

-Akuma-Heika(Questionablequesting):

'Gohan's soul was destroyed at the end of the Saiyan saga' How?
-Renan:
Unfortunately, I won't answer this question either for spoiler reasons.
 
Wow that Raditz construct beatdown was a wake up call to Gamer Gohan in the Hyperbolic time chamber and still very eerie in sense that Uncle Raditz hasn't officially arrived yet or nor has Vegeta and Nappa either.
I might have re read to still where in the Saiyan saga Gohan Si is in again.
But I definitely want see a super Saiyan 4 Gohan ,SSJ 3 Gohan, and Beast Gohan for Gohan Si in the future upcoming battles. If possible?
Continue on
Cheers!l
 
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Hmm, good to see Gohan getting some gains and attempting to take things seriously. Though it would appear he got a much needed wake up call regarding the difference between what is basically a newborn PL 1200 and a veteran PL 1200. Skill, Technique, Intent... Even for Saiyans fighting isn't just about raw power. I'm looking forward to seeing how he'll grow in the coming chapters. How he might change from the original Gohan. Personally, I'm hoping he keeps the tail and just learns how to master his transformation like Vegeta did.

Hmm, as for potential future love interests? I would say no to *Future!* Bulma. She'd be old enough to be his grandma by that period of time... Though to be fair she DOES look good for her age. Honestly, Videl was cute and what little we saw of her personality was great, so I wouldn't mind her staying as his love interest. Maybe she could even grow up to be the next generation of powerful humans?

You could flip things around and have Bra/Bulla be born first rather than Trunks (after all small enough changes could easily change when Bulma and Vegeta get married), then have future Bra/Bulla be the one who comes back in time. Heh, then *current* Gohan could date a girl slightly older than him. While Bra/Bulla could have had a crush on her teacher *future* Gohan, but was turned down. Now in the past with a Gohan closer to her in age? That could be an interesting interaction between the two.

and still very eerie in sense that Uncle Raditz hasn't officially arrived yet or nor has Vegeta and Nappa either.
What are you talking about? At this point in the story Raditz, Vegeta, and Nappa have already appeared. Gohan is currently preparing to go to Namek...
 
raditz power level is not 1200 and it's a common misconception. As his actual power level is 1500 or 1600 as he has two listings in Daizenshuu 7 so his power level is over 1200 and not 1200.
 
I rewatched the film Zangya appears today at lunch.
If there is no other time when she appears, than I think she is very shallow as a character.
Which isn't bad, it gives me room to work with her however I want.

Ps: If you have any other girl suggestions just let me know, this is an interesting topic to research.
 
I also think you should make your own original character.For the Harem And make them a demon Or a 1/2 demon we don't get enough of those in dragon ball z. That way, the Z Fighters. will have finally get a Magic user on there team.
 
I also think you should make your own original character.For the Harem And make them a demon Or a 1/2 demon we don't get enough of those in dragon ball z. That way, the Z Fighters. will have finally get a Magic user on there team.

I'm going to take a look at demons in dragon ball.
Any suggestions on where to look?
 
Seems fun so far, looking forward to what you come up with next, just a shame you went with the typical aggressive "entertain me or I kill you" ROB.

FeMC wise no one beats Bulma, she's smart, rich and supports the one she's with even if they are a worse genocidal mad man than Hitler. She can also make better tech than anyone else can (she made a shrink ray when she was 16 and fixed a space ship when she was 6), only one who comes close to her in utility and intellect is Android 21 and she doesn't exist outside of one very specific verse.
 
Seems fun so far, looking forward to what you come up with next, just a shame you went with the typical aggressive "entertain me or I kill you" ROB.

FeMC wise no one beats Bulma, she's smart, rich and supports the one she's with even if they are a worse genocidal mad man than Hitler. She can also make better tech than anyone else can (she made a shrink ray when she was 16 and fixed a space ship when she was 6), only one who comes close to her in utility and intellect is Android 21 and she doesn't exist outside of one very specific verse.

I agree that Bulma is the best girl for most fans(Me included).
And one the best girls in dragon ball verse for everyone.
But I won't separate her from Vegeta, no matter how tempting it may be.
 
03) New Techniques and New Consequences
Bom dia pessoas,

Look at that, more than seven thousand words in today's chapter huh... but it's better not to get used to it.

This chapter was very difficult to write because despite being an important part of the protagonist's training, I imagine it would be a bit boring and repetitive for you to read something like this.

Training-Training-Fight-LevelUp-Training-Training-Fight-LevelUp

That's why I tried to get rid of most of them in this chapter.

Ps: There is a reference to Anime and Tokusatsu in this chapter. Can you find out what they are?




"Today is the day!" Said Gohan feeling hopeful. "Today I will defeat Raditz."

After the defeat against his uncle and the Zenkai Boost he received, Gohan spent 7 days training in the suit that weighed 1 ton inside the Time room. He was so focused on increasing his power that he only registered the increase in Attribute.

[+2,127 MIGHT]
[+758 AGILITY]
[+1,389 SPIRIT]
[+289 MENTAL]

Strength and Spirit rose a lot during the mornings.

He trained his physique by doing Saitama's routine several times each day, and now that he was stronger, he also was practicing flying and the few Ki techniques he had in between exercises. At the end of the day he fought the Saibamen.

It's a shame that for each victory against an enemy he had already defeated in Training Mode, he only gave 1% of XP. That's why it took him 7 days to reach level 2.

[+ 1 Level]

His Agility, Mental and skills increased due to an idea that Gohan put into practice. Extend his fights against Saibamen and practice while fighting. Things like dodge, ki techniques, and damage resistance.

The growth of skills and attributes during the fight is greater than when he was alone.

"I should have brought Krillin." The young man murmurs loudly. "My training gains would be better, he could have taught me the Kienzan and he would also get stronger."

With the new level Gohan also gained +100 attribute points that he could invest wherever he wanted, but he decided to save them, what he gained that really caught his attention were more items.

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]

The young man chose Silver Special Abilities Bean, he was frustrated that the meditation was taking time to level up.

[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]​
Meditate Lv. 24/100 [ Adept ] = Extra Regen 100% of stamina per minute, Regen 4.8% of KP and HP per minute.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]

When the silver bean manifested in his hand, he didn't think twice and ate it thinking about increasing his meditation points.

"It tastes like mint… and metal."

[+76 Meditate Levels]
[Meditate Reached Expert Rank]
[+24 Meditate Levels]


[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]​
Meditate Lv. 24/100 [ Expert ] = Regen 100% of stamina per minute, Regen 20% KP and HP per minute. Passive regen KP and HP 0.24% per minute.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]

"Do I recover all my HP and KP in 5 minutes?" Questions the surprised young man. "And do I regain a little life even without meditating? Nice!"

But the young man's joy is short-lived, Gohan remembers how he felt about losing against Raditz. Despite the bitter taste in his mouth, the defeat motivated him to train more fervently, he wanted to be as strong as possible to defeat his enemies and he worked hard to do so.

In addition to having become stronger with this 1 week of training, Gohan had also realized that he had not lost because he was weaker than his opponent.

He had lost for another reason.

"There's no point in marinating in sadness and misery, let's see what I have before the rematch against my uncle."

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 2 [1,052.5/2,000]
HP: 19,860
KP: 20,175
PL: 3,356

MIGHT: 3,972
AGILITY: 3,890
SPIRIT: 4,035
MENTAL: 1,527

Points: 300
[STATUS]

With his morale boosted by his attributes in the Status window, Gohan didn't hesitate and started training mode by calling out Raditz.

[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]

Slayer's music started playing, followed by the same introduction from the announcer as the saiyan materialized in front of him.

Raditz appears with his arms crossed, looking arrogantly at Gohan.

"You've come for another beating, you dirty-blooded mongrel."

[READY?]

Gohan is angered by Raditz's words, but manages to center himself and regain his calm.

[FIGHT!]

Raditz charges at Gohan and attacks with punches and kicks, but Gohan defends himself and dodges all the attacks with ease.

"It seems even an insignificant worm can learn a few tricks." Raditz growls scornfully at the young man.

Realizing that Gohan had no problem keeping up with him in hand-to-hand combat, the veteran warrior moves away and fires a burst of Ki Blast.

Without fear or hesitation in his gaze, Gohan repelled all the energy spheres with his hands.

Raditz's eyes widen, surprised by the younger warrior's skills.

"You may be stronger than before, but that's still not enough to win."

Gohan smiles and answers his opponent.

"Yes you are right."

Raditz freezes at Gohan's response, but then laughs in celebration.

"Finally! You useless brat." He laughs mockingly. "Did you finally understand?"

"I didn't lose you because I was weak." Accept Gohan. "I lost because I was scared."

His opponent crosses his arms and nods in agreement.

"But it wasn't the fear of facing someone stronger who could kill me." Continues Gohan "But it was the fear of taking the life of a sentient being."

In Gohan's first fight, fear made him lose confidence and become distracted. This ended up giving openings for his opponent to exploit while he hesitated to attack and even defend himself.

"You're less of a fool than I thought." Praises Raditz in a sarcastic tone. "But knowing your weakness is one thing, eliminating it is another-."

"No!" Exclaims Gohan cutting his opponent. "I will not become a cold-blooded killer. Just like the original Gohan, I will live with this fear for the rest of my life."

Confused by the young man's response, Raditz stares at him with a raised eyebrow.

Gohan assumes a wide base with his legs and summons his Ki that covers him.

"But how do you intend to fight against those who do not hesitate to kill?" Raditz questions, his voice thick with disbelief. "Are you going to let fear take over your life?"

Gohan closes his eyes and takes a deep breath, focusing on his insides. When he opens them again, a new determination shines in his eyes.

"I will not allow fear to dominate me." Gohan declares, clasping his hands at his sides in a posture familiar to any Dragon Ball fan. "Instead, I will use this fear as a constant reminder of the value of life. Every blow I strike will be with the awareness that I am protecting the weak who cannot defend by themselves, not just destroying my enemy."

Raditz lets out a short, dismissive laugh.

"Foolish, naive and hypocritical to boot." He scoffs. "You are doomed to fail."

Despite the insults, Gohan remains impassive and responds by continuing his technique.

"Kame…" A sphere of light formed in the middle of Gohan's hands.

Surprised by the response Raditz assumed his stance raising both hands towards Gohan, bringing his Ki to the surface preparing his counter attack.

"Hame…" The glow of the sphere intensified as the sound of energy boomed through the air.

"Double Mondey!" The veteran warrior shouts, firing two rays of light, one from each hand, towards his enemy.

"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouts, finishing performing the most iconic technique in Dragon Ball and perhaps all anime.

[NEW KI SKILL]

[Kamehameha]

The two beams of energy crossed the air colliding between the two combatants, creating an explosion of light and heat that raised a dense cloud of dust.

The scene transformed into a mix of light and shadows, with the white light from the explosion illuminating the battlefield for a brief moment.

But once the dust began to clear, it became clear that Raditz's technique was more powerful. His energy beams began to engulf Gohan's, absorbing it and increasing its intensity, swallowing the place where the young hybrid was completely.

When the dust finally cleared, Raditz was surprised. He looked at the spot where Gohan was, but there were no signs of life.

"This is impossible! No matter how powerful the enemy is, there is no way a system construct can kill the user." Raditz said in distress.

"Thanks for the info." Whispered a voice behind Raditz.

The veteran tries to turn around quickly, but halfway through something hits his side.

[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[1,700 DMG]


Gohan's fist hit Raditz's liver, causing the Saiyan to double over in pain.

"Arghh." The older warrior groaned.

The force of the blow sent him staggering backwards, his Ki decreasing as he struggled to regain his balance. Raditz looked at Gohan, his eyes filled with fury and disbelief.

"How…how did you do that?" he gasped, grabbing your waist.

Gohan was standing, his heart pounding in his chest, staring at his agonizing enemy in front of him. He had never felt so alive, so powerful.

"From the beginning I didn't intend to win in the Ki contest." He said simply, his voice firm and unwavering. "It was just a distraction to catch you off guard, something easy since you don't know how to detect Ki."

Raditz sneered, his anger turning into contempt.

"And what's the point if you're not going to finish me-."

"KI STRIKE!" Gohan shouts, invoking his technique and cutting Raditz with a punch to the face.

[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[27,664 DMG]


Raditz's face received the full force of Gohan's devastating punch.

His features contort in agony as the force of the blow sent him stumbling backwards, his legs curled beneath him. The sound of bones breaking echoed through the air as Raditz's face was severely deformed by the force of the punch.

His nose was crushed, his cheekbones broken, and his jaw dislocated, leaving him with a grotesque, swollen face that bore little resemblance to the proud Saiyan warrior he had once been.

[K.O.]

Gohan's body was drenched in sweat, despite not having been hurt he was exhausted and low on Ki. He fell to the ground, panting as he tried to process what had just happened.

[YOU WIN!]

With a deep sigh, he closed his eyes and allowed himself a moment of rest. The weight of the victory was overwhelming and he couldn't help but feel pride and accomplishment.

"I did it…" He whispered to himself, a smile spreading across his face. "I defeated that asshole."

[+1,200 XP]
[+ 1 Level]
[+127 MIGHT]
[+325 AGILITY]
[+87 SPIRIT]
[+27 MENTAL]
[+7 Ki Strike]
[+7 Acrobatics Levels]
[+5 Athletics Levels]
[+3 Perception Levels]
[+72 Stealth]
[+ 13 Close Combat]
[+7 Intimidation]

[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]

"Not bad, but I thought I would gain something more interesting by winning this fight."

[You have defeated a named character.]

"I think I spoke too soon."

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Double Mondey Ki Skill
+ 25 Intimidation
+ 50 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]

Gohan looked at the reward options with interest.

Double Mondey was not a unique technique that caught his attention as it was similar to most continuous KI attacks, the points in Intimidation he had several ways to obtain, but now the points in Oozaru...

The boy was not sure if he would be able to master the super Saiyan form before he got to Namek, so he made sure he got a power boost just in case.

"Maybe if I reach a high level, will I be able to control myself like Vegeta?"

Motivated by the X10 bonus from the primate form, Gohan chooses the gorilla option.

[+50 Oozaru]

As soon as he received the points, another window opened.

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]

"Nice"

Excited, he opened the Status window and saw that it was true and took out a silver attribute bean and stored it.

"I think I can face Nappa tomorrow." The young man commented, getting up and walking towards his bed.

[DBI:GG]
The next day Gohan trains intensely in the time room, focusing on honing his most powerful ki attack.

"KAME… HAME… HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

The beam flew in the opposite direction of the time room's entrance as the floor vibrated with the energy it released.

Smiling, Gohan could feel his Spirit increasing with each repetition. He was determined to master this attack as he knew it would be a powerful weapon against his enemies.

"KAME… HAME… HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouted, launching a wave of powerful energy in the direction opposite the entrance to the time room.

The attack was devastating, and Gohan felt a great sense of satisfaction. He repeated the movement several times, each time with more precision and strength.

[+1 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Expert Rank]

"Finally!" Exclaimed Gohan, falling to the floor.

The whole day of training finally paid off when the young man reached Expert Rank in his new attack.

After a few minutes of meditating, Gohan gets up, already choosing his new opponent.

[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]

Gohan was already ready for a bombastic song, which would match the great warrior's style, but he was surprised by the whisper of a voice.

[Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the... FLOOOOOR!]

At least until the music explodes throughout the room followed by the announcer's introduction.

[The embodiment of pure, Saiyan brutality!
Behold the indomitable,
the unstoppable,
the bald and the brutal...
NAPPA!]

Nappa materialized in a cloud of pixels, he was huge, with imposing musculature that seemed almost dazzling. His presence was intimidating, exuding a power that Gohan had never seen before.

"It seems that Kakoroto's spawn decided to face me." Nappa said, smiling mischievously. "You don't stand a chance brat."

[READY?]

Gohan was Unaffected by bravado thanks to his experience losing and then winning against Raditz. He knew he needed to act quickly before Nappa easily dismantled him.

[FIGHT!]

Gohan and Nappa charged at each other, the two warriors clashed exchanging punches with intensity that reverberated through the ground around them.

"So you only needed to be beaten by your uncle to become a man, you brat." Nappa comments, taking a step forward and dodging a kick.

An icy fury takes over Gohan, who spins his body, punching Nappa in the stomach, throwing him away.

"Shut up and fight, you fucking The Rock clone with a mustache." Gohan grumbled, facing his opponent.

Nappa frowned and brought his Ki to the surface.

"Pathetic Earthling, I will break all your bones."

Furious, Nappa attacked the boy, starting a brutal and violent combo of punches and kicks, Gohan in turn retaliated in kind, each of the warriors was trying to dominate the other, establishing the rhythm of the battle.

What followed was a display of violence and brutality that looked more like two beasts trying to kill each other than two warriors fighting.

[125 DMG]

[- 375 HP]

[187 DMG]

[- 407 HP]

[215 DMG]
[- 431 HP]

Gohan tried to avoid Nappa's blows while attacking, but Nappa was faster, and stronger than Raditz. Nappa's punches and kicks impacted Gohan's body, while the young man's caused less damage.

[157 DMG]

[- 389 HP]

[204 DMG]

[- 445 HP]

'If I continue like this I will lose.'

Changing strategy, Gohan crosses his arms in front of his body, receiving Nappa's next kick in the chest.

[- 78 HP]

Gohan received little damage thanks to his raised guard and took advantage of the impact of the blow to jump back, already falling into the posture of his most powerful attack.

"Kamehameha!" Shouted the young man.

The attack caught Nappa by surprise, the veteran warrior was unable to dodge but managed to raise his guard and receive the attack directly.

[574 DMG]

When the dust caused by the attack's explosion settled, Nappa's form was revealed with pieces of destroyed armor, but his body contained few injuries.

"Not bad brat, I almost felt that one." The older warrior laughed mockingly.

"Damn it."Gohan grumbles irritably.

'The attack was good, but this guy is just very resilient.'' Gohan thought to himself. 'And since he's also faster and more experienced than me… I'm fucked.'

"ROAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!" Nappa roared, firing a blast of ki from his mouth.

As he was lost in his thoughts, Gohan was taken by surprise.

[- 5,000 HP]

"Co-coward." Gohan complains, losing consciousness. "Cheater."

[YOU'RE OUT OF HP]

"WHO CARES?! I WON" shouted a bombastic voice. "HAHAHAHAHA!"

[YOU BLACKED OUT]

[DBI:GG]


[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]

"Shit." Gohan groans in pain, standing up.

[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]

"This is the window of shame." Said the young man, getting up discouraged.

Despite losing the fight, Gohan quickly regained his focus to what he received from the fight yesterday.

[+800 XP]

[+375 MIGHT]
[+128 AGILITY]
[+212 SPIRIT]
[+21 MENTAL]

[+3 Kamehameha]

[+12 Acrobatics Levels]
[+24 Athletics Levels]
[+55 Perception Levels]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+35 Close Combat]
[+ 15 Ranged Combat]

"Damn! Adept Rank skills have risen a lot. Is it because I used them in a fight against someone stronger than me?"

[ZENKAI BOOST(30%)]

"Even the zenkai boost was greater than with Raditz."

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 3 [3,052/4,000]
HP: 30,855
KP: 29,115
PL: 4,922

MIGHT: 6,171
AGILITY: 5,646
SPIRIT: 5,823
MENTAL: 2,048

Points: 400

[STATUS]

"I'm stronger than Nappa, but if I mess around like I did yesterday, he'll win." Said Gohan analyzing his Status. "And if you take into account that Nappa is 'probably' dumber than me… his Might must be way bigger than mine."

Putting on his training clothes Gohan pondered what he could have done differently to have won the fight against Nappa. He knew that even though he was defeated, there were some things he could have done better. He remembered how Nappa had dominated him with his brute strength and his ability to resist damage.

"That guy was practically a wall of stones." Gohan complains, remembering the fight.

Even taking damage, Nappa received Gohan's blows without hesitation, making Gohan feel weak and desperate.

"Is there a technique to simulate all that resilience?" The young man theorized out loud.

Developing a defense technique wouldn't be a problem for the Saiyan hybrid thanks to his perks, but how would he train defense without someone to attack him?

"Hmm." Murmured Gohan, looking at the half-pound suit he had already abandoned. "I think I how…"

[DBI:GG]
With a sneer, Nappa faced Gohan head on, ready to fight the young man once again. But this time the young man smiled back full of confidence, as if he was sure he would win.

Annoyed by his confidence, Nappa did what came naturally to him, he began to insult his opponent.

"You're smiling too much for a worm who went to sleep with his ass beaten yesterday."

"And you talk too loud for a bald old limp dick asshole."

Nappa's eyes widened at the little warrior's statement.

"What did you just say?" He roared as his body was engulfed by his Ki.

"I mean there are only two reasons why someone so old and grumpy would go around the galaxy destroying everything without ever picking up some women." Said Gohan, taking a fighting stance and bringing his ki to the surface. "The first is that he is impotent."

"And what's the second one?" Nappa asks, about to explode with rage.

"He needs courage to declare himself to his charming prince who he lives with."

"I KILL YOU!" Shouted Nappa, flying towards Gohan.

Nappa throws a direct punch at Gohan, who defends himself by raising only one arm to intercept the punch.

[- 600]

Anticipating his victory, the bald warrior smiles, colliding his fist against the small opponent's forearm. But to his surprise, Gohan also smiles with his body engulfed by a strange and thin transparent bluish aura.

[Lord Camelot Resist 257]

"What?" Questions Nappa out loud.

"Did you notice?" Gohan asked with a mischievous smile. "It's my new technique."

[Real Damage is -343]

"It's not good for resisting more powerful attacks, but it's perfect for the course of the fight against 'normal' blows."

[KI SKILLS]
-Lord Camelot Lv. 82/100 [
Adept ]
Cost:
200 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 4.1% of your SPIRIT in damage.
[KI SKILLS]

Nappa's eyes widened in surprise, his face turning red with anger.

"YOU MISERABLE BRAT!" Nappa shouted in frustration.

Both throw punches at each other, only to have them collide in a muffled explosion sound.

[187 DMG]

[- 132 HP]

Gohan puffs out his chest with pride, the training hadn't been easy to improve Lord Camelot, he spent the whole day whipping his own back, using the half half ton clothes like a whip.

'I looked like an opus dei priest self-flagellating himself.' Thinks Gohan, remembering the previous day.

"Bastard-." Nappa tries to complain but is cut by a punch to the stomach that makes him bend over.

[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[425 DMG]


"Talk less and fight more."

The fight continued with the warriors exchanging punches, kicks and even energy blasts from Nappa. During the exchange Gohan continued to use Lord Kamelot frequently to maintain the advantage.

[WARNING][/WARNING][WARNING]

[KP less then 30%][/warning]​
[WARNING]

"Fuck me." Gohan complains, deactivating his ability.

Nappa notices his opponent's frustration and notices the blue aura disappearing.

"Running out of Ki brat?" Questions Nappa mocking his opponent. "That's what happens when brats come to fight real warriors."

Gohan cursed himself for not paying attention to his KP and for having used his power without moderation, as if his Ki reserve was infinite. He was furious with himself for doing everything wrong, which led to an unfavorable situation.

Nappa approached Gohan brimming with pride.

"You think you can defeat me?"

Gohan replied, glaring at him.

"Yes."Said the young man, smirking.

"Then you are a greater fool than your father." Nappa replied, charging his Ki.

In response, Gohan also brought his Ki to the surface, preparing to attack.

"Bureiku Kyanon!" Nappa roared, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.

"Kamehameha!" Gohan shouted, firing at his opponent.

The rays collided, although at first glance they were equal, Nappa's attack began to dominate Gohan's. But despite the situation, the young man was smiling confidently.

'This kid is going to do something bizarre.' The warrior thought, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.

"Kamehameha X 4!" Gohan shouted.

Thanks to Gohan reaching an expert level, he can increase its kamehameha power.

[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 4/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 2,000 KP
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend.
[KI SKILLS]

Gohan had gambled all his remaining Ki trying to overpower his opponent's attack.

"AAARGHH!" Nappa screamed in pain as he received the attack inside his mouth.

The monstrous damage was compounded by hitting Nappa inside his mouth, ignoring the formidable resistances the veteran warrior had.

[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[WEAK SPOT X 5 DMG]
[720,000 DMG]

"AAAAAAAARGH!!" Gohan roared, falling to the ground.

A burning, searing pain penetrated his hands and reverberated throughout the young man's body.

[K.O.]

But instead of celebrating, Gohan falls to his knees.

"My hands." The young man groaned in agony.

It was a horrible sensation of intense burning in his hands, as if the skin was being touched by fire, along with sharp stabs, as if thousands of hot needles were being inserted into the area.

[YOU WIN!]

Gohan's hands were blackened and raw, as if they had been burned and flayed.


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"What the hell?" Questioned the desperate young man.

Desperate to end his pain, the young man ignored the windows warning of his rewards for victory and sat down to meditate and heal.

After 5 minutes Gohan opened his eyes and noticed that the wounds had closed and the color had started to return to normal, but his hands still hurt and were covered in scabs.

"Hit points are full, but physically I'm still hurt?" Questions the helpless young man. "At least now I know that lost limbs will not be regenerated."

Standing up slowly, being careful not to touch anything with his hands, Gohan begins to mentally open the warning windows.

[+4,000 XP]
[+ 1 Level]

[+1,525 MIGHT]
[+1,025 AGILITY]
[+1,287 SPIRIT]
[+320 MENTAL]

[+46 Kamehameha]
[+18 Lord Camelot]
[Lord Camelot Reached Expert Rank]
[+15 Lord Camelot]

[+ 35 Acrobatics Levels]
[+ 44 Athletics Levels]
[Athletics Reached Expert Rank]
[+ 1 Athletics Levels]
[+17 Perception Levels]
[+ 17 Close Combat]
[+54 Ranged Combat]

[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]

[You have defeated a named character.]

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Breaker Canon Ki Skill
+ 50 Athletics
+ 85 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]

Without thinking twice, Gohan got the 85 points from Oozaru first.

"I think he had more points for this because he is a more veteran warrior and has used this skill more times."
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
Transformations:
Oozaru Lv. 10/100 [
Expert ] = X 10 Power Level. Able to maintain some control. User can maintain some semblance of control, enough to choose a target when in rage.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]

Looking at the transformation text, now at master level, Gohan notices the extra information.

"Some semblance of control is better than none…"

As for the silver bean reward, he chose 1 special Abilities.

"Speaking of which, where are these items?"

[INVENTORY]
[3] Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
[3] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[3] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[1] Silver Attribute Bean(+100)
[1] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)

[INVENTORY]

"I'm going to have a ton of supplies when we go to Namek. Now just check the status before going to sleep."

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 4 [7,052/7,500]
HP: 38,480
KP: 35,550
PL: 5,961

MIGHT: 7,696
AGILITY: 6,671
SPIRIT: 7,110
MENTAL: 2,368

Points:
500
[STATUS]

"It doesn't seem like much, but with that level of power I could have prolonged the fight against the original Nappa. Giving Goku more time to arrive." Said Gohan analyzing his new power level. "But there's no point in theorizing about past events.

Said the Young Man walking towards his bed.

"I hope sleeping in my bed heals these wounds."

[DBI:GG]

The next day Gohan woke up with his hands completely healed. Happy with the result of a good night's sleep, he called up the training table, already planning what his next fight would be at the end of the day.

[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]

But reality hit him harder than Raditz did in his first fight.

The difference of more than twelve thousand PL between Gohan and Vegeta left the young man apprehensive. So Gohan decided to focus on his training until the difference was less obvious and found out why his hands had hurt so much.

To do this, he spent the whole day firing Kamehamehas multiplied in different ways, x2, x3 and even x4 times that had hurt him so much.

The first two made his skin burn, but it didn't hurt or leave any marks. The x4 made his skin hurt and left small burns, only this time, less aggressive than yesterday.

"Why that?" Gohan asked, talking to himself. "Is it because it improved my MIGHT and SPIRIT? Maybe it was because it improved my attack skill level?" Questioned the Young Man.



"Maybe it was because of the 3? The two attributes increase and skill increases?"

[+5 MENTAL]

"Good to know." Said the young man with the system's response. "At least now I know what happens when I overdo it."

Understanding a little more about the mechanics of his power, Gohan gets up, putting on his weighted clothes, ready to continue his training.

"I will continue my physical training mixed with my ki training." Said the young man thinking out loud. "Ki Strike, Ki Blast and Flight need to reach Expert… as for Kamehameha."

[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 75/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 1,750 KP
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend.
[KI SKILLS]

"What will happen if I pass Expert rank?"

Curious about his own train of thought, Gohan gave a mental command to his system and 3 Copper Skill Beans from his inventory were transferred to his hand which the young man was not excited about eating.

"Argh! It tastes like metal and dirt."

[+25 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Master Rank]
[+5 Kamehameha]

[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 5/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 1,500 KP
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend. User can slightly bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
[KI SKILLS]

"In addition to reducing consumption, now I can curve the radius of the attack and I can let the attack throw me back… according to Newton's third law!?" Gohan repeated in surprise. "I never thought I'd have a physics class in Dragon Ball, but I guess this means I can use Ki techniques to throw myself backwards to evade attacks or try to move faster?"

[+15 MENTAL]

"I love it when I'm right." Gohan comments with a smile. "But I don't remember being so good at this kind of critical thinking in my other life… is that because my mental attribute is increasing?"

[+25 MENTAL]

"It makes sense, the attribute is not exactly pure intelligence, mental must be a sum of intelligence, wisdom and memory."

[+50 MENTAL]

"WAIT!" The young man shouts, realizing another mechanic of his system. "In addition to my Human Adaptability perk, is it Mental that affects me learning new skills?",

[+200 MENTAL]
"Damn... now I'm going to have to find a way to train Mental too."

Finishing his complaints, Gohan looks towards the void opposite the entrance.

"I need to venture away from the entrance."

[DBI:GG]

With the ambition to surpass his limits, Gohan ventured beyond the entrance to the Room of Time, seeking a more challenging environment to hone his skills. As he moved away from the known area, he came across a distinct atmosphere.

The thin air made breathing difficult, eliciting a smile of anticipation from the young warrior prepared for the challenge. Without hesitation, he began his training routine inspired by Saitama, which he already mastered masterfully.

The first set was completed with the same efficiency and speed as always, but Gohan noticed an accelerated drain on his stamina. The scorching heat intensified the challenge, but he recognized that this was part of the plan. Ignoring the discomfort, he placed himself on the floor to begin the second set.

But halfway through the push-ups, he felt a relief that would only last a short time.

The temperature plummeted drastically, replacing the heat with an icy cold. The sudden change punished Gohan's body, making him fall to the ground shaking.

Gohan fell to the ground as the cold reached its maximum, the young man let out a groan of pain and despair, but he stood up quickly, refusing to give in.

The new conditions turned family training into hell, but Gohan knew it was crucial for his evolution. With each movement, his muscles contracted and weakened, but he persevered, motivated by overcoming the test.

Hours passed as Gohan persisted in his arduous journey. His energy was gone, and his body showed small wounds caused by alternate contact with the ground, sometimes freezing and sometimes scorching.

Finally, after a day of exhausting training, he concluded the session with a smile and deep fatigue, limping back to the entrance.

"And I still have to fight Nappa." Gohan murmured, deciding to meditate to regain his strength before the battle.

Upon reaching the entrance area, he turned towards the white expanse, contemplating the challenges overcome by venturing beyond the known, the pains and agonies faced in a hostile environment.

"And today was just the first day." He concluded with determination in his voice.

[DBI:GG]

For 40 days, Gohan underwent rigorous training away from the entrance to the Room of Time.

The weather conditions tortured him physically and mentally, but the rewards were worth the suffering.

[+13,635 MIGHT]
[+9,790 AGILITY]
[+11,945 SPIRIT]
[+4,750 MENTAL]

In addition to his attributes, his Ki Skills increased exponentially.

[+53 Flight]
[Flight Reached Expert Rank]
[+75 Flight]

[+12 Kamehameha]

[+63 Ki Strike]
[Ki Strike Reached Expert Rank]
[+85 Ki Strike]

[+87 Ki Blast]
[Ki Blast Reached Expert Rank]
[+38 Ki Blast]

[+75 LORD CAMELOT]
[Lord Kamelot Master Rank]
[+2 LORD CAMELOT]
His normal Skills also increased.

[+ 67 Acrobatics Levels]
[Acrobatics Reached Master Rank]
[+ 66 Acrobatics Levels]

[+ 99 Athletics Levels]
[Athletics Reached Master Rank]
[+ 4 Athletics Levels]

[+68 Perception Levels]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+21 Perception Levels]

[+81 Close Combat]
[Close Combat Reached Master Rank]
[+ 56 Close Combat]

[+1 Ranged Combat]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+100 Ranged Combat]
[Perception Reached Master Rank]
[+25 Ranged Combat]

Although the last few days have been less productive with my growth, the total of 40 days are notable in their status.

[STATUS]
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 5 [8,252/10,000]
HP: 113,375
KP: 101,425
PL: 17,158.5

MIGHT:
22,675
AGILITY: 17,261
SPIRIT: 20,285
MENTAL: 8,413

Points:
600
[STATUS]
Gohan looks proudly at his status, finally confident in challenging his next opponent.

"Who knows, maybe in the future I'll be able to fight even farther away too, at least Might would go up a lot."

[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]

"Almost equal power level and one extra level." Commented Gohan choosing Vegeta.

[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]

This time the music plays loud and fast, reminiscent of classic heavy metal.

[I was born into a scene of angriness and greed
And dominance and persecution
My mother was a queen, my father I've never seen
I was never meant to be
And now I spend my time looking all around
For a man that's nowhere to be found
Until I find him I'm never gonna stop searching
I'm gonna find my man, gonna travel around]
"I don't know the song… but I'd bet the band is Iron Maiden."

[Cause I'm a wrathchild
Yeah, I'm a wrathchild
Yeah, I'm a wrathchild
I'm coming to get you, ooh, yeah, yeah]

"Wrathchild?" Questioned Gohan without remembering the song. "At least it has to do with Vegeta's childhood… I think."

At the end of the chorus, the pixel cloud manifests itself, materializing the prince of the Saiyans with his eyes closed.

[From the depths of space,
a warrior of unrivaled ruthlessness!
He is the fighter who scoffs at your applause!
The conqueror who rages in the face of your cheer!
He is the prince of a fallen kingdom, a sovereign of strength...
He is VEGETA!
Gohan looked at Vegeta with a mixture of respect and challenge.

The Saiyan prince was one of Dragon Ball's most iconic characters and one of his favorites in his past life along with the original Gohan, being able to fight him was an honor for the reincarnated Gohan.

"It took you a long time to challenge me, brat." Comments Vegeta, opening his eyes.

[READY?]

"Let's see if you can fight on equal terms against an elite warrior."

They both prepared themselves in their battle stances, summoning their ki.

[FIGHT!]

The two charged at each other, flying over the white ground of the temple and colliding in an exchange of punches.

"RAAAAAAAAGH!" The warriors shouted, exchanging blows.

[1.378 DMG]

[- 2.109 HP]

[1.704 DMG]

[- 2.331 HP]

Gohan struggled at first to keep up with Vegeta in mid-flight, something that was previously impossible for him. But now, thanks to the hours of training dedicated to his Ki Skills, he was able to keep pace with his powerful opponent.

Vegeta looked at Gohan with a savage smile.

"Are you really ready to face the prince of all Saiyans?" He asked as he fired a ki blast.

Gohan focused on maintaining his balance and avoiding Vegeta's attacks.

"More than ready." Gohan replied, dodging and deflecting the attacks.

They continued to fight for some time, each trying to surpass the other in speed and strength.

Gohan was only able to match Vegeta thanks to the Lord Camelot technique, which reduced part of Vegeta's damage.

[1.781 DMG]

[- 1.847 HP]

[2.104 DMG]

[- 2.331 HP]

[2.554 DMG]

[- 2.531 HP]

"Humpf." Vegeta grumbled, moving away from Gohan. "An interesting technique you created, it proves that you are not a complete idiot like your father."

Surprised by the almost compliment, Gohan smiled, happy to have been recognized by the prince.

"A shame that you use your talents in cowardly tactics instead of fighting like an honorable Saiyan warrior."

Gohan's jaw dropped instantly, shocked by how fast he was back to insulting him.

"You know what? I'll give you a chance." He smiled arrogantly at Gohan, opening his arms. "Show me what you're capable of."

Quickly, Gohan recovered from his surprise and his blood began to boil at his opponent's comments.

"Ok…" Gohan said, closing his eyes. "Let's fucking go."

The young man concentrated on charging his Ki. This time, the energy aura manifested differently than usual.

"What is that?" Vegeta questioned, curious.

The Ki covering Gohan's body fluctuated at a frequency that made the young man look like a candle flickering in the wind. Feeling the energy flow through his body, his muscles began to vibrate in response, his skin took on a reddish tone and veins bulge across his body. His heart was already accelerating with the rhythm of his ki.

-I-
Al3AEb475NZo9W5wlB3j8pRsa-LQs6OOAnuhmMOYWsfewplDKa0bMheCW5A7lrqJ9V5kta3fPSAnKkoTL9ch_DhtbwP3zAgBAwDQT7t8rqVok-TvzsFAjTeTwWdeceP7BGhfqQXi1SJ_a_3SwVVuhiE

Then the energy aura stabilized, now oscillating at a speed that was difficult to follow, it seemed like just a thin layer of red light that surrounded the young man.

His body behaved differently, the muscles in Gohan's body were more compact and defined, and his heart beat at a faster pace than normal.

"I call it Clock-Up!" Exclaimed Gohan, disappearing from Vegeta's sight.

Vegeta's mouth is open, only for the screen to be closed with a punch to the chin.

[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[4,730 DMG]


The prince staggered back.

"What cheap trick is this?" Vegeta grumbled, passing his hand over his mouth.

With a mischievous smile, Gohan explains to the prince.

"I tried to replicate Kaio-Ken, but I wasn't able to." Gohan commented in a technical tone. "I don't have enough information and my body couldn't handle the load. I suffered from torn muscles, heart overload and severe headaches."

A chill runs down Gohan's back, just remembering the pain. If it weren't for the system's ability to heal 100% after sleeping, it would need weeks, or even months, to recover from the damage to its body.

"Humph!" Vegeta grumbled, mocking Gohan. "Weak."

A vein popped out on the young man's forehead, and he maintained his composure.

"So, I created this technique that only increases my speed, Clock-Up. The problem is that it works in small bursts and consumes a lot of Ki."

[KI SKILLS]
-Clock-Up Lv. 78/100 [ Adept ]
Cost:
5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP Each Speed Burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X2.78 for 5 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.

[KI SKILLS]

In response, the Saiyan prince laughed loudly.

"It makes sense for a half breed to create something so-." Vegeta tried to insult him, but was cut off again with a punch to the middle of his face.

[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[5,126 DMG]


"Damn!" Vegeta growled, furious.

"It's not a good technique for prolonged fights." Gohan said, giving a slutty smile. "But it's great for surprise attacks."

"Humph! Great for cowards-." Vegeta tried to insult him once again, only to be cut off this time with a kick to the ear.

[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[4,854 DMG]


"STOP CUTTING ME!"

The prince charged, flying in a blind rage. Gohan clenched his fists, waiting for the right time.

"DIE!" Shouted Vegeta, kicking.

But before his blow connected, Gohan disappeared.

"How?" Questioned Vegeta, turning to face the boy twenty meters away.

"You can use it in strategic withdrawals too." Gohan replied smiling.

Fed up with his opponent's tricks, Vegeta roars angrily. His body is completely engulfed by intense Ki like the flames of hell, his power makes the ground around him shake as if an earthquake is happening.

"O boy..." Gohan murmured worriedly.

Suddenly Vegeta exploded in propulsive energy, charging at Gohan with maximum strength, without giving him time to activate the Clock-Up.

"RAAAAAR!" shouted Vegeta, throwing a powerful punch at Gohan's head.

[- 9,984 HP]

The impact sent Gohan's body flying, landing on the ground 20 meters away. But the prince of Saiyans didn't give up, he flew over the young man, landing with a knee in his stomach, only to then mount on top to beat him.

[- 79,984 HP]

"YOU - WILL - PAY - FOR - EVERY - COWARD - COWARD!" Shouted Vegeta, hammering each punch aimed at Gohan.

[- 2,783 HP]
[- 3,217 HP]
[- 2,899 HP]
[- 2,901 HP]
[- 3,004 HP]

With arms raised, Gohan managed to protect himself from the worst, but he was still grunting in pain. Desperate to get out of the situation, he stretched out his right leg and charged it with energy preparing for an attack.

"KI STRIKE!"

[37,751 DMG]

The kick energized by the technique hits the base of Vegeta's back.

Vegeta expelled the air from his lungs in reaction to the pain, his spine transmitting the intense pain after Gohan's kick throughout his body. He tried to get up, but his body refused to obey the command, throwing him to the ground to the side. The energy flowing through his body seemed to freeze, leaving him paralyzed on the ground.

In a stroke of luck, Gohan had hit the base of his opponent's spine, causing a lot of pain and a short paralysis.

The young man stands up and looks at the proud defenseless warrior on the ground. Gohan hesitated for a second to take advantage of the situation, but he quickly remembered the importance of this training.

"On Namek, the real Vegeta will be much more powerful than this…"

With a bitter taste in his mouth, Gohan stomped his opponent with several Ki Strike attacks.

[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[73,754 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[69,987 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[73,725 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[71,574 DMG]


[K.O.]

"That's no way to win a fight."

[YOU WIN!]

Gohan's sadness and anguish only lasts for a short time as he notices the reward windows for his victory.

[+18,000 XP]
[+2 Level]

"I'm feeling a little better already."


[+7,325 MIGHT]
[+9,239 AGILITY]
[+4,715 SPIRIT]
[+1,787 MENTAL]
"To tell the truth, I'm great."

[+22 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Expert Rank]
[+56 Clock-Up]
[+25 Flight]
[+15 Ki Strike]
[Clock-Up Reached Master Rank]
[+42 Ki Strike]
[+15 Lord Camelot]
[+16 Acrobatics Levels]
[+8 Athletics Levels]
[+11 Perception Levels]
[+8 Close Combat]

[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]

[You have defeated a named character.]

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Galick Gun Ki Skill
+ 75 Athletics
+ 100 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARDS(X2)]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARDS(X2)]

Despite his joy, his vision began to get blurry.

"Hmm?" Murmurs Gohan confused.

Gohan felt weak, falling to the ground, his chest hurting and the pain spreading throughout his body. He tried to get up, but his legs wouldn't obey the command. His vision started to get blurry and he felt his head hurt more.

Panic and fear invaded his mind.

'What is happening?' In addition to the pain, Gohan's body felt like it weighed over a thousand tons. 'Is this the consequence of using Overclocking for so long?'

Things began to spin around him and he fell backwards onto the ground, finally losing consciousness.




Boa noite pessoas,

Oozaru Vegeta is still missing, why didn't I keep writing until I put the fight in this chapter?

Real life stopped me.



And remembering that I'm still looking for a Beta Reader, if you're interested leave me a message.

If you want to talk to me you can find me on X(Twitter) , search for renanp1m .

COMMENTS:

-Kamui_Yurinagi(Webnovel):
Thanks for the chapter and keep up the amazing work and as for romantic pairing then keep it Canon and if you want a bit different then add Erasa to the romantic pairing.
-Renan:
Thanks for the compliment.
Keeping Videl is one of the options. But now Erasa… I hadn't considered her. I'll think about this a little.

-RamblingFool(Webnovel):
Dodge!
-Renan:
It warms my heart every time I see a reference to TFS's work in the comments.

-Fullmetalblazer(Questionablequesting):,
A free girl for Gohan's Harem is Zangya All he has to do is save her from Bojack and stick up for her when the other z fighters want to try to kill her after word.
-Renan:
I rewatched the film Zangya appears today at lunch.
If there is no other time when she appears, then I think she is very shallow as a character.
Which isn't bad, it gives me room to work with her however I want.

-Yume(Questionablequesting):
Seems fun so far, looking forward to what you come up with next, just a shame you went with the typical aggressive "entertain me or I kill you" ROB.
FeMC wise no one beats Bulma, she's smart, rich and supports the one she's with even if they are a worse genocidal mad man than Hitler. She can also make better tech than anyone else can (she made a shrink ray when she was 16 and fixed a space ship when she was 6), only one who comes close to her in utility and intellect is Android 21 and she doesn't exists outside of one very specific verse.
-Renan:
It was a really lazy strategy on my part to use this, but I was so excited to get started that I ended up going with it.
And I also agree that Bulma is the top 3 best girl in the entire Dragon Ball Canon, even taking into account the girls from the expanded universe.[/warning]
 
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Great chapter, loved what you have wrote so far; minor error here though, all related to the same thing oddly enough:

[ Athletics Reached Adep Rank ]

[Athletics Reached Master Rank]

[Athletics Reached Expert Rank]

[Athletics Reached Expert Rank]

Adep = Adept, you also have Gohan attain expert and then master rank in athletics and then have him regress back into expert rank, not sure if the second expert is meant to be Grandmaster or something above Master?
 

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