[Dragon Ball Z] Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer

[RenanPMoraes]

Thanks for the heads up guys, I have no one to help me with prof reading, and the fact that English isn't my first language doesn't help either.

 

[RenanPMoraes]

The highest he gets is Master, so I think I fixed everything

 

[Lillie Jones]

My Headcannon thoughts, While the DBZ constructs are brutally honest with the young Saiyan hybrid Gohan Si in their assentment of his power level,what's he's definitely missing is Piccolo crucial wilderness training for going to Saiyan saga ,but SI Gohan is leaps ahead of OG Gohan in terms of techniques and When Gohan, Bulma and Krillian go Namek or when Gohan, Vegeta battle with the Ginyu force unleashes his version of Kaio Ken or Clock up their reaction are going to be legit like looking in the mirror of a younger Goku vs Vegeta fight in the Saiyan saga previously.
They wouldn't definitely wouldn't call him cowardly since his body can only handle so much power, but their initially impressed with his self taught techniques and Kamanha wave of course. Vegeta might call him cowardly nut nevertheless impressed with his Clock up technique .
Before the Namekian Elder unlocking Si Gohan potential against Frieza and Ginyu force. ?
We 'll see how it goes next time for our unlikely potential Super Saiyan hybrid Gohan and rest of the Z fighter's at the meantime.
Continue on
Cheers!

 

[Fullmetalblazer]

I'm glad my suggestion was considered. Thank you.

 

[Xcell]

Well thanks for the chapter and I wish this update a little more often as it feel like it's like it's been ages since I've seen an update from it.

Other thoughts about the story the oozaru skill feels like it's leading up to a fanon transformation that comes up in some fanfics from time to time and it's appearance is usually described like ss4 but with brown fur instead of red. As the idea is that it's basically a condensed oozaru transformation and gives all the other transformations a 10 times multiplier so super saiyan times 10 equals 500 which gets your ss4 and if you combine that with ssj2 you should hypothetically get ss5 and ssj3 combined with it gets you ssj6 or it should. As this idea has been tossed around since GT. As there's a bunch of cool fan art for it and there's even some videos on YouTube here's an example https://youtu.be/QptGSoGpI0E?si=LXyryTDAfKjnkyRf
The whole oozaru skill mastery feels like a setup towards these transformations later down the line.

I also wonder how strong you're going to make him after his time training in the hyperbolic Time chamber???? As I think it would be kind of pathetic if he didn't even crack one or two million and at the most maybe four or five million at bass power level. I'm also wondering if he's going to try to use the real ultra Divine water??? it's probably not worth it though to be honest it only gave Goku like a what 13% increase in power and it nearly killed him and it's not clear it has any real other benefits. I'm also wondering if the game will give him the same multiplier to his power that he got from lord guru?? Which increased his power level by like 13 times so it was a pretty significant power up for Gohan.

 

[6Shigure6]

PL: 1,592.5
MIGHT: 1,020
AGILITY: 2,349
SPIRIT: 2,000
MENTAL: 1,001
Points: 100

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Thanks for fixing the decimal point thing my ocd couldn't take much more lol

"SUCK THAT MANGO!"

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For English it's more common for anime's to go something along the lines of "take this" or "suck on that" or (if you're feeling especially jokey) "how bout dem apples"

[Meditate Reached Adep Rank]

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Adept

[ZENKAI BOOST(20%)]

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[ZENKAI BOOST(30%)]

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Zenkai boosting is busted in this, raditz was about the same PL as Gohan and Gohan got a 20% boost when he recovered, so by that metric if he were to use a body splitting/duplication technique he could just beat the crap out of himself and get a 20% increase every 7 hours or so

Btw I recommend you get multiple beta readers when people are lining up to be one, that'll help you always have someone to read the chapter before you post it and it'll make sure their personal bias won't effect the story much at all

 

[davvasconcelos]

Man, this is an interesting story.
You improved your writing from one chapter to the next, the transition between scenes in the first chapter was a bit abrupt and now it's more fluid.
Regarding the romance, I'm in favor of Harem, this is a world that you can die at the whim of a planet-destroying villain, better make the most of it.
Pairing suggestion: Videl, Erasa, Zangya and Android 21.

 

[Xcell]

Man, this is an interesting story.
You improved your writing from one chapter to the next, the transition between scenes in the first chapter was a bit abrupt and now it's more fluid.
Regarding the romance, I'm in favor of Harem, this is a world that you can die at the whim of a planet-destroying villain, better make the most of it.
Pairing suggestion: Videl, Erasa, Zangya and Android 21.

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Not every story needs to have a harem and their inclusion usually hurts the story's before it makes it better. As some of us would actually like to read a good dragon Ball fanfic without a cringy forced in harem where the idea of an actual story was thrown out the window of some substance. As the story almost always suffers when harem is thrown in.

 

[davvasconcelos]

Not every story needs to have a harem and their inclusion usually hurts the story's before it makes it better. As some of us would actually like to read a good dragon Ball fanfic without a cringy forced in harem where the idea of an actual story was thrown out the window of some substance. As the story almost always suffers when harem is thrown in.

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This actually happens frequently, generally the story has to be focused on romance to be successful. I read some Spider-Man fics that managed to make it work.

 

[davvasconcelos]

Chapter 3 was well written, Gohan SI is evolving but is not overpowered. A transformation that can be included in the techniques roll is Ikari.Apparently it's an intermediate transformation to Ozaru. It is possible to access a temporary power boost and feral aggression characteristic of Ozaru without losing consciousness.

 

[SSIntrinity]

I want to suggest that you maybe lower stat numbers for attribute gains. At the moment, it seems like you're just bloating them for no particular reason.

I personally think that a system where the stat gains are lower but have a larger impact on PL is more reasonable than gaining 2000+ in the strength stat only to have the PL increase by a measly few hundred points.

Last I checked, Gohan was ~15000 PL. This is perfectly fine given that it's so soon after the Saiyan saga concluded, but you have to think further ahead. What are stat gains going to be like post Frieza saga where PL is effectively in the hundred millions and above? What about the Cell saga or Buu saga? If you don't limit how you implement your stats and even your skills, this will just morph from an actual story into number porn where half the chapter just consists of the stat updates, and paragraphs of skills.

 

[Xcell]

This actually happens frequently, generally the story has to be focused on romance to be successful. I read some Spider-Man fics that managed to make it work.

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A romance doesn't mean a harem of women. I'm also not saying that there aren't any good harem story's it's just that they're far and few between as there more often than not cringe as most of them are only good as wank material as there's not really a plot most of the time overwhelmingly so. I don't know how best to say this but personally I feel like it's really hard to orchestrate a harem into a story in a way that doesn't make people cringe.

 

[RenanPMoraes]

Hey guys!
I usually respond to your comments when I post my new chapter because that way everyone can read the discussion on all the Fic platforms I post (I translate your comments for Portuguese speakers).

But I would like to acknowledge SSIntrinity's comment on the numbers.
The reason I use such large numbers in statuses is because, if you add up the statuses and then divide by four, you have the power level value equivalent to the characters.
So I would like to hear alternatives to the big numbers, but still maintain this relationship with the original power level of the series.

I thought of summarizing the statuses as:

1,000 = 1K
1,000,000 = 1M
785,000,000,000 = 785 B

If you have other ideas please tell me.

I want to suggest that you maybe lower stat numbers for attribute gains. At the moment, it seems like you're just bloating them for no particular reason.

I personally think that a system where the stat gains are lower but have a larger impact on PL is more reasonable than gaining 2000+ in the strength stat only to have the PL increase by a measly few hundred points.

Last I checked, Gohan was ~15000 PL. This is perfectly fine given that it's so soon after the Saiyan saga concluded, but you have to think further ahead. What are stat gains going to be like post Frieza saga where PL is effectively in the hundred millions and above? What about the Cell saga or Buu saga? If you don't limit how you implement your stats and even your skills, this will just morph from an actual story into number porn where half the chapter just consists of the stat updates, and paragraphs of skills.

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[bloodyparty]

Here's some errors i noticed:

Hi's

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His

Kuririn

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Earlier you referred to him as Krillin, here Kuririn.

His muscles burn

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After this sentence you switch from 3rd person to 1st person

Your heart pounds

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Shoudl be "His heart …"

The determination in his eyes

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Here you went back to 3rd person as normal.

The feeling of accomplishment washes over you

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Again 1st person, should be "over him…"

Adep Rank

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Adep

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Adep

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Adep

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Should all be "Adept"

I KILL YOU

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I will kill you
Or
I am going to (/gonna if you want to use slang) kill you

ways, x2, and

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That somehow bekome an emote? Should be times three (x then 3) right?

STOP CUTTING ME!"

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Stop cutting me off.

YOU - WILL - PAY - FOR - EVERY - COWARD - COWARD

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You will pay for every (missing word of for what gohan should pay, maybe "slight" or "hit") you coward.

 

[RenanPMoraes]

Bom dia pessoas,

I would like to thank Sleepy for his help with the English text.

I saw some comments talking about using the Hyperbolic Time Chamber and I would like to comment on them.

Before Dende rebuilds the chamber, it the following limit:

"The Chamber can only be used for two days (or two years) by any given person, meaning a person can only enter the chamber twice in their lifetime, assuming they stay for the full year both times. Staying in the chamber for two days straight counts as two uses. If anybody attempts to use the chamber past their 48-hour limit, they will not be able to exit, leaving them trapped in the nothingness and not allowing anyone else to use the outside door."

And as the title makes clear, we will end the first year in this chapter.

Ps: Have you seen the trailer for the new Doom? They gave Doomguy a giant robot.
First thing I thought: "Why?"
Second thing I thought: "Why not?"

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[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]​

"Shiiiiiiiiiiiit." Gohan groaned as he slowly opened his eyes.

[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]​

His body felt heavy and weak, every muscle aches as if he had been put through a meat grinder. His head pounds in pain, making it difficult for him to focus on anything other than the throbbing on his temples.

He tried to sit up, but his legs buckled and then gave out under his weight, causing him to fall back onto the cold floor with a thud.

"Ouch! My back."

Panic set in when he realized how weak he was.

"Is all this because I overused Clock-Up?" Gohan whimpered on the floor.

[KI SKILLS]​

-Clock-Up Lv. 56/100 [ Expert ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X3.56 for 10 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can have a very heavy toll on the user's body.

[KI SKILLS]​

"I really am a dumbass." Complains the young man lying down. "It's the only Skill with a warning attached and I still ended up ignoring it."

Gohan closes his eyes and takes a deep breath to calm down and regain his strength, as soon he recovered a bit of his strength, he pushed himself to a sittig positiont..

"This is worse than a hangover." He complains once again, his head hurting even more due to the movement of his body.

Swallowing hard, Gohan made a tremendous effort to get up, but the pain that wracked his body was intolerable. The muscles in his back, legs, abdomen and arms ached intensely. His head seemed to be about to explode with pain.

He placed his hands on his upper legs and pressed hard to stand up, but the weight of his body was too much for him to bear. He felt as if all the discs in his spine were ruptured.

Lifting his head Gohan felt a bout of nausea as he tried to keep his balance. Trembling to fall, the young man paused and took a deep breath, trying to control the wave of nausea that washed over him.

When he finally managed to stabilize his balance, he made another effort to stand up completely. His head hurts once again and his stomach feels sick from the strength needed to perform this simple task.

"All the misfortune in the world for stupid people is too little." He muttered the saying from his old life under his breath as he tried to endure the pain throughout his body. "If I had paid more attention to the warning I wouldn't be experiencing this miserable torture."

Slowly Gohan shuffles to his bed.

"I think I'll spend the rest of the day meditating in my bed."

[+5 MENTAL]​

"These system mental bonuses are starting to look like indirect verbal assault."

[+10 MENTAL]​

Without the strength to question, Gohan focused on reaching his bed and throwing himself onto it.

"Finally." He mumbles as he falls onto the comfortable bed.

Gohan closed his eyes and felt the pain being eased through his body. Wanting to speed up the process he began to meditate, focusing on his breathing. Soon his mind began to relax, and his body began to feel a sense of peace and comfort that he had not experienced in a long time.

His muscles began a regeneration process, a slow process compared to his HP recovery. It was as if a magical force was rebuilding every damaged fiber. The pain that wracked his body began to slowly subside.

His back stopped hurting, and his legs felt stronger and more flexible. His head was being relieved of the pain, and the sickness in his stomach began to dissipate as well.

Gohan continued meditating for longer, unconsciously feeling the regeneration energy as it that passes through his body, Gohan slowly opened his eyes and stood up from the bed with ease he hadn't shown since before the battle against Vegeta.

[+ 36 Meditate Levels]​

"Ah… That's what I call recovery and gains." Gohan says with a satisfied smile on his mouth. "Now I'm ready to train again."

But turning to the clock in the entrance, he notices that it was already time for dinner, after all he spent the whole day meditating.

"Damn it! I think I'll just tally up yesterday's gains, eat and go to sleep."

[STATUS]​

Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyan]
Level: 7 [26,250/35,000]
HP: 195,000
KP: 162,500
PL: 29,806

MIGHT: 39,000
AGILITY: 34,450
SPIRIT: 32,500
MENTAL: 13,280

Points: 800

[STATUS]
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"Oozaru Vegeta is 7 times my power level and I will need at least 48 fights against normal Vegeta to level up again... which won't be nearly enough to face Oozaru Vegeta on equal terms."

Sitting in silence staring at his Status screen, Gohan thinks of strategies to shorten the time to face the giant gorilla.

"Trying to create buff techniques is out of the question, I don't know if my body or mind could handle an even greater toll." The young warrior grumbles. "This system doesn't have a store or dungeon creation that I can abuse… but there must be some mechanics that I can take advantage of."

With his eyes closed, the young man begins to review in his head everything he remembers about Dragon Ball lore, over power techniques, training methods, KI, weapons, physiognomy of the main races until something connects with what he knows about the system.

'This is impossible!' Raditz's voice echoes in the back of his mind. 'No matter how powerful the enemy is, there is no way a system construct can kill the user.'}

"Oh man...." Gohan complains, giving a sarcastic laugh. "I already know how to quickly increase my power… and it will hurt my body and ego a lot."

[DBI:GG]

[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
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Despite being determined to put his plan to get strong quickly into practice, Gohan was terrified of facing an enemy so much more powerful than him.

[BEEEEERSEEEEERKEEEER]​

"I don't believe it!" Exclaims Gohan smiling. "It's Beast in Black."

Excitedly, Gohan sang the song that was one of his favorites in his past life.

[Like a hellraiser
Monster of rage
Unleash the fury
Through your sword of hate
Destroy and murder
Retaliate
Harness the power
Of the beast in black
BEEEEEERSEEEEERKEEEER]
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A gigantic green pixel pillar explodes in front of Gohan, catching the young warrior by surprise, when he looks ahead he notices the materialization of a monster over 30 meters tall(100 f).

Upon catching a glimpse of the creature, his stomach twisted nervously with traumatic memories from his childhood in the late 90s.

"I think I still have PTSD from facing Oozaru baby from Dragon Ball GT: Final Bout on Ps1!"

[Ladies and gentlemen, brace yourselves for a spectacle of raw, untamed power!
This isn't the Vegeta you know!
He is a primal beast, a hurricane of rage fueled by a power that could shatter planets!
THE RAMPAGING MONSTER...
THE DEATH OF A THOUSAND PLANETS...
OOOOZARU VEGETA!]
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"GUOOOOOH!" Roared the giant gorilla monster looking up at the sky.

Gohan trembled in fear as he looked at the colossal monster that was approaching. Oozaru Vegeta's giant gorilla form was intimidating, covered in black fur, his blood red eyes glowed with an unearthly intensity, expressing an overwhelming fury. Its large mouth was open, revealing sharp, pointy teeth. His arms were huge and muscular, with large, powerful hands. His presence was oppressive, as if the earth itself was vibrating in response to his strength.

The monster became even angrier when he noticed Gohan in front of him, roaring once again with all the strength in his throat. His gaze is fixed on his opponent, as if he wants to devour him with his own eyes. The negative energy he emitted was palpable, haunting the air around him.

But instead of attacking, the monster began to laugh with its powerful and deep voice.

"You are brave to want to face me with your ridiculous power." The monster growled towards the little hybrid.

[READY?]​

"If regrets could kill someone…" Gohan mutters, swallowing his nervousness and fear.

[FIGHT!]
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Taking a deep breath, Gohan flies towards the Vegeta. His ki coursed through his body as he launched himself at the giant gorilla's figure, his fists glowing with energy. But the beast was faster than him.

"Insect." Roars the monster as he slaps his opponent, throwing him to the ground.

[- 97,524 HP]

Gohan fell to the ground out of breath, completely stunned by the speed and force of the attack.

"I-I thought he was slower in this form." Gohan snorted

He was horrified when the Oozaru Vegeta lifted his foot and hovered over him, his massive frame casting a shadow over him. The monster's eyes glittered with malice as it prepared to deliver the final blow.

"DIE!" Shouted the monster, trampling Gohan.

[MASSIVE DAMAGE]
[-278,524 HP]

[YOU'RE OUT OF HP]

[YOU BLACKED OUT]​

Injured and defeated, Gohan's body is stretched out on the white floor, without consciousness he remains in the same position until the next day.

[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]​

"Everything hurts." Gohan speaks, getting up from the ground. "At least it hurts less than a Clock-up overuse."

[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]​

Slowly the young man gets up and with a smug smile faces the windows he was waiting for.

[ZENKAI BOOST (30%)]​

"It looks like it will work." The young man grumbled, looking at the zenkai boost window."

[+36,000 XP]

[+2 Levels]
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"I forgot that I also get 20% XP." Celebrated the young man with the new levels.

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]​

Gohan collects his 2 silver skill bean rewards as he prepares for another day of training.

Although the Zenkai Boost Bonus has accelerated his gains, Gohan is not excited about the next few days of fighting and losing against Oozaru Vegeta.

"And I still have at least 6 more days of being mauled by a giant gorilla before I have a chance to defeat him." The Young Man mutters, putting on his 5 Ton outfit. "But I can't just depend on Zenkai Boost, I'm going to train my attributes and skills to guarantee my victory."

[DBI:GG]​

A total of 7 days, Gohan spent training intensely with his clothes now weighing five tons inside the room and being defeated in fights against Oozaru Vegeta. All of this was done with the aim of reaching his power level as quickly as possible.

On the morning of the eighth day, Gohan was under the impression that at his current level of power he had a real chance of defeating him. But before facing his opponent he wanted to be sure, so he opened his status window before starting to train.

"Nice!" Exclaims the young man smiling while looking at his status window. "It was really worth getting beaten by the Harambe Berserker."

[STATUS]​

Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 12 [278,000/300,000]
HP: 976,250
KP: 827,500
PL: 148,893

MIGHT: 195,250
AGILITY: 170,300
SPIRIT: 165,500
MENTAL: 64,522

Points: 1,300

[STATUS]
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"Oozaru Vegeta has a Power level of 180,000, making him 31.107 more powerful than me." Gohan grumbles, pondering whether or not he should face the giant gorilla. "Let's look at Ki Skills."

[KI SKILLS]​

KI MANIPULATION:
-Clock-Up Lv. 56/100 [ Expert ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X3.56 for 10 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
-Flight Lv. 3/100 [ Master ] Cost: 10 KP/Minute
Effect: Fly at speed 100% of your SPIRIT.

ATTACK:
-Kamehameha Lv. 57/100 [ Master ]Cost: 1,500 KP
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
-Ki Strike Lv. 75/100 [ Master ] Cost: 200 K.P.
Effect: Adds 200% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 20% of enemy damage reduction.
-Ki Blast Lv. 5/100 [ Master ] Cost: 50 KP
Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 2% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.

DEFENSE:
-Lord Camelot Lv. 55/100 [ Master ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 12.5% of your SPIRIT in damage.

[KI SKILLS]​

"I didn't train Clock-up for fear of getting screwed again and losing a whole day of training, now Ki Blast and Flight have reached Master." Said Gohan going over what changed in his Skills. "The flight speed has doubled and the cost of Ki Blast drops by half... Now the master level skills have increased little since training alone doesn't help as much and Oozaru Vegeta always defeats me quickly, not giving me time to practice them."

If Gohan is defeated today, he would probably be able to defeat Oozaru Vegeta with the next zenkai boost.

But he didn't want that.

Without realizing it, a sense of honor and pride had been awakened within Gohan. He wanted to defeat his opponent without another Zenkai Boost, even though it would be better for his training in the long run.

Gohan pondered where this pride could have come from, whether it was from training so hard or whether perhaps it was something linked to his half-Saiyan genetic heritage.

"Whatever." Gohan said to himself. "I will defeat him today, I owe it to my Saiyan side."

[INVENTORY]​

[4] Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
[1] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[4] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[2] Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
[6] Silver Skill Bean(+100)
[2] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)

[INVENTORY]
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Giving a shit-eating grin, the young man takes 4 of his Silver Skill Beans.

"Good thing I'm half human and have a Brazilian soul, so I'm going to cheat just a little."

[+44 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Master Rank]
[+100 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Clock-Up]

[+43 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Kamehameha]

[+45 Lord Camelot]
[Lord Camelot Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Lord Camelot]
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Gohan's eyes widened in surprise as he noticed the new numbers and text displayed next to his techniques. He had expected some sort of power increase, but what he was seeing would completely alter the way he fought.

"Thank you Brazilian way."

[DBI:GG]​

By the end of the day Gohan had become familiar with the changes in his techniques and now he was in the middle of the white expanse ready to fight, facing the giant gorilla he had already summoned.

[READY?]​

Although Gohan was still weaker than Oozaru, he was confident in his new abilities.

[FIGHT!]​

Without wasting time, Gohan quickly summons his ki, opening his legs in the posture of his most powerful attack.

"Kamehame-…"

Oozaru Vegeta laughs in disdain at the young man trying to hit him with the ki attack.

"Insignificant insect." Growls Vegeta at Gohan. "Even though you have become a little stronger since our last fight, your attack will at most feel like an insect bite."

"-…Haaaa-..."

The beam of energy flew towards the titanic ape's chest, confident that nothing was going to happen, the monster just raised its left hand to block the attack.

Unfortunately for Vegeta, he hadn't noticed that Gohan hadn't finished shouting his attack yet.

"-…Frag!" Shouted the young warrior.

The tip of the energy beam about to collide with the Oozaru's palm opened, fragmenting into several smaller beams colliding against the monster's body.

[95,725 DMG]

"What is that?" Questions Vegeta furiously. "Kakarot has never used this technique in this way."

Laughing confidently, Gohan begins to explain.

"I discovered that when Ki Skills reach Grand Master level I can add effects to my techniques."

[KI SKILLS]​

-Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [ Grand Master ]Cost: 1,500 KP
Effects: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Frag: The attack splits into several beams before impact, hitting multiple opponents but dividing the damage among the fragments.

[KI SKILLS]​

"There are some really cool things I can do-." Said Gohan until he was stepped on by his opponent.

[- 87,397 HP]

The giant gorilla smiles looking as his boot crushed his little opponent.

"Then I just need to kill you before you can use them." Vegeta added in a sovereign tone. "Squashed like the bug you are."

To emphasize his point, Vegeta swung his foot trying to scrape his opponent's body against the floor of the temple room.

[- 74,435 HP]

But the prince encountered unexpected resistance.

[Lord Camelot Resist 41,345]

"What?" Questioned Vegeta, feeling his foot being lifted off the ground. "IMPOSSIBLE!"

Underneath the monster's foot, Gohan stood firm with the blue aura of his defense technique activated.

"DIE!" Shouted the Oozaru, putting more pressure on his steps.

"Lord Camelot Counter!"

A strange pressure coming from Gohan's hands hits Vegeta's foot through the sole of his boot.

[8,874 DMG]

Caught by surprise, he removes his limb from Gohan, who takes advantage of the gap to leave the ground, flying up to his head.

[KI SKILLS]​

-Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
+ Counter: Returns 10% of damage taken to the attacker for an extra 1,000 KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5,000KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Charge: Absorb damage taken to be used in your next attack for 5,000 KP per absorbed attack.

[KI SKILLS]​

Vegeta tries to grab him with one of his hands, but before he reaches him, Gohan's image dissolves into thin air.

Furious, Vegeta roars, hitting his chest.

"Fight like a real warrior, you cheating coward."

"Stop complaining you shitty King Kong." Said Gohan behind Vegeta. "If it's in the game, it's meant to be used."

[KI SKILLS]​

-Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X5 for 30 seconds.
+ Blur: Adds 2,000 KP per short speed burst. While moving at high speed you are difficult to see clearly (This is not invisibility).
+ Blitz: Each physical attack landed during the short speed burst can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+ Intangibility: Adds 5,000 KP per short speed burst. Becomes intangible for the duration of the short speed burst doubling the total cost of the burst.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.

[KI SKILLS]
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Vegeta attacks Gohan with the savagery of a hungry beast. Gohan, sensing imminent danger, activated the clock-up to escape. His body glowed red as he moved at incredible speed, avoiding Vegeta's savage punches.

Gohan's heart raced in his chest as he evaded Vegeta's attacks. He knew he couldn't afford to make a mistake, not against someone as powerful as the Saiyan prince in his Oozaru form.

As Vegeta charged forward, Gohan activated Lord Camelot once again. The blue aura surrounds him as he braces himself for impact.

"Disappear!" Vegeta shouted, punching the boy.

[- 39,435 HP]

Vegeta's fist collided with his opponent's raised arms defending his chest, at another point Gohan would have his arms broken, but the strength of the attack was significantly reduced thanks to the defensive technique. Gohan gritted his teeth and countered with a powerful kick to his opponent's fist, making Vegeta's arm recoil.

[- 54,387 DMG]

"It won't end like this." He growled. "You're no better than me, Kakarot's spawn!"

Gohan didn't respond. Instead, he disabled Clock-up and kept Lord Camelot with the extra ability activated.

Vegeta, closing his red eyes, began to hit Gohan with his guard up. The young man received the prince's blows without dodging or even blinking. This angered Vegeta even more, as it made him look weak.

[- 42,872 HP]
[- 35,743 HP]
[- 39,125 HP]

Despite Gohan's exterior showing no emotions, he was tired and had pain in his muscles and bones as Vegeta continued to punch and kick his body.

[- 45,183 HP]
[- 40,991 HP]
[- 35,766 HP]
[- 37,172 HP]
[- 41,891 HP]

"Fight back, you weakling!" The gorilla shouts, bringing both hands down like a hammer on Gohan. "Be the man your father wasn't."

[- 127,872 HP]

Even with his defense technique activated, the last blow drastically drained Gohan's HP and further increased his pain and agony, but the young man's only reaction to the blow was to smile.

"All according to Keikaku." Gohan said with blood dripping from the corner of his mouth.

Lord Camelot's blue aura pulsed and expanded until it began to flicker in blue flames across the young hybrid's body.

"What are you doing?" Questions Vegeta, taking a step back.

In an ironic tone, Gohan responds.

"A combo."

As if waiting for his statement, the flames exploded like fire in a blue inferno, covering Gohan to the point of almost hiding him.

<Reference image>

"Lord Camelot Kinetic Charge."

"I WILL NOT ALLOW IT!" Shouted Vegeta, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.

"Clock-up-…!" Gohan starts to speak only to disappear mid-sentence.

The Oozaru's energy beam hits the ground creating a blinding ki blast. The light from the explosion casts a shadow over Vegeta as Gohan reappears near his torso.

"-…Blitz X 5." It ends with the young man appearing to punch Vegeta in the stomach.

[215,000 DMG]

Gohan's fist connects with Vegeta's stomach with a sickening thud. The impact was violent to the point of making the monster bend over while particles of blood and sweat spread in all directions from the gorilla's body.

As if one blow wasn't enough, four more distorted images of Gohan's fist appeared in Vegeta's swollen belly, each pulsing with a ferocious energy that seemed to defy the laws of physics.

[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]

This feat was only possible because Gohan stored energy from Vegeta's attacks with Lord Camelot Kinetic Charge and then used Clock-Up Blitz X5 to multiply his punch.

"Gurgk!" Vegeta moans in a guttural tone as if he was going to vomit.

The Saiyan prince doubled over in pain, clutching his stomach as he struggled to catch his breath. Gohan watched him with a cold, calculating gaze, knowing that he had just dealt a blow that would leave the real Vegeta incapacitated for days.

Taking his chance, Gohan quickly brought his ki to the surface, gathering whatever was left of his Ki reserve. He could feel the raw power coursing through his veins, ready to be used against his enemy.

"Kamehameha!" Shouted Gohan firing a beam of energy.

"If-your -." Vegeta groaned breathlessly.

The prince raised one of his hands, stopping a beam of energy that seemed tiny when compared to his titanic size.

[87,542 DMG]

"Empower X10, Widen X10!" Shouted Gohan, feeling his Ki being drained in large quantities by the technique.

Gohan's Kamehameha began to grow, expanding rapidly as he put every last ounce of his energy into it. The beam of light intensified, its power increasing along with its size. It was as if the very air around him was being compressed, the energy so intense that it surpassed even Oozaru Vegeta's resistance.

[875,420 DMG]

"NOOOOOO…" The monster screamed, being consumed by the attack.

The final explosion was a true spectacle, a deafening boom that echoed through the infinite void of the time room.

[KO]​

Gohan falls to his knees on the ground, with Ki exhausted and his hands once again burned, only this time the injuries were less intense than the first.

[YOU WIN!]​

"I won…" Said the young man in disbelief.

[+180,000 XP]
[+2 Level]

[+34,750 MIGHT]
[+24,700 AGILITY]
[+24,500 SPIRIT]
[+27,478 MENTAL]

[ZENKAI BOOST(30%)]​

"He he." Gohan laughs awkwardly, staring at the Zenkai Boost window. "I got beaten up so much using Lord Camelot that I even got a zenkai boost."

Despite being slightly embarrassed, the feeling of triumph and joy flooded him.

Pride at having defeated a powerful enemy fills Gohan's chest, to the point where he ignores the windows with his rewards obscuring his field of vision. Tears of happiness began to flow from her eyes. He felt so happy and fulfilled that it was difficult to describe, as if everything he had suffered so far had been compensated with this single moment of glory.

[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]​

Despite the cathartic moment, he slowly rose from the ground, and even with his arms burned, bones throbbing in pain, burning muscles and an overloaded heart, he smiled as the pain was also proof that he had achieved his goal.

[You have defeated a named character.]​

[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Power Ball Ki Skill
+ 100 Athletics
+ 100 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]​

"And I still have 10 months to focus on perfecting my techniques and increasing my power as much as possible." Said Gohan, choosing the attribute beans and Power Ball as a reward.

Although Gohan didn't know what the Power Ball did, he was curious about what this technique was capable of doing.

[New System Feature is now available.]

[Achievements Unlocked]​

"Huh?" Asks the young man, surprised by the new window.

[For having reached one hundred thousand in all attributes in less than a year alone, the user received the "Hard Work Genius" achievement.]​

"Achievements?"

As if answering his question, a new window opens.

[ACHIEVEMENTS]​

# Hard Work Genius:
Effect = When training, player have his physical and mental resistance doubled. The user also has something similar to a sixth sense when it comes to training. Instinctively he knows when a form of training is viable or not when he is focused on a goal.

[ACHIEVEMENTS]
​

"This will be very useful… WAIT!" Exclaims Gohan loudly reading the Achievement window. "Isn't Hard Work Genius something related to Rock Lee?"

[DBI:GG]​

For 334 days straight Gohan trained.

When his power grew to the point that Oozaru Vegeta was no longer a challenge, he needed to find alternatives. To bypass this problem, he fought the gorilla using his 5 Ton suit, but this only prolonged the opponent's utility lifespan for a short time to gain attribute points.

His training would have completely stagnated if it weren't for the idea of focusing on gaining more points in his techniques that had reached the master level. Getting them to Grand Master level took a long time, but time was what Gohan had in spades.

Today, on the last day of first year training, Gohan woke up with his muscles sore. The pain in his body didn't even bother him anymore, as he was so used to intense training. He stretched his limbs, feeling the familiar pain of muscles straining to the limit.

As he stood up, he felt power coursing through his veins, a testament to the tireless effort he had put into his plan to get stronger.

"It's a shame that my stats stopped rising." The young warrior grumbled. "Not even when I move as far away as possible without risking getting lost and wearing the three heavy clothes at the same time do I feel challenged in here."

This was something that bothered Gohan.

"When Vegeta, Trunks, Goku and Vegeta came to train in the room, they were much more powerful than me. And even so, they had difficulty training here at first." Gohan thinks out loud. "This lack of progression in the last few weeks must be due to the lack of someone to train with me combined with some other factors that I still don't understand… at least my Ki Skills have reached the Grand Master rank."

[KI SKILLS]​

KI MANIPULATION:
-Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X5 for 30 seconds.
+Blur: Adds 2,000 KP per short speed burst. While moving at high speed you are difficult to see clearly (This is not invisibility).
+Extra attack: Each physical attack landed during the short speed burst can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+ Intangibility: Adds 5,000 KP per short speed burst. Becomes intangible for the duration of the short speed burst doubling the total cost of the burst.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
-Flight Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5 KP/Minute Effect: Fly at speed 100% of your SPIRIT.
+Stealth Mode: Adds 100 KP/Minute to cost. The user Aura is suppressed during flight and it doesn't make any noise while flying.
+Mach Surge: Adds 100 KP/Minute to cost. Doubling the flight speed ignoring air resistance.
+Skyquake: Adds X,000 KP to cost. Increases air resistance against your body decreasing speed while dragging a vapor cone caused by temperature and pressure behind the user. User can release the vapor cone in a sonic boom causing damage equivalent to X in an area of X meters in radius.
-Power Ball Lv. 01/100 [ Grand Master ] Cost: 5,000 KP
Effect: Shots an Energy Sphere capable of emitting Blutz Waves, mimicking the presence of a full moon. Duration is 120 minutes, and the size is 6 meters radius.
+Empower: Multiplied the Blutz Waves emitted by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Extend: Multiplied the duration by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.

ATTACK:
-Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 1,500 KP Effects: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Frag: The attack splits into several beams before impact, hitting multiple opponents but dividing the damage among the fragments.
-Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 1,000 KP Effect: Adds 300% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 50% of enemy damage reduction.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Extra attack: The physical attack landed can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter of your strike by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
-Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 2% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 100 KP.
+Many shot: Shots multiplied by the number of times you spend 100 KP.

DEFENSE:
-Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
+Counter: Returns 10% of damage taken to the attacker for an extra 1,000 KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5,000KP/Minute.
+Kinetic Charge: Absorb damage taken to be used in your next attack for 5,000 KP per absorbed attack.

[KI SKILLS]​

"The day I ate the Silver Skill Bean I was confused because I gained less than 100 in Kamehameha, Lord Camelot and Clock Up. But when the other Skills reached the Grand Master rank they also didn't advance any further. So it becomes obvious that I reach some kind of cap, that I need some different training or perhaps divine Ki."

In his rationalization about his powers, another realization dawns on Gohan's mind.

"Since when have I been talking to myself?" Question the worried young man. "I'm going crazy in this isolation."

The young man turns to the entrance and sighs tiredly.

"I don't remember exactly how many days I have out there until we leave for Namek, but I'm pretty sure it was more like 10 days." Said the young man trying to pull knowledge over 20 years old from the depths of his memories. "I think I'm going to spend a few days out there, instead of continuing my training for another year, maybe talk to some masters to train some techniques and then I'll perfect them when I get back here again."

Satisfied with his decision, Gohan slowly walked towards the exit, as soon as he opened the door he came face to face with a large and familiar figure staring at him intensely.

"It's good to see you again, Mr. Popo." Gohan said, giving a small bow to the iconic character.

Instead of answering the boy, Popo ignored him and continued to stare at him. Gohan, not knowing how to react, waited in silence for a few minutes until Mr. Popo approached him, placing a hand on his shoulder and speaking in a stern tone.

"Little Gohan." Popo said, looking into the young warrior's eyes. "If you keep going like this, you'll end up killing yourself."

"B-but I'm feeling great." Gohan said worriedly. "My power has grown a lot in this year of training."

Popo shakes his head negatively, silencing the boy before continuing to speak.

"It's true that you have greatly increased your power." Popo comments, maintaining a severe tone. "But the problem is that if you are becoming a Ki bomb capable of destroying the planet."

"WHAT?"

​

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Gohan Character Sheet:

[STATUS]​

Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 29 [60 M / 79 M]
HP: 4 M
KP: 4 M
PL: 662 K

MIGHT: 850 K
AGILITY: 700 K
SPIRIT: 820 K
MENTAL: 280 K

Points: 3.000

[STATUS]​

What do you think of this new form format?
The difference is using "K" to abbreviate a thousand, "M" for a million, "B" for a billion etc…

​

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Boa noite pessoas,

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, we'll have more interactions with various characters before Gohan returns for his second year of training.


If you want to talk to me you can find me on X(Twitter) , search for renanp1m .

COMMENTS:
-davvasconcelos(questionablequesting):
Man, this is an interesting story.
You improved your writing from one chapter to the next, the transition between scenes in the first chapter was a bit abrupt and now it's more fluid.
Regarding the novel, I'm in favor of Harem, this is a world that you can die at the whim of a planet-destroying villain, better make the most of it.
Pairing suggestion: Videl, Erasa, Zangya and Android 21.
-Renan:
Thanks for the compliment.
I'm still deciding on the romantic pairing, but as I said before, it won't be a Harem.

 

[xbox432]

...He became a bomb? I'll be interested in seeing how that happened. Like, I don't SEE any reason that his body might explode. So is it something metaphysical, or is it just because Popo has NEVER seen someone reach a Power Level so high?

Hmm, and it'll be interesting to see what kind of wisdom he can learn from some of the DBZ masters before he heads off into space. I mean, he'll certainly still need something to pass the time on that trip considering how long it will take. Maybe he could also ask Bulma to have a computer set up with education courses for him to study? That way he could train his Mental to be more on par with his other stats?

himself to a sittig positiont..

Click to shrink...

sittig - sitting
positiont - position
Lastly, one or three periods, not two.

"You're no better than me

Click to shrink...

no - not

What do you think of this new form format?

Click to shrink...

Seems good to me. At these levels, the hundreds and thousands start to become meaningless. So only showing when the millions and above go up seems like it will streamline things. On the other hand... If Gohan goes into a training session and the readers don't see any numbers go up for their (heh) monkey brains to fixate on, they might get irritated.

 

[Lillie Jones]

Whilst Gohan Si master's a phenomenal technique with his gamer system, but lacking the actual opponents in the Hyperbolic time chamber. At the same time Gohan Si gets the most of the gamer benefit from the Saiyan constructs.
Although, Gohan SI gets another nasty surprise from Mr. Popo when the young hybrid Saiyan exits the hyperbolic time chamber as Mr.Popo explains that young Gohan has become a human ki bomb during his hyperbolic training.
The Gamer system got some explaining to do with Gohan Si and getting out of this particular pickle with Mr.Popo since it's technically impossible to begin with anyway.
continue on
Cheers!

 

[iGreyOtak]

- In this story will the protagonist have a Harem?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: I hadn't thought of a romantic partner for the protagonist when I started writing this story, I saw some people suggesting Bulma from the future...
Comment which romantic pairing you would like for the protagonist. I promise to take everyone into consideration.

Click to shrink...

Bulma might as well be his aunt, Just make it someone close to his age like Videl and experiment with her...

 

[Xcell]

...He became a bomb? I'll be interested in seeing how that happened. Like, I don't SEE any reason that his body might explode. So is it something metaphysical, or is it just because Popo has NEVER seen someone reach a Power Level so high?

Hmm, and it'll be interesting to see what kind of wisdom he can learn from some of the DBZ masters before he heads off into space. I mean, he'll certainly still need something to pass the time on that trip considering how long it will take. Maybe he could also ask Bulma to have a computer set up with education courses for him to study? That way he could train his Mental to be more on par with his other stats?


sittig - sitting
positiont - position
Lastly, one or three periods, not two.


no - not


Seems good to me. At these levels, the hundreds and thousands start to become meaningless. So only showing when the millions and above go up seems like it will streamline things. On the other hand... If Gohan goes into a training session and the readers don't see any numbers go up for their (heh) monkey brains to fixate on, they might get irritated.

Click to shrink...

I feel like the author is just going to say some bullshit about having too much ki and not enough control and the MC will explode. Which is complete bullshit and that's not how it works in the dragon Ball universe. As the main character could have an infinite amount of ki and zero control and he wouldn't explode. And what would actually happen is all his physical parameters would be amplified to a stupid degree and it would become extremely hard to interact with anyone without seriously hurting them or killing them or even just the environment without breaking stuff. As there plenty of examples throughout the series where a character lost control momentarily over they're absurd power and either destroy the environment a little bit or sent someone flying through a wall and then some. Example https://youtu.be/5a4WKZQRqo0?si=f-26SYabE3XmGlt8
As Frieza even had this problem as well as his transformations exist to contain his power and not to power up.

 

[Yume]

Thanks for the chappy, so mc has reached past first form Frieza without even having his potential unlocked already; noice.

At this rate he's going to become Swolehan.

 

[Gwynx]

Good chapter, so Gohan turned into a bomb, which makes him a mf not having a good quality Ki control??

And what better couple for Gohan than Android 21 they are both nerds heh

 

[stads]

nice chapter thx for writing it
wonder if its a complication or mr popo not knowing that power levels can get that high ?

 

[Kazumaa23]

Thanks for the chapter, will be looking forward to this from now on.

 

[RenanPMoraes]

Bom dia pessoas,

I've been noticing in the comments that some of you think that the current Gohan is already "too powerful" and that Frieza won't pose any challenge.

It's true that this Gohan is already stronger than the original in the Frieza saga, but he's still not at the same level as the two most powerful at the end of the saga.

Gohan end of chapter 4 = 662,000 PL
Normal Goku vs Frieza = 3,000,000 PL
Frieza final form, 100% = 120,000,000 PL
Super Goku against Frieza = 150,000,000 PL

On the other hand, no member of Frieza's army would give Gohan any trouble, Captain Ginyu being the strongest of them with a PL of 120,000.

Ps: I still need a beta reader for the English version. Anyone interested send me a message.

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Krillin landed on the celestial platform with a soft thud, his eyes scanning the area for any signs of life. A familiar figure approached, smiling at him. It was Popo, who had come to welcome him.

"Greetings, Krillin." Said Popo, his voice echoing in the silence. "I see you came to visit young Gohan."

Krillin nodded, his eyes still searching for any sign of movement within the platform.

"Yes sir. His parents are worried, especially Chichi who-" He cuts himself, swallowing hard as he remembered the conversation with his best friend's wife. Continuing, he said "She told me to check on him as soon as I woke up."

With a nod and with an outstretched hand, Popo pointed to the entrance to Kami's abode, leading Krillin deeper onto the platform.

As they walked, Krillin couldn't help but feel a sense of unease wash over him. The platform seemed strangely silent and there was no sign of Gohan or even his ki.

"Is Gohan sleeping by any chance? I can't feel his Ki."

The smile disappeared from Popo's face and the look on his face became more serious, Krillin noticing the change in the atmosphere began to suspect that something bad might have happened to Gohan.

"Did something happen? Is Gohan okay?"

"Nothing happened to him." Popo said, breathing tiredly. "It's what could happen that worries me."

Without understanding what he was saying, Krillin was guided by Popo to the room inside the platform where Gohan was training.

After a few minutes, Popo and Krillin arrived in front of large double doors.

"This room is made of materials stronger than steel." Mentions Popo approaching the great black stone doors. "We would have made the entire Lookout out of this material if it weren't so rare."

The black rock material is opened without difficulty by the gods' assistant, but the monumental weight of the material dragging on the ground was still evident.

With the door open, Krillin comes across a large room with an intimidating atmosphere. Its walls and floor were made of a strange black stone, unlike anything in the Kami's abode.

When the door is completely open, the image of Gohan sitting in the center of the room is revealed, meditating with waves of energy oscillating throughout his body while his eyes appear white.

<Meditation Gohan>

​

"Now, young Gohan is training to control his own Ki, at the moment he is focused on learning how to hide his power." Explained Popo in a deep and dark voice.

Surprised by the explanation, Krillin turns to Popo.

"But he already mastered controlling his Ki with Piccolo, hasn't he?" Krillin asked in confusion"

Popo shook his head before continuing to explain.

"Two days ago Gohan didn't know how to hide his Ki." Mr. Popo says, looking at Krillin. "Furthermore, he also does not know how to adjust his power level to face weaker people, he does not know how to transfer ki to other people and he also cannot sense the Ki of other individuals."

Amazed, Krillin widens his eyes in shock at the young warrior's lack of skill. The surprise was due to the fact that during the fight against Vegeta and Nappa he had demonstrated all these skills.

"In addition to his lack of Ki control abilities, his strength has grown so much that young Gohan's body is having difficulty containing his vast power. If he doesn't learn more Ki manipulation techniques, Gohan could overload his body using his power causing a massive explosion."

"But I've never seen anyone have this kind of problem before, not even Goku after a special training or when he drank the Ultra Divine Water."

"In none of these examples was there such astonishing growth as that of young Gohan."

Krillin's jaw drops at the answer.

"But I feel almost none of his Ki." Krillin comments. "Now with the door open I should be able to clearly feel if he doesn't know how to hide Ki."

The human warrior's last comment brings a smile back to Popo's lips.

"It's because he's close to mastering Ki concealment."

"WHAT?" Krillin shouted in surprise. "But he's only been training for three days."

"It's been three days since young Gohan left the hospital to train on the celestial platform, but it was only yesterday that he started training in concealing his Ki."

Before Krillin could ask how the young warrior was so close to mastering the technique with less than two days of training, his attention was pulled to the center of the room because in that moment, Gohan's Ki spiked.

His energy began to emanate from him in waves, lighting up the black stone room with his Ki aura.

In order to observe him better, Krillin approached the young warrior, noticing that his appearance was different from what he remembered. His hair was longer and besides being taller he also looked older for some reason.

The ground began to shake as Gohan's power increased, a shiver ran through Krillin's body as fear took over him. Gohan's power grew exponentially, making his ki reserve feel like an ocean of energy that threatened to swallow him whole.

As the room started to shake, Gohan's energy reached new heights, his Ki aura pulsed around him like a living entity. Krillin felt the weight of Gohan's power bearing down on him as the air around them crackled with energy.

"This is impossible." Murmurs the veteran warrior. "Is he stronger than Vegeta?"

"I wasn't present at the fight with you, but from my observations young Gohan must be three times stronger than him in his giant ape form." Said Mr. Popo, who didn't seem affected by the pressure of Gohan's Ki.

When the Ki intensity seemed to reach its peak, Gohan opened his eyes.

Slowly, his energy began to stabilize and the room stopped shaking.

Krillin stumbled backwards, falling on his butt, overwhelmed by the intensity of Gohan's power. Feeling in his own skin what Popo had declared about the boy's power.

'He really is stronger than that monster in his Oozaru form.' Krillin confirms to himself, sweating cold.

Standing up, Gohan notices Krillin sitting in front of him. Walking slowly he approaches the veteran warrior and with a smile on his face extends a hand to him.

"It's a pleasure to see you again, Mr. Krillin." Said the young man smiling friendly.

At the same time, all fear and fear of the human warrior evaporated from his mind.

'He smiles just like Goku.' Thinks Krillin as he accepts the help.

"Actually…" Gohan says, hesitating for a second before continuing. "I would like to ask you a favor."

"What do you need?" Krillin questions, curious.

The young warrior puffs out his chest and responds with a smile.

"I need a guide."

[DBI:GG]​

Gohan and Krillin flew to Paozu Mountain, a place rich in history and meaning for Goku, who was raised there by his grandfather Gohan.

Despite their importance to Goku and perhaps even to the original Gohan, the two warriors are not in Goku's old house but in the heart of the mountain forest, looking for something that will help them in the near future.

The dense foliage around them rustled softly in the gentle breeze, casting dappled shadows on the ground. The air was thick with the smell of pine and damp earth, a stark contrast to the sterile environment of the Time Chamber. Gohan felt a calmness wash over him as he breathed deeply, taking in his surroundings.

Krillin, on the other hand, looked uneasy. He fidgeted nervously with his sleeve, looking around cautiously, as if expecting an attack at any moment. Gohan noticed his friend's discomfort and placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder.

"You don't have to worry about anything, Mr. Krillin." He said calmly. "We're here to find the capsule that brought my father to planet Earth, not to fight."

Krillin nodded hesitantly, but still looked uncomfortable. They continued their search in silence for a while longer until they found something.

A large crater in a clearing and at the bottom of it was the object of their search.

Gohan slid to the bottom and lifted the spaceship off the ground with just one hand.

"Lighter than I thought- OH SHIT!" Gohan cuts himself off mid-statement when the ship trembles in his hand. "Spoke too soon."

Luckily Krillin was nearby and helped him balance her on his side and didn't let itfall.

"Thank you, Mr Krillin. I may have the strength, but I don't have good balance."

"Don't worry Gohan." Krillin comments, trying to calm the young man. "This kind of thing comes with training and time, you don't need to keep diminishing yourself."

Sighing, Gohan gives a wry smile.

"I understand, it's just that this kind of situation proves that strength alone is not enough to overcome all challenges." Gohan murmurs, loading the ship. "But in addition to training and experience, we must also use intelligence and creativity."

"Damn." Krillin comments, surprised by the young behavior. "I had no idea you were so mature."

"Thank you, Mr. Krillin." He thanks Gohan with a sincere compliment.

"You look like a completely different person from three days ago." Krillin adds in a casual tone.

Luckily for Gohan, Krillin wasn't looking directly into his face. Because his wide eyes, pale face and open mouth clearly revealed, to anyone who could see them, that the young warrior had his greatest secret exposed.

The young man laughs embarrassedly and tries to change the subject.

"It's like Mr. Popo said, my power has increased, but I still need to train the basics."

"Hmmm," The young bald man mutters, chewing on the young man's words. "I think he's right."

Gohan sighs in relief, as Krillin keeps talking.

"Sometimes I have to use telekinesis myself when trying to carry big things that are difficult to balance with only my hands."

The young man stops when he arrives outside the crater and lets the ship fall to the ground with a loud thud. He quickly turns to the bald veteran and grabs him by the shoulders.

"DO YOU KNOW TELEKINESIS?" Gohan shouts, shaking Krillin.

The veteran warrior nods.

"How?"

"When I trained with Kami-sama, Chiaotzu and Tien taught me the basics of telekinesis with Ki." Krillin comments as if it wasn't a big deal. "I'm not as good as them, much less Chiaotzu who is a true master at this, but I can still do some tricks like helping me carry large objects, protect fragile items, unwrinkling clothes, remove dust from objects and opening or closing windows."

Jaw dropped by the applications of such a versatile skill, Gohan does the obvious.

"Would you teach me?"

"Of course." The veteran responds as if it were no big deal. "But I doubt I could teach you well enough to use in a fight."

Giddy, Gohan didn't even try to contain the smile of a child who got what he wanted for Christmas. After all, the applications of telekinesis were broad and had the potential to give him access to more Ki Skills that he wouldn't have access to on his own.

"As soon as we leave this ship, I intend to talk to Master Karin, after that you could train with me in the time chamber."

"No problem." Krillin responds quickly, without even thinking about questioning his best friend's son's reasons."But what is the time room?"

"I'll explain it on the way." Gohan comments, taking off carrying the ship. "Good thing we have a few hours to kill until we get to Capsule Corporation."

[DBI:GG]
​

Bulma was working tirelessly on Kami's spaceship inside a large laboratory garage. The blue-haired scientist's clothes were covered in grease and grime, her hair was tied back, and her forehead was drenched in sweat.

The blue-haired genius was currently installing the ship's engine that she had repaired.

She was exhausted from not sleeping for almost two days, but Bulma refused to even take a break. The fate of her dead friends hung in the balance and since she couldn't fight she was determined to do everything to get them to Namek, even if it cost her own health.

"Now let's get to the hard part." Bulma mumbles to herself getting ready for a very delicate part of the job, connecting the power supply to the ship's engine.

<Mechanic Bulma>

​

With a steady hand, Bulma began to slowly connect the cables. She knew that any mistake could result in a catastrophic explosion.

"Slow and easy."

"BULMA!" Shouted a shrill voice from outside. "ARE YOU HOME?"

The tip of the last cable touched an uneven metal surface, generating a spark in front of Bulma.

"Oh no…" The blue-haired woman lamented.

A flash of light took over her field of vision, followed by an explosion that shook the entire block.

Outside, Krillin and Gohan stare wide-eyed at the light that leaked through the windows and by the garage door that was blown off by the impact of an explosion.

"We should have called before coming." Gohan comments worriedly.

"I hope she didn't realize I was the one who screamed."

Within seconds both warriors have their answer, when the garage door falls forward revealing a charred woman.

"KRILLIINNNNN!"

Frightened, the warrior tries to run away, but Bulma, without wasting time, throws a heavy wrench towards him. Hitting him in the back of the head as soon as he turns around, but before he takes a step.

"FU-!" He screams in pain, only to then fall to the ground unconscious.

The young half-Saiyan, giving an embarrassed smile, turned to the furious woman and greeted her with a small bow.

"Good afternoon, Miss Bulma."

The young man's polite tone catches the woman's attention, and upon noticing Gohan's presence she calms down a little.

"Ah… Gohan? Why are you here?"

Looking up, Gohan points to the large spherical object placed in his garden.

Bulma widened her eyes in surprise and approached slowly, not believing what was there. Confused, she turns to Gohan and questions him.

"What is that? I thought all the Saiyan ships had been destroyed."

Gohan agreed with her and informed her.

"Except this one, this is the ship that brought my father to Earth."

Intrigued, Bulma looked out the window and saw the space that once housed Goku as a baby.

"This is amazing!" Exclaimed Bulma, taking a remote control from the pocket of her grease-stained overalls.

As soon as she presses the button, the ship responds by opening its airlock.

"It's in better condition than Kami's ship, maybe it still works." Bulma concluded.

"So you can use it?"

"For sure! I already managed to translate their language into ours using the scouter. It will be a breeze to use her data to speed up my work on Kami-sama's ship."

The young man smiles with relief at being able to facilitate the work of one of the most iconic characters in the series, and for him, second only to the protagonist in importance.

Now that Gohan was closer to her, he noticed the scientist's dark bags under her eyes. As if she didn't sleep since the encounter at the hospital.

"Miss Bulma." Gohan comments worriedly. "Are you okay?"

"Yes." Bulma responds, trying to calm the young man down. "I'm just a little tired, nothing you need to worry your pretty little head with."

She gave a forced laugh at the end of the sentence, but it wasn't enough to convince the boy in front of her.

The original Gohan may have believed this statement, but what was in front of her was someone much older than he looked. And coincidentally, he also had experience with colleagues who had injured themselves working to the point of exhaustion.

In a calm and gentle tone the young man begins to speak.

"Bulma, you need to rest. You're working too hard."

The concern in his voice was so genuine that it caught Bulma off guard, after all, what kind of child understands stress and burnout? That made her pay attention to everything he had to say.

"You're going to get hurt that way. You need to take a break."

As much as the young man's statement came from his concern for her well-being, the scientist did not receive his request well. Bulma swallowed hard and clenching her shaking fists, she faced the hybrid.

"I can't stop! I'm not like you and Krillin. I'm just weak and useless." Her voice was filled with emotion as tears flowed from his eyes. "My friends were injured or died as heroes defending the planet. And what did I do?" She asked, crying. "NOTHING!"

Bulma's voice was shaky as she screamed, her anguish, frustration and sadness were taking over her.

Gohan felt a pang of guilt as he remembered those who died.

'It was so easy when they were just characters in a series.' Gohan thinks to himself.

But in front of the young warrior was not a fictional character but a real person. Her feelings, dreams and pain were as real as his.

Bulma falls to her knees with her hand over her face, trying to stifle her own crying.

The young man knew that she was far from weak, she had saved others countless times with her inventions and at the risk of her own life. But Gohan also understood that she was going through great emotional turmoil at that moment and that he needed to help her.

"Bulma." Gohan said in a firm tone, placing a hand on his shoulder. "You are much stronger than you think." He looked into her teary eyes, trying to convey his sincerity through the gaze. "The only thing I'm good at is destroying our enemies, but you have the knowledge and talent to take us beyond the stars."

Bulma sniffled and wiped her tears with the back of her hand. She looked at Gohan with a mixture of gratitude and curiosity in her eyes.

"You are working on alien technology that is more advanced than anything on our planet." Comments the young man, helping her to get up. "Technology you translated yourself."

Bulma blinks her eyes in surprise at the eloquence of the young man who until recently was only four years old.

"To tell you the truth, I can't wait until we get back from this to see what you do with all this knowledge." Gohan comments, trying to emulate the typical smile of a shonen protagonist. "You are amazing and I consider myself lucky to have met you."

"Thank you... Gohan." She whispered in a slightly hoarse voice.

Gohan's eyes lit up with happiness.

"You can count on me whenever you need me." The young man's voice was full of warmth and sincerity.

It is because of his warm and kind tone that Bulma is caught off guard when he gives her an ultimatum.

"Now if you don't eat something, take a shower and sleep at least eight hours, I'm going to stay here disturbing you instead of training." He threatened the young man while maintaining his friendly smile. "Putting our journey and our lives at risk."

"Haha" Bulma laughed awkwardly. "So funny."

"That wasn't a joke, not even a threat." Gohan then furrowed his eyebrows, staring intensely. "It's a promise."

Bulma's blood ran cold and in a panic she grabbed Gohan's hand tightly and pulled him running into the building.

"Wait!" Exclaims Gohan worried. "What about Krillin?"

Despite being stronger, Gohan was still much smaller than the blue-haired scientist, so he was ignored as he was dragged into the kitchen. Leaving Krillin unconscious on the Capsule Corporation lawn.

[DBI:GG]
​

After the initial shock, Bulma calmed down and let Gohan go get Krillin while she went to get them something to eat.

In a few minutes Gohan enters the Briefs family kitchen accompanied by Krillin who was awake and nursing a big bump on his head.

"What was that wrench made of?" Questions Krillin, suffering from a slight headache.

"Katchin?" Suggested Gohan without being sure.

"Bless you." Krillin replies, unaware that the young man had suggested the strongest metal in the universe.

Despite shaking his head in disappointment at the veteran warrior's response, Gohan didn't correct him and turned his attention to the kitchen where Bulma and her parents were gathering. Doctor Brief was smoking a cigarette and reading his newspaper, Mrs Brief was washing the dishes and Bulma was devouring a stack of pancakes, with a few plates piled up next to her.

It wasn't a Goku level pile, but it was still impressive to see that she had eaten so much.

"May I know which one of you two is threatening my daughter!" Said a female voice.

Both fighters turned to Bulma's mother, Bikini Brief, who was staring at them intently with her arms crossed as she tapped her left foot impatiently waiting for a response.

Krillin's eyes widened in surprise that someone had threatened Bulma in her own home, but before he could speak Gohan stepped forward to take the blame.

"It was me." The young man said without hesitation, but without looking at the blonde mother in the eyes. "And I don't regret it, she needs-."

Before he could explain further, the young one was pulled into a tight hug.

"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Mrs. Brief said, suffocating Gohan in her cleavage while her husband gave a serene smile at the seemingly innocent scene. "I know Bulma's work is important, but I was getting worried about her health."

The matriarch of the Brief family pulls Gohan away from her chest, holding Gohan by his armpits as she lifts him up to look him in the eyes.

"I was so relieved when she said you made her take a break and eat."

"It's not just a break to eat." Said Gohan, despite remaining serious, his face was completely red with embarrassment. "She's also going to take a shower and sleep for at least eight hours if she doesn't I will come back here and bother her until she does."

In response, Bulma stopped eating only to glare at Gohan, as if she hoped he had forgotten the rest of his own threat. Her mother was even happier and smothered the young warrior in her cleavage again.

Krillin sat at the table smiling, although his head still hurt, he was in a better mood since his attacker was the target of the tease.

When Bikini finally released Gohan he was sat on the table a little dizzy and marked with the smell of Mrs. Brief's expensive perfume.

"I know my wife has already thanked you, but I would also like to express my gratitude to you, young man." Mr Brief said. "I'm very proud of my daughter's talent and dedication, but as you informed her, she was going to end up hurting herself at this rate."

Gohan shakes his head, recovering from the dizziness and turns towards the patriarch before answering him.

"It was nothing sir, I know she would do the same for any of her friends. And it is also important to stop for a rest when working on such complex projects, after all, with a tired brain they make more mistakes, have more difficulty with reasoning or finding solutions to difficult problems."

The Doctor's eyes widen in surprise at the young man's words, but then he lets out a hearty laugh.

"You are absolutely correct." The gentleman comments with good humor. "In fact, if you need anything just let me know, it would be a pleasure to help such an intelligent and polite young man."

Surprised by the proposal, Gohan thinks about dismissing the offer, but he remembers something.

"Did Bulma explain to you about my father's ship?"

"Yes." The doctor responds in a surprised tone. "While she's sleeping I'll give it a look over."

"I understand." Murmurs Gohan to the doctor. "Could you make another ship for my father to go to Namekusei later?"

"Hmm." The curious doctor mumbles. "Yes, I can, but it will take a few weeks, even using Goku's original ship."

"Neat." Gohan comments with a relieved smile. "But tell me, how long would it take you to build a gravity machine?"

[DBI:GG]
​

After finishing eating, Bulma went to rest while Gohan and Krillin left towards their next destination, the Karin Tower.

The trip took a few hours of flight, making the pair arrive at the tower at dusk.

"I didn't expect to see you two here so soon." Said an old voice from inside the surly tower. "From what Yajirobe told me, I thought they were preparing for the trip."

Gohan's eyes widened as he saw the ancient and peculiar figure approaching them. It was Master Karin, a strange bipedal cat, known for his wisdom and being 700 years old.

"If you came for senzu beans, I regret to inform you that they need a few more weeks."

Before speaking, Gohan hesitated for a moment, but swallowed his fears and went ahead with his plan.

"Master Karin, I came to ask for something." The young man declares, bowing. "Please let me drink the Ultra Divine Water."

Master Karin analyzed Gohan with suspicion. The young man's request was strange and the old master felt something was wrong.

"Why do you want to drink Ultra Divine Water?" Karin asked, arching an eyebrow. "Do you know the risks?"

Gohan pursed his lips and looked at his master with a determined look and nodded.

Karin looked at Gohan with a mixture of admiration and concern.

"And why do you want to take that risk now? Why do you want so much power?"

Without hesitation, Gohan talks about his biggest concern about the trip.

"Because the master Vegeta serves is a thousand times stronger than him."

Master Karin and Krillin reacted shocked by Gohan's statement. The old master opened his eyes widely and Krillin's mouth fell open.

"It c-can't be t-true." Krillin stutters.

Master Karin, despite being apprehensive, manages to control his reaction better than Krillin and stares at Gohan in disbelief.

"It's hard to believe that someone so powerful exists." Says Karin in her old, hoarse voice.

"And just to be clear, I'm comparing him to Vegeta's Oozaru form."

…

"WHAAT?!" Karin and Krillin shout together.

If before they were shocked, now they are completely terrified.

"Im-po-possible," Karin babbled. "How can someone be so powerful?!"

Laughing awkwardly, Gohan thinks that they are lucky Frieza never bothered to train, as the frost demon had the potential and talent to rival Super Saiyan Gods in a short time period.

Karin breathed tiredly, still surprised by the declaration of the young warrior in front of her.

"Now I understand your urgency to gain more power." Karin said thoughtfully. "I'm going to get water."

While Gohan was waiting, Krillin tried to convince the young man not to take the risk and not drink water.

"Have you lost your mind?" Krillin said, lowering his voice so the feline master couldn't hear. "You'll end up killing yourself."

Gohan looked at Krillin with a determined look. He knew the veteran warrior was worried about him, but he couldn't stop now. He needed power to face Frieza and the future enemies to come.

"I know the risks." Gohan replied, turning to his colleague. "And to be honest, I would like you to drink it too."

The veteran warrior was speechless and watched Gohan with a mixture of concern and confusion.

"You are crazy!" Exclaims Krillin raising both his hands. "Why would I do that?"

Gohan takes a deep breath and responds without looking directly at him.

"Because I know you don't consider yourself strong. I also know that lately you feel inferior to everyone, that you are afraid, I know that you think you are always surrounded by friends and enemies much more powerful than you."

Krillin is amazed at the young warrior's statement. It's been a few years since his first doubts arose, but since the arrival of the Saiyans they have intensified.

"And even with these thoughts haunting you, you always fought with courage and determination. To protect the weak and to defend what is right."

"But it's Goku who always defeats powerful enemies." Krillin argues with a trembling voice.

"My father is always willing to fight for what is right." Says Gohan, turning to him. "A genius when it comes to fighting and dedicated when it comes to training."

Breathing a sigh of relief, Krillin nods in agreement.

"But it is you who always challenges the enemy, regardless of whether he is stronger or how afraid you are. And that's why, at least for me, you're the greatest hero on this planet."

Krillin's throat dried up at Gohan's words, he had interacted so little with the young warrior and yet he thought so highly of him.

"Wow Gohan, I didn't know that-."

"I'm back." Said the feline master, returning with a large white teapot and a glass, cutting Krillin off in the middle of his sentence.

Without wasting time on ceremonies, the cat poured the water into the glass and handed it to Gohan.

For a second Gohan hesitated, his eyes fixed on the swirling liquid in the cup. The risk was high, but he also knew that he needed this power. Taking a deep breath, he raised the cup to his lips and drank it all in one gulp.

As soon as the last drop touched his tongue, Gohan felt a searing pain course through his body. It was as if he had swallowed molten lava and every fiber of his being screamed in agony. He fell to the ground, writhing in pain as sweat ran down his face.

In horror Krillin watched Gohan convulsing on the ground, his body twisting and contorting in painful ways. Krillin quickly knelt down next to Gohan, sweating coldly with concern for the young man.

"Gohan…" He whispered desperately.

For hours, Gohan lay on the ground, wracked with pain and unable to move or speak. His body convulsed violently several times before suddenly becoming still, only to then relax.

When the moon was already high on the horizon, the pain suddenly dissipated from Gohan's body.

Slowly Gohan began to regain consciousness. His vision was blurry at first, but gradually it cleared until he could see everything around him with perfect clarity as the system's warning windows opened in front of him.

[+220K MENTAL]
[New Perk: Omnimind]
[Zenkai Boost(50%)]​

Gohan's eyes widened in awe when he saw his winnings. A massive mental attribute bonus, a new Perk and the biggest Zenkai Boost he's ever had.

'In the original Goku also had gained the ability to sense Ki, why didn't I gain it? And what exactly is this Omnimind?'

But since he didn't want to waste time, Gohan put his questions aside and got up to hand the cup to Krillin.

"I'm not going to make you do this against your will, but I still think you should drink."

Sweating profusely and shaking with anticipation, Krillin took the offered cup and carefully drank it after the master filled it with water without understanding the full context of what was happening.

As soon as the water touched his lips, Krillin felt a wave of pain pass through him and just as Gohan fell to the ground writhing in pain.

"I hope all this effort from you two is worth it."

"It will be worth it, master." Said Gohan, proud of the decision Krillin made. "While he's 'busy', could we talk?"

The ancient cat stares at Gohan with suspicion of what he might want.

"What would you like to talk about?"

"God Ki." The young man says, giving a friendly smile.

…

"I think I don't like you." The old cat complains in an irritated tone.

​

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Gohan Character Sheet:

[STATUS]​

Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 29 [ 60M / 79M ]
HP : 6,37M
KP : 6,15M
PL : 1.076,25K

MIGHT : 1.275K
AGILITY : 1.050K
SPIRIT : 1.230K
MENTAL : 750K

Points: 3,000

[STATUS]

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Boa noite pessoas,

Even though I don't respond to all the comments, I read them all. And my goodness, so many people want the love interest to be Android 21.

COMMENTS:

-DJONGO(spiritfanfiction):
Tá tri. I wonder why there are so few stories about Gohan when he's such a great character.
-Renan: I haven't read many Dragon Ball fics, but if what you say is true, I'm sad to know that Gohan isn't popular.

-Datdude58(archiveofourown):
Videl, but don't do her dirty like they did in super where she's just a housewife. At least make her a cop when she's older lol.
-Renan: In Super it looks like she runs fighting tournaments or is some kind of martial arts teacher. Which seems strange considering that she helped the police when she was a teenager.
To me it would make more sense for her to be from a special forces or something like that.

 

[stads]

nice chapter thx for writing it
huh wonder what the cat knows about god ki
nice seeing bulma being talked down still dont get the whole polite ness the mc is putting in all the time

 

[Yume]

Fun chapter, thanks for writing it.

My only real gripe so far though is the spelling error that's seemingly attached itself to Korin for some reason:

It was Master Karin

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[Kazumaa23]

Fun chapter, thanks for writing it.

My only real gripe so far though is the spelling error that's seemingly attached itself to Korin for some reason:

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That's his actual name (カリン, Karin) in Japan and most countries.

 

[xbox432]

Yeah, Bulma and Krillin are both awesome characters. The smartest and strongest humans respectively. It's good to see Gohan show them so much respect. The fact that they can TELL that he's being sincere about it is something they both needed.

I'm curious to see just what all Gohan learns from the old Masters that he's going to visit. Earthlings may not be as naturally powerful as other races, but damn if they aren't creative with their techniques. His training with Krillin... I'm curious to see just how strong Krillin himself will become after going through Bootcamp Gohan.

PL : 1.076,25K

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I think that "K" is supposed to be an "M"... and maybe add a zero? Unless you're using some kind of numeral system I'm not aware of.

 

[Lillie Jones]

While Gohan Si finally learns ki concealment after spending some time on his Human ki bomb incident, which Gohan Si gives sincerity to Bulma and Krillian before getting serious about going to Namek with the 2 of them and utilizing the Saiyan ship as new vessel to traveling in space to stop Frieza from wishing from the Namekian Dragon balls Porunga.
Meantime, Gohan SI goes to Karin for more power by drinking the Ultra divine water and looking for the old Masters of God ki mastery before reaching Super Saiyan 1 before Frieza final conflict on Planet Namek or after Gohan Si potentially master's Ultra instinct level with new possibilities for the young Saiyan hybrid Gohan Si.
We'll see how it goes next time for Gohan Si and Z fighter trip to Namek begins at the meantime.
Continue on
Cheers!

 

[LuckyRobert]

nice chapter thx for writing it
huh wonder what the cat knows about god ki
nice seeing bulma being talked down still dont get the whole polite ness the mc is putting in all the time

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Speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far.