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Feel The Ground Shake (Pokemon - Ground-type specialist)

Well, admittedly, the A/N is mostly for the babies over on FFN.
Wasn't FFN the hotbed of degeneracy at one point? The first fanfic I ever read on there was a since deleted story about
Lyra losing to Silver and becoming his sex slave that he'd pimp out for money.
Then again, a lot's changed since then. Critics United, the massive hang-ups the website's had over the past couple years, etc etc.
 
Wasn't FFN the hotbed of degeneracy at one point? The first fanfic I ever read on there was a since deleted story about
Lyra losing to Silver and becoming his sex slave that he'd pimp out for money.
Then again, a lot's changed since then. Critics United, the massive hang-ups the website's had over the past couple years, etc etc.
Did it do a Tumblr and clear out all the degeneracy?
 
{Brad: Fine then! *Throws Pokeball*
*Enter, Registeel*
Registeel: *Falls over*
Receptionist:... Really now? That's clearly just a Ditto in disguise; I've dealt with 7 "Cobalions", 4 "Jirachis", and a clearly confused trainer who thought his "Lunala" was a "Solgaleo".
Brad: What?
Receptionist: NEXT!}
I read this in the voice of that woman in ATLA who sees 50 avatars a day.
I don't think a Razor Claw is enough as a gift to Lorelei. While on his trip to Hoenn, MC make a detour to Shoal Cave to catch a few Snorunt-line (for its mega potential.
Giving the girl you're trying to win back a future Mega Glalie or Froslass , she can't just take him back they need to get married.
 
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Great chapter; I really like how you show the MC interacting with the world
 
With a flick of his wrist the stranger releases a Lv. 48 Magmortar to his side and the fiery 'mon doesn't hesitate in aiming its arm-cannon directly at K.Rool and me. "You two haven't earned the right to be here yet." He informs me while looking down past his nose. "Leave, before someone gets hurt."
So does the guy do this often? Is this just a bluff and he's never actually failed to scare someone? I'm pretty sure if he has a reputation for doing this then when he complains, no one will believe him not being the aggressor.
 
So does the guy do this often? Is this just a bluff and he's never actually failed to scare someone? I'm pretty sure if he has a reputation for doing this then when he complains, no one will believe him not being the aggressor.

I'm a little confused at your question. Why would this be a thing that happens often? Bradley's the one who's making an ass of himself on the Tower's front lawn.
 
I'm a little confused at your question. Why would this be a thing that happens often? Bradley's the one who's making an ass of himself on the Tower's front lawn.
The magmortar was very quick to threaten him without any prompt from his trainer other than being sent out(it was stated that it pointed the arm cannon at both trainer and pokemon). Also the guy is a dick I'd believe that he's done this before.
 
Anyone not seeing the last two chapter in fanfiction app? Weirdly they are there on the site.
 
You see…Sandile into Krokorok is what I call a 'weak' evolution. Only an anemic 59 point gain. Very below average. Krokorok should really just be called 'Sandile plus'. Sandile version 1.2. A Sandile that's now walking on two legs.

Olivia's other Pokémon, a Corsola, frantically fires off Bubblebeams to keep the charging crocodilian away, but K.Rool just darts and weaves past them with his new Speed like it's nothing. Letting his jaws glow with Crunch as he rushes in like the predator he is.

The evolution of Krokorok to Krookodile on the other hand?
Good to see him finally evolve. His last couple of battles didn't seem to be going as well as they could have. He definitely was struggling against some of his opponents. Hopefully this push from his final evolution helps motivate him.

Also, like the fact that Brad commented on the fact that not all evolution are created equal. Putting in the work is important for sure, but some Pokemon definitely have an advantage.

We're not really making great time here, travel-wise.

Per the original plan, we should've been halfway through the next Route over by sundown yesterday. I've definitely allowed myself to dawdle.

But it's just that this place has been such a goldmine!

I don't know what it is, but the trainers passing through here have just been non-stop.
Ugh, I know this feeling. Reading this fic inspired me to get out my Gen 1 Pokemon Red for a play through. And it has been fun. But there comes a point where the scarcity of remaining trainers to fight against becomes a problem for the grind. All 6 of my main Pokemon are level 52 right now and we are near the endgame. It makes me appreciate the fact that Brad has managed a team with multiple pokemon over level 50. It can take quite a bit of work to assemble a team like that, I can't imagine it is any easier in-universe.

Probably why we don't see many trainers succeed at the Conference or get 8 Gym Badges. Actually catching, training, and feeding a team like that is an investment. It doesn't just happen.

I do wonder if Ma Ma's new evolution will get some people more interested in him, and give him more opportunities to battle? If he reveals her outside the Battle Tower I can imagine anyone else in residence there right now will rush out there to battle him as well. After all, how often do veteran trainers get the chance to battle against a never seen before new evolution? I can see all the trainers lining up to get a shot at facing Brad for the chance to be one of the first to fight against him and his "new" pokemon.
 
Thinking about it, there's going to be at least one Trainer in the Battle Tower with an Ursaring that desperately wants to evolve them now that they know it's possible and is willing to bang their head on a wall for the full week. It looks like just the thing to get out of the rut a lot of the people here are implied to be in.
 
sorry to say but Pokemon Reborn has a similar if tamer bull x cow moments. Nothing he hasn't seen before.
Suffice to say, some farmer dudes shooting the shit about Pokemon breeding habits, and Pokemon eating other Pokemon, was nowhere near on the same level as the mind-numbing slog that happens in that game
(least the Pokemon were eating other Pokemon instead of live humans)
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I read this in the voice of that woman in ATLA who sees 50 avatars a day.
Classic bit. What actually inspired me to write that was that I wanted to craft a scenario where Brad just cuts through the fat and shows off the Registeel he has, but then I thought "Say… instead of this just being an instant-win scenario, how can we make this go wrong?", so I just made it so that other trainers are so desperate to bypass Gym Challenge schedules, they'll use Pokemon like Ditto/Smeargle/Zorua(either form)/Zoruark(either form) to pretend to be injured, super-rare Pokemon.
It was a lot of fun writing out.
 
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Been a while since I looked at this, isn't this the one where the MC is some asshole who's working for Rocket while trying to get with Lorelei and thinks that's not going to blow up in his face so bad it starts a new ice age?
 
Been a while since I looked at this, isn't this the one where the MC is some asshole who's working for Rocket while trying to get with Lorelei and thinks that's not going to blow up in his face so bad it starts a new ice age?
Yep. This is that fic.

Giovanni's gonna get his own ursaluna once he figures out the moon thing.

I don't think the Lorelei flirting is quite that doomed, though.
 
Been a while since I looked at this, isn't this the one where the MC is some asshole who's working for Rocket while trying to get with Lorelei and thinks that's not going to blow up in his face so bad it starts a new ice age?
Oh let the story get there, i wanna see if MC will try "i was just hired for tunnel making" as an excuse
 
Yep. This is that fic.

Giovanni's gonna get his own ursaluna once he figures out the moon thing.

I don't think the Lorelei flirting is quite that doomed, though.
There's zero chance he can do the extremely shady things he does and have Lorelei retain any feelings for him except all consuming hatred at the betrayal. Well I guess the writer could just force it to happen, but there's no way it would actually work and would just make the story as badly written like one of those fics that have Hermione falling for canon Draco. Fireworks are going to be fun though, hell of a way to end the fic with the MC literally having his balls frozen off.

Oh let the story get there, i wanna see if MC will try "i was just hired for tunnel making" as an excuse
It could be very entertaining! Hopefully. The writer has been letting their si get away with an awful lot though, and the only loss I can remember was because his Pokemon didn't listen to him which "absolves" him of that....this could end very poorly as well
 
There's zero chance he can do the extremely shady things he does and have Lorelei retain any feelings for him except all consuming hatred at the betrayal. Well I guess the writer could just force it to happen, but there's no way it would actually work and would just make the story as badly written like one of those fics that have Hermione falling for canon Draco. Fireworks are going to be fun though, hell of a way to end the fic with the MC literally having his balls frozen off.


It could be very entertaining! Hopefully. The writer has been letting their si get away with an awful lot though, and the only loss I can remember was because his Pokemon didn't listen to him which "absolves" him of that....this could end very poorly as well
My headcanon that I'm coping with is that he's colluding with the Pokemon Feds.
 
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There's zero chance he can do the extremely shady things he does and have Lorelei retain any feelings for him except all consuming hatred at the betrayal.
...projecting much? We don't have enough characterization for Lorelei to call her that much of a white knight. Or that she had a noble opinion of him that got tarnished.

Like, yeah he's done some shady shit for bad people, but that's far from deserving 'all-consuming' hatred. Sure, if she learns about that she'd be pissed, and rightly so, but it's not like he whacked people, or even committed robberies himself. He just digs smuggler tunnels.

As I said, it's not guaranteed to blow up in his face. Likely, but not guaranteed, and it would be theoretically recoverable. Chicks dig bad boys, after all.
 
...projecting much? We don't have enough characterization for Lorelei to call her that much of a white knight. Or that she had a noble opinion of him that got tarnished.

Like, yeah he's done some shady shit for bad people, but that's far from deserving 'all-consuming' hatred. Sure, if she learns about that she'd be pissed, and rightly so, but it's not like he whacked people, or even committed robberies himself. He just digs smuggler tunnels.

As I said, it's not guaranteed to blow up in his face. Likely, but not guaranteed, and it would be theoretically recoverable. Chicks dig bad boys, after all.
Isn't lorelei as part of elite 4 kinda high in law enforcement hierearchy and it leaking could be i dunno... Damaging? for her... Reputation?
 
...projecting much? We don't have enough characterization for Lorelei to call her that much of a white knight. Or that she had a noble opinion of him that got tarnished.

Like, yeah he's done some shady shit for bad people, but that's far from deserving 'all-consuming' hatred. Sure, if she learns about that she'd be pissed, and rightly so, but it's not like he whacked people, or even committed robberies himself. He just digs smuggler tunnels.

As I said, it's not guaranteed to blow up in his face. Likely, but not guaranteed, and it would be theoretically recoverable. Chicks dig bad boys, after all.
We absolutely have enough to go on to know she'd be absolutely not okay with his bullshit, she leaves the Elite Four to kick the crap out of the Rockets that went near her home. And before that in Let's Go she strikes terror in the Rockets she meets and is not gentle with them.

Also it's not White Knighting for a member of the Elite Four to be very strongly against Team Rocket who mostly steal little kids best friends and kidnap and extort people.
 
But he's not a member of Team Rocket. He just did a few jobs for them in return for sketchy technically legal shit like the Life Orb. She'd probably suspect he did some sketchy crap to get it when she learns he has it, even.

I didn't say she'd be okay with it, but saying shit like all consuming hatred is just overblown.
 
But he's not a member of Team Rocket. He just did a few jobs for them in return for sketchy technically legal shit like the Life Orb. She'd probably suspect he did some sketchy crap to get it when she learns he has it, even.

I didn't say she'd be okay with it, but saying shit like all consuming hatred is just overblown.
Bro if you work for Team Rocket you are Team Rocket, the difference is academic. It would be one thing if he was trying to like get his kid life saving medical care and Rocket was his only choice or something like that, but he was working for them just for entirely selfish reasons if convenience.
 
Bro if you work for Team Rocket you are Team Rocket, the difference is academic.
It really isn't. Mercenaries and independent contractors are a thing that exists.

The difference is that if the local team rocket boss, whatever his name was, ask our MC to do something, the MC is under no obligation to do it. He can just say no. The only thing he's out is whatever payment he would have received for the task that is requested of him, unless they start trying the blackmail approach. If an actual team rocket member did that, the consequences would be much different.

He doesn't wear the uniform, he doesn't join in on operations, he doesn't swear loyalty. He is a subject matter expert on the subject of digging and he gets paid to do just that.

Team rocket are just criminals, they're not an apocalypse cult or anything.
 
It really isn't. Mercenaries and independent contractors are a thing that exists.

The difference is that if the local team rocket boss, whatever his name was, ask our MC to do something, the MC is under no obligation to do it. He can just say no. The only thing he's out is whatever payment he would have received for the task that is requested of him, unless they start trying the blackmail approach. If an actual team rocket member did that, the consequences would be much different.

He doesn't wear the uniform, he doesn't join in on operations, he doesn't swear loyalty. He is a subject matter expert on the subject of digging and he gets paid to do just that.

Team rocket are just criminals, they're not an apocalypse cult or anything.
i could maybe see your point if they tried to hide the fact they are a criminal organization from him but they didn't being paid to dig the kidnapping tunnels but not doing the kidnapping himself still makes him a criminal
 
It really isn't. Mercenaries and independent contractors are a thing that exists.

The difference is that if the local team rocket boss, whatever his name was, ask our MC to do something, the MC is under no obligation to do it. He can just say no. The only thing he's out is whatever payment he would have received for the task that is requested of him, unless they start trying the blackmail approach. If an actual team rocket member did that, the consequences would be much different.

He doesn't wear the uniform, he doesn't join in on operations, he doesn't swear loyalty. He is a subject matter expert on the subject of digging and he gets paid to do just that.

Team rocket are just criminals, they're not an apocalypse cult or anything.
...I really don't know what's going on your head that you think there's any actual distinction, I really don't. But just do we can know for sure, go knowingly work for the Mob/Yakuza/Triad on several important projects and see if anyone really cares about that distinction.
 
...I really don't know what's going on your head that you think there's any actual distinction, I really don't. But just do we can know for sure, go knowingly work for the Mob/Yakuza/Triad on several important projects and see if anyone really cares about that distinction.
These are useful examples, because those three all have very strict rules regarding gang membership. Just working with them once to provide a specialty service (like hacking) would definitely make you a criminal, but they would be extremely offended if you tried to call yourself a gang member for it.
 

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