"When's this blasted rain going to stop?" Motohama grumbly mumbled, pulling out his glasses to...
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To be honest, you had my interest now you have my attention, because a non-self insert living character experiencing real growth and a member of the perverted trio, having some decent character depth take my views. and in all honesty, each member of the perverted trio just needs a real dose of terrifying reality to really put into perspective how wasteful their existence is. Now I'm not saying you have to throw all three of them into life-threatening dungeons, but I'm just saying.
I'm still new to the forum and I don't know how to unthread it
Thanks for the heads-upSeems pretty interesting, watched!
Oh btw you didn't threadmark your chapter
On top of that even the overpowered gamers they all have a drop off points in which all the stats basically just stall off and just won't increase very fast. Time and time again I have seen it. It's how they artificially limit their character.Interesting choice of a protagonist.
However, I think you overused the Gamer mechanism. In all gamer fics, I have read and that includes the original. The gamer skill just ends up becoming "whatever asspull I want technique" after a while. It's also boring as fuck to read all those gamer perks and skill that stops being meaningful a couple of chapters later.
Anyway nice opening. Good luck.