a guy1013
Versed in the lewd.
- Joined
- Jul 16, 2019
- Messages
- 1,988
- Likes received
- 10,365
Maybe, but the oc feels too much of a si base on the way he describes UC tech and ce tech , like saying mobile suit tech is soo old , when in ce it's new , since the oc wasn't simply drop here , he would have gone to school learn history and know that zaft made the first ms instead the forge stuff going on , if the MC was more like being wowed by his tech than seeing ce tech being lack luster when being compared then it will feel like the oc is just an oc instead of oc that should been a si instead of being an oc and you read my ficI don't think you can really judge considering how bad your Red Frame SI is.
Sai is nothing like Kira he doesn't crap his pants or act sanctimonious enough to be like Kira. He also hasn't get his upgrades from his girlfriend. Sai hasn't cucked Kira or any of his other friends either.
Also the main character's name is Sai not MC insert that's your SI's name.