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Half-Blood Prince's Tale (Hp Si as Snape)

I tried racking my brain for more facts and tidbits about the seventies but couldn't recall much. The most substantial info I could force out were some bands and musicians that were from the 70s.
Technology? There's a lot happening in the 70's and 80's. How about prepping to invest in Sony when you get older? Or if you can, get ready to invest in Microsoft? Just a few years to go...
 
I didn't fret too much since the Hogwarts library would have everything I needed and more or so I hoped.
Hope he has the good sense to ask the hat to put him in Ravenclaw rather than Slytherin. With library they have. Also gets him out from under the pure bloods thumb, and lets him avoid Voldemort until he is ready.



Eileen continued and concluded her tale but didn't tell her that it was her son who killed Tobias but instead changed it to herself.
She seriously admitted to murder that easily o_O I know you used to know her. But you havn't met her in many years, and you admit to murder in your first few minutes of talking again? I can see how you landed that husband...


I just raised an eyebrow. The name felt familiar but I couldn't recall it.
Srsly? All those details, but you couldn't recall this place? It's fairly prominent in at least 3 of the books(Prisoner, Goblet, Phoenix). And I do believe it's at least mentioned a couple of times in 2 of the others.

I was about to head back into my room but I remembered something. "Oh right...I almost forgot, I made an acquaintance at the park today.."

"You made a friend !!" Eileen shouted with unhidden excitement in her voice.

"I guess...you could call it that too."

"Severus, tell me is it a boy or a girl?!"

Her excitement was a bit jarring. "It's a …" I began but before I could answer.

Eileen said, " It's a girl isn't it?"

I nodded. "You guessed correctly…"

"Oh I never guessed Severus, I knew it was a girl. I just asked to make sure."

I just stared at her speechless.She smiled and asked, "So tell me more about her? How is she? Is she pretty? What's her name? Where does she live?"

I sighed at this bombardment of questions, "Could you please calm down mother, why are you so excited anyway?"

"How can I not be excited? You made a friend and it's a girl at that…"
He has my deepest sympathy. That reminds me of my own mother... Making a big thing of every little encounter I had with ppl in my youth... Especially if the happened to be a girl. If I wasn't already disinterested in romantic relationships, that sure as hell would have cemented an outright dislike for the very topic. She blew every little detail out of proportion.

He could tell by the look she left with that the chances of her reconciling with Lily was close to nil now. In canon, she had only learnt that she wouldn't be accepted into the wizarding world after Lily turned 11 but now that her hopes were crushed early, she felt worse.
Unlikely, she hasn't had as much time to desperately cling to hope. And she's not as old, and thus hasn't fully matured yet. Leaving her time to grow out of it.

Maybe she will realise that her hate was misguided and pointless or she becomes worse than her canon self. Either way she didn't really matter for me.
Your focus on the linguistic side seems to be slipping: "matter to me."* (no this was far from the only mistake. But it was one of the more blatant ones).
 
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HOGWARTS SCHOOL OF WITCHCRAFT AND WIZARDRY

Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore

As I recall he should not be headmaster yet. It should be one Armando Dippet. Although, this should be the year that Dumbledore replaces him, as I recall.
 
Hello mate!
Wanted to know if everything was well!

Your novel is interesting so I wanted to see where you were going with it. Hope you are doing well!

-Arceus
 
so this is dead?
 

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