Lillie Jones
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"I have not heard from her for a long time. I hear she's doing well after the divorce. She got alimony from Dad."
For some reason, the judge agreed to give alimony and monthly child support to their mother, even though the two brothers stayed with their father. Perhaps there was a negotiation between their parents regarding that.
"One thing is for sure. She wants to meet you." Aaron added.
"But why me? Shouldn't she contact you instead? You have a more stable income than I do?"
"Yes, but my cash and liquid assets are nothing compared to yours, Mr. Billionaire Director."
"You know that's not true. My income is not even 1/10 of that amount."
"I'm just kidding. Anyway, she wants something from you. I feel sorry for you. You know how Mom roasts a person until she gets what she wants."
John Wick is routinely outnumbered DOZENS to ONE and comes out the winner.Unfortunately, as strong as Marcus was, he was outnumbered. He was cornered.
As for the outcome, it depends on Kazir Grey's decision. Should he let Marcus live or not? That was the question.
Yes, I just don't remember if I added it.
I gotta copy this comment because it made sense and to remind me to give some actors some PoV. Thanks for the comment.This has to be one of the best of this kind of story out there. Your MC sticks to just directing, instead of doing everything from acting to polka dancing. He also isn't banging every actress there is, and there hasn't been any creepy casting couch action like I've seen. So this has been pretty good so far.
I would like to see some alternate POV, and events happening with other characters. I would love to see some more Jack Black, as he is one of my favorite comedians, and I think you stopped doing comedy way too early. I think showing more of other characters, and the effects Kazir has had on them, could make this story better.
As far as movies go, I'd love to see him add The Equalizer to the Universe, and Kill Bill could be a good one for a female lead. I also think Harrison Ford would make the best Big Bad like Thanos. Mostly because I love Harrison Ford. Either way, this was a fun read, and thanks for sharing it!