One soul woke up in Rukongai, very close the eighty's districts.
He had nothing but a memory of...
He had nothing but a memory of...
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Wiererid | 5 |
Appreciate it, and will see what I can do.
I think you mean distracted.
hado, not hido
lectures
makes finding
wonder (think), not wander (walk)
by-product
Bankai
You misspell her name twice in two different ways. The consistent version is Awasi.
A character who takes the slow and steady approach. How novel. Will he meet anyone interesting in 1st class or continue his loner path? He could really use a friend who's as motivated as he is.
You asked for it:
I think you mean distracted.
hado, not hido
lectures
makes finding
wonder (think), not wander (walk)
by-product
Bankai
You misspell her name twice in two different ways. The consistent version is Awasi.
living --> leaving
zanjusts --> zanjutsu
Captain
A superfluous "my", I do believe
According to the wiki, it's spelled Hōgyoku
life of day --> light of day
Good, don't get involved with the main cast until you've built a reputation, at least. Don't want to get on Aizen's radar yet, if at all.
Sad to see that there are no like-minded individuals in 1st class, but oh well. Maybe his Zanpakto spirit will fill that slot.
Dropping*
Rukia*
Ah man, I thought that I would find any mention to Seigen Suzunami, or the Kudo twins since you said this is 100 years before canon...
Note: Seigen Suzunami and the Kudo twins are from the Bleach Game for the Nintendo DS that's a SRPG bit like FF Tactics
Thanks.I'm loving the story so far, I hope you keep on going with it.
There is a big difference between being high and tall. "He was two and something meters tall who was built like a bull".He was two and something meters high man who was build like a bull
help him
soul burials
Seireitei
Had to be done. There is about a hundred years worth of story ahead, and I do need to pick my battles. The idea is only to show intresting things/important episodoes that show who the character is, and then breaking points in his development, if there would be any.Five years time skip? Fair enough, there wasn't particularly much of interest happening in the school.
Technically no one stops them from learning kaido outside of the fourth, ask Hinamori. Most just don't bother.Also, there should be some rotation between squads in my opinion. Every Shinigami should pull at least some duty in squad 4, for example, because every warrior who is expected to fight for decades/centuries should really know some "first aid".
Reiryoku
Gotei
Thanks!Reiryoku
Gotei
Might want to get a beta to check your chapters out.
Loving the chapters tho
The stuff about the Zanpakuto that we find out in the last arc is still correct right? "The Blade is me"
The Mc should be looking at himself and doing self-reflection to work out what his Blade is going to do.
He should also remember the lessons that Ichigo go over the manga or at the very least the Iconic : "I'm so disappointed, Ichigo, so very disappointed. Sadly, your sword exhibits only fear. When you counter, it's because you fear being killed. When you attack, you fear killing. And when you protect someone, you fear you could let them die. At this point, the only thing your sword speaks is sensless fright, and that's not good. What you don't need in battle is fear. Nothing will come of it. When you counter, you don't let them cut you. When you protect someone, you don't let them die. And when you attack, you kill." -Kisuke Urahara (Bleach)"
The Blade is me is from when Ichigo gets his Zanpakuto reforged by Ōetsu Nimaiya.(Ōetsu Nimaiya ask Ichigo what the Zanpakuto is)In the last arc we find out that Zanpakuto are a dead shinigami who's souls got repurposed into blades.
"The blade is me" is from… earlier?
Anyhow, by this point MC operates more on what he was actually taught in detail by his teachers, not by half-remembered self-contradicting show. He still theorizes and hopes, but the general consensus is that a Zanpakuto form as it does, you can't do much to affect it.
It was spelled out a few times before that, just like how blades formes from a soul of a shinigami who wields it, being born with and dies with him.The Blade is me is from when Ichigo gets his Zanpakuto reforged by Ōetsu Nimaiya.(Ōetsu Nimaiya ask Ichigo what the Zanpakuto is)
"Don't get it? Can't blame ya. How you fight? How you attack? No, no, no. What's wrong? It's all wrong! You've used your Zanpakutō as tools? Treated them like subordinates? Relied on them like partners? As family? As friends? Role models? Students? Pets? Acquaintances? Sweethearts? Lovers? Don't make me sick!!! That's what these guys are tryin' to tell you. You're looking at things completely the wrong way. Which is superior, the Zanpakutō or the Shinigami? Let's think about that to start with, yeah?!!"-Ōetsu Nimaiya
whose
must cease to exist
as an unapologetic villain
Yhwach
Aizen
Gin
Thank you!
Thanks, I do try, I will probably get a bit better at it as I will get more practice in, but no promises.I kinda agree with his assessment of Aizen's goal. The afterlife in Bleach is not something I'd want to enter. Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but the soul king isn't really sentient, right? It's the zero squad who pull the strings in the back.
You are getting better at catching your own mistakes, it seems.