Zege
It's Magic, I ain't gotta explain shit.
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Very nice, a great chapter.
The only thing that wasn't as great was some of the dialogue in the Basilisk flashback. It felt a little... wooden? It just didn't seem to flow quite as well as the rest, particularly the Basilisk itself, and Ginnymort to a lesser extent.
				
			The only thing that wasn't as great was some of the dialogue in the Basilisk flashback. It felt a little... wooden? It just didn't seem to flow quite as well as the rest, particularly the Basilisk itself, and Ginnymort to a lesser extent.