Queen of Instant Death

[Nephthys8079]

Thanks for the chapter~
I'm really liking this so far.
It's weird that the PRT had their Deputy-director at her school the day after when, while there were certainly signs, it wasn't particularly obvious it was Taylor, especially with how they usually don't just show up like that to see a Cape's civilian identity, but I guess it could be excused as them being a bit too spooked at how Lung died so quickly to an unknown.

On other notes, Taylor is really going down the deep end, likely reinforced by her power seemingly trivialising the worth of life in her mind.
I'd love to see more of it, and people's reactions when she inevitably kills an Endbringer in an instant (The Simurgh should be in 1 month, assuming that doesn't change because of her).

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Yea I kinda fucked up the timeline for this so just like everything else it's on the hiatus list til I get to fixing it but it's 2nd up so it's not far off

 

[CrazyDarkstar23]

While it's a great concept, I didn't really like the latest chapter all too much.

Marking a perspective change as an interlude chapter, with or without the actual characters name dropped, would be better imo.

I did find that the ignoring of gladlys death kinda a big deal, sure it would be overshadowed in a news standpoint but the way and the when he died is a pretty big red flag.

Coil is either being a genuine mastermind or very off the mark.

The prt is really dropping the ball xD. I can't even say it's that far off canon based on my memories, even with all the fanon infecting my mind.

 

[Nephthys8079]

While it's a great concept, I didn't really like the latest chapter all too much.

Marking a perspective change as an interlude chapter, with or without the actual characters name dropped, would be better imo.

I did find that the ignoring of gladlys death kinda a big deal, sure it would be overshadowed in a news standpoint but the way and the when he died is a pretty big red flag.

Coil is either being a genuine mastermind or very off the mark.

The prt is really dropping the ball xD. I can't even say it's that far off canon based on my memories, even with all the fanon infecting my mind.

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Yea it's part of why it's gonna get a rewrite