A story of a man who refused to accept what had happened.
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I prefer this kind of MC, more a plot device and force of nature. They remain unmoving and silent, refusing to explain themselves, only moving forward with purpose when the time to act arrives
Glad you enjoy it, I've chosen to have different kind of MC's for all my stories to see what I personally prefer writing for future references. I must say I quite like this and the MC from my other story The Enigmatic Meddler.
"Your crimes are numerous, unforgivable, and damning. The torture and slaughter of the innocent—sins committed under the banner of the Light itself, tarnishing its sanctity with your malevolence. You dared to wield its power, casting aside its solemn warnings, all for your twisted desires. Your day of reckoning has dawned, and the weight of your transgressions can no longer be ignored. The scales of the Light's justice tip against you! The time has come for you to answer for your heinous acts and embark on the treacherous path of redemption—In Ministerio ad Lucem!
I've found that if you stay silent, people just assume you know what you're doing and fill in their own assumptions. Meanwhile if you talk too much or try to act mysterious, you come off as chuuni or the more you speak the high the chance of exposing yourself as an idiot
As far as I'm concerned, no where does it say that the Light actually cares for what purpose you use it for, as long as you hold your convictions. It's not a religious ability backed by a higher power that acts like a morality police. So this just comes off as a bit sanctimonious (though perfectly just as no one wants to live with people who use a supposedly good power against you)
It's not that the Scarlet Crusaders being able to use the Light that is evil, but the fault of the Church Of Holy Light as a whole in misinterpreting the nature of Light
its a bit sad that we cant have anymore 100% good protagonists these days. everything needs to be some flavor of evil, apathy or inner conflicts.
Getting the Scarlet Crusaders to join up is great, as they do have a lot of manpower, and if the MC want to make a change in the world, then he needs them, also is the MC gonna do something with the elfs?
since when would an all good protagnoist kill anyone? if it is rewritten a tiny bit the current actions would still fit in with the good morality. if he were to cast his spell to make them strip all justifications from their minds and confronts them with their inner evil just like he did it now, that would be seen as good. he gives them basically a chance at redemption that they need to grip with their own hands if they want to. Not that instand mind control thing. If he were to cast it on a good person, nothing would happen for example. but your wrote it like it is a bad thing that uther didnt approve of. the mindset is different and the mechanics of your spell could have just shifted a bit and all would be good. As long as they had a choice, is all im saying. its all in the writing style. no action you currently did was in any way evil - the way you wrote it made it out to be though.
i think the Warcraft verse is already dark enough to not become bland with an all good MC but its still your story so do as you like.