[RWBY] Jaune BS Self Insert

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Sorry for the long time in between updates! Someone commissioned me to make this into a prose form actual story so I'm working on that!

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Looking forward to reading it.

 

[Bommel]

Sorry for the long time in between updates! Someone commissioned me to make this into a prose form actual story so I'm working on that!

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Excited to read the result, how it's different and how well it turns out, so take your time.

And even if it's not amazing, the experiment can still be interesting and you can get better with more practice with it anyway.

 

[kenlon]

Someone commissioned me to make this into a prose form actual story so I'm working on that!

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I was torn between commissioning this or Lines of Succession. Ended up going with this because I really wanted to see what AJT could do with the story using the original script format as a kind of outline.

 

[AndrewJTalon]

And the first refined chapter is up on my Patreon!

 

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https://www.deviantart.com/anbugami...tresses-Journey-Through-The-Desert-1366050196
Yang after not seeing SI Jaune for half a day.

 

[AndrewJTalon]

The next fight was with Team BRNZ. Arjun and Saia were rooting for May, who flushed but was pleased.

Pyrrha: "Good luck Jaune."

Jaune: "Good luck too, Pyrrha."

Nora: "He'll need it when he proposes to you!"

Jaune: Sigh "One step at a time... May is the main threat. Ren? We'll provide cover and keep the others busy. You slip in with Pyrrha."

Ren: "Got it."

Jaune: "Nora and I will engage BRN up front. Don't get cocky-This might seem like a simple job but they might try something. So let's stack the deck in our favor-Nora? Ice Dust grenades first. We need a screen."

Nora: "Aye aye, Captain!"

Oobleck: "BEGIN!"

Jaune opened up with an Aura Slash to force BRNZ to break, while May immediately ran off to try to get to higher ground

The blast hit Brawnz and blasted him off his feet

Brawnz: grunts

Nolan and Roy tried to close the distance, hoping to double team Jaune as JNPR broke up. Nora's Ice Dust Grenades had enveloped the battlefield in a mist.

Ren and Pyrrha had vanished into it

Nolan: "What the -"

Nora: "WHEEEEE!* She lands on Nolan with her hammer, and blasts him out of the ring!

Nolan: "BWAAAAHHHH!"

Jaune closes to close range to duel Brawnz, basically dominating the entire fight. Roy tries to close on him from behind

Only for a train horn to sound as Pyrrha gives him a roundhouse kick and final strike to knock him down.

Roy: "GAH!"

May had gotten up to the high height and opened fire with her sniper rifle, her Aura Vision letting her see through the Ice Dust, but her entire team was down.

May: "Crap."

Ren presses a gun to the back of her head

Ren: "Crap, indeed."

May: sighs "I surrender."

Brawnz: betrayed "MAY!"

May: "I'm outnumbered, Ni."

Oobleck "Winner, Team JNPR!"

Jaune: "Good work everyone!"

They exit to many cheers, especially from Team RWBY and Jaune's family. Arjun and Saia greet May in the corridor, and hug her

Arjun: "Now now... It could be worse."

Brawnz: "What about us?"

Saia: "Oh Brawnz, don't feel so bad! Our team got knocked out in the Vytal Tournament too, you know."

Nolan: "Still... It was so fast."

Jaune: "To be fair, I guessed we'd face you and made counters. May's your main offensive punch-Eliminate you guys and she's all alone."

Roy: "Have to admit, it was a good plan."

Jaune: "Thanks."

Arjun: "That said, getting into the second round was impressive... And you three will have nice jobs protecting my daughter as Royal Guards."

May: blushes "Father!"

Nolan: "... Cushy jobs?"

Arjun: "Within reason."

Nolan: "Hot dog!"

Brawnz: "HA! See you later, suckers! We've got steady employment!"

Roy: "Yeah!"

Arjun: deadpan "Of course if you are found to be corrupt I'll have you all castrated in public."

Brawnz, Nolan, and Roy immediately cover their crotch areas "Yessir!"

Jaune: "And hey... Congrats guys."

Nora: Pouts "Where's our cushy jobs?"

Ren: smirking "We're Jaune's bodyguards."

Pyrrha: "He is a prince, after all."

Jaune: Groans "I should have never let you meet Nana… It's not like the title means anything."

May: "Heh... Now you know how I feel."

Jaune: "I have before this."

May: "W-Well now you super know it!"

Neptune: "BABY!"

May: smiles "Hey Nep."

Neptune: "Sorry you got beaten so bad... But you looked hot surrendering?"

Jaune: "That's a compliment?"

May: sighs happily

Neptune: "I'm not talking to you, you-you harem keeper!"

Neptune hugs May

Neptune: "Leave her alone! She's mine!"

Jaune rolls his eyes

Arjun and Saia loom over him

Neptune: cough "I-I mean she's my girlfriend and I really care about her and... Don't take her or I'll kick your ass!"

Jaune: "Relax. I see May as a sister."

May: "Aw..."

Neptune: "Good!"

Nora: "Then again he saw Pyrrha as a sister too and they're together along with Weiss and Yang!"

Jaune: "NORA!"

Pyrrha: Bright red

May: "Relax. We really are siblings in all but blood."

Neptune: "He's got a harem! Why shoudn't I be suspicious?!"

Arjun and Saia: looming over him "Because we say you shouldn't be."

Neptune: Gulp "Yes sir, ma'am... Your Highnesses...?"

Jaune: "I think he gets the point mom, dad."

Arjun: "You can bully your daughter's boyfriend how you like."

Jaune: red in the face "A little early for that, don't you think?"

Arjun: smirks

Cinder's team came in

Cinder: sigh "We lost..."

Mercury: "Yeah."

Jaune: "Oh. Sorry guys."

Saia: "Who'd you lose to?"

Neptune: "US! YES! HAHA!"

Mercury: sighs "Good on you, blah blah blah."

Sun, Scarlet and Sage come in next.

Sun: "Made us work for it. But, I think we earned some kudos."

Jaune: "Great job guys!"

Nora: "WOO! Go you guys!"

Scarlet: "Thanks guys…"

JNPR and exchange fist bumps with Sun, Scarlet, and Sage

Neptune: "I just... I ran out early, ya know… To see my girl."

May just rolled her eyes fondly.

Cinder makes a gesture to Jaune

Jaune: "You guys go see RWBY... I'll catch up."

He follows her

Cinder: "So... Congratulations on your engagements. Two at once?"

Jaune: scratching the back of his head "It's a long story."

Cinder: "Mm... I see..."

Jaune: "Listen Cinder... You know, I have some concerns about the plan."

Cinder: "Oh do you?"

Jaune: "Yeah... Just a little. Are you sure about it? We could keep going the slow way... Get Ozpin's confidence, get the Relic... Then trigger things when we skedaddle. Atlasian Fleet's
going to be here for a while yet."

Cinder: "That'll take too long." She glared, a sudden suspicion. "Tell me Jaune... Have you gotten attached to the people of Beacon? Do you feel for them?"

Jaune: "An actor has to believe his part a little to make the performance perfect, doesn't he?"

Cinder: raises an eyebrow

Jaune: "I'm just saying, I go the path of least resistance. If we can accomplish our goals without mayhem and destruction, until later, why not?"

Cinder: "The mayhem and the destruction is the point, Jaune..."

Jaune: "Says who?"

Cinder: "Says me!" She glares "Are you trying to back out of this? Now? At the moment of triumph?"

Jaune: "That's not what I'm saying... Just saying... I'm a spy. I think like a spy."

Cinder: "You need to think like a consort to a queen... That is my goal. You can stay part of it, or you can burn like everyone else in my way."

Jaune: "... Then I'm your consort. But a good consort offers alternatives, Cinder. And a wise ruler takes counsel."

Cinder: "..." sighs "You make me feel things… I don't want to…"

Jaune: "That's how it works."

Cinder: "... The plan is on. That is my decision…"

Jaune: "..." *nods* "As you wish."

Cinder: "... Why do you fight for this world?"

Jaune: "Well, I do have to live here… And it's filled with beauty. Even with all the pain."

Cinder: snorts… She reaches out to cup his cheek "You're very, very dangerous… But we are not changing things."

Jaune: "... Alea iacta est…"

Cinder: "Quitalan?"

Jaune: "Nah, just memorized it because it sounded cool."

Cinder: snort "You remain infuriating."

Jaune: "Heh… It's part of my charm…"

Cinder: "... Don't betray me, Jaune. So much in my life… So many in my life have… Don't."

Jaune: "... I won't. Arc's word."

Cinder turns and heads off. Jaune sighs.

Jaune's Brain: Well… If she wasn't going to murder a whole lot of innocent people I might feel guilty about that… But I don't… Mostly… No. No, do not feel guilty for her… Too much is at stake. Yeah? Yeah… Yeah…

 

[Azzy Rael]

The self insert is building an accidental harem without the interference from future children.

 

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Cinder: "... Don't betray me, Jaune. So much in my life… So many in my life have… Don't."

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I'm sure all will be forgiven after a good pounding.

 

[ExFelineServer3]

…of course