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[RWBY] RWBY Shorts

Dude, that gives major The Ventriloquist and Scarface from Batman and Sid the Demon Hunting Dummy from Buffy the Vampire Slayer vibes.
That sloth plushy has got to be a former Huntsman.
There are multiple different magical girl franchises that uses plush animals for their mascots. Or similiar things.

Kampfer, Puella Madoka, The Magical Raising Project I do believe.. And the fact that all three of those are not good magical girl settings tells me one thing. Jaune, Ren, and Pyrrha need to get a wood chipper, steal all of the Fire Dust from the White Fang/Roman, and make a glass pond where they killed the thing just to be safe.

I would also suggest blessing the area as well but not enough sources of Holy Magic to do that.
 
There are multiple different magical girl franchises that uses plush animals for their mascots. Or similiar things.

Kampfer, Puella Madoka, The Magical Raising Project I do believe.. And the fact that all three of those are not good magical girl settings tells me one thing. Jaune, Ren, and Pyrrha need to get a wood chipper, steal all of the Fire Dust from the White Fang/Roman, and make a glass pond where they killed the thing just to be safe.

I would also suggest blessing the area as well but not enough sources of Holy Magic to do that.
He's not that bad. He's definitely not a good guy but he's not on that level.

He's a former agent of Ozpin who tried to act as a spy in salems forces. She didn't take kindly to it and put his soul in a new body. Started as a actual plushy but as he eats things he's slowly turning the body organic (with a eventual super form to assist Nora). Will note that he was working for Ozpin as a alternative to being executed for banditry. ;)
 
When the gods are summoned, Blake somehow manages to get them to show humanity what it means to be faunus...by turning humanity into faunus.

She's just a little too smug that she's solved world peace through faunus legitimization, only for it to backfire in the worst way possible.

Weiss, a swan faunus, annoyed: "Of course it would be one of your kind strutting around like you own the place."
Blake: "What?"
Yang: "What's that supposed to mean?"
Weiss: *uncomfortable* "Well, you know, your kind. Ground crawlers."

Blake: "A gaming club? Ruby, why were you hiding this?"
Ruby, a wolf faunus: "Well, um, there are some restrictions..."
Blake: "I'm sure it's nothing-"
Ruby: "No domestics allowed."

Jaune, a lion faunus: "So apparently the New White Fang wants me to give a talk because I'm a Noble Cat? Is that what lion faunus are?"
Blake: *eyes twitch*
 
Maybe he has no fear of death, since he can interact with the dead consistently since he was born?
Perhaps make it so that ghosts are only the souls that can't let go? Make it so that he fears both losing his loved ones or the final embrace of death, but also fears that they meet the death required to remain as a ghost.
How big of a disaster results when Nick Arc tries to be secretive, stealthy, and subtle?
Every time Ozpin assigns him a mission, at least one building explodes and everyone knows exactly where he is… but the destruction is completely unrelated to the actual mission, which always gets completed with none the wiser.
his Crocea Mors would become a shiny Honedge(cause of the blood of Penny)
Maybe it keeps Penny's soul? Angst, because she is now trapped in a sword, but also joy because he didn't completely kill her. In terms of mons, Magikarp is a classic, and Ralts wouldn't be at all surprising, a they're empaths and appear to people that they feel have good hearts. Gallade also has a knight theme, so it would fit him while Gardevoir is based on guardian angels, is fiercely loyal, and has a decent set of options to be a healer, when not bound by a four-move limit. The Clefairy and Chancey lines would also fit the healer bit. Kingambit would fit his role as leader, but contrast it with more ruthless tactics. Aggron fits the knight/tank role, and is also just a Mon I like. Leavanny fits his caring nature, while also being a Mon that will make sure he takes care of himself.

That's what they were called! I couldn't remember what they were called, thanks!
Nora, of course, bonds with a Megatherium, a giant ground sloth about the size of an elephant.
Was the entire purpose of this idea to justify Nora getting a giant ground sloth?
Blake: They also have horns which they use to defend themselves. The locals believe the horns to be medicine.
I like the idea that Blake didn't want to go at first, but this is her home, and so she's going to make sure they're properly educated about all the wildlife. I would intend for her to be entirely accurate, unless you want to play with the idea that Menagerie's ecosystem is so competitive that animals evolve at speed to keep up.
Blake: "Huh, I didn't know this breed had acid blood"
Yang: "WHY IS IT COMING OUT OF THEIR EYES?!?!"
Blake: "Oh, that? They all do that."
Jaune would be the one to 'teach' there baby that war crimes are a checklist
Radian is Remnant Canada confirmed?
-Ruby and Jaune both firmly believe there is a Santa Claus, as does Nora. Weiss and Blake try to disabuse them of the notion. Hilarity ensues when everyone else tries to keep them from ruining things.
How will Weiss react when she realizes that this Santa sounds a lot like her grandfather Nicholas?
Turns out he also is able to divert Schnee funds without anyone noticing to build toys for human and Faunus children alike, and then delivers them.
This is allowed under an old provision from Nicholas, and no one has noticed or knows exactly where the money is going.
"Thanks," Jaune beamed, "I like reading with you too. Though uh... Ninjas of Love is um... A little racy for my tastes."



"It's still brilliantly written," Blake insisted.



"I didn't say it wasn't! Honest!" Jaune insisted.
Aside from the fact that you used "insisted" twice in a row, I am amused by the idea that the infamous Ninjas of Love is actually a very well written story, and just happens to be smut. Also, the title Ninjas of Love just makes me think of the song "You Snuck your way right into my heart" from Phineas and Ferb.
Again, I wanted Blake to grow and change as a character.
Good. Static characters have their places, but if you want a rich and dynamic story, that place is either out of the main focus, or exploring how the world changes around them, either contrasting the change with them or showing how they change the world around them. Blake does nothing on this list, and while I'm sure a good writer could come up with plenty of other ways to use a static character, RT didn't do that either, and so Blake has no place being a static character.
Jaune: actually it was ...kinda the other way around....
So, she wanted him to collar her, or she collared him? Or both depending on the day?
*brushes away tear of pride*
Jaune: "This makes me extremely uncomfortable, but I'd rather he give me the company than give it to someone like him."
Honestly, what do you guys think I'm in the workshop phase right now. Anything you guys suggest I change?
That's an interesting premise. I wonder how long it will take them to realize that higher numbers=better, at least to a degree, and reclassify his semblance as the ability to put numerical values on capabilities?
Boost Blake's semblance. Her clone becomes permanent. Bonus points of it's one made when she's using dust or she did it more than once before realizing it.
Or: make Blake Schrödinger's cat. Let her create a duplicate that might as well be real… and until either it or her takes enough damage, she is both the duplicate and the real one.
 

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