SailorOfMyVessel
Writer of plot, with some Plot for pleasure.
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I, personally, feel like the bit where her shopping bags get stolen in public a bit much. Especially because they throw the clothing on the floor and all.
They're being extremely aggressive in their entire approach, which is something that directly counteracts what they're saying. (Taylor is the thief. Taylor is the one with drugs problems. However, she looks completely normal, not drunk or high, and 3 girls walk up to her and start verbally abusing her and taking her stuff.)
It's SoD breaking, to be fair.
I very much enjoyed the rest of the chapter, especially Greg taking his first steps to realising what Medhall actually is.
They're being extremely aggressive in their entire approach, which is something that directly counteracts what they're saying. (Taylor is the thief. Taylor is the one with drugs problems. However, she looks completely normal, not drunk or high, and 3 girls walk up to her and start verbally abusing her and taking her stuff.)
It's SoD breaking, to be fair.
I very much enjoyed the rest of the chapter, especially Greg taking his first steps to realising what Medhall actually is.