AlphariusOmegon
Not too sore, are you?
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He could also go the Old One route and make a magitech society
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wouldn't be a grand adventure without existential threats that could challenge the mc, Im lovin it!"This is the life," Jason said, taking another bite and enjoying the beautiful sunset.
Indeed.Author just gave Frodo lightsaber,so Sauron must get Star destroyer.wouldn't be a grand adventure without existential threats that could challenge the mc, Im lovin it!
Hell no. I hate that analogy. That way lies madness and that asshole fanfic trashfic, borderline and sometimes outright pedofiction writer Perfect Lionheart and his kind.Indeed.Author just gave Frodo lightsaber,so Sauron must get Star destroyer.
Good for story.
i am against pedos,but what is wrong with little bit madness ?Hell no. I hate that analogy. That way lies madness and that asshole fanfic trashfic, borderline pedofiction writer Perfect Lionheart and his kind.
Madness is okay in small amounts. But this is a derail and I've already gotten a warning for derailing so on to the story.i am against pedos,but what is wrong with little bit madness ?
Here is an idea for the MC's kingdom. Base it off of the more Mideastern nations such as the Achaemenid Empire (which has one of the earliest written code of humane laws), the Sassanid Empire (which was famous for their horse archers) and the Byzantine empire (their Cataphracts).
"Those who cling to the past, to a god who has forsaken them, will find themselves left behind. Our god offers protection and strength. The Shepherd offers only silence."
Zahir could not contain himself anymore; he stepped forward. "The Great Shepherd teaches us peace, forgiveness, and love. Your god teaches only violence," he declared.
A murmur ran through the crowd, some nodding in agreement with Zahir, while others looked to Mariam for reassurance.
Mariam smiled, a cold, calculated expression. "Fear? No, Zahir. It is not fear we spread, but hope.
forgot to edit that partThis part is a bit awkward. He complains about teaching violence, but then she mentions fear out of nowhere. Shouldn't she be talking about violence too?
Its going to get crazier when it spreads to slavers bay.
Not yet but with him building a city he will have that industry in time. Doesn't have them now but later. He can conquer land but he need foot on ground to keep it.
Not without active shipments of manpower and iron. The closest, safe source of iron and coal are in the mountains south of the Wall. The Thenn have lost their city states and their resources to the Walkers already. Jon has unskilled manpower and wood. That's it.Not yet but with him building a city he will have that industry in time. Doesn't have them now but later. He can conquer land but he need foot on ground to keep it.
Are we talking about the same thing here? I thought the story was set in Essos.Not without active shipments of manpower and iron. The closest, safe source of iron and coal are in the mountains south of the Wall. The Thenn have lost their city states and their resources to the Walkers already. Jon has unskilled manpower and wood. That's it.
Sorry. I'm on the wrong thread. I thought this was Shrouded DestinyAre we talking about the same thing here? I thought the story was set in Essos.
Indeed,now he must be god.Poor dude.Our intrepid hero may yet come to regret not stomping on that while he still had the chance. But now he's stuck with it if he doesn't want to cause a potentially catastrophic crisis of faith that would see a lot of people dead and/or trying to kill him.
Not great a situation to be in, lol.
I'm having a friend draw the main characters and some other stuff. I'll post them when it's done.
Or read manga - becouse ROB would deliver some for good work.Maybe writing mange himself?No kidding. Having to herd a bunch of religious zealots while being forced to live up to the divine standards his followers will be expecting from him sounds absolutely exhausting to me.
Years down the line, I can easily see him having a private retreat built on a mountain top or something where he can disappear to occasionally just so he can have some damn peace and quiet away from everything.
And when he does his followers will probably go through some mental gymnastics and call it mediation or something that's way more grandiose and profound than it actually is.