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Nice chapter, good work.
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I mostly based them off of the pictures that VisV provided as I found them rather interesting and sufficiently fluffy for my purpose. Though perhaps imagine it being less white and more grey.
To be fair, those are Taylor's best features in Canon as well.Hips for days....
And thick thighs save lives.
Just saying, mmmmm.
Well, over the canon she outgrown her body issues, she clearly says she liked how she looks. Though she was the slender type, her best features were legs and legs=\=hips.To be fair, those are Taylor's best features in Canon as well.
Edit: She just doesn't acknowledge that she has a decent enough form due to her body issues, just like how she doesn't acknowledge that she's been slightly upping her breast size every once and a while, slowly growing them bigger with magic like Angel Dust suggested.
I mostly based them off of the pictures that VisV provided as I found them rather interesting and sufficiently fluffy for my purpose. Though perhaps imagine it being less white and more grey.
Here is one:
Holy shit, I never thought of comparing Taylor and Radiance! And it actually makes a lot of sense. Radiance is basically the Khepri dream!While the author seems of have already decided on the shape of the True Demon Form that Taylor would take, I can´t help but think of how others would react if she went all Radiant on them. Especially the associations that would happen when you remembered that Lucifer is, well, the Lightbringer >>
God damn that looks amazing and I absolutely loved it. I assume that this is either Taylor's transformed form or her initial form. Honestly it fits her perfectly and I wish I could draw something like that. I want to thread mark this but I want to know which one so I can give it a proper thread mark title.Well, I did it. All these pictures of generic moth girls are nice, but a fanart made specifically for this fic is better, right? Even if it can't compare in quality.
What do you think?
I hope I nailed both Taylor's newfound' fluffiness and her usual attitude. Great thanks to SystemSearcher for proposing Radiance as a reference, adding her to the mix gave a lot of ideas, and she served as a great transference between cute moth girls and Taylor. I took yellow eyes from her, for example. Not sure about them, but I felt I needed to add a bit of color. I also made her hands and feet black to match her hair. Generally, I liked working on this picture, and I hope you'll like it too.
I did not try to draw her demonic form specifically, but as I read it, my picture is much closer to it than to normal. I added a lot of fluff, and it was described as something she's getting in demonic form, and her eyes and hands can be described as a part of it. But ultimately I wanted to leave it up to you to decide which form it is more similar to as you imagine them.God damn that looks amazing and I absolutely loved it. I assume that this is either Taylor's transformed form or her initial form. Honestly it fits her perfectly and I wish I could draw something like that. I want to thread mark this but I want to know which one so I can give it a proper thread mark title.
Edit: Also, do you mind if I post this to the worm picture thread and maybe the Hazbin hotel picture thread?
It's quite similar to her demonic form yes with the clothing reminiscent of her initial attire when she arrived in Hell, that being a wing poncho.I did not try to draw her demonic form specifically, but as I read it, my picture is much closer to it than to normal. I added a lot of fluff, and it was described as something she's getting in demonic form, and her eyes and hands can be described as a part of it. But ultimately I wanted to leave it up to you to decide which form it is more similar to as you imagine them.
And yes, you can post in these threads if you think it fits. I honestly have no idea what they are (so I would appreciate a link), as I'm quite new to QQ, I'll leave it to your judgment. If fanart on fanfics is a norm there - why not?
New helluva boss.
Heaven is a fuck. 13 billion dead humans, I am Imp Man.
New helluva boss.
Heaven is a fuck. 13 billion dead humans, I am Imp Man.
If nothing else, I really enjoy that Stella is apparently arranging Stolas' assassination at the breakfast table. With him right there. It's fucking great.
Well, it also has sun-topped mountains that look like they came right off of a death-metal album cover, so it seems a bit cooler.
It would certainly be possible once the operation has grown. I doubt that Adam wouldn't try to expand into it, plus, if Taylor hears the reasoning, then she might not be so inclined to like those laws due to her American cultural heritage. Now she might still dislike them however due to their mutagenic properties on those in the living world, but that's only really a problem there.So what exactly does Hell has for enterteinment music?
We know there is at least a succubus pop star that's famous in Hell. It would be nicr if Taylor meet Veroxica once in a job to deliver either illegal drugs or booze to her, you know soon after she was released of rehab.
These drugs and booze are illegal due to being able to be used only by nobility since the igredients are rare.
It would certainly be possible once the operation has grown. I doubt that Adam wouldn't try to expand into it, plus, if Taylor hears the reasoning, then she might not be so inclined to like those laws due to her American cultural heritage. Now she might still dislike them however due to their mutagenic properties on those in the living world, but that's only really a problem there.
Could even be a special order to one of Veroxica's concerts backstage to deliver it to her.
the bolded should be "brother" or "brothers"."I don't know, all I know is what my brother's told me about avoiding gangs and stuff, I was a bit busy with school and videogames and stuff, but I can ask them more if you want," Felix offers.
Very nice chapter, I'm really liking the characters here.
Needed to look that up.
Interesting.
The bolded bit is wrong. could be "It's a group photo which..." or "It's a photo of a group which..."It's a photo of a group photo which looks like some kind of family reunion.
Typos, corrected.ranging from cowboys in their Sunday best to a family near the edge that looks to be wearing something like what a banker or some fancy city folk from the late eighteen hundreds would wear.
Given the photo, if I was Taylor I would worry about that. If they have black powder cap & ball guns they'd be worse than useless for any sort of false flag operation (they'd make it blatantly obvious it wasn't anyone from the Raz family involved) and pretty close to useless as muscle.They'll have their own guns as well so you don't have to worry about that,
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Very sweet.Sherrel asks as she plays with Mark's tail, the little demon reaching up to grab it while Sherrel holds the end up above him.
Pretty sure that was supposed to be "Hell's" not "Hells".and apparently Hells had mad scientists since the ancient days
You have an excess of "when" and probably missing a comma or two there."That was a clockwork from I think around year three hundred when I looked it up when some Roman demon or something decided to try and take over Hell,
Seems like a silly question to ask in context, like asking why people don't form legions anymore if they were so effective, or maybe a better analogy would be armor or lances - the obvious answer is guns. Not that your answer doesn't work, it's just that the way the question was phrased seems odd as no one would expect weapons from later roman empire era to still be useful when everyone has guns, no matter how effective they were in their time period.
Typo, corrected.