Theman
I trust you know where the happy button is?
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To be fair for the first one if you change too much too fast then you lose your advantage the best thing to do is make small changes but wait until an important moment to completely derail the plot. But yes if they don't do that it's pointless.Self-inserts that doggedly follow canon. What is the point of a SI fic where the mc refuses to change anything?
Self-insert stories that are exactly the same as other self insert stories. "Oh, I'm in DxD? I gotta save Rias from Riser, save Asia, save Kuroka, let Akeno know how much I accept her, fight Raynare and the Fallen, fight Kokabiel, etc."
Bashing fics. Particularly when the character getting bashed is innocent, or the one doing the bashing is even worse. Ron Weasley constantly gets bashed to make Harry look good even when it makes no sense.
Self inserts where the SI refuses to pursue a girl because she ends up with someone else in canon. It's even worse when he constantly hits on her, then turns her down when she tells him she likes him.
Linking to music in the middle of a chapter. I didn't read your stupid Simple Plan lyrics when you did it 20 years ago, and I'm not watching your stupid videos now.
Making the mc a generic harem anime protagonist. Dense, allergic to women, says "we can't" when a girl makes a move on him.
Passive mc. "Sure you disrespected me in front of the entire world, everyone is mocking me behind my back, and stole my money and property, but it's cool. I don't really care."
Preachy moralizing mc. Constantly whining about how bad slavery is in a waifu catalog story doesn't suddenly make me rethink the genre, it just makes me wonder why the fuck you are writing a WC fic if you hate it so much.
As for not going for the girl who ends up with the hero that's just because the self insert doesn't like ntr lol. Or maybe they believe in true love and fated romance. Though if they are going to go that route it would be interesting to see them notice that one of the girls fell in love with them and try to fix this issue and ship them with the hero.