Stormbringer117
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Lol Lucifer getting hit with a Konosuba Vibe check is hilarious.
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Fixed thanks for pointing it out
*see the many stuff in the gacha, money items, skills, ability, traits, being a better merchant, tinkering, keys to places you own, and the actual level reset potion not even made yet. and looks back to get back to writing*Sigh I think I read exactly one konosuba fic were adventurers isn't the protagonist class. Even than it was just souped-up version of the adventure class. Honestly adventure is a terrible class for anyone without a tone money to burn. To farm levels and pay adventures for skills.
I get it, but this is just a fun story I'm writing, yeah I can see how the chaos gacha can feel bloated. I really do but I at least want to either get to season 1 end or season 2. Then take a break from this story to write another. I will probably only make without any of this, but I would only do stuff I like or have watched and feel like doing it. But thanks for the critique, I will see if I can slow the tickets when the sloth curse is broken, which is why the story is slowed.To be honest, so many tickets right off the bat is quite annoying. Besides being a lot to keep track of in chapter 1, the gacha loses a lot of its charm if it's not a gradual progression based on luck, but rather a flood of rolls right from the start.
Its being saved gonna do that when I feel like banking tickets, he already has pretty good abilities and has 3 slots.
Why does he say "I'll get you a place at our hotel" and then immedietly say that Lucifer will get doppel a room? Also thank you for the chapter.Good Job, I'm sure you did great and did a lot of good work, I'll get you a place at our hotel. Sorry for making you stay here for three days. Close shop when Lucifer is done, She will get you a room.'
Wrong type of building, and the fact Dopple had only been living in the Hot Springs instead of one of their rooms. Jason and Lucifer split the reward money so they have their own funds. Thanks for pointing it out.Why does he say "I'll get you a place at our hotel" and then immedietly say that Lucifer will get doppel a room? Also thank you for the chapter.
Well yeah I do remember the konosuba crimson demon movie, but I don't think the crimson demons clan would appreciate their tourist traps messed with. Considering that is their way of making income and I know about the Konami code but barely remember the actual thing. Thank you for the suggestion anyways. I was able to to think of another thing just gonna find a dnd monster packs that would work in konosuba, any suggestions would be helpful and very appreciated.Hmm I'm not a writer, but if you're looking for inspiration, there is actually a lot of technology is the Konosuba world, it's just often mistaken for magic or locked away. Maybe you could have a random quest that peaks the MC's interest because it sounds familiar?
Well yeah I do remember the konosuba crimson demon movie, but I don't think the crimson demons clan would appreciate their tourist traps messed with. Considering that is their way of making income and I know about the Konami code but barely remember the actual thing. Thank you for the suggestion anyways. I was able to to think of another thing just gonna find a dnd monster packs that would work in konosuba, any suggestions would be helpful and very appreciated.
Yeah haven't gotten that far, just got to volume 8 of the light novel, I know the inventor made the destroyer and the Snake mecha, I just remembered all the electronics are with the snake mecha. Just trying to finish the LN before re watching the anime, the OVA's and the movie.Not all items are in the village, the Inventor left lots of things lying about that appear in expanded media like the OVA's or light novels.
What part about my character feels edgy? He is actively doing things to increase his quality of life. Maybe if you actually give critisism to people or maybe the story isn't to your taste. I have said in every post critisism helps with writing for me. This is my first story so yes, I push myself hard to see what works and what doesn't. It's fanfiction and im sticking to the story its based on, and not a harem shit at all. If you don't like it don't read it if you have no actual critisism other than you don't like it. Your a grown adult, you can choose not to eat your veggies now or do you just like to rag on new writers that has no betas, not using AI, and have barely anyone else telling me what they don't like about the story. Yeah I had one or two people say the same thing, but if you read the past the first chapter instead of just reading half of one you would have seen it barely affects him. But hey, if you just don't like it make your own shit. Stop pussyfooting and make your own fanfic and see how it goes for you. I hope you do write a good one on your first attempt.Sorry, just the shear number of curses just turns me off this. It makes no sense to cripple yourself out the gate, your leaning way to hard into the entire world is out to get you trope and it's not being done well enough to be interesting.
I feel like I'm doing this a lot lately, I love fanfics and I genuinely love that people are putting themselves out there trying to write the next cool story but as of late all the stories here look the same it's less about someone writing a story they enjoy and more like some retarded foot race to write the exact same story as the last guy and just pointlessly pile more suffering and complications onto your MCs the be new edgelord for all of two minutes before the next guy comes by with the same formula.
What's happened to fanfic writing?, people used to place genuine effort into it and now it's just this ...
Am I wrong for feeling this way?