she's just mentally ill...with a spoiled upbringing and with shard induced recklessness.
Do you think getting in over her head was part of her plan?
I mean her plan to crash this Planetheon with no survivors.
With strange tech, even the dead May be shipped!
That's so F'd up even Lovecraft would be saying "where the hell did you get my notes?"
I begin to suspect some of my readers either have some neurosis about name calling, or have never had friends. Possibly both.
I'd make a comment relating to the most recent chapter, but I'm not sure whether or not Sting can cut through the fourth wall.
Personally, I hate writers who do shit like that. It's like they feel the need to pad their story with useless details to disguise a lack of actual story development. I set the stage well enough, with things like saying what room they're in...
Possible ship names:
Suicest.
I THINK that was just Lisa fucking with Coil's head.
I'm not one of those that keeps going on about sparing poor Tattletale, but 1) I have had plenty of friendships without faux-insults flying everywhere, just as I have had friendships with that element, and 2) you don't include tone a lot of times. If you don't include tone, then it's generally assumed that the tone matches the comment. That's without even mentioning that Amelia and Lisa have had a lot of bad blood between them.
shhhhh! don't ruin it.
Recognizing that as an option is itself a sign of a pretty good writer. Pulling it off even half-decently is the sign of a very skilled writer. Doing as good a job as you have done, with making everyone both the hero of their own story and a viewpoint character on the "main" characters, is a sign that you've done an amazing job as a writer. Having just gone back and read the author's note at the beginning, that itself is pretty impressive.
This is the kind of thing that gives the readers the wrong idea about Vicky's powers. I get that it's being said from the POV of one of the characters, but I think the problem is that some people aren't looking deeper into the situations where Vicky's ability is in use. I'm pretty sure she was only able to pick up on the Riley-Theo-Missy situation as quickly as she did because the emotional avenue would be a valid means of attacking Riley, thus it falls under the purview of Vicky's powers.
Stop giving Riley ideas.
Huh. Something about that ending feels unfinished.
This does seem to lend credence to the "The local PRT is about to do something stupid" theory. If the boss hasn't been at his best, mentally speaking, for a few months, that leaves a lot of time for something really stupid to get approved.
Are we talking regional stupidity, or national stupidity? I can buy the former, but not the latter. Not with the close, professional relationship Pantheon has with the Chief-Director.
