Silver W. King
King of Adventures
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Edit: Also thanks Mizu for all the corrections.
*About to come up with a reason about Singularities and Dragons being around breath mana into the air*
Totally my reasoning here.
Well-shouldn't the mana difference between 14th century France and the 21st century be pretty similar?
*About to come up with a reason about Singularities and Dragons being around breath mana into the air*
Yeah, pretty much.Huh, it's only Septem and Babylon which're below 1000 AD, with Orleans being the next youngest after them. Guess your logic's fine after all.
Totally my reasoning here.
Wow, please. That would be great.As an aside, would you like my aid as a beta for writing this story Silver? I've noticed a number of spelling error while reading it thus far, and a second pair of eyes tends to be able to catch things the author skims over automatically because they expect X when it's actually spelt Y.
THE HYPE IS REAL!!!
. . . anyway, you should update the story in parts. Which would help you maintain the interest of the readers, and not make them think the story is dead when is on progress
Hmm, well I am a lazy couch potato...Short chapters will be better, I think. Easier to edit, better to maintain pace, etc.
Faster updates don't hurt either.
Hmm, good points. I mean, I have a good sense of cliffhangers (although I think all writers seem to know how to blueball their readers, so that's nothing special), but at the same time I don't want to spend too many chapters on the same Singularity especially given how long things will go when America Arc comes in, even with 10K chapters.Personally I'd like 10k every three weeks or so, over brief 1k chapters. While chapter size shouldn't be what you're focusing on while writing, as it's more important to get to a good stopping point, I'd recommend at least 5k if you wanted to post weekly. 1k is just too small, and more like bite-sized chapters than something which can provide meaningful story progression from the prior one; also inflates the threadmarks like crazy.
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