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That's not a moral argument. Two wrongs don't make a right. Nor did Vicky ever try and hurt Amy. It was an accident, and Amy didn't even know that. So as far as Amy knew her feelings were totally natural and she decided to force Vicky to be her lover.I think the real sticking point here is that Carol and Victoria, and to a lesser extent Mark, had measurably wronged Amy already. You can call this tit-for-tat, vengeance, justice, whatever, but the point is this is a precipitated action, not one out of the blue. When people hurt you, you hurt them back. Amy was nice enough to do it in a very friendly way, because she still loves them even though they hurt her.
In a good way or a bad way?I find Volantredx's position here fascinating. Not so much the position itself as the fact that he is the one arguing it. And that he appears to be the only one arguing it, for that matter.
It's interesting.
So at what point is Amy allowed to act to make herself happy?That's not a moral argument. Two wrongs don't make a right. Nor did Vicky ever try and hurt Amy. It was an accident, and Amy didn't even know that. So as far as Amy knew her feelings were totally natural and she decided to force Vicky to be her lover.
If her happiness comes at the expense of others freedom of thought, never. There are more important things than happiness.
What if she does it unconsciously, her power just doing it without her realising it?If her happiness comes at the expense of others freedom of thought, never. There are more important things than happiness.
Still creepy, but then it isn't either one's fault.What if she does it unconsciously, her power just doing it without her realising it?
You know, like Vicky's doing to her?
That's bad but if it's involuntary it's less bad. The issue isn't simple the brain rewrites, it's the fact she does them knowingly and without thought to if the other person wants it to be done to them. Mark is a good deed since she tells him she can help and he is actually suffering a disease. Carol is a marginal case since her actions are also wrong, but changing her against her will even after she more or less says not to is wrong. What she did to Vicky is inexcusable. Vicky had no issues, no suffering. She was living a normal life and Amy knowingly and intentionally warps her to better fit what Amy wants.What if she does it unconsciously, her power just doing it without her realising it?
Partly because I'm not a Utilitarian moralist. And I find the violation of someone's freedom and sanctity of thought to be one of the worst things someone could do.I can't really say that it's either good or bad, just interesting, seeing what you consider unforgivable and inexcusable when contrasted with your stance on other, comparable (but still very different) situations. That's all.
You must have been a real problem in school. People telling you to learn things that changed your view of the world.Partly because I'm not a Utilitarian moralist. And I find the violation of someone's freedom and sanctity of thought to be one of the worst things someone could do.
That's not the issue. It's the fact that Amy is using her power to make people do things against their wil. Vicky's life isn't better by this change. She is now forced into being her sister's lover. That's horrible.You must have been a real problem in school. People telling you to learn things that changed your view of the world.
And when you're in school, you're forced to attend classes whether you want to or not. You're even forced to learn stuff. Horror.That's not the issue. It's the fact that Amy is using her power to make people do things against their wil. Vicky's life isn't better by this change. She is now forced into being her sister's lover. That's horrible.
Because Vicky wouldn't have ever fallen for Amy the way you suggest. Vicky was straight. Amy could have played every trick in the book and it would never work.And if not, how does it differ from Amy simply using her power to get the exact same result in just a few seconds?
That comparison is apt if and only if Amy wanted to have sex with Vicky just once, and then discard her.Because Vicky wouldn't have ever fallen for Amy the way you suggest. Vicky was straight. Amy could have played every trick in the book and it would never work.
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Fuck even ignoring that, you are comparing building a relationship with someone and slipping them a date rape drug.
You don't seem to get it. The issue isn't how Amy will treat Vicky. It's the fact that she is forcing Vicky to love her. That's beyond wrong. Amy is forcing Vicky into a relationship that is outright against Vicky's nature. All for her personal benefit. It's not making Vicky's life better. It's stealing her choice and life for Amy's sake.But if Amy intends to build on that, to love her and care for her and make her happy, to actually give her real love, then that's not comparable with giving her a date rape drug.
Had Amy stuck a gun in Vicky's mouth and pulled the trigger that would be better than canon. Is that a good thing to do?As I said, yes, it's creepy, but if Vicky's happier than she would ever be in canon ...
Yeah, for Amy's sake. For her sanity. Because Vicky, deliberately or not, forced Amy to love her.You don't seem to get it. The issue isn't how Amy will treat Vicky. It's the fact that she is forcing Vicky to love her. That's beyond wrong. Amy is forcing Vicky into a relationship that is outright against Vicky's nature. All for her personal benefit. It's not making Vicky's life better. It's stealing her choice and life for Amy's sake.
Nope, and shooting Vicky is worse than what Amy did in this fic, because in this fic, Vicky is alive and happy.Had Amy stuck a gun in Vicky's mouth and pulled the trigger that would be better than canon. Is that a good thing to do?
Fine. It was a good story for what it's worth, even if I feel differently about the positivity of the ending.
Since then, I have had an idea for a sort of epilogue.Fine. It was a good story for what it's worth, even if I feel differently about the positivity of the ending.
I disagree. It's sort of a canon-Amy-makes-a-cameo sort of epilogue.TBH, it doesn't really fit the story, and seems more like something you wrote after being pushed and frustrated. That may be the intent though.
Hey, just because I write fix fics, doesn't mean all my plots have to be nice and fluffy.Ack. This is a very well written with cogent plot.
It's also exceedingly terrifying and Professor X would not aprove. Seriously what happened to you.
It was written to show up the contrast between a happy ending, and how it was achieved.Hmm, just a few comments, since this is actually kind of an old thread.
Curing Mark is a good thing.
Shifting Carol's opinion and toxic personality are ambiguous actions, more for personal gain to Amy though perhaps there might be some gain in Carol's own future social interactions.
Changing Vicky's sexual orientation and putting it to target Amy are only things that can be considered a gain for Amy, purely selfish reasoning.
"It's fine. You're fine with this." is definitely a very disturbing application of Amy's power, because of the loss of agency.
Mark might be actually fine with curing the disease, and could have been convinced by mundane (or skilled) means.
Carol would have bitched alot, and be angered, but to shift her personality to the better in normal ways would have required lots of years in therapy and personality trainers.
Vicky... Is... Well, gender identity can be malleable, but lots of effort is required. And getting someone to love you is also a great effort, depending on the target's personal standards. Switching familial love to spousal love (and lust) is definitely a lot of work and effort.
"And it's all fine."
And that is the weapon that Amy utilized in this story, to shorten all those possible rejections and denials.
That is supposedly the point of the story, how certain powers might warp certain way of thinking, not to mention how shards might affect their hosts, who have had their own minds warped by their own trigger trauma.
When I read it, I thought it was supposed to be an unabashed horror, to the tune of Handshake, not the whole morality for such mental application of the power.
Is it better than canon?
Well, you don't have the after-effects of Leviathan's attack affecting the overall mood, not to mention Jack Slash influencing Amy's actions...
As a subset AU without interference of various other possible things Murphy and Wildbow might implement, the end result seems to be better than canon.
But aside from all those differences, there only needs to be one Thinker to notice the sudden shift, then the comparison to Heartbreaker might be called to attention.
As a precedent, Canary's case might be something to consider, where unintentional Master power at work can get Canary Bird-caged, what about intentional Master effect? One with ambiguous intent, mostly with selfish interest at heart?
This went on too long, and I am rambling.
tl;dr, this should have been a simple horror story and acknowledged as one.
Except it's not a happy ending really, at least not for Vicky. She's been altered completely and is now in a relationship that was impossible given her nature. Ignoring the incest angle, you said it was like Amy seduced her, but cutting out the bothersome middle man to get to the same result. That is ignoring the fact that Amy could be Casanova and it wouldn't matter because Vicky would never have seen another girl that way.It was written to show up the contrast between a happy ending, and how it was achieved.
But she's happy. Just ask herExcept it's not a happy ending really, at least not for Vicky. She's been altered completely and is now in a relationship that was impossible given her nature. Ignoring the incest angle, you said it was like Amy seduced her, but cutting out the bothersome middle man to get to the same result. That is ignoring the fact that Amy could be Casanova and it wouldn't matter because Vicky would never have seen another girl that way.
So was Bonesaw.