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Feel The Ground Shake (Pokemon - Ground-type specialist)

So I looked that sweet, doe-eyed, very sincere girl in the face.

And said, "Absolutely Not."

MY Regi. Back off bitch.

Absolutely valid reaction.

Imagine finding a legendary and leaving it with a specialist of its type to bond and care for it, may as well tie a bow on it and tell her happy birthday.

In a world where the power of friendship rules supreme? Back off.
 
So I looked that sweet, doe-eyed, very sincere girl in the face.

And said, "Absolutely Not."
Completely valid reaction (beside the funny). Not only she is asking him to part with a Catatonic Legendary Pokemon (and so unable of defending itself), but she is also doing so after she admitted of being new at this, and that her staff is incompetent at best.
She is asking a lot of faith for not even a certain answer.
 
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So I looked that sweet, doe-eyed, very sincere girl in the face.

And said, "Absolutely Not."

MY Regi. Back off bitch.

For as harsh as that came off, he might have unintentionally saved Jasmine from ruining her career. After all, remember Amphy?

Now imagine that but with a who knows how old golem that's suffering from unknown damages that she can't let anyone know exists on pain of Grundy.
 
"Uh... I got a Razor Claw for your Sneazel? I figured out the Ice-type Eeveelution?

Maybe I haven't been the most clear on it, but item-based evolutions are not undiscovered. (With exception of the ancient Hisui ones like Ursaluna and Kleavor.) It's mostly the "Your pokemon must learn/use this specific move" type evolutions that aren't known.

but she is also doing so after she admitted of being new at this

She's new to running a Gym. She's less new to being an expert on Steel-types.

For as harsh as that came off,

How was it harsh? The last words weren't spoken aloud.

Okay cool so, fire that dumbass secretary because her lack of fucks could've gotten a pokemon who wasn't karn killed!

That seems extreme. She literally told Brad to take his team member to the Pokémon Center.
 
She's new to running a Gym. She's less new to being an expert on Steel-types.
Oh, sorry, I didn't mean her competence about steel types; I meant her gym's security measures. Especially after Bradley himself felt like he was being observed. She even said she didn't even have a team ready for his challenge, making it plausible that she is already overworked as she is, and not ready to keep an eye on such an appetibile target. Moreso if some of her employees let out that she has a rare Pokemon in her grounds...
 
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I love that Rui is just as over Mirror B's shit as I thought she'd be while playing Colosseum as a kid. Like as an adult I appreciate his eccentric nature but as a kid I thought he was so annoying.

On the other hand Wes!!!!!!!! The real protagonist who actually has the edge needed to deal with Team Flare + Team Cipher's crazy.
 
What an asshole. Would rather leave someone suffering than allow them to grow and heal outside their control.

Hope this bites him in the ass later
The Regi has been like that for a while, he could have given it to Jasmine but there's no reason to believe she's the only who could do it. Jasmine had to ask, he doesn't have to accept.
 
What an asshole. Would rather leave someone suffering than allow them to grow and heal outside their control.

Hope this bites him in the ass later

For sure an asshole, it's refreshing.

You know who often wins at life? Assholes.

Beyond that, the Regi has been asleep for decades at least, it can perfectly wait for a solution that doesn't involve basically handing over the nuclear weapon you just bought to the lady you just met.
 
And said, "Absolutely Not."

MY Regi. Back off bitch

An entirely and totally fair reaction. I wouldn't leave my legendary pokemon to someone else either.

Maybe a Brock situation then? Where she just follows Brad around? Though that would mean she'd have to get a replacement so probably not actually...

Oh well, thanks for the chapter!
 
"N-No!" The young woman seems scandalized at the very suggestion, going so far as to wave her hands in front of her. "That wouldn't be proper! It's one of the first rules we agree to as Gym Leaders! B-besides! Champion Lance has just decreed all Gym Leaders should keep their rosters at full deployability whenever possible! In- in case some sort of emergency with Kalos happens!"

I tilt my head at the last line and the girl mildly flinches. I…don't think I was supposed to hear that.

'I knew the international situation was tense, but it must be worse than I imagined if the Gym Leaders' best 'mons are all being ordered to stay on standby. Is there something the public isn't being told?'
Given how many times it's come up I wonder if we're going to see war break out or at least skirmishes here. Actual battle between nations instead of criminal organizations is rare in Pokemon fics.
 
Ok, so he's blitzkrieged the entire Battle Tower, tore the "Gatekeeper to the silver conference" to pieces, came second in the lake of rage tournament, Grundy is cooperating and he now owns a unique pokemon that only he knows how to evolve…….again.

Where are our sponsors? They should be fighting like dogs to get our boys face next to their product, what makes Madison so special?
 
Where are our sponsors? They should be fighting like dogs to get our boys face next to their product, what makes Madison so special?
I imagine they're running into Brad wanders around not giving his phone number much and wasn't even willing to deviate a few days for a meeting with the important Blackthorn Clan about Aura. Though probably still has several looking to get into contact.
 
Maybe I haven't been the most clear on it, but item-based evolutions are not undiscovered. (With exception of the ancient Hisui ones like Ursaluna and Kleavor.) It's mostly the "Your pokemon must learn/use this specific move" type evolutions that aren't known.
But would Lorelei appreciate a razor claw? She doesn't canonically have a sneasel I don't think but it would hardly be unusual for her to have one that she just doesn't use for high end stuff because they're not evolved.
 
Completely valid reaction (beside the funny). Not only she is asking him to part with a Catatonic Legendary Pokemon (and so unable of defending itself), but she is also doing so after she admitted of being new at this, and that her staff is incompetent at best.
She is asking a lot of faith for not even a certain answer.
Also she made that request without a SINGLE suggestion for what the problem could be, or ANY advice on making sure it remains healthy after waking up… OR about handling the whole "using a legendary in battle" thing. She offered nothing, did not apologize for her secretary's conduct, and did not recognize she's already dug herself a hole with this situation.

I do think that she could still solve this. She is motivated enough to do private research and trek across the region to talk to Brad and Karn again.

Hmm. Pryce probably noticed that Brad's behavior changed after that snowboarding accident. Lorelei could notice or learn of the connection. SI!Brad is serious enough about his ambitions to ignore any previous love of snowboarding, which could look like fear from the outside. I wonder if an Orange Islands style non-battle Pokémon & Trainer challenge could happen, ideally competing with Lorelei? She might ski or use a pulled sleigh depending on the specifics. Could make for quite the blood-pumping activity together.
 
That seems extreme. She literally told Brad to take his team member to the Pokémon Center.
Doesn't matter.
One major part of being a Gym Leader/Ace Trainer/Ranger/Elite Four/Champion is responding to various levels of emergency.

Secretary was approached by a high-badge* trainer about an emergency relating to hurt Pokemon of her employer's Type.

* High-badge means had to deal with Gym Leaders and League before, less likely to make the approach in ignorance.

Secretary basically either believed him or not.
If she believed, she should have immediately called Jasmine and noted down the encounter.

If she didn't believe him, she should have directed him.to Pokemon Center AND to return with a slip if thats insufficient AND tell him how to normally approach the gym.with emergency AND note it all down.

OR threathen to call Jenny/Rangers/ whoever's on call to verify his claims (if he's bluffing, he leaves at that point) AND note down the encounter.

Her main job is handling Gym paperwork and making sure it's in order. She failed big.
 
Rui narrowed her eyes further.

Whatever it was that was going on, Wes needed to know about it.
At this point I'm wondering how Orre and it's problems will intrude in Brad's life. One of it's protagonists got murdered in the middle of the night and the other just got alerted to old enemies popping back up with support.

Could be something as simple as Snagem trying to steal Brad's extremely rare and valuable Pokemon. But given that Team Flare is from Kalos, aka the region Indigo is worried about war with, I have a feeling it will be bigger than that.
 
Could be something as simple as Snagem trying to steal Brad's extremely rare and valuable Pokemon.

Let's take a moment to imagine Shadow Grundy...

But given that Team Flare is from Kalos, aka the region Indigo is worried about war with, I have a feeling it will be bigger than that.

I'm really interested in what comes from that, Flare extending itself outside Kalos should be reason to worry considering they already have a death ray in their region.
 
Who is the guy that won badges without battling?
 
A great shorter chapter. Hoping the next one is longer as always with your writing. Also why this Regi in particular? I know his whole thing is ground types so I'm confused about the steel type. Just curious if he'll be able to have the same bond like his other team members. Thanks for the chapter!
 
Her main job is handling Gym paperwork and making sure it's in order. She failed big.
I think you're reading way too deep into this. She's a secretary/receptionist, no Janine's right-hand woman. Her job is to take appointments and redirect people towards appropriate facilities if needed. By basic job standards, she didn't "fail big", she did what she was hired for, and nothing more.

Not to mention, with the gym leader being new, she probably had to deal with blowhards trying to get an in with Janine before, and Bradley didn't exactly sound desperate, on top of being kind of a jerk himself. Knowing what we do as readers, it's annoying that she didn't give him a pass, yes, but it's hardly a proof of complete incompetence.
 
Also why this Regi in particular? I know his whole thing is ground types so I'm confused about the steel type. Just curious if he'll be able to have the same bond like his other team members.

He's had a bond with Ma Ma just fine despite her not being Ground-type until this most recent evolution. Also, would you have preferred I invent a fake Ground-type Regi? That would've gone over like a lead balloon.

Steel, Rock, and Ground all share a small theme as being the ones immune to Sandstorm, so I think it's fine.

It's not a complete anathema to Brad's aura like Regileki or Regice would be.
 
Also why this Regi in particular? I know his whole thing is ground types so I'm confused about the steel type.
I mean, just because he's a Type Specialist doesn't mean he's going to pass up a Legendary (even an admittedly "meh" one, stat-wise). Not like there's a Regidirt (yet, who knows if GameFreak will make new Regis before new Eeveelutions like they did for the random Electric and Dragon in Crown Tundra for some reason).

Regirock might've been thematically/visually close, but Steel's at least got immunities (to a Type he already has an advantage on) and resists one of his main weaknesses (Grass, which he already has a few answers for) among many others. Both are fine in a Sandstorm though, so that could lead to shat pants with a U-Turn swap out while hidden by that Move.


...Right, and Regice probably would've just been collecting dust until it would be acceptable to gift it to Lorelei without coming across as a bribe/buying her.

Now, with a proper writing buff to actually come across as a Legendary Giant made by a Super-Giant that pulled continents around, an unstoppable metal juggernaut is pretty good. A self-repairing rock-robot would also be terrifying, and I can't tell if there's any special significance to Regice's normal temperature of -328 degrees Fahrenheit other than "Cold as no more balls".
 

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